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TBWWB Terrian King
Sunday, 27 June 2004
I Graduated!
Wow! I can't believe I haven't posted anything since March. Between writing two final papers for my degree, and then graduation, the next chapter of the story got a little bit left on the wayside. Well, it was also turning into the Alonzo/Britt Story, so I stepped away from it for that reason, too. I was corresponding with CMKerr, AKA Carrie, for ideas about Alonzo's past and how to fit in Britt Navarro and she was so full of great suggestions that the story kind of took a sharp 90 degree turn and became a completely different story. I had to think of a way to put all that stuff at the end of 9 Weeks, so when everything is done and the gang is all back together, I'll have Alonzo sit down at the campfire some night and tell Julia the story of him and Navarro.
I'm working on the next chapter now, and just to fill some space and let Angelfire know I haven't completely abandoned the blog, I'm going to post one of the recent topics of conversation at the E2 group at ICQ. I wish I knew who "Anonymous" was so I could email her - or him, but I'm betting it's a woman - and follow up on her ideas about Devon.

P.S ICQ a very strict language policy and that is why you'll see a lot of euphemisms and odd spellings of words like sex. Believe it or not ICQ will not allow the word sex to be used in a post. And never mind trying to swear! You'll never get a post to go through if you use "bad language."
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The posts from ICQ:

Re: The Greatest Love Story Never Told

DaRo

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I hated this episode with a passion. I couldn't stand Devon just falling for this guy and ignoring everything else in her life. She acted like she was just waiting for this weirdo to turn up. My question is did she sleep with this guy? They show them kissing passionately and then the next time we see them they're laying side by side a bed and talking intimately.
It just bothers me that she might have.
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Reply To: Re: The Greatest Love Story Never Told

robert

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My opinion has always been that yes, they slept together. He had a hold on her, a way to control her that made her forget her committment to the group and made her focus her attention on him. Plus, he waited over twenty years for her to reach him. I cite the example of Star Trek. Jim Kirk sitting on the side of a bed putting on his boots while a female alien straightens her clothing in the background - universally acknowledged as the duo having occupied the bed. Devon and Shepard lying on a bed after that romantic kiss? Yes.
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Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted Apr 03 2004 21:20
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No Way! Unrated Rating:Rate it(?)

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This was one of our first big arguments over the series.
I reject the Kirk comparison. I will never believe that Devon slept with that guy. I loved Patrick Bauchau on the Pretender, but as Shepperd I just can't see Devon ever letting him touch her. That's it. I'll never change my mind.
They were just talking.
I agree he had some kind of hold on her and it was an evil hold. He would have tried to take over the group and probably killed everyone because he was so obsessed with Devon-- influencing her to come to him through her dreams.
The idea to save Uly I believe was her own, but Shepperd would have found her eventually on the planet. It was just bad luck that Danziger led her straight to him.
I have always been very disappointed that there was no kiss at the end of BNP for just the reason stated by "Anonymous." It would have put the whole Shepperd business behind them. That should have been made clear.

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Yes, we had this discussion at ezboard beforebut it bears repeating. I totally agrewith Rob. ten years ago when the show wason things were different. remember then showing David caruso's bare butt on TV was an outrage? The kirk examplewas still the norm. Sunday night at 8 you wouldn't have seen steamy s, and e, and x onthe tube unlessit was a TV movie. Especially notafter the kiss Devon planted on him!
we even suggestd that maybe Devon was dying in AAe because she was pregnantbut you can imagine how well that went over! people cameout of nowhere to refute that suggestion!

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Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted Apr 11 2004 11:07

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What A Horrible Thought! Unrated Rating:Rate it(?)

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Devon pregnant by that guy? NOOOOOO!!!!
I have to go with Bev on this one. Sorry, but I'm not even going to consider the possibility anymore. If there was some way to purge the entire episode from the story line I would do it.

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Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted Apr 12 2004 20:49
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Anyway, I agree all out. I don't know what the writers were thinking! Aside from meeting the humans living in the caves with Shepperd and the Elder, and True finding a future boyfriend, maybe, if Uly turns out to be more brother than friend to her, I see no reason for this episode to exist. Oh, and using the Terrians to dream across the heavens, which I think is a neato idea.



Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted Apr 18 2004 14:20
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It's true what Rich said about the last time we had this discussion, people were popping out of the woodwork to say no, she didn't sleep with him.
One person who posted told us that Farentino was pregnant in real life and that was why she was packed off in ice, so to speak, because if the second season had gone on without changes, they didn't want to feature her pregnancy. Another guy said in the script Shepperd is much more malevolent and dark natured in his manipulation of Devon. By the time the show was being edited, they changed their minds and turned it into more of a love story and had him a reformed good guy, with his sister being evil and crazy.

Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted Apr 18 2004 14:25
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That episode has always puzzled me. I have never been able to figure out what it meant. Was it a way to make Devon more "accessible" after being such a hard case from the beginning of the series? A way to show she can love a man and that the friction between her and Danziger was caused by her unwitting feelings for this man who she only knew from her dreams? It seemed afterward, she was more willing to admit she had feelings for John, after the enigma of Shepperd was solved and she was able to put her feelings for him aside, feelings she might never have realized she was carrying. She seemed to forget about him as time passed and Uly became the center of her life, only to remember how much he meant to her after meeting him face to face. Then in the confusion of realizing who he was and how he'd helped her find a way to help Uly, she was blinded by her happiness at finding her source of inspiration.
Then in the next episode, there she was, over him, and willing to tell Alonzo how much she has come to care for Danziger.
While I agree in the end there should have been a kiss - what could it have hurt!!!?? - I can also understand how this being able to admit her feelings to herself and others is new to her. But then, she was a strong woman and when the time was right for her to tell Danziger, she would have done it just like she did everything else. She'd have run him over like a steam engine and left him with his head spinning for the rest of their lives together. That woman knows how to get what she wants! A man is no different than a contract to build another station to a woman like that!
That's where I disagree with the fan fiction writers. She was scared of nothing and no one. She defied the Council without a backward glance, and when it was firmly in her mind that Danziger was what she wanted she wouldn't have let a few butterflies in the stomach stand in her way. All that "Oh, no! let's not tell anyone yet!" crap where she wants to keep a romance a secret is just laughable to me!
She was ready to bring Sheperd home and make him a part of the group; when she was ready to romance Danziger she would have left no doubt in his mind they were going to be together for the long haul.
And, sorry, Robert. As much as I enjoyed the story "I Quit", Devon would have taken no answer but "I'm staying" from Danziger on the subject of going back to the stations.
The last scene between them when she pulls him into the cave and starts taking his clothes off him - that [is the only scene in the story that] is pure Devon!
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Wow, interesting insight into Devon.
Personally, I was never much of a Devon fan, but I do like to hear what others thought of her. It helps me to round her out in the stories I write because I have no real definite opinion of what she is like. I base her on the opinions of others, so anything new I can pick up is welcome. So far I have been writing her as my sister sees her - which is pretty much how everyone else sees her.
To me she was the least developed of the characters, and so the least interesting.
I like this suggestion that she was on the brink of steamrolling Danziger! If they hadn't begun getting sick and dying, they'd be farther down the road to New Pac and poor Danz would be just realizing he was a married man and wondering what hit him!
So you think the Devon who appears at the very end of "I Quit" is how she should always be portrayed? OK. That gives me something to think about.
It does makes sense, because when you think about it, from scene one in the series, she's always gotten what she wanted , not matter what it was.

Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted May 02 2004 17:29
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Love it! While I do like Devon and I am a D&D shipper, I have to agree that she was not the most developed of the characters. She went through very little changes as the series ran on. It seemed as if we were supposed to get everything about her from the first episode and carry it through to the end. Danziger mellowed out a little, Julia went through the biggest change, Alonzo became a survivor, and even Morgan began to see the planet and his life on it differently. Only Devon stayed mired on her role as strong willed leader without wavering - and I won't call meeting Sheppard wavering. I agree she found the source of her inspiration to come to G889, but that was all.
I wanted her and Danziger to get together and I still think they did. Julia found a way to cure her and she and Danz moved on to explore their relationship.
I guess it rings true that her take charge attitude would extend to her personal life as well. I have to think about this more because the belief that she was shy about romance and uncertain about letting a man into her life is so ingrained to most fans that I accept it. The notion of steamrolling Danz is too new! A fun thought, but way out of character for the Devon most fans see.
What about another subject concerning her, Devon that is? Do you think she was also genetically engineered as Julia was? Her singlemindedness about everything she does makes some fans think she probably was and I've heard some fans say they just assumed she was.
Other fans point out prodigies happen naturally all the time, and she could have been born with a head for business and an interest in design and construction, but others see this as the results of her extremely wealthy parents making sure their control of station building stays in the family.
What do you all think?
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Add Me Message Me Page Me Chat Me Posted May 08 2004 11:15
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I've wondered about that. I believe the comment about her parents wanting station building to remain in their family to be the key here. I'm sure she was genetically engineered. Her immense success before the age of 25 could have come naturally, but it's hard to believe. A prodigy child interested in exactly what she needs to be interested in, naturally born? I don't think so.
Can you imagine what her father must have thought when she gave it all up for her baby?! Instead of following her nature, she fell in love with her child and used her abilities to move mountains to try to save him from an early death. Her maternal instinct was more powerful than her genetic manipulation.
You can see the parallel with Julia. She too was able to overcome her pre-programming by falling in love and starting to care for her fellow survivors more than her need to support the Council.
Now that can tie in to what I think about Devon. Once she was able to beat her gene skewing, she became a woman who was finally in control of her life, not a pre-programmed individual dedicated to one thing. But that strong personality was still there and now it was focused on settling G889 and helping all children who had the same illness as her son. I don't think I would call it singlemindedness anymore. It became determination to see the job through.
By the time of Brave New Pacifica, I think she was beginning to see that having a healthy son had opened a part of her life that no longer had to be dedicated to caring for him. It was a part that was finally able to let another person into her life. So she sits there and tells Alonzo how much John means to her, now, and then, like a typical girlfriend/wife, she's relieved to see Danziger is all right, and then starts yelling at him for scaring her so badly!
There definitely should have been a kiss at the end of the story.
I have to believe the writers understood that if there had been it wouldn't have ended there. They would have had to lengthen the scene to imply intimacy.
But when you think about it, there was a lot of intimacy implied in All About Eve. Danziger hovering by Devon's side as she became more and more ill, leaving only in times of crisis for others. The handholding as if they were glued together as she makes the one person she trusts and needs by her side, MORE than Yale and Uly as she gets weaker, promise to take care of her son, is such a telling moment. If Danziger was still just her friend why would he be the one she trusts to take care of Uly? Wouldn't that job fall to Yale if she had no relationship with John?
I love that scene where she watches John and Uly together and turns away knowing her boy is fine. Remember in the begiinning when she used to get jealous of his attention to Uly and her possessiveness would come out? LOL!
Maybe we didn't get to see the kiss, but there is every indication here it took place after getting back to through the spider tunnel, and neither of them was shy about letting the others know. In this episode everyone just expects Danziger to be with her in the tent while she's ill.
I hope you excuse my long, rambling thoughts, but I just adored this show and I love having a place to come and talk about it once in a while.
And, yes, Robert, I do believe Devon should always be written as the take charge woman who knows what she wants out of life and is in no way shy about going after it. If that is contrary to what other fans think, thank goodness for individuality! Wouldn't this world be dull if we all thought the same?

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Genes skewed, ripping off Danziger's clothes? Is that really Devon Adair? I'm still thinking about it. LOL!

Posted by scifi2/terrian_king at 6:45 PM CDT
Updated: Sunday, 27 June 2004 6:59 PM CDT
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Saturday, 13 March 2004
Another Filler Post
Still getting rid of old links from my very lengthy Favorite Places files, I ran across the link to my old Earth 2 group at ICQ. Since I abandoned that group almost two years ago because of it's limited posting requirements, I thought it would be eliminated by the powers that be at ICQ after the inactivity there stretched out for over two years. Not only is the group still going, it has a couple of new members, and it's being called one of the "Longest Running" groups at ICQ!
The bboard had changed over the past two years, allowing for more activity within the group. So, anyway, I went in and created some polls about the show, simple ones, just to see what kind of hits I'd get. Wouldn't you know, the polls had barely gone up and Bev found them and gave the first answers after mine!
The group is called New2 Earth2 and it's the place where I first met Bev and Richard and we became online friends. It's also where we wrote the original drafts of the Danziger stories. The old messages are gone, alas, so those drafts no longer exist. You have to be a member of ICQ and have an ICQ number in order to vote in the polls, but if anyone besides Bev is interested the link is here:

New2 Earth2


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Updated: Saturday, 13 March 2004 8:56 PM CST
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Sunday, 18 January 2004
Brand Spankin' New Earth 2 Story
This story just popped into my head Saturday morning. I was deleting old links from my favorite places list and found a still good link to someone's web page of Earth 2 fanfic. One of the stories there was introduced as the author's answer to a fanfic challenge, "what if there was another spy among the EA besides Julia?"
I had been thinking about a story involving the background characters asserting their independence early on during their travels. How they might decide there were some things they could do on their own without going through the proper channels of getting Devon's and Danziger's OKs first. Then the idea of another spy kind of pulled it all together. Who would it be and how would he/she handle the situation? All of a sudden I could see the whole story acted out in my mind's eye.
After that it was a matter of writing it down. Some of it I typed out and some I spoke into my speech recognition software. As ever, it comes straight from WP10 so excuse the typos and bad grammar. I'll clean it up later when I move it to the web page. WordPerfect 10 also provided the title.
If anyone has beta suggestions, let's hear them.



NO ONE SAID IT WAS GOING TO BE EASY


"No one said it was going to be easy," Cameron muttered to himself for the umpteenth time in as many days. Weeks of travel across the dry, semi-arid landscape had worked themselves into a routine of sorts, and he had to remind himself now and again that he had volunteered for this. He actually raised his hand and said, "I'll do that."
He knelt by the small brook he and three others had been following, and dipped his arms into it, rubbing vigorously at the sticky, thick gum that had come out of the root of the plant stalk he had broken open moments ago. As if escaping, the sweetly odorous goo was everywhere before he had time to realize his mistake. He should have cut it open, but his knife, and his weapon, were twenty meters away in a sandy spot next to the last plant he had dissected and catalogued. It was the pressure of his hands holding the stalk and breaking it that had caused the fluids to erupt out of it. How brilliant to realize that now.
He grabbed a handful of sand from the stream bed and used that to help rub away the ooze. It might have been waterproof, but it wasn't sand proof. A few minutes of vigorous rubbing and it was gone. That felt better. The cold water had taken the dry, stinging itch away from his exposed and sunburned skin. He dried his hands on his pant legs and got up to look around. There were several of the plants around. He just needed to do it right this time.
He dug two more of the plants from the soil and carried them to the sandy spot and dropped to his knees beside it. He positioned his gear to record the process and began to examine them carefully.

Putting her samples into her bag, Denner put the scanner on top of them and slung the carryall over her shoulder. She turned away from the thick area of vegetation she'd been studying and walked over the small rise between her and Cameron. He was busily chopping a plant stalk into sections.
He looked up at the sound of her footsteps approaching. Using the back of his hand to wipe a fine film of sweat away, he nodded at the ground before him. "Scan this stuff before I go any further, Di. If I can throw it away and forget about it, it would make my day."
She knelt beside him and pulled the scanner out of her pack. "Where did the others go?" she asked and began to examine the plant he was working on.
Cameron eased himself to a sitting position on the ground and rested his arms across his raised knees. "They went to the other side of the stream to see if they could follow it to it's source from there. Less rocky. They took the other scanner with them."
"Well, my bag is full," she said. "And this plant looks promising. It has a lot of what Julia told us to look for. Better dig up a few more. Ready to head back for camp, or do you want to follow after Mazatl and E?" She handed him the scanner to read.
Even after a day spent walking, Cameron was still willing to go a little farther. "Let's get a couple more of these plants and go after them. Danziger will smooth it over if we get back to camp late."
"Okay. It's not like we'll have a meal worth anything waiting for us."
Putting on an exaggerated look of shock, he asked, "How can you say that? Emergency rations mixed with weeds are my favorite meal."
"Uh huh."

