Kimagure Orange Road
"The Secret Part-Time Job"
Volume 1, Story 8
WB Volume 1, Story 8
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
This script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty.
Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1)
Original typesetting by : Enrique Conty
Additional translation & Full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Peter Norby
Last revision : 11-11-94
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on
which one you have there may be a few extra items.
Example: The subtitles on page 171 (169) are only in the WB'S!
Comments on the revision (CN): Besides inserting the romaji, a few missing
lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing
FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines
were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes
of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without
the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is
not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating
yourself...]
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p 171 (169)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka stands in blouse and miniskirt, one hand on hip and the other
hoisting a tray of food and drinks. The "whimsical drink" referred to
below is 7-Up.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) ________
The Secret Part-Time Job HIMITSU no arubaito
secret 's part-time-job
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _______
How About Having a Whimsical kimagure dorinku atashi to
Drink with Me...? whimsical drink with-me
ikaga...?
how-about
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p 172 (170)
1
[Exterior shot of a school building.]
narration: _________
At last, Golden Week starts iyoiyo ashita kara go--ruden
tomorrow! at-last beginning-tomorrow golden
______
ui--ku desu!
week is
sign:
Kouryou School... KOURYOU GAKUEN...
school
narration: ____
And since our school has uchi no GAKKOU TObiISHI no
consecutive holidays at our-school stepping-stones 's
midterm, it's become a (i.e.,-consecutive-holidays)
vacation period...
CHUUKAN mo YASUmi ni naru mon de---
midway become-vacation in-that
2
[Kyousuke and Hikaru walk out the building together. Kyousuke looks glum,
but Hikaru has her ever-present cheerful smile.]
narration:
It's like a nice, little chotto shita TOKUBETSU KYUUKA
vacation, but... small/tolerable special vacation
tte KANji nan da kedo----
feel-that it-is but
Hikaru:
Sempai, do you have SEMPAI wa nani-ka go-YOTEI
something planned? (T) something (hon)-plan
aru n desu ka?
have (explan) (?)
3
[She looks at his expression and is perplexed.]
4
Hikaru:
What's wrong? do-- shita n desu ka?
what's-wrong (explan) (?)
You don't look so happy. anmari TANOshiso-- ja nai mitai
-very not-appearing-happy
5
Kyousuke: [smiling at her]
You look happy, Hikaru-chan. hikaru-chan wa TANOshisou da ne
(T) look-happy
6
Hikaru: [beaming]
Yes, of course!! ee mochiron!!
I'm going to Karuizawa by atashi KAZOKU to ISSHO ni KURUMA de
car with my family! I together-w/family (IO) by-car
KARUIZAWA made iku n desu!
down-to- go (explan)
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p 173 (171)
1
Kyousuke: [forcing a smile] __ __ __
Ha ha ha. ha ha ha
___
Technically, I was also ore mo ichio-- KAZOKU to HOKKAIDOU
invited to go to Hokkaido I too generally w/family
with my family...
iku no sasowareta n da kedo ne
going was-invited (explan) but
___
...but instead, I refused, sore yori ore RENKYUU wa
saying I'd rather spend the than-that I consecutive-holidays (T)
vacation lazing about at
home! IE de nombiri shita-itte
at-home doing-quiet/peaceful/carefree
KOTOWAtta n da!
turned-down/declined/refused (explan)
narration: ____
Which is why I have the to yu-- wake de hima o
feeling that I won't seem for-that-reason free-time (O)
to know what to do with
my spare time... moteamashi sou na
look-like-not-knowing-what-to-do-with
YOKAN mo suru kedo---
premonition even to-do but
2
Hikaru: [clinging to his arm] _______
Then, Darling, maybe I'll ja atashi da--rin o KARUIZAWA ni
take you along with me to then I Darling (O) (IO)
Karuizawa.
tsuretetcha o-- ka naa
(= tsuretette-wa) ??? I-wonder
have-to-bring-(you)-along-with-(me)
[Kyousuke shakes a bit.]
narration:
Making a mistake while going hikaru-chan to ISSHO ni itte machigai
with Hikaru-chan would also together-with-Hikaru (IO) going mistake
be terrible.
okosu no mo osoroshi-- shi
making too terrible/awful consider
3
Hikaru:
Hey, won't you come with me? ne issho ni ikimasen kaa?
together not-go (?)
