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marian potter
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(4/26/03 7:22 pm)
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please
please write more
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RonnysGirly 
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(4/26/03 10:45 pm)
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Re: please
MP! You're back! STAY,STAY!
Oh, and CG, I know you have more. POST!
MORE!MORE!MORE!
Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
CandyGurl83 
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(4/26/03 11:28 pm)
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PATCHY THE PIRATE RETURNS!!
Just 'cause I have more doesn't mean I'm always here to post ya know. And I was far too busy to do so! (And now I hurt my eye, and its all red and I'm thinking it's either irratated or I got an infection, and someone accidentaly got their spit sprayed at my face/eye! OWWW!!!) So I cant wear one of my contacts, so I'm partially blinded and in pain. Yippee for me!
Anyhoosiers... Here's some more then... I've got W.B. though. Really bad case of it...
Here's a little. Cuz I dont wanna break up the next half much..
Oh. Dedicated to Choccy 'cause of Bill. (He made me write that..)
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RECAP
“Hey Draco, Terrence, um, everyone else,” Blaise said, pulling out a chair for the beaming Lizzie. Terrence turned to talk to him, leaving Kelpie to talk to Keziah and Ashley. “Agh, would everyone stop calling me Ashley please? I'd much rather prefer Choccy or something,” Choccy said, on the end of her tether. “Well, hello there, Choccy. I’m Bill. Of course, my birth certificate says William, so we have the whole going-by-another-name-instead thing in common,” Bill Weasley said, winking, as he entered the Great Hall. Choccy's jaw dropped as her eyes fell upon the eldest Weasley son, Gringotts curse-breaker, and her stunning heartthrob. Angelina nearly fell out of her chair at the mere sight of another gorgeous redhead. She promptly passed a note to Lisie with a large number of galleons written on it. “You can't bid on anyone while we’re here.” whispered Lisie, causing Sara to crumble up a piece of parchment under the table. "Damn,” she breathed, causing Fred to stare at her suspiciously. “Oh, sorry dear. I just remembered that I ate my last chocolate frog before we came down to breakfast,” she lied. “Well my beloved, I’m sure I could fix that for you. Just meet me in my room before dinner, and I guarantee you will be satisfied.” Thinking this over, he coughed, “with the new supply of chocolate frogs and other delectable treats that I'll have for you, of course.” On Sara’s other side, George coughed with a distinct “Yeah, I'm sure that's all.”
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Fred turned a lovely shade of scarlet and muttered ‘shut up’ to his twin. Angelina whispered something into George’s ear, causing him to match Fred's crimson shade. He didn’t say anything more after that. Just an eager nod and a stupid grin. Ron looked over, suspicious of the excessive redness at the table. “What’s with you two?” he asked, catching other people's attention. Lisie kicked him under the table, causing him to glare at her. “What was that for!” he hissed, then cowered once he realized who he snapped at. Lisie whispered something into his ear, causing him to snicker, and then to gasp and beam. “Yeah, so if you don’t bug them about that, then you can later,” she mumbled, staring at him. He gave a quick nod and went back to eating his sandwich, periodically looking up at his brothers.
Bill sat down next to Choccy and Keziah. “Charlie would’ve come but he couldn't find a dragon sitter,” he said, picturing his [A/N: muscular, sexy, and oh-so-fine] brother tucking a ‘little’ dragon into crib with a teddy bear and kissing it goodnight. [A/N: Awww how cute!] He laughed inwardly…and outwardly. A few others laughed also, obviously getting a similar mental image.
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Coming up next: F/S and G/A parts
Then after that: R/L part
 
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RonnysGirly
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(4/27/03 2:38 am)
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Re: PATCHY THE PIRATE RETURNS!!
R/L parts! NOW! POST! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW! *snogs the 'R' of the pairing*
MORE!MORE!MORE!
Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
bookgrl
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(5/2/03 6:13 pm)
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Re: have to stop getting on at school
Hey I really need to stop getin' on here at school, this time I actually have permission but I'm always afraidthe teacher will read a part about snogging over my shoulder. And I still am not in this
~Nikki~ George Weasley is mine
GO TIGERS
if noone can have George then Tyler Y. is mine
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RonnysGirly
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(5/2/03 7:30 pm)
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Re: have to stop getting on at school
Hehe, my teacher once saw 'snogging' over my shoulder. I told her it was SNOGing, a new way of data transferring. Silly Americans.
