Kimagure Orange Road
"Lakeside Rhapsody"
Volume 1, Story 5
WB Volume 1, Story 5
Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi
This script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty.
Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1)
Original typesetting by : Enrique Conty
Additional translation & Full-script typesetting by : Craig Nishida
Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose
Craig Nishida
Spencer Hastings
Peter Norby
Last revision : 11-11-94
NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()
NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on
which one you have there may be a few extra items.
Examples: The subtitles on page 105 (103) are only in the WB'S!
The one-page "Character Profiles" at the ends of the first
six chapters are omitted in the WB's!
Comments on the revision (CN): Besides inserting the romaji, a few missing
lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing
FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines
were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes
of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without
the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is
not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating
yourself...]
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p 105 (103)--TITLE PAGE
[Madoka, in school uniform, leans out from behind a translucent veil.]
MAIN TITLE (at top) __________
Lakeside Rhapsody reikusaido
lakeside
___________
_rapusodei--_ (kanji = KYOUSOUKYOKU)
rhapsody rhapsody
SUB-TITLE (at bottom) ___________
The Mysterious Enigmatic nazomeku HOHOEmi misuteriasu
Smile on the Other Side of enigmatic-(faint)-smile -mysterious
a Secret Veil Troubles ______
Me for Some Reason... HIMITSU no be--ru no MUkou GAWA
secret 's veil 's other-side
naze da ka
somehow/without-knowing-why
boku o KURUshimeru
me (O) worry/trouble/distress/torment
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p 106 (104)
1
[Madoka takes a shower.]
Madoka shower FX: _______
za----_
2
[In front of the mirror, she closes her eyes and tosses back her hair.]
faucet FX: ____
kyu_
3
[She exits the bathroom...]
door FX: _____
kacha
4
[...toweling her hair.]
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p 107 (105)
1
[Her body swathed in a towel, she opens the drapes of her bedroom window.]
drapes FX: ________
shaa----
2
[Madoka-with-wet-hair portrait.]
3
[She opens her desk drawer. Inside are 2 packs of cigarettes.]
drawer FX: _____
gara_
4
[She puts an unlit cigarette in her mouth.]
5
Madoka: [eyes growing wide]
AH! a
6
[She takes the cigarette out of her mouth and stares at it...]
7
narration:
Come to think of it, I so-- ieba ano HI IRAI
haven't smoked since that come-to-think-of-it since-that-day
day... ______
tabako sutte-nakatta kke----
had-not-smoked-cigarettes
[Madoka has a flashback to chapter 1.1--"The Red Straw Hat", normal manga
page 32, panel 9.]
Kyousuke: ______
If you smoke cigarettes at IMA kara tabako nan-ka
your age, you won't give from-now cigarettes somehow
birth to healthy babies!!
sutte-ru to JOUBU na AKA-chan
if-be-smoking healthy babies
Umenaku naru ze_!!
result-in-not-giving-birth-to
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p 108 (106)
1
[She smiles in amusement.]
Madoka: ___
Heh! pu_
2
narration:
Funny. I've firmly kept HEN na no atashi---- aitsu no KOTOBA
to his word... odd I his-word
shikkari MAMOtte-ta nan-te----
firmly/resolutely had-kept etc.
3
[She sits at her bed, now in underwear.]
narration: ____
Till now, teachers and others IMA made SENko-- ya ironna yatsu ni
have told me much the same till-now teachers and various-fellows (IO)
thing, but...
ONAji you na koto UKAGA-TAI mo
same resembles thing want-to-hear and
Iwareta kedo
had-told but
4
narration:
...I never listened... KI ni mo tomenakatta noni na--
also-not-paid-attention-to although
5
[Kyousuke portrait.]
narration:
Kasuga Kyousuke... Weird KASUGA KYOUSUKE... okashina yatsu da na----
guy... strange-fellow be
6
[She pushes the cigarette back into the pack.]