What a strange place this world was. One minute the beauty of the land around you could take your breath away and the next minute you might be wishing you had never had to see such a place. Mazatl had been wavering between the two since the day of the crash. Getting used to the planet wasn't easy for any of the Eden Advance crew and he was relieved to discover they were all having their problems, and he wasn't the only one who missed the stations.
"See anything?" Eben Sinh whispered from behind him.
The two of them were crouched behind a flowering bush and peering between the branches at a cave entrance just on the other side of it. They had stumbled upon it without warning and quickly sought cover in case it was an inhabited cave.
"No. It must be empty. With all the damn noise we made, if anyone or anything was inside they'd have come out to see what was going on by now."
Sinh fought back a laugh. They had made their presence known to any living creature in the area through no fault of their own. Mazatl's high pitched yelp as the dirt gave way beneath his feet and sent him sliding down the hillside to stop almost at the very mouth of the cave, had certainly startled her and gotten her attention. Seeing him scramble for cover as fast as he had was revelation. Who knew the laconic fellow could move that fast?
Of course, her yelling his name as he disappeared from the hilltop so suddenly hadn't been so quiet, either.
Well, it took a bit to get the hang of foraging.
She peered around his shoulder. "Shall I call Cameron and Denner? Or do you want to just go in?"
Mazatl looked down at his hands and swiftly got to his feet. "Let's go in. It might be just an empty cave."
Eben followed suit. "Do you think Gaal was telling the truth about grendlers living in caves?"
He shrugged. "Let's go find out."

"Hey!" A voice called from above and to their right.
They both swung to face that direction and frantically pantomimed "Be quiet!" to the speaker.
On the hill above the cave entrance, Cameron chuckled and tilted his head toward Denner. "Correct me if I'm wrong," he said in a low voice, "but I think they want me to shut up."
Denner had a better view of the area at the foot of the hill. "Come over here," she said. "Look down there. I think it's a cave entrance. Oh, wouldn't it be great if we could find Gaal's cave?"
"It would take a stroke of luck we haven't had lately." He looked around her. "Over there. On the other side of the rocks. Looks like a way down."
A few minutes later, the four crew members stood together contemplating the cave.
"We ought to call in," Cameron said. "Devon will want to know about this."
Eben shook her head. "No, she won't. She's still reeling from Uly's close call. She doesn't want to let on she's cut from the same cloth as the rest of us, but I know how hard it hit her to have to put her kid back into that god-awful immuno suit. I saw her breakdown when she thought no one was looking."
Cameron and Denner, the colonists of the four, still hesitated. Adair was their group leader even if the Ops crew was reluctant to accept her, she deserved the colonists' loyalty to her position.
Denner was the first to agree. "Okay. E's right. Devon has a lot on her mind right now, and frankly, Danziger isn't making things any easier for her." She raised a hand to quell the protests about to erupt from Mazatl and Sinh. "I know. I know. He's under a lot strain, too, because of what Gaal tried to do to his kid." She looked at Cameron. "That's why I think we should do this on our own initiative. If it comes to nothing, no harm done. No hopes to crush. If it is a grendler cave, or better. . . Well, it might be what it takes to put the memory of that damned Gaal behind us once and for all."
Cameron nodded slowly. "Alright."
Mazatl smiled and hefted his weapon, a mag pro, onto his shoulder, hanging it by a strap. "Good." To Cameron: "Give your mag pro to Eben." To her: "You stand watch and give us a call if you see anyone or anything coming. If we need you inside, we'll call."
She nodded and took the weapon. "Got it."

Denner followed behind the men. As soon as they entered the shadowed entrance, she felt the difference in temperature. The farther inside they walked, the cooler the air became and the darker the tunnel grew.
"Wait a second," she whispered, and surprised herself with the way so quiet a sound could echo the way it did. She reached into her pack and dug around, bringing out a small lumalight.
Cameron nodded and stepped to one side to allow her to walk between them.
The passage widened only slightly from the entrance and they walked for what seemed quite a distance before finding a second passage branching off to the left.
As the men peered inside, Denner took the opportunity to look back the way they'd come. To her surprise, they'd come less than seventy-five meters from the entry. She could clearly see Sinh standing just off center of the entryway, weapon butt on her hip in a casual stance as she slowly turned in a small circle, looking around. The red bandana tied around her head was a bright splash of color in the sunshine. She could have sworn they'd walked twice the distance. Turning back to the business at hand, she caught Cameron's rueful smile. He was clearly thinking the same thing.
Mazatl had gone into the tunnel branch, and they heard his voice softly calling to them from within. "Come on. There's a big chamber through here."
Still holding the lumalight, Denner wondered how he knew that.
The narrow passage curved gently toward the direction they had been going, and after a short distance they could see the figure of Mazatl silhouetted against a dim light beyond the other end of the passageway. They reached him and together left the passage and walked a few steps into a large cavern lit by sunlight coming through a hole in the roof. It was late afternoon and the light was still strong enough to see without the lumalight. At midday the sun probably shone through the hole and to the cavern floor very brightly.
"What now?" Denner asked. "Looks empty."
"Let's spread out. Looks like offshoot chambers over there and over there," Mazatl said and pointed first to right and then to left in front of them. "You two take the one to the right. I'll take the one under the hole in the ceiling. I won't need the luma."

Appearances were deceiving on this planet, distances were deceiving, nothing was uniform. On the stations, the hallways were always ten meters wide in residential areas, twice that in commercial areas, doors always the same, escalators and staircases exactly the same and placed identically from one station to another. In nature, everything was random!
In short the cavern was bigger than merely large. It was enormous. What appeared to be a short distance in the semidarkness turned out to be a long walk.
After a short time, Denner made a disgusted sound and said, more to herself than her companion, "This is pathetic. We have to get used to the planet sometime, might as well stop taking baby steps and let it be now."
She heard Cameron chuckle behind her, but he kept up when she increased her speed.
What looked like a smaller chamber was actually the entrance to another passage. It was wider than the one they had come through, and seemed to run straight instead of curving.
Cameron tapped his gear. "We found another tunnel," he said. "We'll go in a little way to see if it goes anywhere interesting. Just a few meters."
"Alright," Mazatl answered. "I found one , too. I'm going to follow it until I can't see by the sunlight anymore. Meet you back here in a few minutes."
"Yeah. Be careful."
"Same to you."

The passage was more or less straight, but they went only a few meters before coming to a side passage that proved to be the one they had originally entered to explore. The bright sunlight of the cave entry could be seen at the far end of the tunnel. The passage went on father, widening noticeably just before meeting another intersecting passage leading off to left and right as they stood in the intersection. They turned back and when they reached the large cavern, Mazatl had already returned and was crossing the large space toward the second area that appeared to be an alcove or small chamber.
He stopped and waited for them come even with him. He pointed over his shoulder. "There is a fork in that tunnel a short way in. I didn't try to follow either. Too dark."
Cameron briefly described what he and Denner had found. "Seems to be a bust," he concluded. "Just empty space."
Denner agreed with a shrug. "Let's see what this one is."
Two columns of rock reached from floor to ceiling, widening at top and bottom and tapering to a narrow center point just above their heads. They walked around them and entered a sheltered alcove. Denner lifted her lumalight high and they all stopped in their tracks.
The alcove had been home to humans once.

. The twin columns of mineral deposits had provided a semblance of privacy for the small chamber. Inside, carefully stacked or laid in rows along the walls, were boxes and what appeared to be lengths of pipe and coiled ropes or wiring. Items bundled in heavy cloth lay on the floor of the cave or high atop the stacked crates and boxes.
"Guess I spoke too soon," Cameron said with a shrug.
"Not really. How old do you think these materials will be? Twenty, thirty years? Gaal tricked us out of a working generator because what he had probably didn't work anymore. Anyway, if it was you, how good would the survival gear be that you gave to convicts?"
"Well, it's pretty dry in here for a cave. I was taught that most caves are wet and dark with floor and ceiling formations being created by the dripping water. I guess the hole in the ceiling and the passageways made for good ventilation. We could check for clothing and working items. I doubt if we'll find anything from our cargo pods in here."
As the men talked Denner leaned down and grabbed the edge of a tarp folded on the floor. It was heavy. She gave it a hard tug, straightening as she did.
A flash of white moved under the tarp and she let it go with a startled, "Oh!"
When she saw what it was, she stumbled back a few steps. "Here," she said unnecessarily. "Is it human?"
They were already in motion, stepping closer to crouch down and have a better look. They grabbed the material and pulled it back bit by bit to reveal what was inside.
A skeleton, probably human, was wrapped in the tarp. The remains of a thin shirt covered the top half of the bones while the legs were exposed where the material of a pair of pants that had been cut away.
"Look at that," Mazatl said quietly. "Both legs have more than one break."
Cameron waved his scanner over the remains and frowned, shaking his head. "Can't tell if it's human. This is the wrong kind of scanner. It doesn't scan for fauna, but Eben's does." He looked up at Denner. "I'd say, yes, though. Definitely looks human. Probably died here from his injuries."
Mazatl opened the shirt a little. "Broken ribs, too. I'd guess he died and someone covered him with the tarp. Wherever he got the injuries, it wasn't here. Someone brought him into the cave and probably tended him until he died." He started replacing the material as they found it. "Might have been a shroud. Something to drag him out to bury him."
Cameron handed his light and scanner to Denner and helped the other man re-wrap the remains.
Denner stepped around the remains and put the light on a high stack of boxes. She knelt on the cool cave floor and began opening the smaller hinged boxes lined along the wall. Inside were stockpiles of items which were probably quite dear to the humans of the dead man's time: medicines, rations, water bulbs, information chips, and weapons of wood and scrap metal. All of it impossibly outdated for their own group of stranded people.
The bigger crates revealed little else of use to them, until they came to a long, wide and shallow box behind the others, barely visible in the shadows of the alcove. It held the closest things to valuables they could hope to find:
Fifty-plus year old survival gear, still packed in manufacturers's boxes and clear shrink wrap.
The items ranged from survival gear to simple communications equipment.
"Hey," Mazatl said as he lifted some of the smaller boxes for a closer look. "Look at this. Gear, in it's infancy." He tossed a box to Denner. He leaned over and peered deeper into the box. "We can use some of this stuff. Knives, hatchets, eating utensils. There are rechargeable batteries in here. Won't take long to rig up a way to charge them. Range finders, night scopes, compasses, hand tools. Wow! Look at this stuff, Tim!"
Cameron grinned at him. "Looks like the toys we played with as kids, doesn't it? Pretend stuff." He hefted a bulky set of old fashioned gear in one hand. "Only the people who had this stuff were expected to survive using it."
The other man rose. "I'll get Sinh. We can take the useful things back to camp in our packs."
"Need the light?" Denner asked.
"No, I'll be all right," Mazatl said over his shoulder and hurried across the big cavern.