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Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
marian potter
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(5/2/03 8:30 pm)
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ha ha
tee hee hee
that was so funny
where's my head? RG, when you said R/L the first thing i thought of was Remus/Lily.
speeking of which, is there a name for that ship?
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CandyGurl83
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(5/2/03 8:53 pm)
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hehe
Remus/Lily would be R/L... OR Wolf/Flower! (Aww cute wittle woflie!!) ... or Dead-Man-Walking-By-Chasing-After-James'-Girl/The-Girl-That-Got-Two-Mauraders..
BUT not here..
It's Ron/Lisie!
Okies so I'm back.. and not much feedback on that last part, it looks like. *sigh* I leave, get really sick, can't post on here, and then when I come back there's hardly any life on here besides Cara, Lisie, and... Nikki? *hegs* I *heart* you three! 
@bookgrl: I have sections written out already, so any parts written any time soon (hah, as if I've overcome Writers Block!) won't be up for awhile. So no new appearances yet. Heck, I wrote a part around the time of Almah's birthday and then remembered it wouldnt be here for awhile later.. *shrug* So I'll let ya know when I have 1 or 2 more posts before you pop in. Okies? Otay
*digs through the computers bottomless box of files* AHA! *pulls out 1 of 2 "Top Secret" files* Here we go:
*dramatic pause*
This is a kinda long part, 'cause I'm not-wanting to break it up. And I'm sure it'd make Lisie happy to know that this way she'd be getting more, AND her R/L part will be here faster.
*tries to delay more*
Dedicated to G/A (no no, not Goyle and Albus.. George and Angelina!), because they've taken over the screen..
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“Hurry up, Forge!” Gred yelled into the passageway. “If you don't plan on helping, I’d advise you to shut up!” the other yelled. “Can’t! You lost the coin toss, so you gotta carry it all!” replied Gred nonchalantly. Finally his twin appeared in front of the moving statue. “I still think you cheated,” he scowled. “All’s fair in love and war, brother dear. Besides, you did the same thing last time.” “Oh, good point! Anyway, take your stuff and hurry up! My angel doesn't like to be kept waiting,” Forge said, shoving the excess packages into his brother’s arms. “I hardly think she can be considered an angel,” Fred started to say, when his brother turned around and glared at him. Quickly, his face changed into a proud smile. "I know! Isn't she great!?” he said, thinking of all the havoc they could wreak around the castle together. Fred just shook his head, laughing. “Definitely a keeper. But, nothing can top my beloved. Mmm…” he said, drifting off to memory lane with a dreamy smile. One day, and they were already totally strung up over those girls.
“Oi, earth to Fred! Come in Fred!” George said right before his brother ran straight into the wall next to the portrait hole. Every item he purchased was scattered on the floor, along with George who was laughing hysterically. To top it all off, a big bruise was rapidly forming upon Fred’s forehead. The Fat Lady started rolling over in her painting laughing, and after a few minutes, Fred stood up shakily and glared at them both. “Glad to be of some entertainment. Accio! Now if you’ll excuse me, I’m going to my room. TBWL! Man, whoever thought of these passwords must’ve been nutters.”
George heaved himself up off the floor, gathered his bags, and walked inside. His brother’s flaming red hair disappeared up the stairway. No doubt he wanted to be alone for awhile. Perfect, since Angelina was supposed to meet George soon. He quickly bolted up to the 7th year girls’ dorms, since it was one of the only upperclassmen dorms that would definitely be empty. “Candles, check. Butterbeer, check. Full stock of Honeydukes candy, check.” And so he continued, listing things. “Hair… eh, can’t change that. It’ll be fine. Table set for two, check. Soundproof charms, check. Fairy lights, check. Hmm… only one thing missing,” he said, looking around. Two hands found the perfect spot around his abdomen, causing him to spin around.