Kyousuke:
W-well... B-but... so so-- da ne~~~~ shi shikashi......
well but
4
[Madoka exits the school gate, and Hikaru spots her.]
Hikaru:
Ah! a_
5
Hikaru: [waving while clinging on to Kyousuke's arm]
Yoo-hoo! Madoka-sempaaai! ya_ho-- madoka-sempa--i!
6
[Madoka turns, trying not to look too unhappy.]
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p 174 (172)
1
Hikaru: [clinging on with both arms]
You're in such a hurry. sonna ni ISOide
that-kind-of (IO) hurrying
What's wrong?! do-- shita n desu ka----_?!
what's-wrong (explan) (?)
[Kyousuke stands stiff, and sweats.]
narration:
I always think... itsu-mo OMOu n da kedo----
always think (explan) but
2
narration: ___
...I don't want Ayukawa to ore konna koto AYUKAWA ni
see me like this!! I this-kind-of-thing (IO)
MIraretakunai n datte!!
not-want-to-be-seen-(by) (explan)
[Kyousuke winces.]
3
[Madoka portrait--expressionless.]
4
Madoka: [smiling] __
Nothing special... So! ......chotto ne!
5
Madoka: [looking back over her shoulder]
See you, Kasuga-kun. ja ne KASUGA-kun
6
[She walks off.]
7
[Kyousuke watches her receding back as Hikaru cheerfully rests her head on
his shoulder.]
narration:
"Nothing special"? What in chotto tte--- ittai nani
the world has happened to nuthin'-special (quote) what-in-the-world
her?
ga aru n darou
(S) happen (poss-explan)
Ayukawa has been going koko SUUJITSU no AYUKAWA
home strangely early these this-place a-few-days 's
past few days...
MYOU ni KAEri ga HAYAkute----
strange/odd goes-home early
For some reason, that worries nan-to-naku KI ni naru n desu!
me! for-some-reason weigh-on-mind (explan)
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p 175 (173)
1
[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]
2
[Kyousuke's pov of the TV screen. An idol singer does a cutesy act.]
3
[Kyousuke sits, bored and near comatose.]
4
[Another view of the idol singer. She does a little skirt-twirl...]
5
[He turns off the TV.]
TV FX: ___
pu_
6
Kyousuke:
Boring! Too boring... munashii! munashi sugiru ze......
empty/futile too-empty
7
[He lies back on the floor, amidst a "Jump" and "Nova" magazine and stacked
bowls of ramen/saimin.]
Kyousuke:
A page from my dazzling mabushii kurai no SEISHUN no
youth... dazzling (extent) 's youthful
______
ICHI pe--ji
one-page
What am I doing in here? IE de konna koto yatte-te
i-- no daro-- ka
okay (poss-explan) (?)
Kyousuke FX: _____
goro_
8
[This and the next 4 panels are round-cornered, denoting a flashback.]
narration: _____
It's my old man's fault... kore to yu-- no mo oyaji me---
even-this "old-man"
Takashi: [smiling]
I'm going to Hokkaido to IS-SHUUKAN bakari SHIGOTO de
work for just a week... one-week just because-of-work
HOKKAIDOU ni Iku n da ga
(IO) go (explan) but
_________ ______
But we'll be in Golden Week go--ruden ui--ku NAKA da shi
then, so why don't you come golden-week within be consider
along?
do-- da omae-tachi tsuite konai ka?
what be you-all not-come-along (?)
