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CandyGurl83 
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(1/3/03 11:13 pm)
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AotSFg
Attack of the Screaming Fangirls
By CandyGurl83
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the Harry Potter characters. All other people are real people portrayed by me. I’ve taken everybody out to play and when I’m done, will return them all safely to their original place (with exception of maybe two). 
The following people have come to life in my special little fan fiction, to make up my lovely group of fangirls: CentaurFirenze as CF. AvadaKedavra as Nicolette. RonnysGirly as Lisie. Wowsergirl as Lizzie. Dracosgirl as Larissa, aka Lar. MarianPotter as Cara. ChocolateIsNotForBreakfast as Ashley. BlueKelpie as Kelpie. Cmfield as Claire. GwenSweetheartOfLancelot as Gwen. Almah as Julia. Angelina89 as Angelina. Me, CandyGurl83, as Sara. And any other characters not found in Harry Potter Series are taken from TBWL. Thank you all for participating! Oh, also thanks to my dear beta reader, Lise (RG).
Setting: Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The wonderful webmistress at The Boy Who Lived and Dumbledore worked out a special retreat for her board members. (Somehow…)
A/N: I’m sure you’re tired of me rambling and adding all this, so I should just carry on with the story. So here you go! --- Rating at its worst would be PG-13, for suggested actions and events that may not necessarily be appropriate for little children. (Who would want their little child walk in to a very steamy broom closet?! Or better yet, who would want to be walked in on.) Now I give you Attack of the Screaming Fangirls (title up for possible revisions)
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The rain was pouring hard outside the large architectural structure. Several girls burst through the giant doors, causing the wind to blow rain into the entrance, and leaving massive puddles of water everywhere. A tall girl pulled the hood of her cloak down and tried to shake some of the water off of her hair. "Hey! Sara, watch it!" a slightly smaller girl said, wiping the newer water droplets off of her face. "Sorry, I just figured you needed a bit more water, Nicolette. But if you insist, I'll refrain from sharing the wealth," she retorted, with a fake-angelic smile. "I wonder if everyone else is here yet," Lizzie said, pushing her way through the other two. "I don't know. Lisie said she had something to do and wouldn't be here until a lot later, but the others might be here by now," a purple-and-red-haired girl said, admiring the tiles on the floor. "I wonder how many tiles there are in here. Anybody want to help me count?" The girls looked around the room, and after acknowledging how vast the area was, they decided against complying with the silly girl's wish. "Aww. Fine, be that way. I'm sure Jeremy would like to help me," she said, pulling a stuffed hippo out of her trunk, and started counting.
"Um, okay. Well, maybe we should go find where we're supposed to put our stuff," Gwen said, shivering from her heavy wet clothes. "Good idea! Who's got the directions to where everything is?" Lizzie asked, pulling a sucker out of her pocket. "Um, we had directions? I was under the impression we were going to have someone here to show us everything," Sara said, a bit weary. "I guess we need to see if anybody else is here then. If not, we can look around for ourselves for a place to change into dry, warm clothes. I don't want to get sick on the first day of this retreat," Gwen said indignantly. "Sounds like a good plan, oh wise one!" Lizzie said, saluting.
Off they went through what looked to be an entrance hall, into corridor after corridor. Julia was left behind, counting tile after tile. (125… 126… 127…) For some strange reason, the portraits were moving, and Lizzie swore she saw a staircase move. "You're probably hallucinating. You have been eating a lot of sugar today, hun," Sara said, thinking that they couldn't possibly be where she thought they were also. "Did Claire ever tell anybody about this retreat, like what this place actually is called? It seems to all be just like –" "Welcome to Hogwarts," Angelina said, jumping out from behind the corner.
"Hey! When did you get here!" Gwen yelled. "Oh, about an hour ago, with C.F. and Larissa." Right on cue, Lar and C.F. stepped into view, grinning widely. "Isn't this so cool?!" the girl with the wicked green hair said, positively beaming. "Is this really Hogwarts? How come it's so empty?" Gwen asked. "Apparently, Claire rented out the castle for the week, just for us. I'm not sure if it is totally empty, but it seems that way. People might be in their common rooms, so we surely won't be able to find them until they want to come out," C.F. said matter-of-factly.
Mischievous looks washed over Angelina and Sara's faces. Before anybody could ask what they were plotting, they were already gone. "I wonder what that was about," Lizzie said. "I'm not sure I want to find out," CF retorted, an eerie look gracing her face. "Yeah, nor do I," the others added. After that, they continued their tour of the castle, one of the homes of their obsession.
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Don't forget to R/R please! If ya do, I'll post more sometime soon.