“Me, perhaps?” the younger girl said, beaming. He kissed her forehead, moving his arms to her waist. “No, actually I was waiting for Heather. She seemed to be pretty great on the field, and I was curious if that extended elsewhere,” he said, lying horribly. “Well then, I guess I should be leaving. Wouldn't want to inter-” she was saying, before he cut her off with a long kiss. They broke away somewhat quickly, and she wrapped her arms around his neck. “Do you really think I would pick anyone other than you?” he said, staring deeply into her eyes. She was at a loss for words, and instead hugged him tightly. “Of course not,” she whispered. He waved his wand, [A/N: NO GUTTERMINDED NESS!!!] and the lock clicked quietly. Now nobody could interfere… [A/N: HEY! PUT ME DOWN! And let me back in! This is my story and I'm supposed to keep this all under control! Don't make me get Mol-mmprh! *struggles to get untied and free* … *frees herself twenty minutes later* Geezie lousie! Okay, I guess I need to carry on somewhere else… Time intrude on Ron and Lisie!]
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Read/Review pleeease. (ESPECIALLY you Angelina!)
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RonnysGirly
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(5/3/03 11:01 pm)
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Re: hehe
Oooooooooooooh, R/L-ness coming up, right?
MORE!MORE!MORE!
Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
BookGirl87
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(5/4/03 9:21 am)
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R/L can mean many thing can't it RG.
Anyhoo, great story CG.
Jessica, aka Bookgirl
Mars in Taurus,
Best revenge: being rich enough to do what ever you want :lol
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RonnysGirly
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(5/5/03 8:34 pm)
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*glare*
Alright.
Any more RON/LISIE-ness coming up, CG?
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Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
bookgrl
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(5/6/03 6:04 pm)
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coolness and I *heart* u 2
~Nikki~ George Weasley is mine
GO TIGERS
if noone can have George then Tyler Y. is mine
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RonnysGirly
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(5/6/03 7:59 pm)
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I *spade* you!
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Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
CandyGurl83
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(5/6/03 9:07 pm)
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Moreness
good thing I'm not a cat then! (heh. stupid joke.. get it???)
Well, I guess since you two are the only reviewers for the last part *big sigh* I'll post more so you don't leave .. or tie me to a chair again (*shifty eyes*) or kidnap my HP Guys.....
So dedicated to you two, and also to Lisie's obsession with Ron. And the wonderful annoyances and obnoxiousness that Choccy has appointed me and the other original "obnoxious creeps" annnnnnnd Heather, AK, and Harry.
NOW FOR MORE:
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“Eek! Ron! Put me down, please!” Lisie screamed, clinging tightly to Ron's neck. When he finally got inside the common room, he set her down. “Jeez, for someone who loves to play Quidditch, you sure spazz out when you're up a few feet in the air,” he said, lighting the fireplace. “I see no relation to the two,” Lisie pouted. He walked back to her and kissed her lightly. “Well, if you were that scared, then I’m sorry,” he said, falling back onto the couch. “I wasn't scared, just… um… worried I might fall?” she said, biting her lip. Ron laughed briefly and gathered her in his arms. She moved close, enjoying the warmth. They sat in silence for awhile, enjoying each other's company. “Have I ever told you how beautiful you are?” Ron whispered into her ear, breaking the silence. “Yes, but that doesn't mean you can’t tell me again,” she replied, laughing a bit and turning towards him.
Their faces were barely an inch apart when Sara burst into the common room. “Ugh, get a room!” she yelled, laughing. “We had one until you came in here!” Ron yelled back, blushing to his roots. “Oh, well, don’t let me interrupt then,” Sara chimed. “Oh, don’t worry we won’t,” Lisie said moving closer to him. “Don't you have a certain brother of mine to be snogging,” Ron said, sticking out his tongue. Sara’s eyes lit up, and her eyes twinkled. “I did, but you guys are so much more fun to bug,” she smirked. Ron clung tighter to Lisie, who was sending pleading stares to Sara. “…But I have more important things to take care of than stay here. Ciao darling!” the ‘sassy’ brunette said, flinging her hair over her shoulder and disappearing up the stairs.