9
Kyousuke/Manami/Kurumi: [ecstatic]
Ehhh?! Really?! e--_ HONTOU?!
All right!! yatta!!
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p 176 (174)
1
[The twins chatter while Kyousuke merrily checks a travel guide.]
Manami:
Hey, Kurumi, what are you ne-- kurumi anta nani KIte-ku?
going to wear? you what going-to-wear
Kurumi: ______
Since I heard they have HOKKAIDOU tte pengin iru so-- da
penguins in Hokkaido, I'd (T) penguins have (hearsay)
better have a coat or ______
something, huh? kara yappari ko--to nan-ka
that's-why sure-enough coat somewhat
iru n ja nai no?
have
Kyousuke's book:
"Hokkaido's a Fine Place... HOKKAIDOU wa ii TOKORO
Probably."--Dambe (T) fine-place
...rashii dambe
probably/apparently
2
Takashi:
Except that... tadashi......
[The children pause in shock.]
3
Takashi:
I was only able to get KOUKUU KEN wa 3 -NIN BUN
tickets for three people!! airline-tickets (T) 3-people shares
shika torenakatta!!
only-obtained
Kyousuke, you're the oldest, KYOUSUKE omae wa CHOUNAN da shi
so give a ticket to your you (T) oldest-son be consider
sisters!
koko wa hitotsu IMOUTO-tachi ni
this-place (T) one to-younger-sisters
yuzutte-yare!
give-(favor-to-them/command)
[Kyousuke is horror-struck.]
Kyousuke reaction FX:
ga~~n
4
[Back to the present. Kyousuke still lies on his back on the floor. He
frowns up at the ceiling.]
Kyousuke:
So cruel... hidoi ja nai ka
cruel/outrageous
He raised my hopes, then nukayorokobi sase-yagatte kuso----_
dashed them, dammit! premature-joy leaving-(me)-to-do shit/damn
fruitless-joy (contempt/vulgar-usage)
5
Kyousuke:
Aaaah! If it's going to be a~~~~a! kore na koto nara
like this, I really should this-(one) thing if-it-is
have gone with Hikaru-chan
to Karuizawa! HONTOU ni hikaru-chan no KARUIZAWA
really 's
tsuite-ikeba yokatta na---_!
if-go-along-with was-good
6
[Just a grey panel with overlaid FX bubble.]
Kyousuke stomach FX:
gu~~~~~_
7
Kyousuke: [sitting up]
Oo-ooh. I'm hungry. u~~~~ hara hetta na--
gotten-hungry
I haven't eaten anything ASA kara roku na
decent since morning. since-morning -decent/satisfactory
mon kuttenai n da
thing not-eat (explan)
I get hungry even when I'm nani-mo shinakute mo
not doing anything! nothing even-though--doing
hara wa heru!
get-hungry
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p 177 (175)
1
[Kyousuke walks down the sidewalk.]
sign 1: ______
KK #KK# komura
??????
sign 2:
Top Brokerage saya ue
brokerage/sword-sheath top
sign 3:
Top Brokerage saya ue
2
[He spies something.]
3
[Wow! It's a new restaurant! Hmm. Looks like "BCB"... ^_^]
4
Kyousuke: _________ ____
Hmmm?! "Restaurant and Pub"! he---_ resutoran #&# pabu!
This wasn't here the last kono mae TOOtta TOKI wa
time I passed by... before-this passed-by time (T)
konna no nakatta hazu......
this-kind-of was-not-here likely
5
Kyousuke: [entering]
(This place should have (koko nara TAbeMONO aru daro-- na)
food.) if-it's-here food have poss-be
6
Kyousuke: [taking a seat at a table]
(Ohh, this restaurant has a (he-- nakanaka KANji no ii MISE
rather nice feel to it.) quite/very good-impression store
da na)
be
7
[A waitress comes up. Our pov is from behind so we only see Kyousuke
looking up at her.]
waitress:
What will it be? nani ni nasaimasu ka?
what (IO) do (?)