Madoka cigarette FX: ___
su_
7
Madoka:[standing at window, looking out]
What a nice day! i-- TENKI!
nice weather
I think I'll go to the park. KOUEN ni demo
park (IO) or-something
Itte-miyou ka na
shall-try-and-go I-wonder
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p 109 (107)
1
[Shot of an electric tram-car at a station.]
streetcar FX: ________
paa----_
sign: [left/cut-off by panel] ______ ___
...chikku ...chikku ...pan
...pan
poster: [middle]
I'm Assistant H of KYUU/KU i no
... 's
ashi-H wa WATAKUSHI desu...
assistant-H (T) me it-is
poster: [right]
minata mo ni DEte
?????? too ??????? (IO) emerging
mimasen ka? TA
not-see (?) a-name?
2
[Some riders wait around; others purchase tickets.]
3
Kyousuke: [studying map above ticket machine]
Let's see... Nakagawa etto NAKAGAWA CHOU wa to...
Street... street
ticket machine sign [partial]:
...All Lines ...ZENSEN
4
Kyousuke:
What's this? nan daa
It's only the third station? mittsu -ME no EKI ja nai ka
third station (?)
I've got another two hours. mada 2 JIKAN mo aru noni
another-2-hours have although
Looks like I'm a bit early. chotto HAYAku ki sugita na--
a-bit arrived-too-early
5
[Panels 5-7 have rounded corners, denoting a flashback. Here we have a shot
of the fence that borders the school's soccer field.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Ehhhh?!! e~~~~!!
6
[Kyousuke and Hikaru stand and talk next to a building.]
Kyousuke: _ ___
Ehhhh?!! A d-date?! e~~~~!! de deeto?! o ore to----_?!
W-with me...?! date with-me
7
Hikaru: [wide-eyed and very nervous]
Yes! Are you free this hai! KONDO no NICHIYOUBI o-hima
Sunday? yes this-coming-Sunday (hon)-free-time
desu kaa?
is-it(?)
Hikaru FX: ________
mojimoji
Kyousuke: ____
Eh! W-well. Sorta, but... e_ ma maa hima to Ieba
! well speaking-of-being-free
____
hima da kedo...
I'm-free but
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p 110 (108)
1
[Panels 1-5 continue the flashback.]
Hikaru: [gleefully] _______
All right! Lucky! I'm so yattaa_ rakki-- hikaru ureshi----_!!
happy!! did-it! lucky glad/happy
2
[Two guys walk by. One holds an open book.]
guys FX:
jirojiro
Hikaru: [blushing]
Ah! ha_
book title:
A Discussion of Capital shihon ron
a-capital/a-fund discussion/essay
3
Hikaru: [flashing her "dark side"]
Hey! Hey! What ya' lookin' ora ora ome--ra nani mite n da yo
at?! (omaera) what looking (explan)
you-(plural)
I'll kick your ass!! buttobasu zo!!
knock-someone-senseless
guys FX:
zazaza
4
[Cute Hikaru portrait overlays this panel... She lifts a hand in farewell.]
Hikaru:
Bye. I'll be waiting in ja NICHIYOUBI NAKAGAWA CHOU no
front of Nakagawa Street Sunday street's
Station at one o'clock on
Sunday! EKI MAE de 1-JI ni
in-front-of-station at-1-o'clock
MAtte-ma--su!
be-waiting
[In the panel itself, we see her running off.]
Kyousuke:
Ah. Just a minute, Hika... a chotto hika....
5
narration:
I was astonished because it TOTSUZEN no koto datta n de
was so unexpected... unexpected/sudden 's matter was
bikkuri shita kedo----
was-surprised but
Kyousuke:
...but it was decided IPPOU TEKI ni kimerareta..
without any say-so from one-sided/unilateral (IO) was-decided
me...
