Thanks to everyone who's read, whether you've been silent or vocal ;). I've loved reading your comments and you've shaped the story.

Thanks to everyone who's commented, so thanks to:

Aidne,
Aleris,
Anhtel,
Zax,
Asil,
Belfana,
Blaise,
Goldenstar,
Brooke,
Catalina,
Chandra,
Charisma,
Chiara,
Chris,
Cyntharian,
Daenerys,
Daisy,
Dana,
Dessa,
Destiny,
Erina,
Falcon,
Gem,
Hannah
May,
Heather Martin,
Helen,
Iblis,
Ivory,
Jaenelle,
Millennia,
Jen,
Kim,
Kirsten,
Krissy,
Lin,
Liz,
Lyz,
Michelle,
Myj,
Nacahuita,
Nightengale,
Pansy Arlin,
Pan,
Periwinkle Rosewood,
Pierce,
Psyche Cabot,
Qetesh,
Sakura,
Sara,
Sarah,
Seria,
Silver,