Kyousuke:
Let's see, well... e--to ano ne
8
[He looks up and his face falls.]
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p 178 (176)
1
Madoka: [surprised]
Kasuga-kun...?! KASUGA-kun.......?!
both: ___
AH! ha_
2
Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]
Ayukawa... .......AYUKAWA
3
[Madoka portrait.]
4
[A little later. Kyousuke eats while Madoka sits across from him and keeps
him company.]
Kyousuke:
Really? You're working here he--- RENKYUU no aida zutto
all through the holiday? during-holiday throughout
_____
koko de baito?
at-this-place work
Madoka:
A person I know runs this SHIriai ga yatte-ru
place, so I feel at ease! an-acquaintance (S) be-giving/doing
MISE da kara KIRAKU nan da!
store that's-why feeling-at-home it-is
5
Madoka: [smiling gently] ______
But, don't tell the school. demo...... GAKKOU de wa naisho da yo
but at-school (T) secrecy be
_____
Because we're not allowed baito wa KINSHI sarete-ru
to work. work (T) prohibition be-making
kara
that's-why
6
Madoka:
But, Kasuga-kun, I was da kedo KASUGA-kun ga kono KINJO
surprised to find you but (S) this-neighborhood
around here.
da towa ODOROita na--
be was-surprised-at
Kyousuke:
Really. mattaku
7
narration:
So this is why she was going so-- ka SAIKIN KAEri ga
home so early, huh? most-recent go-home (S)
HAYAi no wa datta no kaa
early was (?)
Kyousuke: [smiling] ___
Whew! ho_
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p 179 (177)
1
[From behind the counter, the shop proprietor calls out to Madoka.]
Master:
Ayukawa-kuuun. AYUKAWA-ku--n
Madoka:
Yes. ha--i
2
Madoka: [to Kyousuke]
Can you wait a minute? chotto MAtte-te ne
a-bit be-waiting
3
[Kyousuke watches her and smiles.]
narration:
Even though it was a GUUZEN to wa ie doko ni mo
coincidence, and we're chance although -anywhere
not going anywhere, this
is a good thing! Ikenakute mo i-- koto aru
not-even-be-going good-thing happen
ja nai ka!
4
[Madoka and Master confer. Kyousuke keeps smiling.]
Kyousuke FX: ________
nikoniko
5
[Master approaches Kyousuke at his table.]
Master: [smiling] ____________
I hear that you're kimi AYUKAWA-kun no kurasume--to
Ayukawa-kun's classmate? you 's classmate
nan da tte?
that-is (hearsay)
6
Master: [embarrassed and jovial]
Phew, that's good. iya-- yokatta
I was just short-handed, cho--do HITODE ga TArinakute
and I was at a loss what just-one-worker (S) being-not-enough
to do!
KOMAtte-ta toko datta n da!
was-at-a-loss case/moment was (explan)
_________
Wah ha ha! wa_ha_ha_
I'm saved! tasukatta yo----_
7
Kyousuke:
EH?! Wh-what are you e na nan no koto desu ka--?!
talking about?! about-what be (?)
8
Master:
As I hear it, you live kikeba IE mo CHIKAi to yu--
around here, too. if-hear home too close-by say-that
shi
consider
_________ ______
How about it? At least do--ka na semete go--ruden ui--ku
during just the middle of in-any-case at-least golden-week
Golden Week, could I ask
you...?! NAKA dake demo tanomenai
only-during even-if-it-is not-be-asking
ka na~~~~~_
I-wonder !
_____
I'll pay you . baito RYOU hazumu yo
work-fee treat-(you)-to-(something)
Kyousuke:
Huh?! he_?!
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p 180 (178)
1
Madoka: [standing next to his table]
I'd like you to help out atashi kara mo onegai! KASUGA-kun
too, Kasuga-kun! from-me-too request
2
[Madoka portrait--how can you resist this face, Kyousuke...]