6
[End flashback. Kyousuke walks down the station steps.]
narration: ___
I didn't feel bad. ore to shite wa WARUi KI wa shinakatta
as-for-me (T) bad did-not-feel
Kyousuke FX: ___
ton
narration:
Because... nan se----
7
Kyousuke FX:
nikoniko
Kyousuke:
(...this is the first time (Umarete HAJImete ONNA no KO
a girl has asked me out...!) being-born for-1st-time girl
______
kara de--to ni sasowareta
that-s-why date (IO) was-invited
n da mon na----_!)
(reason)
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p 111 (109)
1
[He stops in surprise at something he sees off-panel.]
Kyousuke observation FX: __________
jiriririri
(jirijiri = little-by-little)
2
[Ahead of him, Madoka has boarded the train.]
sign on post:
Keep the city beautiful... MACHI o kirei ni...
city/town (O) beautiful
3
[A closer view of Madoka. She stands in thought, gaze directed down.]
overhead poster: [left]
Mothers, be on the lookout okaasan MIte-ru uron
for a suspicious... mother be-watching suspicious-
overhead ad: [middle/partially blocked]
Today... HONJITSU...
__
Weekly publication, Shounen SHUUKAN SHOUNEN ja...
Ju... weekly-publication
overhead poster: [top right/partially blocked]
____
I'm Assistant H, the ...ashi H de--su - TEGAMI
letterer... Assistant-H am letter/note
cho--...
writer
overhead poster: [bottom right]
Important request!! dai o-negai!!
great (hon)-request/desire/wish
4
[Shot of Kyousuke, who stands frozen in surprise.]
overhead sign:
...turn ...orikae NISHI
West entrance/exit turn/turn-back west
KUCHI DEGUCHI
entrance exit
narration:
Th-that's... a are wa----
that-(one) (T)
5
[The doors of the train start to glide shut in front of Madoka...]
door FX: ____
ga--
6
[...prompting Kyousuke to rush for the train.]
narration:
Wait a sec! choi MAtta--_
a-bit/second waited
Kyousuke FX: ___
da_
7
narration:
I'm not going to make it!! dame da maniawanai!!
be-no-good not-be-in-time
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p 112 (110)
1
[He flashes with the Power.]
narration:
Arg, forced to use it!! e--i yamu o en!!
(= yamu o enai)
unavoidable/necessary
2
[Next to Madoka stands a woman with a handbag. The bag leaps and jams
itself between the sliding halves of the door.]
woman:
Kyaa!! kya--_!!
bag FX: ____
shu_
3
door FX: ___
ba_
4
[Doors now fully open, Kyousuke gets on the train.]
Kyousuke:
Thank you, lady. arigato obasan
woman:
...?! N-not at all. ......?! i...iie dou itashimashite
You're welcome. no you're-welcome
5
Madoka:
HUH?! ara
6
Kyousuke:
Hi. yaa
7
Madoka: [averting her gaze]
.......... ..........
Good morning. ohayou
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p 113 (111)
1
Kyousuke:
Ah! G-good morning. a_ o...ohayou
2
narration: ______
I've got to s-somehow do disuko IRAI no kono KI mazui
something about this air since-disco 's this-bad-feeling
of bad feeling that's been
there since the disco... FUN'IKI---- na...nan-toka
an-atmosphere -somehow
shinakutcha
(= shinakute wa )
must-do
3
Kyousuke: [smiling broadly]
Nice day, isn't it? i-- TENKI da ne
nice-weather be
Madoka: [giving off arctic vapors]
You think so? It seems to soo? kumotte-ru mitai da kedo......
be getting cloudy... become-cloudy seems be but
4
[Kyousuke thinks dark thoughts.]
5
[He looks out the train and up at the sky.]
Kyousuke:
C-come to think of it, there so so-- ieba chotto KUMO ga
are some clouds out. Yeah! come-to-think-of-it a-few-clouds (S)
DEte-kita kaa un!
began-coming-out
Kyousuke:
Let's see... etto--...
6
Kyousuke:
Ah! That cloud! a_! ano KUMO
7
[A view of the sky with 3 clouds.]