“Now, where were we?” Ron asked, grinning. “You were on the couch, and we were standing in the doorway. Any other questions?” Harry said, smiling evilly. [E/N: Wouldn’t you just love to murder the entire Hogwarts population to get some damned PRIVACY RIGHT ABOUT NOW?! --- A/N: AH! Lisie since when are there Editors Notes in this story?! LoL.. *kicks her out*] “Yeah, why the bloody hell can’t you people let us have some privacy?!” Ron retorted, throwing a pillow at Harry. “Hey! Don’t throw things at my Harry!” Nicolette yelled. “Excuse me? He's not your Harry!” Heather shrieked. “Hey, hey! Calm down. We’re just here to get my deck for Exploding Snap, not to start a war. Remember?” Harry said throwing himself between them. “Yeah,” they both murmured, following him to get the cards.
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Next part: Finishing up this Ron-Lisie stuff. ....
Wait I changed my mind....
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They finally left the common room 10 minutes later, with Ron eyeing them intently. “Finally!” he yelled, while the portrait hole slammed shut. Before Lisie knew what was happening, she was pressed against Ron, hands in his hair, and snogging fiercely. [E/N: *faints*] A little house elf entered the room. It’s eyes bulged and it tiptoed behind a large chair. Covering its eyes, it snapped its fingers and with a loud crack, sent Lisie and Ron into his dormitory, on the comfy cushions resting in the bay window overlooking the lake. Breaking apart and leaning back, Lisie realized the change of scenery. “Uh, Ron, how’d we get in here?” “No clue… maybe we know how to apparate!” he offered brightly. Lisie shook her head, hair flying from side to side. “That couldn’t be it. Could it?” she asked, puzzled. “Well, we’re here, so who cares!?” he answered, making music play with a flick of his wand. “Certainly not I!” she replied with a giggle. “Good, because that’ll make my job much easier,” he said, pulling her to dance with him. Ronald Weasley wanting to dance? I must be dreaming, she thought.
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*waits for hopefully more than just the two dedicated reviewers*
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marian potter
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(5/6/03 10:56 pm)
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Re: Moreness
i'm here i'm reviewing. i just thought you might be a getting a little tired of hearing "write more and where am i in this story"
so anyway
write more and where am i in this story!!!!
tee hee
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CandyGurl83
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(5/6/03 11:51 pm)
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squee
Of course
- I am *trying* to write.. nothings coming though. One of the worst cases of writers block ever! *gah*
- you're up here sometime soon... it'll be a bit.
Now its time to watch one of the last buffy episodes!! BYE!!!!
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bookgrl
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RG Stupid americans? I am proud to tell you I was born and bred in the us of a!
CG its ok u have writing block, although rg might not like it.
~Nikki~ George Weasley is mine
GO TIGERS
if noone can have George then Tyler Y. is mine
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RonnysGirly
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(5/7/03 8:31 pm)
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Finishing up the R/L? How dare you?! Meep, and the E/N's are there since I put them in there. I do get some beta rights, don't I? Ack, that part was my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE! I wuv you, CG. You know I do, right?
@bg: I said silly Americans, see? And I'm American too, though I wasn't born here. America is pretty cool. The only country in the world where anyone is free to sue anytime, anyone, anywhere, and for anything.
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Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
"If we took all the grease off of your hair and put it in a room, and then let all of the rabid squirrels in the world loose in the room, they would all slip and fall and then there would be rabid squirrelyness all over heaven and here on earth a 'SAVE THE RABID SQUIRRELS- KILL SNAPE' campaign would start and then we would kill you and the world would be saved from a tremendous evil although it was too late for the poor rabid squirrels, and then the rabid monkeys would have to bite squirrels so that rabid squirrels could inhabit the earth once again," Sirius said sadly. |
CandyGurl83
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(5/8/03 12:54 am)
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ehhhhh
Amen sista!
Hehe... pizza good. homework bad. *dies*
There'll prolly be more ron-ness... I mean, when we all have to leave there's gotta be SOMETHing to remember eachother by, right? Or that'd be sucky..... Now if only I could write *bangs head* ow, that didnt help...
Hehe:
"The problem with America/The World is stupidity. I'm not saying there should be a capital punishment for stupidity, but why don't we just take the safety labels off of everything and let the problem solve itself?"
*agrees*
byebye!!!!!
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marian potter
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(5/8/03 1:41 am)
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take of the safety labels LOL
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