3
Kyousuke: [smiling, embarrassed]
W-well... I wonder if I so soo da na-- do-- shiyou ka na
should... well what shall-do I-wonder
Master: [beaming]
So you'll do it? so-- ka yatte-kureru ka
doing-(favor-to-me) (?)
Oh, I'm saved! iya-- TASUkatta yo-----_
saved
4
Master: [handing him stuff] ___
If that's settled, then so-- to kimareba hai o-MISE no
here you go! Your employee if-decided-like-that here! store's
sweatshirt, duster and tray! __________ ________
tore--na-- kotchi ga dasuta-- to
"trainer" here duster and
(i.e., sweatshirt)
tore--!
tray
Kyousuke: [incredulous]
Ehh? Right now?! e-- IMA sugu na no~~~_
right-away
5
[Later, in the employee dressing room...]
Kyousuke: [removing his shirt]
(I kind of feel forced into (uyamuya no UCHI ni TEN'IN
this job.) hush-up/stifle clerk
sarete-shimatta)
was-made-(finality/regret)
6
Madoka: [poking her head in the room] _____
Is the size okay? doo saizu wa?
how size (T)
door FX: ______
sha--_
7
Kyousuke: [facing locker, shirtless, back to door]
Wait a minute, now... chotto MAtte-te IMA...
a-sec be-waiting now
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p 181 (179)
1
[Madoka goes wide-eyed.]
2
Kyousuke: [looking back at her with a surprised smile]
? ?
3
Madoka: ______
I'll leave the apron right epuron koko ni oitoku kara
here. apron here (IO) (= oite-oku) that's-why
set-down-(for-
future's-sake)
And hurry. ISOide ne
hurrying
The place is quite full. kekko-- haitte n no yo
quite/very containing
Kyousuke: ________
Thank you. sankyu--
4
door FX: _____
pisha
[She leans back against the wall for a moment to compose herself...]
5
[...and lets out a sigh.]
6
[View of a busy restaurant.]
7
[Kyousuke apologizes to a customer who has just received a lapful of water.
Madoka unsuccessfully tries to stifle her laughter in the background.]
narration:
And so, it started out on ko-- shite hyon na koto
a strange note, and that's doing-like-this strange thing
how I came to be working _____
here... kara kono MISE de baito suru
that's-why at-this-store work
koto ni nari----
became-this
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p 182 (180)
1
[Kyousuke waiters...]
narration:
Although this job is pretty SHIGOTO wa kekko-- kitsui kedo
tough, maybe because work (T) quite hard but
Ayukawa's here I'm not
bothered at all! AYUKAWA ga iru se--ka
(S) is-here the-result
ZENZEN KU ni naranai!
completely not-worry-me
2
[He drops a plate...]
3
[...but uses the Power to save it.]
levitating plate FX: _____
pita_
4
[Kyousuke grabs the plate.]
Madoka: [looking]
? ?
narration: _____
Nobody knows that I'm koko de AYUKAWA to baito shite-ru
working with Ayukawa here. over-here w/Ayukawa be-working
nan-te DARE-mo SHIranai
or-such nobody-knows
5
[He sweeps the floor before opening time.]
narration:
Of course, it's a secret mochiron hikaru-chan ni mo HIMITSU
from Hikaru-chan, too. of-course (IO) too secret
6
[Madoka enters.]
narration:
It's just our secret!! AYUKAWA to futari dake no HIMITSU
with-Ayukawa just-2-people 's secret
nan da!!
it-is
7
Kyousuke: [cheerfully]
Good morning! ohayo--
8
Kyousuke: [at the cash register]
Thank you. arigato-- gozaimashita
narration: ___________
It's like I got a little misuteriasu na AYUKAWA no SHISEIKATSU ni
closer to Ayukawa's mysterious 's private-life (IO)
mysterious private life...