Kyousuke: [off]
It looks sorta like my nan-ka IMOUTO no kurumi no
sister Kurumi! somewhat younger-sister 's 's
KAO ni nite-ru na--_
face (IO) be-resembling !
And the two on the right MIGIGAWA no futatsu ga
look like an ice cream right-hand two (S)
and a hamburger... ______________ ___________
sofutokuri--mu to hamba--ga-- da----
soft-(ice)-cream and hamburger be
8
[Madoka looks out at the sky, too.]
Kyousuke:
Kurumi is a food freak. kurumi wa kuishimbo-- da kara naa
(T) a-glutton that's-why
But she can't get to demo dotchi ni mo Oi-tsukenai
either one and is rapidly but either not-overtake
getting left behind.
de dondon HANArete-ku
so rapidly keep-apart-(process-of)
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p 114 (112)
1
Kyousuke: [smiling up at the sky]
What do you call that?! nan-te tta kke ko-- yu-- no!
what called that-kind-of
Uh, ah... etto horaa...
Madoka: [warmly]
"A person that goes after NI TO o Ou mono wa
two rabbits won't even get two rabbits (O) runs-after person (T)
one."
ICHI TO o mo Ezu desho
one rabbit (O) even poss-not-get
overhead poster: [right/partly blocked] ______ ______
Kima Orange Road KIma... orenji ro--do
overhead poster: [middle]
Grown-up stuff!! OTONA KI!!
adult/grown-up essence
overhead poster: [top left]
Letters re-cei-ved... o-TEGAMI cho--da--a-- --i
(hon)-letter/note (chodai)
received
overhead poster: [bottom left] _____
"Jump" is awesome!! jampu erai!!
great/excellent
2
Madoka:
Giggle! kusu_
Madoka:
But it's not just your demo IMOUTO-san ni kagirazu
sister. All but younger-sister-(hon) (IO) not-limited
girls are food freaks!
ONNA no KO wa minna kuishimbo--
girls (T) all a-glutton
da yo!
be
3
[A shot of two clouds in the sky.]
Kyousuke: [off]
Hey! That cloud on the are! MIGIGAWA no KUMO ga AYUKAWA ni
right looks like you... right-hand-cloud (S) (IO)
nite-kita na--
came-to-resemble
And the cloud that's de Oi-kakete-ru KUMO ga......
chasing it... be-chasing cloud (S)
4
[Kyousuke shuts up.]
5
Kyousuke: ___
(...for some reason, looks (nan-da-ka ore no KAO mitai
like me.) for-some-reason my-face resembles
da na)
be
Madoka: [beaming]
That doesn't look like a are wa KAO to yu--
face. It looks more like that-(one) (T) face say-that
the sole of a foot.
yori hotondo ASHI no ura
more-nearly bottom-of-foot
tte kanji ne
a-feeling
6
Kyousuke: [blushing/indignant]
Th-the sole of a foot?! a...ASHI no ura~~~~_?!
Madoka: [smiling]
? ?
7
Kyousuke:
By the way, where are you tokoro-de AYUKAWA wa doko made
going? by-the-way (T) as-far-as-where
Iku no?
go
conductor:
Front of the Park. Front KOUEN MAE KOUEN MAE~~~~
of the Park... park front-of
door opening FX: _____
ga--_
8
Madoka: [walking off]
Hmm? Well, right here! saa? ja kono EKI made!
to-this-station
Kyousuke:
Ah... a...
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p 115 (113)
1
[Exterior shot of a bridge and walkway in the park.
2
[Kyousuke and Madoka walk side-by-side.]
Kyousuke:
(In the end, I came along (to--to-- tsuite-kite-shimatta
with her. in-the-end came-along-with-
(finality/regret)
___
I've sure done it now!) ore mo yo-- yaru wa!)
I too to-do
3
[Guys everywhere begin staring at the lovely Madoka.]
dude with girl FX:
jirojiro
girl with dude:
Grr! mo--!