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Avada Kedavra 
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(1/3/03 11:32 pm)
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whee! i'm in it! YAY!!!!! *hegs CG* necesito mas!!!!!!!!POR FAVOR!!!! *bursts because of her lack of fic-ness [fitness....ficness....HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH o.O]*
<font color= 00FFCC> Yay!! Here's my standard message that i didnt want to re-type a gazillion times: <p>I'm back! I'm gonna comment on every topic, lol!! Book 5!! Where are you? I had a dream about it! The bok looked all different and it was even longer than GoF but it was a stupid book. At least it was only a dream!!! Omg i left this board and i went to get my life back, so now I'm not TOO obsessed with HP anymore! it's a good feeling to be free now! but hey, i still like to comment on HP...once in a while......I WANT BOOK 5!! I LOVE YOU HARRY!!!!! *end of message* |
marian potter
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(1/4/03 1:33 am)
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yea!!! wonderfulness. more more and where am i by the way?
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DracosGirl
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(1/4/03 1:34 am)
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *screams like a school girl, with hands over face* *ok, well i am a school girl but . . .*
that was SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOO cool CG, i couldnt take the grin off my face and it just widened when i pointed out my name and my bro and mum had the stupidist faces!!! lol.
i think if i ever did go to Hoggy Warty Hogwarts then i would be beaming and excited just like in your story!!!
i CANT WAIT til you post more, this story is so cool (i think i already said that!!) oh well, this story, and you CG, deserve the recognition!!!
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gryffindor840
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(1/4/03 1:40 am)
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AotSFg
*starts sobbing like a little crybaby*
WHERE AM I???????????????????????????
good story, btw..
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CandyGurl83
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(1/4/03 2:47 am)
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Cara.. you're in it, I just haven't posted parts with you yet. Soon though. The next part, Lisie and Choccy enter. Then right after that, you enter first thing! I promise. 
Sorry Gryff. You weren't here apparently when I asked who wanted to be in it and to fill out a form. Sowwie.
If I can work you in later (which does seem likely, if I get rid of my new wb ..) then I'd need you to fill this out for me, no guarantees though:
Name that you wish to be called:
Hair color:
Eye color:
Major personality traits:
Harry Potter Bachelor Crush:
Age:
Height (aproximated height or like "Tall, Short, Medium Height", etc):
I'll post sometime after Lisie reviews, 'cause I need her to beta a part I just wrote before I post the next section. I don't want to post alot more before I write at least a page after I post, so I have something to post in the future if I stop writing for a period of time or get writers block. ---- It's my new plan so as not to make people wait so much like last time and leave my thread for mindless chitchat.
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wowsergirl 
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(1/4/03 3:36 am)
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*huggles sara*
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love you I love you I love you
*huggles sara*
yes yes yes *calls everybody over to look at her name* yes yes yes I am soo happy you put me in the fic!
more pwease
Only in America do we use the word "politics" to describe the process so well . . . the root word 'poli' meaning 'many' in latin, 'tics' meaning 'blood-sucking creatures'
Poli-tics, many blood sucking creatures
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chocolateisnotforbreakfast
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(1/4/03 3:42 am)
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Haha! I don't remember filling out that info to be a character... well, i guess you know enough about me LOL I can't wait to read more!!
PS: I hate the name Ashley 
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wowsergirl
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(1/4/03 3:45 am)
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he he he
Hiya Ashley
*is hit by random flying frying pan thrown b none other than choccy*
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Only in America do we use the word "politics" to describe the process so well . . . the root word 'poli' meaning 'many' in latin, 'tics' meaning 'blood-sucking creatures'
Poli-tics, many blood sucking creatures
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chocolateisnotforbreakfast
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(1/4/03 3:49 am)
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grrr... only my parents and teachers call me Ashley
Online I'm "choccy" or "choc" or "CRSA"
At school I'm "Bellie" or "Belle" or "Lu" (long story for these names)
My sister calls me "Ashel"
My brother calls me "Ash"
And people in my play call me by my last name, which I will intelligently not post here.
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RonnysGirly 
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(1/4/03 4:26 am)
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I'm here! I'll try to get on AIM, but it's being pissy at the moment. *teases all the other TBWLers* I know more than you do!
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Favorite subject: Charms
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
Nickname: Ruthie
Are you plagued with radioactive flammable coconut gods? If so, don't you dare take this invitation. If you've got writer's block, be my guest. Siriusly. |
CandyGurl83
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(1/4/03 4:47 am)
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Wow! I got reviews!
@Choccy: Yeah, I guess I do. Plus I needed ya in it and you werent around much when I started it. If it'll make ya feel any better, every addition I write from this point on I'll try to have them call you Choccy.. keep in mind that that wont appear until several posts later...
@Lisie: Well huuuuurry then.. you HAFTA read the part I sent ya!!