A short time later, Eben Sinh stood beside the rock columns and looked around the small alcove and gave a short laugh. "I just thought of something. Assuming he was telling the truth, remember when Gaal described the grendlers as mimics? Said he taught them some English words and they spread across the countryside like wildfire? What if that wasn't all they learned from humans? What if they learned to collect and stash goods from the penal colonists? Look at all the manufactured items in here. That might explain the grendlers' interest in such things."
The other three looked at one another and made subtle "Maybe" gestures with their faces and shoulders.
"You might be right," Cameron said. "Electronics, clothes - well, hell, they might have learned to wear clothes and animal skins from the convicts for all we know."
"And to live in caves," Denner said, and shrugged. "As long as we're speculating." She looked deeper into the box. "What are those things in the corner?"
"Called Geiger counters," Mazatl said. "Test for radiation. The doctor's medical scanner and the transrover's sensors can do a better job. These are antiques. They work, but a modern scanner can tell you what kind of radiation it is as well as how bad it is."
Cameron lifted one and looked at it closely.
Sinh nodded her head when she saw it. "Oh, I remember those. We used them when we built the skybridge above Mars."
Mazatl nodded. "Yep."
Denner watched as the men began putting things into their backpacks. "Why are you taking so many of the old gear?" she asked him.
"We can use some of the parts for replacements. The range finders and optical portions are pretty much obsolete, but the wiring and even some of the chips are still in use. Also the old lenses might come in handy somewhere down the line. Some of the vehicles and other equipment we have are pretty old themselves. Never know where we might be able to find a use for them."
Cameron shook down the contents of his pack. "Well, let's err on the side of curiosity. Give me another of these counter things. We might be able to use them somewhere down the line, too. I'll hide them in my personal stuff. I was trained for geology. I can pass them off as my own."

"Well? What are we going to do now? How are we going to handle this?" Mazatl said, hefting his pack in both hands to gauge the weight.
Denner looked up from the cavern floor where she was kneeling to stuff her own pack. "You mean about investigating a cave without asking permission first? I'd say keep it to ourselves."
"So do I," Sinh agreed immediately. "The same reasons still stand. Let's give Adair and the others time to collect themselves. Uly's lapse and True's brush with Gaal aren't the only things affecting the group. There's Alonzo's state of mind, the doctor's nervousness, not to mention some people still being angry at Morgan Martin for taking that first escape pod. The commander's death. What we have in our pack can be unobtrusively added to our equipment without anyone being the wiser. Denner and I made out the inventory list we've been going by. It won't be a problem to slip more items onto it."
"That's right," the other woman said. "We can fit most of this stuff into the spare tool kit, and whatever is left into the spare parts crate. No one will notice the difference. It's usually one of the four of us who is put in charge of them. It won't be hard to keep the job among us."
Cameron sighed with resignation. "I guess you're right. There's nothing we can do for the poor fellow on the floor anyway, except disturb him even more than we already have. Hell, if we bring the whole group trooping through here, it might make the grendlers think it's open season to raid the place after we leave."
"Fine with me," Mazatl said. "What they don't know won't hurt them. Grendlers and people."
As the others began to leave, Denner held back, still kneeling on the floor and fiddling with her pack. "I'll be right there," she said. "Almost done."
Making sure the others were walking away, she leaned away from her pack and brought her hand to her mouth. She extended two fingers inside, toward her throat and caused herself to dry heave once, then twice, and the third time a small metallic object fell to the ground in a small pool of gastric fluids.
Rattling her back to cover the sounds, she wiped at her mouth and looked quickly toward the others. They were adjusting one another's packs.
The small object she had vomited out of her body was blinking off and on silently, waiting for her to open it and activate it. Denner picked it up and cradled it in the palm of her hand for a while.
To hell with the Council, she thought. I'll have over forty years to live free of them and their threats. By the time they find out some of us survived the crash landing, but didn't check in, I'll be too old to care when the people they send to kill me finally arrive. Damn the whole bunch of them to hell. I'm not betraying these people for them.
She dropped the tiny communicator to the ground and quickly covered it, and the evidence of where it had been, with dirt. She put a small crate on top of it, and rose to her feet to join the others. She put the cursed blinking light firmly from her mind.

The sun was low in the sky when the foursome left the cave, still the hot, dry air of outdoors was almost a physical shock after the coolness of the caverns. Sinh immediately adjusted the kerchief on her head.
"It's getting late," she said. "We were in there longer than I thought."
"I hope no one tried to get a hold of us," Cameron said, still feeling a little bad about holding back.
Mazatl clapped him on the shoulder. "Don't worry. If they had they would have come looking for us and found us by now."
The four climbed the hill above the cave entrance and walked through the thin stand of trees between it and the creek. The partial shading kept the sun's heat off them for a distance. At the creek bed there was little shade, and they stopped to put their hands in the water and splash their faces with cool water. On the other side of the current, where the day's campsite was, there would be no shade until they reached the main group.
"Damn sun is making my skin itch," Sinh grumbled, rubbing the water over her arms. "I wish I brought a jacket."
"Heller says it's the heat and dry air drying out our skin," Denner said. "We'll all look old before our time." Lucky me. Maybe I'll look so old the Council's assassins won't recognize me.
"All of us except Cameron here," the other woman said. She looked at him. "Why aren't your arms as red as mine?"
He looked down at his hands. "I don't know." After a pause. "Unless it's because of that sticky stuff I got on me. I thought I washed it all off."
"What sticky stuff?"
"I broke open a plant root earlier. It had a thick, milky liquid inside that got all over my hands and arms. It wouldn't wash off so I scrubbed it off with sand and water."
"Well, give me some of it," she said with a laugh. "I don't care how sticky it is as long as it gets rid of the itch and the redness."
He was already looking at the ground nearby. "There's one over there. The one that looks like a clump of grass with white stripes in the blades."
A few minutes later, the other three were again beside the rushing water, industriously scrubbing away the plant goo from their arms and hands before it dried.
Eben Sinh smiled at Cameron. "It's soothing, and it isn't just the water. This stuff is making the burn feel better. You just might have found something more valuable than the things we have in our packs."
"She's right," Mazatl said, getting to his feet and extending his hands to help the women stand. "We have something to show to the others after all, and they'll be happier to see it than a handful of out of date electronics."
Cameron smiled back. "Well, it did scan out to have a lot of the stuff Julia told us to look for."
They resumed walking toward the spot in the stream where they had crossed on exposed rocks.
"Hey, you'll have naming rights," Sinh said. "You can call it. . . The Scotsman's Salve. Guaranteed to take the burn out of sunburn."
"Liquid Kilt," Mazatl said. "Cover yourself with goo and say goodbye to skin damage."
"Soothing goo," Sinh said. "Cover yourself with soothing goo."
"Okay. Soothing goo."
Cameron laughed. "Oh, come on. You know it'll end being called something like Edenite Emollient. Something that doesn't aggrandize one person, but the group instead."
"Group Ointment!"
"Walker's Cream!"
"Something simple, like . . . Plant Juice. That doesn't aggrandize anything!"
"But it sounds bad."
"Yeah. Juice just sounds unpleasant."
"Pick, pick, pick."
"Hurry up, you guys. There's the crossing. Let's get back before they come looking for us."