4
balding man:
Hey, great looking chick! yo_ i-- ONNA! washi no KONOmi
Just my type. fine woman my preference
5
[Kyousuke portrait--he looks back at some guys who stare at Madoka.]
6
guys FX:
jirojiro
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p 116 (114)
1
Kyousuke FX: _____
chira
2
[His pov of Madoka, who ignores all the attention.]
3
[His view pans down her torso...centering on her miniskirt.]
4
Kyousuke:
(Somehow, Ayukawa looks (nan-ka KYOU wa IROppoi na----
sexy today...) somehow today (T) sexy
AYUKAWA...)
5
narration:
Is it because she's wearing SHIFUKU no sei daro-- ka korya
normal clothes? Gee. plain-clothes 's fault poss-be (?) gee
No matter how you look at do-- mite mo CHUUGAKUSEI ja nai!
it, she doesn't look like to-all-appearance jr-high-student be-not
a junior high school in-every-respect
student!
boy 1:
She looks hot. i-- ONNA da na--
fine-woman be
boy 2:
Who's that guy walking nan da ano ISSHO ni
with her? what's-that that together-with
ARUite-ru yatsu wa
be-walking fellow
Kyousuke FX:
u--mu
6
narration:
If we walk together like ko-- yatte NARAnde
this... doing-like-this standing-side-by-side
ARUite-ru to
if-be-walking
7
narration:
...then no matter who looks, DARE ga mite mo one--san to
they'll get the impression of no-matter-who-looks with-big-sister
an older sister and younger
brother. sono oto--to tte KANji da yo
that younger-brother get-the-impression
Oh god. korya
goodness
8
Madoka: [pointing off-panel]
Why don't we go for a ride are NOtte-minai?
in that? that-(one) not-try-and-ride/get-on
Kyousuke: __ ______
A b-boat? bo...bo--to?
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p 117 (115)
1
[A shot of two boats on the lake.]
2
[His pov of Madoka, who mans the oars.]
Madoka:
Well? Pretty good, huh? doo? nakanaka umai desho
how very good poss-be
______
I used to come here when I atashi MUKASHI yoku koko no bo--to
was little to ride the boats. I long-ago often this-place's-boats
NOri ni kite-ta n da
ride (IO) had-come (explan)
3
Madoka: ______
The hardest part about bo--to tte massugu kogu no ga
rowing a boat is to make boat (T) straight rowing (S)
it go straight.
ichiban muzukashi-- no yo
most-difficult
4
Madoka: [offering the oars]
Say, would you like to row? nee koide-minai?
not-try-and-row
Kyousuke:
N-no... Not today! i iya~~~ KYOU wa yametoku yo!
no today (T) (= yamete-oku)
stop-(doing)-(for-
future's-sake)
5
narration:
She's quite cheerful today. KYOU wa zuibun AKArui naa
today (T) quite cheerful
When she's at school, she GAKKOU ni iru TOKI to wa
seems to be a different be-at-school when-times
person!
BETSUJIN mitai da!
different-person seems-to-be
6
[Madoka playfully pulls hard at the oars, sending Kyousuke tumbling
backwards.]
Madoka:
Whoops, look out. ottotto ABUnai
Madoka rowing FX: _____
yura_
Kyousuke:
Wah!! uwa_!!
7
Kyousuke:
Hey! That's bad for the chotto so-- yu-- no SHINZOU ni
heart! that-kind-of 's heart (IO)
WARUi na~~~~_!
bad
Madoka:
Sorry, sorry. gomen gomen
ku_ku_ku_
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p 118 (116)
1
Madoka: [giving it some thought]
Let's see... sate wa
You're afraid of the water. MIZU ga kowai n desho
water (S) scared (poss-explan)
[Direct hit!]
Kyousuke:
Oooh! u_!