Thank you all. Uh... I'll post more before I get offline later.. or precisely midnight my time (keep in mind, I'm in the Central Time Zone)... oooor tomorrow.
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RonnysGirly
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(1/4/03 5:09 am)
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Ok, nightful, dudes. I gotta go now. And can one of you use your magical powers to fix that crappy son-of-a-gigabyte IM of mine?
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
Name: Lisie
Wand: 12 inches, ebony with phoenix feather
Favorite subject: Charms
Quidditch position: Seeker
Boyfriend: Ron Weasley
Pet: Female Tawny owl named Feryn
House: Gryffindor
Nickname: Ruthie
Are you plagued with radioactive flammable coconut gods? If so, don't you dare take this invitation. If you've got writer's block, be my guest. Siriusly. |
Angelina89 
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(1/4/03 5:32 am)
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Yippie skippie!!!!!
She posted it!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!!
*deep breath*
Ok, what are aAlgelina and Sara planning?
Oh, wait. I'm Angelina. duh.
ok, get those fingers typing, MoRe. PLEASE?
.:How do you know that the person you are talking to on the internet isn't just some fat, drunken guy sitting in a broken down flat eating crisps? You don't, do you?:. |
wowsergirl
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(1/4/03 7:35 am)
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more more more more more
hmm did I forget anything
*thinks*
oh yes!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Only in America do we use the word "politics" to describe the process so well . . . the root word 'poli' meaning 'many' in latin, 'tics' meaning 'blood-sucking creatures'
Poli-tics, many blood sucking creatures
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Gwen sweetheart of Lancelot
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(1/4/03 8:23 am)
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...
*squeals like DG even though she's not a little school girl anymore (though she wishes she was)* THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!! and you put me in it too.
now you need to write MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's now past midnight here and i'm an hour behind you CG. where's the story?
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Gwen
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DracosGirl
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(1/4/03 10:48 am)
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ahem *crosses arms and looks at CG with a scowl* miss CG, you have a whole lot of replies with the word "more" apearing one too many times. i declair that you post the next part or you will be sent to your room without dinner!
and you miss RG, no more taunting the other TBWLers, that is very rude!
i'm sorry guys, that wasnt me, it was the old hag named Professor McGonagall standing behind me. *SLAP*. SH!T that hurt *SLAP*
I've gotta go. she says i need to learn to keep my mouth "curse free"!!! *whisper* old cronny *SLAP* *rubs red cheek*
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CandyGurl83
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(1/4/03 4:11 pm)
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Next Section
@Gwen: Yeah I know. At midnight I was suprisingly in bed listening to music and trying to go to sleep. But I said there was a chance that it'd be the next day I posted. and here it is.
The next part is better than this part, and MP can point out her name finally in it. IMHO this part is fluffy but I'm *still* bringing people in and stuff. I'll hafta think about when I post more 'cause I need to get to work on stuff for finals 'cause tomorrows the last day of break and then a cram fest...  
Thank you all. And without further ado, here is section two:
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Lisie walked into the empty Entrance Hall a few hours later, just to notice Julia in the middle of hall counting tiles. (2003… 2004…) 'It probably would be best not to disturb her,' Lisie thought. There was a large pool of water near her, so obviously the others had made it some time prior to then. She shook the loose water out of her brown locks, and proceeded into the Great Hall. Angelina and Sara were sitting on pillows, using their trunks as tables, pouring over their Harry Potter books. "What're you guys doing?" she asked, wondering the consequences of asking. "Lisie!" they squealed. "We're looking for all the details of where the common rooms for Gryffindor and Slytherin are. Oh, you can help us! You have a diabolic mind and are interested in a certain redheaded Gryffindor. We could use another evil mastermind," Angelina said quickly. Obviously Lisie comprehended it, since her eyes flickered and she yanked away Angelina's book. "I found the spot talking about Slytherin," Sara said, pointing to the book. "Maybe the house elves could get us in there," she thought out loud. "I found it!" Lisie yelled, pointing to the book. "Hopefully this could help. Or there's always Dobby, if he's here," she said, extremely eagerly.
Off to the kitchens they went, walking past Julia, who was yelling at Jeremy for making her lose count and start all over again. "Ya know what? I used to think she was just weird 'cause I wasn't used to her, but now I think she's more than weird. She's positively nutters," Angelina said. The others nodded, but at the same time thinking that was how it was with most people at their beloved TBWL. Off the top of her head, Sara couldn't really think of anybody that wasn't even the slightest bit strange, weird, or crazy. If there was, they would have seen the error in their ways and changed.