When the group began another day's march early the next morning, Denner sat on the back of the transrover for a time. She watched their campsite lose itself to distance, then turned her eyes to the north, to the low hills barely visible beyond the haze of dust left by the rolling tires of the vehicles. For the first time in days she was feeling free and light and comfortable.
She knew she had done the right thing. She had been forced into accepting the hidden communicator, forced into memorizing an identification code, and forced into agreeing to spy on the Eden Advance team. But, she had to real ties to the Council, no reason to keep helping them after they had tried to kill everyone when the ship left the stations. She'd felt the communicator activate two days ago and in the time since she'd had a good, long talk with herself. Forty four years was a good sized buffer zone between her and the Council. And who knew? Maybe they'd had something to do with the crash landing in the escape pods, too. She owed them nothing after two possible attempts on her life.
Soon the hills were lost from sight behind a grove of trees. No one need ever know about the little device calling out to nothing more than a dead man's bones in his burial wrap. Denner jumped from the back of the vehicle and went around the corner to look for Sinh.
All in all, there were probably a lot of things the group as a whole was better off not knowing.


The End







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Wednesday, 24 December 2003
Firefly DVDs
I bought the set the day it hit the stores and have been kind of picking my way through them at my leisure. I watched all the episodes as shown on TV first, in the order they are presented and, man, I miss this show!
The added commentary by cast and crew is terrific. I liked the way they pointed out things obvious to themselves about their performances, etc., that I never would have picked up on any other way. Morena Baccarin talking about how difficult it was to dance and speak her lines at the same time sounds like a joke until you take into consideration the camera angles. She was dancing with the cameras as much as with her human partners while trying to speak her lines when the camera could see her face. Alan Tudyk's commentaries were hilarious. Loved the "Headless Wash" scene, and the magical three switches.
I ended up re-watching the entire 4 disks again after the revelation by Joss in "Serenity" that Jayne was intended to have a little crush on Kaylee from the beginning. I remember that scene where he is crouched carefully out of sight just outside the infirmary as Simon operates on her. I used to think "What's he doing there?" That one whizzed right past me! There was more to his dislike of Simon than I originally thought.
My only complaint is the gag reel was missing a lot of the scenes that were included in the version that was available for download on the internet last spring. The very funny 360 spin of the camera in the cargo bay, for instance. We hear it mentioned in commentary made by Alan Tudyk and Jewel Stait, but it's missing from the gag reel! Also the scenes of Sean Mahar calling the character of his sister by the name of the actress who played her. I think Joss mentions that in a comment and so it's deleted from the gag reel. Too bad. They also took out Nathan Fillion's muttering of "f**kety f**k f**k!" in scenes whenever he blew a line.
I'm also very intrigued by the order of the episodes as determined by Joss and not the network. The unaired episodes were, apparently, not intended to be the last episodes in the series. "Objects in Space" was supposed to be aired last - in continuity to the others. Very interesting.......
It just makes me wish all the more for a set of DVDs, with at least a partial cast participation, to be made available of "Earth 2." The more time passes, though, the less likely that might be. I hope the petition for a DVD set lights a bulb over somebody's head soon.

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Sunday, 23 November 2003
Thank You, One and All
I appreciated the kind words and thoughts you've expressed over my family's recent loss.
We have been lucky to have had the help of the local Hospice caregivers to get us through my grandmother's illness, and now, they are helping us to keep going. I can't compliment that organization enough for all the help and support they offered us.
For my family she was the only grandparent we had throughout our lives. Our grandfathers passed before any of us were born, and my dad's mother passed away when I was 2. I'm the second oldest child and my sister, who was 4, and I don't have memories of her.
Since this will be the first holiday season without my grandmother, the Hospice counselors have suggested that we as a family celebrate Thanksgiving in a setting removed from our homes. They suggested having dinner in a public place. Since the holiday is going to be different no matter where we gather to celebrate - the first Thanksgiving ever without my grandmother - they said a total break from tradition often helps people get through the holiday. One of my cousins and I have been calling and visiting different places to try to reserve a time for a large family to get together.
It's been interesting. So far everyone seems intrigued with going to one of the riverboat casinos, but we're still going to check out some of our favorite restaurants, too.
When we first started talking about this suggestion seriously and wondering if it really was the way we wanted to go, it occurred to us that this is going to be the first holiday season without Grandma's sweet potato pies and frybread! Most of us have never developed a liking for pumpkin pie because we've always had her pies for dinner. And, since we are part American Indian, frybread has always been a part of our diet. I think the thought of having to go without some of our favorite foods was a deciding factor in taking the counselors' idea very seriously.
It's going to be something else!
I don't know yet where we will end up going, but we still have few days to arrange things.
I know I'm rambling, but a little break from writing fan fic never hurt anybody, right?
Besides, my fingers are working again. I tried to write a thank you post a day or two after I saw the messages you all very kindly left, but I was making so many typos and misspelling so many words, I had to quit trying and wait until my body wanted to cooperate with my head again.
Again, thank you.
Robert

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Sunday, 26 October 2003
I JUST CALLED TO SAY. . .
I found this story while going through a box of disks looking for a different story. It sounds very much like a prelude to ABCDEtc. I think it might have been the true A story. I also found an outline that might have been C or D in that series.