2
Kyousuke: [blushing/sweating]
That's pretty harsh...! kitsui na--_
severe/sharp-(remark)
___
No... I'm not particularly... iya ore wa betsu ni sono--
That is... no I (T) not-particularly that
nan da---
it-is
3
Madoka:
You can't swim! OYOgemasen!
not-swim
Kyousuke: [in a snit]
W-well! ma...... maa ne!
4
Madoka: [teasingly]
Don't be so vain! ibaru na yo~~~~_!
don't-be-proud/haughty-
Kyousuke: [embarrassed]
Heh heh heh. It's he he he o-hazukashi----_
embarrassing...!
5
[Both turn at the sound of...]
FX:
dobu--n
woman: [off] _______
Kyaaa! kya---_
6
[A little boy struggles in the water beneath a high bridge. On that bridge
his mother leans over the rails and screams.]
woman:
Fumiki-chaaan! S-someone! fumiki-cha--n_ da_ dare-ka--_
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p 119 (117)
1
Fumiki-chan in-water FX: _____ _____
basha basha
2
Kyousuke:
I-in a lake this shallow ko_ kono kurai no IKE nara
his feet might touch the this-extent 's pond if-it-is
bottom?
ASHI ga TAtsu n ja nai no?
feet/leg (S) stand (explan)
3
Madoka:
It gets pretty deep under HASHI no MOTO tte
the bridge. bridge 's vicinity
kekkou FUKAku natte-ru no yo
quite be-becoming-deep
Kyousuke: ______
But if we take the boat demo bo--to de asoko made Ikeba...
over... but with-boat as-far-as-there if-go
Madoka: _____
No! The oars will get dame! ano HEN na o--ru ni MO ga
caught in the weeds over no-good that-region oar (IO) duckweed
there.
karamatte ikenai no
(= karamiatte wa ikenai)
must-not-entangle
4
Kyousuke: [swiveling his head]
Th-then, somebody. ji...ja DARE-ka HITO
someone person
Kyousuke FX:
orooro
5
Madoka remove-jacket FX: ___
ba_
6
Kyousuke:
H-hey, w-wait! o...oi chi...chotto MAte yo!
Madoka: [about to dive in]
What are you talking about?! nani Itte n no!
what saying
He's going to drown!! oborechau ja nai!!
(= oborete-shimau)
drown-(finality/regret)
7
Kyousuke: ___
I'll go! ore ga Iku yo!
I (S) go
[Madoka gives a look of astonishment.]
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p 120 (118)
1
Madoka: [yelling]
But you can't swim! datte KASUGA-kun oyogenai desho
but not-swim poss-be
2
Kyousuke: [with a serious expression]
It's all right! That was DAIJOUBU! sakki no uso
a lie. all-right a-little-while-ago 's lie
da kara
that's-why
Kyousuke FX:
(i.e., caused by kiri_
haste) (kirikiri = sound-of-something-rotating/
very-busy/stress-or-tension-caused-by-
haste-or-impatience)
3
narration:
Ayukawa is watching so I AYUKAWA ga MIte-ru shi
can't use the Power here! (S) be-watching consider
koko de _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAu
at-this-place use-the-Power
wake ni wa ikanai na!
can't-very-well
Madoka:
Hmm! fu_
4
[Kyousuke stands, resolute.]
narration:
But this isn't a job for a demo---- ko-- yu-- no ONNA no KO no
girl!! but this-kind-of 's girl 's
YAKU ja nai zo
duty is-not !!
And she's watching me... shikashi AYUKAWA no MAE da shi----
besides be-in-front-of-Ayukawa and-besides
Kyousuke FX: _____
suku_
5
Kyousuke: [diving in, flash thought]
(OH GOD!!) KAMI-sama!!
god-(high-honorific)
6
Kyousuke FX: _______
zabu--n
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p 121 (119)
1
[Madoka watches in concern.]