Angelina led the way to the portrait of the bowl of fruit. Soon, they came to the landing just outside the massive portrait. "Oh my gosh! Just think! The twins and the Dream Team all stood in this spot and tickled this very pear on many occasions!" Sara said, staring in awe, until Lisie got eager and pushed her out of the way to stand where her beloved stood and open the portrait hole. "I'm never going to wash this hand again," she said, heaving a sigh. "Eek! Or these shoes, or clothes. I'm going to have to add them to my shrine when we leave for home," she squealed.
Inside, several bunches of house elves worked eagerly, while what looked to be Hermione was pestering a young-looking elf to join S.P.E.W. and recognize his rights. "Geez, for the brightest witch in Hogwarts, she sure is acting stupid," Ashley said, putting down something she was writing, and hopping off of the counter. "Choccy!!!" the three girls yelled, hugging her tightly. "How come you're here?" "When'd you get here?" "Have you tried the food?" they all asked. She just smiled and urged them to have a seat.
"Well, I got here early this morning, to work on my research paper. You know, the one I've posted a bit of and has a large portion focusing on Harry Potter? Well, that's the one. Oh, and of course I came to see all of you. Claire also thought it would be best if you had a 'voice of reason' and someone to help you find your rooms and such, and make sure the castle is still standing by the time we have to leave. Of course, you all seem to be doing just fine so far." Ashley said, pausing for a moment. "Anyway, I came early to look around and work. I even got to speak to Dumbledore for a little while, which has aided my paper. After I watched some of the remaining students leave for wherever they're staying, I decided to get some breakfast. When I got here and asked if I could have something to eat, that house elf over there," she stopped to point out the one Hermione was talking to, "had the audacity to offer me food with chocolate in it! Naturally, I had to lecture him on how chocolate is not for breakfast. When I was leaving, he followed me out, trying to 'convert' me. Unfortunately, when I hid in a random suit of armor in the second floor corridor, he found me and tried to feed it to me through the helmet. He ended up spilling chocolate all over the shiny armor!"
Lisie and Sara snickered, "CRSA's memory lives on!" "Like the wonderful, amazing broom closets," Angelina added, grinning. "Yeah, um, so why are you guys in the kitchen?" the older girl asked. "Well, it's kinda a long story," Angelina started. "Yeah, where to begin?" Sara continued. "We were looking for the Gryffindor and Slytherin common rooms, so we could see Ron, and Fred, George, Draco, and all the other people. Oh, and especially so we could put our stuff somewhere and change out of our wet clothes," Lisie blurted out, as though withholding the information would make her explode. Ashley laughed, causing Lisie's blue-ish face (from lack of air) to turn a bit pink.
"I'm not sure if they're even here yet. You guys are all going to sleep in all the different houses' dorms though. Oh, that reminds me! I'm supposed to give you all these special little maps. They guide you to the common room you wish to go to, and they seem kind of Marauder's map-ish. They show the passwords outside of each of the houses when you get to them. Of course, we had the passwords temporarily changed for this week. Gryffindor is TBWLers, Ravenclaw is OWLs, Slytherin is NEWTs, and Hufflepuff is SPUG. The people on the planning committee thought the acronyms were cute, and after much voting, chose those four." Ashley said, pulling out three maps and handing them to the girls.
While the three girls stared, and studying the maps, the anti-chocolate-for-breakfast girl walked off to have a chat with Hermione, assumedly to find out more information for her school paper she had been busying herself with. In a few moments, Angelina grinned widely to the others. "Ladies, we have found the piece to the missing puzzle!" she chirruped, holding up her map. "I think we need to modify this a bit, though." Lisie said, while the gears in her head were turning. "Yeah, like change it so we can see who is in the common rooms or on our way to them?" Sara said, as if reading her mind. "But how can we do that?" they all said simultaneously. "I think I have an idea. We need a wand, right?" Sara said, thoughts racing. The girls nodded. "We have access to all the common rooms. Whom do we know in this school that would forget such things as wands?" she continued. "Neville!" the other two yelled. "Exactly. So let's hurry to Gryffindor tower and find that wand!" she said, racing out of the kitchen with her companions closely following.
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marian potter
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(1/4/03 4:38 pm)
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yea!!! for moreness. and i'm in the next bit
tee hee
yea
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chocolateisnotforbreakfast
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(1/4/03 5:25 pm)
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Haha!!!
YAY FOR THE VOICE OF REASON!!!
You have to admit, with this crowd it's an awfully arduous job! I was wondering how you were going to fit me in, since I don't have a gigantic crush on anybody in Harry Potter (they're a little too young for me... although Bill Weasley seems like someone worthy of my affection). Hehehe! I love the random suit of armor bit!
What else is there to do but to ask for MORE!!!!!!
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Blue Kelpie
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(1/4/03 6:36 pm)
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COOL!!! wicked story CG!!!
But *sob* where am I??? until i know i shall assume i am hunting for a certain quidditch captain.
Kelpie
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