I Just Called To Say...
Part 1


Julia Heller checked the vital signs of her patient, adjusted the temperature inside the amber light chamber, and stood back. She made no move to leave, to check any of the other patients in her small hospital's ward rooms. She merely looked through the clear sides of the chamber and smiled.
For two long G889 years, she'd waited and worked for the moment when she would see this patient on the road to recovery. In the end it was nothing she did, nor could ever do, that put the patient into this chamber to heal and to rest and to begin the first steps to regaining her life.
It made no difference to Julia how the miracle had happened, she was just happy to see that it, at long last, had.
She folded her arms across her chest, tilted her head to one side and simply smiled.
Inside the chamber, the sleeping form of Devon Adair was looking better already. A mere thirty hours after being taken out of cold sleep, the pallid color of her skin was returning to a normal, healthy pink. The dark circles around her eyes were the most stubborn physical signs of her illness, but even they would fade and disappear with time. The amber light would speed her healing.
In fact, Julia was mentally predicting a short four day stint inside the chamber for Devon. The amber light was quickly giving back all the illness had taken from her.
The doctor might have stood beside the chamber for an hour or more if one of her students hadn't interrupted her vigil.
"Uh... Dr. Heller? There's a Mr. Mazatl in your office to see you. He said you sent for him."
Julia turned around slowly, still smiling. "Thank you. I'll finish my rounds later, after Mr. Mazatl leaves."
She brushed past the young woman - Nelson, wasn't it? - and quickly walked along the curved hallway to her office.
The building, within which was housed her hospital, medical school classrooms and administration offices, was a modest, two story, circular structure made from a design suggested by the hospital on the space stations where she had trained. It was Julia's one concession to her former life. Besides, circles were common shapes in nature and she wanted the shape of her hospital to fit in with the land around it.
Julia opened the door to her office and saw the tall, slim form of her long time friend standing at the window looking out.
"Chris? Thanks for getting here so fast."
Mazatl turned around. "I was mapping the river north of here when I got your message," he said. "I left my survey team up there and flew down as fast as I could."
He crossed the room in three long strides to greet her with a warm embrace. He pulled away, holding her shoulders at arm's length. "You look like a woman with a secret you're dying to tell someone."
Julia's welcoming smile grew bigger. "Devon is waking up, Chris!" she blurted out. "Uly called me the day before yesterday and told me to take his mother out of the cold sleep capsule and put her into an amber light chamber. He said the planet, the mother, told him in a dream it was time to awaken Devon."
Mazatl looked at her with a mixture of surprise and excitement. "You're serious! After all this time... You mean just like that..." he stammered.
Julia laughed. "Yes, just like that! I'll take you in to see her in a little while, but first I need to ask you a favor. After I talked to Uly and Alonzo, I tried to contact Yale, but Morgan Martin said he was at the southern tip of the peninsula with a salvage team. A cargo pod washed up on shore and Yale volunteered to take a group of colonists out to bring it back to the colony site at New Pacifica. They took just one shuttle with them. I called you to ask if you would take your lander down to get Yale and bring him back here. Morgan passed the news to him, and as you can imagine, Yale would like to get here as soon as possible."
"Absolutely," Chris Mazatl assured her. "I'll leave as soon as I talk to my team."
"It's not big a rush," Julia said. "I think we'll have four days to prepare, at the least. In just thirty hours the improvement in Devon's physical condition has been phenomenal. I sent True across the valley to get the Camerons otherwise she'd be sitting beside the chamber day and night until Devon awakens. As it is, I can hardly stay away from her myself! I was just standing there beside the chamber, looking in, when my student came to tell me you were waiting."
"It's great news, Jules, but there's one thing I don't understand. Uly said the mother told him it was time to awaken Devon. What does that mean?"
Surprisingly, the doctor laughed. "I don't know! At this point, though, I don't really care either. As long as she's waking and her health is returning, I couldn't ask for more."
Julia grabbed his arm and pulled him toward the doorway. "Come on. Want to see her?"
"Of course," Mazatl assured her. "Hold on. Let me leave my coat here if you don't mind. It's getting cold up north - even saw a few dustings of snow already. We had to break out the winter clothes."
"How far north are you? The leaves have barely started turning around here."
He hung his coat on a rack behind the door, and followed Julia into the hallway. "We're mapping the big river five hundred klicks north of here. The wide dark line on Yale's old map we thought was a strait or a channel. Remember it? It's just a river, maybe a kilometer and a half wide and it flows west, not east! Think of the time we would have saved if we landed a little farther north."
Julia stopped walking and turned to look at him. "It was a river flowing to the west coast? Are you joking? "
Laughing, Mazatl shook his head slowly. "That's what I said when we first reached the river. I got out of the lander and started walking in circles, going, ?You've got to be joking! You've got to be joking!' My crew was looking back and forth, like, ?What? What?' I'm glad no one had their gear turned on!"
Julia laughed. This was definitely turning into a great day. How could she possibly feel happier? They started walking again.
At the doorway to the amber light wardroom, she turned to Mazatl. "This is it. Brace yourself. She really looks great."
He smiled back. "Lead on."
For whatever reason, the need to talk in whispers in a sick room, even one as noisily humming with life support machinery as this one was, had the two of them conversing in hushed voices until they returned to Julia's office a few minutes later.
Mazatl returned to the window and looked outside. "To tell you the truth, Julia," he said, keeping his back to her, "I never thought Devon would ever get out of the cold sleep capsule. Yet, there she is, as mysteriously getting better as she mysteriously got sick. If it wasn't Bennett's rejection illness, what was it?"
"I really don't know, Chris." Julia answered, crossing her arms and going to stand beside him. "Alonzo said he would tell me more about Uly's dream when they got here, but I've been thinking about it. I have a feeling, and I think I know what they're going to say."
Turning his head only slightly, he looked at her out of the corner of his eye. "But you're not ready to talk about it, are you? Okay. I'll wait. How is John these days? Heard from his team lately? Does he know?"
He could hear the smile in her voice. "Same old Danziger. He's doing fine. He's been sending back reports once a week, but I haven't actually talked to him in months." She sighed. "I sent a message to the last relay he used, asking for him to get in touch. His team has probably moved on, though. It might be weeks before they set up another relay."
"Where are they?" he asked. "Last I heard they were still on Copus."
"They were mapping near the pole and ready to start back according to his last message. We expect them back in four or five months, unless they get my message and come straight back."
Chris Mazatl turned his attention to the window and it's beautiful view of the biodome valley resplendent in full fall colors. Lachance Valley, it was called now, and the name looked right and perfect on the new maps he was helping to create. Lachance, after Mary's parents.
The director's office of the Heller Clinic had a sweeping view of the biodome, it's outgrowth of Quonset huts, and the small village growing up around it. The village was called Mary's Garden, and the territory around it was Kansa.
Looking to his left, south along the valley floor, Mazatl saw the roof of his own house waiting for his return in a small clearing between two stands of tall, white trunked trees. He liked to think of it as being three stones' throws from the biodome. Or a five minute walk.
Julia loved the view year round. It was the reason she chose the spot for the location of her clinic. Watching the seasons change around the dome and the village was a wonderful spectacle.
She said, "I sent someone down to open your house, to get a fire going, to leave a few provisions in the kitchen. You've been gone over a month. I thought it might need a little air."
"Thanks, Jules. As long as there's no hurry, I'll go down and get some rest. I'll leave to get Yale at first light."
"All right. See you at dinner?"
"Wouldn't miss it. I'd better call my people and tell them they're on their own for the rest of the week."
Julia reached out and squeezed his hand as he turned to leave. "Thank you, Chris."
He nodded. "You're welcome, Julia. See you later."

The sun was behind the mountains, throwing Mary's Garden into twilight when Julia left the clinic and drove her dunerail to her home in the biodome. She was wondering how things were going to change now that Devon Adair was about to join the people living in the planet's three major settlements.
It was going to be a shock for her to awaken at the advance group's winter campsite. Would she understand the reasons why the colony at New Pacifica was being abandoned? Why the advance group and the surviving colonists did not want to stay there?
Surviving colonists.
Those two words alone would require an encyclopedia of information to explain.
Devon and the group had been so looking forward to reaching the western ocean, the beaches of New Pacifica, the Sea of Antius. Was she going to be able to understand why they simply couldn't stay there?
It wasn't going to be easy explaining everything that had happened to the group, the colonists, the children, the colony ship...
"Oh, god!" Julia said aloud and brought the vehicle to a dead stop in the middle of the trail.
The excitement and the happiness of the last two days was suddenly overwhelming. She turned off the rail's engine and laid her forehead against her hands at the top of the steering wheel, and she began to cry.

Waking up was the hardest thing Devon Adair could ever remember doing. She wanted to awaken, but her eyes wouldn't stay open. Not that they were working correctly, anyway. All she could see were rows of brilliant brownish colored lights in front of her
.
She opened her eyes again. Someone was talking. A human voice saying things impossible to understand. She closed her eyes against the sound and drifted off.

Her eyes opened slowly. She wanted them to stay closed. The funny colored lights were still so bright. She took a deep breath and fell asleep again.

The next time she opened her eyes the lights were not as bright. In fact they were a dim glow in front of her. A voice coming from all around her was telling her to take her time, don't rush it. Silly voice! What did it think she was trying to do?

Devon was aware she had awakened again without ever realizing she had fallen asleep. Waking seemed to have become her life's work. She was doing it a lot lately. Something was different this time. A blurred someone was looking at her sideways. How were they doing that? Oh. Not sideways. From above. Devon was flat on her back and looking up. The person was leaning over her and doing something with her arm.
The person was saying something, but darned if Devon knew what it was. It didn't matter, anyway. She was still sleepy and her eyes were closing.

"All right," a familiar sounding voice was saying. "This is it. Open your eyes, Devon. Time to wake up."
Devon did as instructed and the familiar voice belonged to a familiar face. She could focus her eyes now and the light didn't hurt so much.
Julia Heller was leaning over her, looking all serious as she watched the readings on her diaglove. Her eyes flicked to Devon's and the businesslike manner vanished. In it's place was a brilliant smile.
"There you are! I think you're going to make it this time, Devon."
She must have looked puzzled, because Julia drew away her arm with the diaglove and sat down on the side of the bed. Her face was ?upright' in Devon's vision now and her smile looked even brighter.
"You've been trying to awaken for a day and a half, Devon. I think you've finally done it." Julia looked away and reached for something.
When she turned back, Devon felt something touch her lips and click against her teeth.
"This is water, Devon. I'm going to squeeze a little into your mouth. Okay? Here we go. Just a little."
It was the best water she had ever tasted. Where did they get water like that? She swallowed it quickly and Julia squeezed in a little more.
"How long?" Devon tried to ask, but her voice came out a harsh, unintelligible whisper.
Julia smiled again. "Don't worry. It'll come. You're just a little out of practice." She squeezed more water from the bottle. "Let me know when you've had enough. Just say stop."
Devon did better. She said, "That's enough."
Though her voice sounded as ancient as Julia had ever heard a voice sound, to Devon's own ears, her voice was strong and vibrant.
"Uly?" she asked. "Yale?"
Julia adjusted her position on the edge of the bed. She clasped her hands in her lap and gave Devon an earnest look. "They're both on their way," she said. "Devon, you were in cold sleep for a long time. Your waking was not a planned event. I'll explain it to you later, so for now just try to understand that none of us were expecting you to wake up when you did. We brought you out of cold sleep two days ago. I was planning a slow, four day recovery period for you, but your body has other plans. Your recovery is two days ahead of schedule. Everyone - including Uly and Yale - are busy at one task or another away from here."
"From here where? Where are we?"
Julia looked at her very earnestly. "Well, at the moment you're in a bed in a room in my clinic. I have a lot to tell you, and I hardly know where to begin. Why don't we first let me play doctor and give you an examination, alright? With that out of the way, we can talk."
Without waiting for a reply, Julia began to pass her diaglove over Devon's head and upper body. Though Devon tried to ask questions, she was ignored as Julia split her attention between the device on her arm and the medical equipment positioned around the bed.
Try as she might to fight it, Devon fell asleep.