choppiri CHIKAzuketa mitai----
a-bit/a-tad allowed-to-approach seems-like
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p 183 (181)
1
[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]
narration:
And before you know it, soshite atto yu-- mani 5-GATSU
it's May 5th... and all-too-soon May
5-KA----
5th
_____
Last day of work! KYOU de baito mo o-shimai no HI!
on-today work (hon)-last-day
2
[Inside, the three share drinks at the counter. Master stands behind it,
Madoka and Kyousuke sit side-by-side.]
all: ______
No-o-o... Ha ha ha. iya--- hahaha
3
Master:
Thanks, Kasuga-kun! <*> KASUGA-kun o-tsukare-san!
(hon)-weariness-(hon)
Your help saved me. okage de TASUkatta yo
due-to-help saved
Was it hard? kitsukatta desho
was-hard poss-be
<*Translation note: This phrase is difficult to translate into English.
Master here says "o-tsukare-san!"--said by one after a long day, and is
sort of an apology plus offer of thanks to another for putting that person
through such a long day.>
4
Kyousuke: [smiling]
Yeah, but it was a lot of ee demo kekko-- TANOshiku yaremashita
fun. but quite fun did
Master:
Is that because Ayukwawa-kun sore wa AYUKAWA-kun ga ita
was here? that-(one) (T) (S) was-here
kara kai?
that's-why (?)
5
Kyousuke:
EH?! e?!
6
[Madoka portrait-a bit surprised, a bit contemplative.]
7
Madoka: [calculatingly] ________
But Master, is it okay to be sore yori masuta-- i-- n desu ka
goofing off in a place like but-that okay (explan) (?)
this? (lit., "to be selling
oil/lard in a place like konna TOKORO de ABURA
this") in-this-kind-of-place oil/lard/fat
Utte-te
be-selling/dealing-in
Isn't your wife waiting for okusan MAtte-ru n ja nai n desu ka
you? wife be-waiting is-not (explan) (?)
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p 184 (182)
1
Master: [heading out]
Okay, okay. I can't win yareyare AYUKAWA-kun ni wa kanawan na--
with you, Ayukawa-kun. oh-boy (IO)(T) not-beat
Well, I'll be going so ja ore KAEru kedo
please lock up the place, well I go-home but
okay?
o-MISE no tojimari o-negai ne--
store lock-the-doors request (right?)
2
door FX: _____
karan
narration: ________
But what Master said is shikashi masuta-- no KOTOBA wa
true... but 's words (T)
HONTOU de---
true being
3
narration:
I took this job to be AYUKAWA to ISSHO da kara
together with Ayukawa. together-w/Ayukawa that's-why
_____
koko no baito mo hikiuketa na da
this-place's-work too took (explan)
[He looks at her. She's busy drinking.]
4
Madoka:
Kasuga-kun, all I've seen KASUGA-kun sakki kara
you drink is juice. since-a-little-while-ago
______
mite-ru to nani yo ju--su bakkari
if-be-seeing what only-juice
ja nai
Kyousuke: ___
B-but, after all I'm still de demo yappari ore mada
in junior high. but after-all I still
CHUUGAKUSEI da shi
jr-high-student be consider
5
Madoka: ________
C'mon, it's okay! It's on ii ja nai! masuta-- no ogori
the house. 's extravagance
nan da kara
that's-why
6
Madoka: [smiling gently]
Or are you such a serious KASUGA-kun tte majime SHOUNEN na no?
boy? (T) serious-boy
7
Kyousuke:
I-I'm not like that! so sonna koto nai yo!