2
Kyousuke: [surfacing]
Phew! pua_
3
[He swims...]
narration: ___
During that time... sono TOKI no ore wa---
that-time I (T)
4
[...towards the boy...]
narration:
...I don't know what nani ga do-- natta no ka
happened... what (S) what happened
5
[...and holds the struggling Fumiki-chan's head above water.]
narration:
I don't remember anything sappari OBOete nai no da keredo
at all, but... at-all not-be-remembering but
Kyousuke: ____
pua_
6
[Above on the bridge, the mother and a crowd of watchers all smile.]
woman:
Fumiki-chan! fumiki-chan!
7
[Madoka looks on--it looks like he's gone up a notch in her estimation.]
narration:
Just... tada----
merely
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p 122 (120)
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[Back on dry ground, Kyousuke stands in a puddle of water, Madoka behind
him. A crowd, including boy and mother, greets him. The mother bows.]
crowd FX:
yaji
narration:
When I realized it, the KI ga tsuitara kodomo no HAHAOYA ni
child's mother was thanking when-realize child's-mother (IO)
me and... many-times bowing-head
2
Madoka: [tossing her jacket on him] ____
Hey, you'll catch a cold. hora kaze hiku wa yo
look catch-cold
Madoka jacket FX: _____
pasa_
narration:
...Ayukawa was nice, too. KOKORO na shika AYUKAWA mo
spirit no-more-than too
yasashikatta
was-kind/sweet
3
[Kyousuke's and Madoka's pov looking down at a park walkway.]
4
[They sit at a window table in a 2nd-floor coffee shop that overlooks the
park.]
Madoka:
How many lumps? SATOU ikutsu?
sugar how-many
Kyousuke: ________
One, thank you! sankyu-- hitotsu!
one
5
Madoka: [cheek in hand, smiling]
What was that? You said nani yo OYOgenai tte Itta noni
you couldn't swim, yet you what not-swim said-that although
swam perfectly well.
chanto OYOgeru n ja nai
perfectly swim
6
Kyousuke:
W-well... so so-- da ne
Kyousuke coffee-drinking FX: __
zu...
Kyousuke:
(I want to ask why I was (nan-de OYOgeta ka kotchi ga
able to swim.) why swam (?) this-way (S)
kikitai yo)
want-to-ask
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[Madoka continues to gaze at him in silence.]
narration:
I certainly don't remember tashika ni _CHIKARA_ wa TSUKAtta
using the Power. for-certain used-the-Power
oboe-ganai shi
not-come-to-show-signs-of-recollecting
Kyousuke coffee-drinking FX: __ __ __
zu zu zu...
2
narration:
Maybe the only way to shiite ieba AYUKAWA ga mite-ita
explain it is to say, if-anything (S) was-watching
"because Ayukawa was
watching." kara to shika Iiyou ga nai
because no-more-than-that shall-say
Madoka contemplation FX:
ji--~~
[Kyousuke becomes self-conscious at her studious gaze.]
3
Kyousuke:
What? Is there something on nani nan-ka KAO ni tsuite-ru?
my face? what somewhat face (IO) be-stuck-(to)
4
Madoka: [in merriment] __________
Plankton. purankuton
Kyousuke: [horrified, wiping at his face]
Ehhh?! e--_
5
Kyousuke: [rolling his eyes]
? ?
Madoka:
kusu
6
Kyousuke: [indignant]
What? You can't see that! nan da yo sonna mon
what's-that that-kind-of-thing
MIeru hazu nai ja nai
be-seen not-likely
Madoka: _ __ __
Ah ha ha! a ha ha
7
Madoka: [smiling, gaze down, twirling her straw]
But, being together like demo ko-- yatte futari de
this makes it seem like a but doing-like-this with-2-people
date! ______
iru to nan-ka de--to shite-ru
if-be-here somewhat be-dating
mitai da ne!
seeming-like be
8
Kyousuke: [going bug-eyed] __ ______
D-date?! de...de--to?!
crows-in-the-background FX:
kaa_
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Kyousuke:
Huh?! n?!