Part 2 coming soon. . .

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Saturday, 18 October 2003
Reilly and Bennett
" Name: Kenneth
E-Mail: printers5@juno.com

Does anyone know if Reilly was a real person at one time? If Eve was created by Bennett, then how old would Reilly be? He would have had to live before the super computer was created in order for it to learn about him and use his image to interact with Julia.

Thursday, 16 October 2003 - 5:49 PM CDT

Name: Richard
E-Mail: richtc73@yahoo.com

Something was sending info back tothe stations so I just assume it is Eve. Before that would be Bennett and his party, and whatever othr teams were on the planetobserving the penal colonists. I doubt if thereis anything in orbit. I think Eve was misleadingthe ZED about that. reilly could have been an original observer and Bennet would have accessto his records to input when he build Eve. i think the odds are he died on the planetbefore Bennett got there. I don't think anyone has ever gone back to the stations aliveafter being sent there.

Thursday, 16 October 2003 - 7:43 PM CDT

Name: Beverly
E-Mail: e2fanbev@yahoo.com

Maybe there was an orbiting observation craft at one time. Eve turned out to be much more powerful than Bennett planned. I can see her killing everyone on the 'satellite' and absorbing their computer data in her effort to stop Bennett's virus from killing her. "




You have some good ideas there, guys.
I think Reilly was once a real person, too, and that he might have been one of the first observers of the initial penal colonists sent to the planet. I don't think he was ever in an orbiting platform, but that idea is a good one. I like it.

I theorized he and several others watched from a ground base established by the Council when the planet was first discovered. The hovercraft, like that the EA team were supposed to have with them, might have been a means of spying on the convicts. Also there were probably satellites in orbit for surveillance, too.
I also like the idea that he might never have gone back to the stations. Maybe he and his group of observers were rejected by the planet, too, just as the Bennett people would be years later, and they died. Even though Reilly seemed to have hit on the connection between young children and establishing a link with the planet, he killed a child when he tried to find out how the link was established. That could not have sat well with the planet.
That's why I don't think he was ever in a station in orbit. He had to have close access to the convicts, and later, their children.
Still, I like the idea. I just have to figure out how to make it work.

I always thought also, the Bennett team was rejected because they did not try to live on the surface as colonists would. They were always expecting to go back to the stations, so maybe they had recyclers for their water and enough consumables with them to stay five years. I don't think they ever tried to survive off the planet like the convicts and, later, the EA group had to do.
Bennett built Eve, probably back at the stations, and released her into G889 orbit to monitor them and relay information back to the stations.
But unknown to him, the Council was covering all the bases. They sent the ZEDs to the planet to monitor (and kill) convicts, while Bennett and Anson were studying the planet itself.
After dealing with Bennett's Venus class ship when Bennett tried to leave, Eve probably then appeared to the ZEDs as Reilly, and they might have been able to track her signal into orbit- they were heavily computerized- and it would be nothing to her to lie as Reilly and say he was in an observation satellite.

If you remember in "First Contact" the EA ship never received it's Level 6 clearance before making a run for it. I remember talking about this with my brother once and we thought maybe all ships meant for exploration or colonization had to have a clearance that ordinary freighters and pleasure craft between the stations didn't have to have. We thought this might explain why Bennett and Anson were so sure Devon must know why the planet was rejecting them. Maybe Level 6 clearances gave the departing crews addtional information about the places they were going. In this case, a warning about the planet's history of rejecting humans.
Since the Council seems to have had no intention of letting Adair's ships leave, they never had the need to tell her anything more than what she wanted to hear.
If they had been able to force her into accepting Council partnership in her project, think of how differently the matter would have turned out!




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Sunday, 12 October 2003
9 Weeks - Chapter 5
OK. J&J keep going for another chapter and therefore one or two more to come. Someone finds out about it, not sure yet how that will be approached, and whether or not anyone else is told about it. That's it for Rich and Allison, and as for Bev wanting the story to be long. . . Well, I have a looooonnnnnnng story treatment written out for it. 9 Weeks will go on a while. It'll be kind of like MASH, stretching a three year conflict out for a decade!
As before you're getting this straight from WordPerfect to the blog, so excuse the misspellings and grammar. I'll fix them later.




CHAPTER 5

Coaxing the little ATV up the steep incline of the hillside was almost as slow as walking. Alonzo sat on the back and tried not to fall off. The little ATV was one of those cobbled together from spare parts from the Bennett ship, and its suspension system left quite a bit to be desired. He was waiting until they got closer to the top of the hill before jumping off and running the rest of the way. He had to see for himself how his ship had come down, see for himself it was indeed a burned out, useless hulk. Until he did he knew that little ray of hope in his heart would continue to dream of flying again. No matter what John or Julia said about the condition of the ship he wanted there to be hope. Hope of some kind. Any damn kind.
When he couldn't stand it anymore, Alonzo leaped from the ATV and scrambled up the hillside toward the trees at the top.
"Alonzo!" Baines yelled. Unable to follow, he had to choice but to keep going at an angle toward the gap in the trees just ahead. Freed of half the weight it was carrying, the little vehicle lurched ahead and the whine of the motor rose with its speed.
"Should have jumped off earlier," he said to himself, knowing Alonzo was too far away to hear.
The ATV flew over the remaining distance and he turned hard to face the lake. He roared past the stand of trees and skidded to a halt at the lake's edge. Not knowing he was almost exactly where the dunerail had stopped the day before.
Baines stared above the rippling surface of the water and saw only the ship. From somewhere to his right he could hear Alonzo screaming at the top of his lungs, the sound carrying clearly on the wind. Baines' full attention was on the ship lying in the water, two of it's engines submerged, the other two partially above the water. It was canted at almost a forty five degree angle, the lone sensor arm bent by the heat of atmospheric entry and pointing straight upward at the sky. The supports and struts for the sensory equipment that used to be there were bent, twisted and curled back on themselves and looking very much like gnarled tree branches - even from a vantage point this close.
To think someone lived through the fall, he told himself. After a few more moments of silent staring, Baines turned the ATV toward the trees and went to look for Solace.

Alonzo was sitting on the top edge of the narrow beach ringing the lake, his feet just inches above the wet sand where the shallow waves lapped continuously. If he heard the ATV approach he gave no sign of it.
Getting off the ATV, Baines moved to stand beside his friend.
Alonzo waved his hand sharply at the ship. "It was the sensor arm. I thought it was still in position. From the gear feed it wasn't clear it was off by forty-five degrees. I was hoping the engines were dry. With engines there's power. . ."
"Yeah. If it's water tight the two partially under might be okay."
"What good will it do?" Alonzo demanded angrily. "No power, no landing craft."
Baines leaned down to pat the other man on the shoulder. "Come on. Let's find Danz and Julia."
"Yeah." Solace got to his feet but stood staring across the distance at the ship for a long time. When he turned toward the ATV his face was set in anger. Baines knew exactly what he was feeling.
It's no good, though. Waste of time to be angry, he thought. Danziger said it would never fly again and he was right.
The remaining distance to the site of the ship seemed to take forever to cross, but at last the dunerail came into view just ahead on a grassy space next to the beach. Not far away, Danziger was sitting on the ground much as Alonzo had done, but he was watching the progress of Zero and not actually staring at the ship. He was chewing on a ration bar and a canteen lay on the ground beside him.
The two men left the ATV and walked toward him. He looked in their direction and pointed a thumb over his shoulder. "Storage shelter is through the trees," John said. "Julia's there with the survivors. Navarro's message is there, too."
"How's Zero doing?" said Baines. "Making any progress?"
Danziger sighed. "Slow, but, yeah. He's placing ropes so we can climb after him."
"What are you waiting for?" Alonzo asked. "There might be a flight vehicle in there!"
"Also might be nothing but melted building materials inside. I'm not going up until I know the pod is accessible. No one is going until then."
Without another word, Solace spun on his heel and stalked away into the trees.
John grunted. "He's not taking it too good is he?"
"He still had his hopes up. Hell, so did I."
"What about Navarro?"
"He wouldn't talk about her. I brought it up, he shot it down."
Danziger barked a laugh without humor. "Time is catching up with the sleep jumper." He got to his feet. "Well, now that you two are here, I'm going to drive up the shore and see if any of the engines are above water."
"I'll go with you," Baines said. "I was thinking about that myself."
Danziger nodded and moved his gear into place. "Okay. We'll take the rail. Julia? Baines and I are going to drive around the lake and see what condition the engines are in. Shouldn't take too long."
"Alright. But keep your gear on and check in," Julia's image told him.
"We will."
"Where's Alonzo?"
"Coming your way."