that-kind-of-thing is-not
Madoka:
Probably so. so-- daro-- naa
like-that poss-be
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p 185 (183)
1
Kyousuke: [stopping short]
Eh? e
2
Madoka: [focusing on her drink] ______
Because--although you datte hikaru to de--to no
promised a date with Hikaru, because w/Hikaru date 's
you stood her up and went
riding in a boat with me YAKUSOKU shite-ta kuse-ni suppokashite
at the park. did-promise although standing-up
______
atashi to KOUEN de bo--to notte
with-me at-park riding-a-boat
n da mon
(reason)
Kyousuke FX: _____
zuki_
(zukizuki = throb/smart with pain)
3
Madoka: [tossing back one]
You're disgusting! yana yatsu da!
disgusting-fellow be
Kyousuke FX: _____
zuki_
4
narration:
Th-that's harsh...! ki kitsui na----_
Madoka: [turning to look at him]
Do you know what that's so-- yu-- no nan-te yu-- ka
called? that-kind-of 's what-called (?)
SHItte-ru?
be-knowing
Kyousuke: [giving nervous look]
Eh?! e_
5
Madoka: [smiling gently] ___________
A flirt. sukekomashi
6
[Madoka pours another one.]
drink pouring FX: ____ ____
toku toku
Kyousuke:
(Sh-she's making strange digs (mi myo-- ni karamu na
at me tonight...) strange pick-a-quarrel-with
KON'YA wa...)
tonight (T)
7
Kyousuke:
Ayukawa, don't you think AYUKAWA...... moo sono kurai ni
that's enough? already that-extent (IO)
shitara
if-do
8
Madoka:
Do you honestly like her? HONTOU ni SUki na no? hikaru no koto
Hikaru? really liking about-Hikaru
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p 186 (184)
1
[Kyousuke portrait--stopping short.]
2
Madoka: [hand over mouth]
AH! a
3
Madoka: [looking aside unhappily]
Sorry. gomen
4
Kyousuke:
But... demo...
Madoka: [looking back]
Huh? e
5
Kyousuke: [gentle smile]
This is the first time I've AYUKAWA ga konna ni shaberu no
seen you talk as much as (S) this-kind-of (IO) chattering
this.
HAJImete da ne
for-1st-time be
Madoka: [smile]
Is that so? ara soo?
6
Madoka:
For some reason, I feel KON'YA wa nan-da-ka TANOshii no
good tonight. tonight (T) for-some-reason pleasant
7
[Kyousuke portrait--he looks over at her.]
8
[Shot of a painting/poster on the wall depicting three of the "Fab Four",
I think.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ayukawa... Shouldn't you be AYUKAWA...... mada KAEranakute i-- no?
going home? yet not-going-home okay
Madoka: [off]
AH! a!
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p 187 (185)
1
[Exterior shot of the bus stop sign.]
2
[Overhead view looking down. Madoka and Kyousuke stand at the bus stop.]
Madoka:
Sure enough, I'm not in time yappari SAISHUU maniawanakatta....
for the last one... sure-enough last/final wasn't-in-time-for
Kyousuke:
Too bad. What'll we do? KOMAtta ne dou shiyou
troubled what shall-do
3
[Kyousuke studies the bus schedule.]
Madoka:
Isn't...everyone at your TASHIka...... KASUGA-kun toko
house gone on a trip? place
RYOKOU de minna inai no yo ne?
on-a-trip everyone not-there
Kyousuke:
Yup! But they'll be back un! ASU no GOGO ni wa
tomorrow afternoon. tomorrow-afternoon (IO) (T)
KAEtte-kuru n da kedo ne
come-to-return-home (explan) but
4
[What she's driving at registers in his mind and he suddenly turns to look
at her.]
5
[Madoka stands there, hands behind her back.]
6
Madoka: [flashing with a gentle smile]
Won't you...let me stay for KOMBAN... tomete-kurenai?
the night? tonight not-put-me-up-(favor-to-me)
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p 188 (186)
1
[Kyousuke, wide-eyed.]
2
[Madoka portrait--Kyousuke's pov as she gazes directly into his eyes.]
3
[A view from down the street. They stand facing each other.]
Kyousuke:
Ah!... Ayukawa... a_...... AYUKAWA...
