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REVELATION

Collin Bardakjy sais "its great" "its good" "its interestingly grotesque"

Maggie sais "he story is really great, although the grammar and everything makes it kind of choppy.I really like the story though and I want to know what's going to happen next lol"

Kent Russel sais "it was captivating." "it paints a good picture in your mind"

Jeremey Sin sais "i loved it.what happens next?"

Alexandra Limia sais "its fvcking awesome!" "deep ending indeed!"

Lauren Stiger sais "i liked the story. it was different, well written"

Juan Esnard sais "well written story..perhaps you should have used quotes from the actual book of revelations when you referred to Baal Beryth"

Kayla sais "Xtian Viola is very talented. Revelation was quite interesting."

cinderella sais " i liked it.....tres creative, your imagery is beautiful."

Unbroken

Xtian Viola sais "that was one the most emotional stories i have ever read..this has truly affected me."

Alexis sais "that was really good" "it had a really good ending with him looking back in the mirror"

Drug Sheep sais "I want to say that Kayla is a great girl and that shows through her compassionate writing. She has such emotion and knows how to portray it. I love her"

Patrick Stiger sais "it was a delicious ending although he should have done the right thing and turned to hard drugs otherwise it was a very good story"

cinderella sais "jesus bunnies!...i loved it"

The Crow: The Exeptional Pain of Bliss

Xtian Viola sais "it would make a great comic book!"

Annonymous sais "there are too many errors..and it doesnt read like a story..it sounds like a 13-yr-old wrote it" "i could have written a better one"

Cinderalla sais "you people never seaze to amaze me"

FIVE DAYS

Carolina Ramirez sais "it wus good..i think. it wus kinda weird tho its like all these deaths and stuff. are these creatures aliens or wut? its good but bein the slow 1 that i am i dont fully get it"

Syn sais "your story was interesting,the canibalism was gross but it was a good story"

Cinderella sais "wow" "you amaze me everytime" "your imagination knows no bounds and your aura radiates thought out your work"

kayla sais "I read what everyone else said about this story and i wanted to say that... Five days is a really good story, the cannibalism is a part of the feeling. *I'm a love of Jeffery Dahmer so i'm all good with it* I thought that it was quite original and i'm glad you're writing."