Kyousuke: [getting up]
Ahhh!! Th-that's right. a----_!! so...so-- datta
______
The date with Hikaru-chan! hikaru-chan to no de--to!
with-Hikaru 's date
Madoka:
Hikaru...? hikaru......?
3
Kyousuke: [sweating] ___
Eh! Ah! e_ ha_
4
Madoka: [giving him a piercing gaze]
A date? ...... With de--to? ...... hikaru to...?!
Hikaru?!
Kyousuke: [plopping back in his seat, mortified]
I-I mean... That... i...iya sono...
5
[She considers...]
6
Madoka: [smiling, tossing back her hair]
Hmm! fu_
7
Madoka: [smiling, getting up]
That's right. I have to so-- da sorosoro KAEranakutcha!
go home now! now/soon (= KAEranakutte wa)
must-return-home
Madoka stand-up FX: __
su
8
Madoka: [walking off]
Bye. ja ne
_______
Kyousuke: _jakutto_
Ah, your jacket...?! a... kono UWAGI wa...?!
this-jacket
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Madoka: [looking back, sparks glinting from her stern gaze]
Wash it before you return chanto ARAtte KAEshite!!
it!! neatly/fully washing returning
2
[He watches her walk out the door.]
narration:
Ayukawa... AYUKAWA----
3
[Kyousuke races through the station.]
narration:
And as for the date with de hikaru-chan to no MAchiawase wa
Hikaru-chan... with-Hikaru 's date (T)
to yu-- to
speaking-of
Kyousuke running FX: ___ ___
ta_ ta_
sign:
...ta Street Station ...TA CHOU EKI
street station
4
narration:
...I'm three and a quarter CHIKOKU suru koto 3-JIKAN to
hours late! be-late matter 3-hours and
15-FUN!
15-minutes
Kyousuke FX: __________
kyorokyoro
5
Kyousuke: [seeing something off-panel]
AH! a_
6
[It's the message board, dated April 9 <1984>.]
narration:
"A person that goes after NI TO o Ou mono wa
two rabbits..." two rabbits (O) run-after person (T)
blackboard: [in huge characters]
KYOUSUKE IS A JERK!! KYOUSUKE no baka--
[He winces.]
7
Kyousuke:
AH-CHOO! hekkushoi
____
I caught a cold... kaze hi--chimatta da....
(= hiite-shimatta) be
caught-cold-(finality/regret)
narration:
"...won't even get one!" ICHI TO o mo Ezu----!
one rabbit (O) even not-get
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[Manami stands in dress and jacket, hands in her pockets.]
Title: ___________
Character Profile kyarakuta-- SHOUKAI
character presentation/introduction
Manami:
Kasuga Manami KASUGA manami
Kouryou Junior High School, KOURYOU GAKUEN CHUUTOU -BU 1-NEN
1st year. secondary-school section year
At present, there isn't a waga KASUGA KE ni wa
mother in our family. our family (IO) (T)
GENZAI o-KAA-san ga imasen
at-present mother (S) not-here
Therefore, I've become the sonna wake de atashi ga
family's homemaker. for-that-kind-of-reason I (S)
IKKA no SHUFU ni
family 's homemaker (IO)
nari-kitte-imasu
be-completely-becoming
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What? You want to see me e? megane totta KAO ga mitai?
with my glasses off? glasses take-off want-to-see-face
One of these days! sonouchi ne!
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who's cuter, me kurumi to dotchi ga kawaii katte?
or Kurumi? vs-kurumi which (S) cute appreciating
Of course...! mochiron!
...you want to say that ......to Iitai tokoro da kedo
but since we're want-to-say-that case be but
identical twins, we look
alike, huh? ICHIRANSEI SOUSEIJI da kara
identical-twins be since
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NIte-ru no yo ne
be-resembling (stressed)
But I'm not the same as demo atashi wa kurumi to wa chigaimasu!
Kurumi! but I (T) vs-Kurumi (T) are-different
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