4
Madoka: [smiling playfully]
I won't tell Hikaru. hikaru ni wa damatte-ru yo
from-Hikaru (T) keep-silence
5
[Kyousuke portrait--thinking really hard.]
6
[Madoka falls against him. He catches her and holds her against his chest.]
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p 189 (187)
1
narration:
A-Ayukawa... a AYUKAWA------
2
[Another view from down-the-street. In silhouette, they embrace...]
3
Kyousuke:
Huh? n?
4
[He looks down at a dozing Madoka.]
Madoka sleep FX: ____ ____
su-- su--
narration:
She's asleep... NEte-ru----
be-sleeping
5
[From behind a car beeps its horn. Kyousuke looks back.]
car horn FX: ___ ______
pu_ pu---_
6
Hikaru: [sticking her head out the car window]
Yoo-hoooo, Sempaaai, ya_ho---- SEMpa--i madoka-sa----n_!!
Madoka-saaan!!
7
Kyousuke: [horrified]
H-Hikaru-chan! hi hikaru-chan!
___
Arg! ge_
narration:
Uh-oh! ma mazui_
8
Hikaru: [beaming and waving] _____
Did you just finish? With IMA Owatta n desu ka baito
work? now finished (explan) (?)
You must be exhausted! o-tsukare-sama de----su!
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p 190 (188)
1
Kyousuke: [surprised]
What?! he_?!
2
[Hikaru stands on the sidewalk near the two. Kyousuke still holds the
sleeping beauty...]
Kyousuke:
Y-you knew? shi_ SHItte-ta no?
did-know
Hikaru:
Yeah. I heard from ee madoka-san kara DENWA de kiitemasu
Madoka-san over the phone from-Madoka on-phone hear
that you were working with _____
her. madoka-san to SEMPAI ga baito shite-ru
Sempai-and-Madoka (S) be-working
tte koto
(hearsay) matter
3
Hikaru: [getting a closer look at Madoka]
Oh? She got tired and fell aree tsukarete
asleep? huh getting-tired-(and)
NEchatta n desu kaa
(= NEte-shimatta) (explan) (?)
slept-(finality)
4
Hikaru: [holding up Madoka]
I'll take her home. atashi OKUtte-ikimasu
I go-and-escort-home
5
Hikaru: [in passenger seat of car]
See you later at school, ja ne-- SEMpa--i mata GAKKOU de!!
Sempai!! at-school
6
car driving-away FX: _____
buuuu
[Kyousuke is left to stare at the receding car.]
7
narration: _____
Wh-what?! I thought the job na nan da----?! baito no koto
was only our secret... what's-that about-work
___
ore to futari dake no HIMITSU
with-me only-2-people 's secret
ja nakatta no ka----
was-not-there
What in the world was I ore wa ittai NANI o
getting all happy about I (T) in-the-world what (O)
then? ______
ukiuki shite-ta n daro-- ka------
was-being-cheerful (poss-explan) (?)
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p 191 (189)
1/2
[Panel 1--Kyousuke walks home.]
narration:
But those words weigh on da kedo KI ni naru no wa
my mind... but weigh-on-my-mind
ano KOTOBA----
those-words
2
[He visualizes Madoka...]
Madoka: [flashback]
Won't you...let me stay for KOMBAN... tomete-kurenai?
the night?
2/3
[Panel 3--He visualizes her falling against him.]
narration:
Ayukawa... What did she AYUKAWA...... do-- yu-- tsumori
mean by it?! what-kind-of intention
datta n darou...?!
was (poss-explan)
4
[Pov looking up at his head and the starry sky overhead.]
narration:
Is it simply because she tannaru o-SAKE no sei na no ka----
was drunk? simply liquor's-fault (?)
5
[View of the sleeping Madoka, in the back seat of the Hiyama's car.]
6
[View of the car on a street.]
narration:
Or...? sore-tomo
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