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This is my new writings page. I was inspired my one of my friends, whose name will remain annonymous, to try and write some poetry. I am not a poet, and i do know it, but I'm trying to anyway. So my poems are going to be here. Also, I would love to share this page with any of my friends, it would actually make me feel a bit better if my friends would put poems up with me too, I don't know why. but it would. So e-mail them to me, and I will absolutely put them here, signed or unsigned, which ever you prefer. Thanks.

Broken

To you I'm me and to me i'm me, but you must not be seeing what i see you say i'm lame dumb dull and grey and i should try to change if there's any way but what i see is what i want to and you make me wish that i didn't know you you break my spirits one by one and then you say "I've just begun" and when the tears roll down my face I feel as though i've lost the race i care for you more than you will ever know but you don't feel the same and this goes to show that hearts are easily broken.
By Rachel

Girl Scout Cookies

selling 10 boxes gets you a badge 20 gets you better stuff but if you sell 100 boxes you will get to see the envy of the other girls who couldn't sell that many I wanted so much to be at the top And i was promised that this was the year until the morning this was planned another broken promise and another awful morning and another bout of tears not for the cookies for so much more and more and more as this went on the cookies seemed so far from my concern and then i heard don't worry maybe next year and i didn't care about the girl scout cookies anymore
By Rachel

Untitled

the world doesnt need a reapeat of whats already here but now I that ive come this far I dont want to lose it all and If I told you that I really cared youd say you dont believe me im so unorrigional but Ive learned that when i try the least it always comes out best for me and over the past two weeks im more then I have ever been I think
By Elizabeth

Ode to My Dad

I haven't spoken to my daddy for at least a full three months he doesn't know that i don't love him but i'd tell him if i could you don't just leave your children and walk away and not look back at least thats what i thought until you went and proved me wrong and it would have saved a lot of heartache if you'd just left when i was born because its your fault when i'm unhappy it's because of you that i am sad not because i miss you daddy because you made my life so bad but i will be just fine now although not because of you because i can make it on my own And i'll make myself a happy girl which is more than you could ever do.
By Rachel

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I remember when to see you was great but now I cant seem to stand the sight of your face last night i dreampt your friend called me to tell me you had died and I realized I didnt care and when i saw you today I didnt know what to say because since things have changed I dont want to see you and you say you dont understand but i know you do and you questioned me when all along you knew and you know its hard to pretend im fine when really im just dying inside when I got home todayi didnt think about you so I guess that means im through caring at all so I dont want you to call to bring yo back to my thoughts Ill sleep in tomorow
By Elizabeth

Forever and Never

she said she was happy for him she was glad he'd moved on she didn't want to have to tell him that when he left her dreams were gone and she's sitting all alone now she's dreaming up a silly dream about the day that he comes back oh and asks if she would marry him her head is stuck now she's lost amung the stars because he's never coming back oh he's already gone too far she doesn't care if that's the case though all she wants is life with him and now she'll wait until forever and forever's what it's gunna be.
By Rachel

Now that she's back in the atmosphere With drops of Jupiter in her hair, hey, hey She acts like summer and walks like rain Reminds me that there's time to change, hey, hey Since the return from her stay on the moon She listens like spring and she talks like June, hey, hey. Tell me did you sail across the sun Did you make it to the Milky Way to see the lights all faded. And that heaven is overrated. Tell me, did you fall for a shooting star. One without a permanent scar And did you miss me while you were looking at yourself out there. Now that she's back from that soul vacation Tracing her way through the constellation, hey, hey She checks out Mozart while she does tae-bo, reminds me that there's time to grow, hey, hey...Now that she's back in the atmosphere, I'm afraid that she might think of me as plain ol' Jane, told a story about a man who is too afraid to fly so he never did land. Tell me did the wind sweep you off your feet Did you finally get the chance to dance along the light of day and head back to the Milky Way And tell me, did Venus blow your mind Was it everything you wanted to find And did you miss me while you were looking for yourself out there. Can you imagine no love, pride, deep-fried chicken, your best friend always sticking up for you even when I know you're wrong. Can you imagine no first dance, freeze dried romance five-hour phone conversation, the best soy latte that you ever had . . . and me. Tell me did the wind sweep you off your feet? Did you finally get the chance to dance along the light of day, and head back to the Milky Way. - Train, Drops of Jupiter
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