In the cool shade of the trees, Alonzo stopped walking. He didn't hear Baines following him, but he turned to look to be sure. He saw him getting into the dunerail with Danziger. Alonzo let out a heavy sigh and felt tears fill his eyes.
Damn it! he thought. This isn't about Navarro! Pull yourself together. This isn't about Navarro at all. The ship, for god's sake. It's the ship...
His emotions weren't listening to his rationalizations. He put a hand out to a nearby tree and sank to the ground beside it. Leaning against it, he let himself feel relief flood over him and with it a quick flow of tears. He was regaining control and the episode didn't last long. Some part of his brain was telling him it was losing Adair and Sinh, it was moving on without them. The guilt and eventual acceptance of being alive without them, and now this latest disappointment - he told himself all of that was why he was letting Britt Navarro's fate get to him. Of all things to affect him at this time of his life! He wiped at his face and pushed away from the tree, balancing on his knees before rising to his feet. He was in control again.
Alonzo thought he'd put all of that behind him when he'd learned to accept his fate on G889. He'd assumed Britt had died when the Wentworth virus swept through the crew in the last of the escape pods. He'd accepted it and buried it when the Terrians showed him how to live. He'd started over.
"Apparently not," he muttered to himself, taking deep breaths and looking around carefully. The shed was a short distance away and the dunerail was gone from the beach area. Well. . . He stayed in the cool shade for a few minutes longer, getting himself together, before continuing to the shed.
Julia was beside the chambers holding the four survivors from the landing shuttle. With her gear in place, she was busily recording everything she could about the four and the operation of the stasis tubes. She greeted him with a smile and raised a hand, index finger extended to let him know she was almost finished.
Alonzo stopped at the foot of the nearest tube and waited, looking around the interior of the storage unit. He wondered what was in the crates and boxes piled against the wall opposite the stasis tubes. A zero unit was connected to a com screen at the far end of the shed. He went over and sat down on the small box that had been placed there. He stared at the floor and listened while Julia spoke softly into her gear, making a record of her observations. It made him wince to hear the extent of their burns and injuries.
After a while, he decided to listen to the message from Britt Navarro, and he turned to the comscreen, found the power and waited while the screen lit up. The message started automatically, and he was momentarily shocked by the physical condition of Navarro. She'd been hurt, perhaps burned herself, yet did her best to keep attention on the others in her group. Not once did she mention her own injuries. He listened, barely aware that Julia had stopped talking when the message began.
When the image of Navarro faded, he turned off the com unit and turned away. He leaned forward on the box, elbows on knees and hands clasped in front of him.
"Alonzo?" Julia asked. She turned back her gear mike and stepped around the end of the stasis chambers, taking a couple of steps toward him. He was clenching and unclenching his fists and shaking his head slowly. "Alonzo? What's the matter?"
He said nothing.
Frowning, Julia's curiosity turned to concern. She'd seen this behavior from him before - immediately after the landing of their pod.
"Alonzo?"
"They didn't come back, did they?" he said more to himself than to her. He waved a hand at the stasis tubes. "These people are still here." He jumped to his feet, clearly upset. "Can't this planet ever give us a break? They might have died after all, Julia! They probably are dead! Look at Navarro, how she tried to cover up her injuries. I thought she got off the ship and died with the others in the third pod. Then I hear she's alive, but now everything points to her being dead for a year anyway!"
"Alonzo, there is every chance?"
He turned to glare at her. "None of them knew how to fly the lander!" he said. "O'Neill and Yale were trained to fly it - no one else! Baines and I trained them ourselves. They were going to teach the other colonists after we were gone. These people took it and saved themselves through sheer luck and guesswork! They were lucky to make it to land at all."
"Well, so were we all," Julia pointed out. "Two of the pods were overloaded, carrying far more than they were designed to safely bear. We were lucky the excess weight didn't cause them to break apart on impact."
"You don't understand!"
"What don't I understand? That you're angry the warrant officer and some others saved their own lives by taking the landing craft you were hoping would still be here?"
Alonzo stared at her for a second and then turned away, pretending to look at the stasis tubes. He felt embarrassed that she had come to know him so well, that she had hit upon the truth so easily.
He knew it was selfish of him, even heartless to be so angry at desperate people who only wanted to live.
But he had just wanted to fly again. Of course, Julia knew that.
"Alonzo, we've just come through a difficult time as a-"
Alonzo whirled around. "What do you know about it, Julia?" he said, his anger talking loudly and clearly. "With your preprogrammed life laid out ahead of you? What do you know about having to abandon your skills and training? What do you know about feeling like a failure everyday of your life?"
Julia pulled the gear from her head and stared at Alonzo, and all of a sudden he came to his senses and bit back his anger. She could see that, but she wasn't about to let it go.
"What do I know about feeling a failure? What do I know about something that far below a, a . . . chromotilt like me? Is that what you're asking? Okay, I'll tell you what I know about it! In case it has slipped your mind, Mr. Solace, the leader of our expedition, the person paying us to be here, the mother a young boy who probably cries himself to sleep at night from missing her - that person isn't here with us sharing in this fantastic experience because she is dying and I have no idea how to save her! She is in a cold sleep tube getting farther and farther away from us because try as I might I can't seem to find a cure for her. Day after day, no matter what I do, there is no way I can help her! Is that failure enough for you? If it isn't, how about this? You can fly away eventually when the colony ship arrives. The lander being gone is nothing, you still have a way out. I don't! I cut my ties to the Council, in case you've forgotten. I abandoned the directives they gave me, and now I'm an outcast. I can never go back to the stations even if I wanted to! Any message Eve may have sent back to the Council will get there long before the colony ship returns. Do you think they'll welcome me back with open arms? The Council has a long memory. Even if everyone I knew is dead by then, I'd still be arrested for treason. Within hours of my setting foot on the stations again, I would disappear and no one would ever know where I was taken."
Looking pointedly at him, she spread her hands exaggeratedly. "Well? Is that failure enough for you?"
The two of them stared at one another for a long, silent time. Alonzo was the first to drop his gaze, and he only closed his eyes for a moment as he rubbed a hand over them. In that moment Julia rushed out of the small shed and disappeared into the trees.
Well, he certainly blew that one high and wide.
Alonzo sat down on the box again and held his head in his hands. He hadn't meant to get so cruel, but damn it, she just didn't understand. The lander would have been their salvation. With it they could have flown to New Pacifica and located the com dish in days instead of months. Their trip would be over and they could start getting ready for the second ship.
Oh. . . The second ship. The one that would take him home. . .the same one that would leave Julia behind.
There was no one on the lake shore. The lone ATV was parked half on the grass and half on the beach, and a trail of bent grasses showed where the dunerail had gone with Baines and Danziger aboard.
Of course, she was right about how the Council would react, but it was the first time Julia had ever put the thought into words either orally or mentally. They'd already tried to kill her once. It meant nothing to them that she was aboard the sabotaged Advance ship. She was meant only to come in handy if the Eden Project colonists miraculously survived all the traps set to stop them.
Fortunately for all involved, Alonzo was right about one thing. Due to her genetic manipulation she was a doctor first - and the Council hadn't realized that.
After a few minutes watching the waves gently come ashore and letting the sound soothe her, Julia turned and slowly walked back to the shed. Before she reached the open doorway she could hear Britt Navarro's voice speaking her report.
Stopping just outside the entrance, she heard the last words of the report and saw Alonzo reach forward and restart it. The young, pretty, blond woman began her tale anew. When her image faded out at the end, Alonzo lightly touched the screen with the fingertips of one hand, tapping the surface once or twice.
"Did good, kid," he said in a quiet voice. He flicked off the monitor and bowed his head, looking at his hands as he clasped and unclasped them above his lap.
Julia slowly withdrew from the door and walked away. At the ATV, she climbed into the seat and leaned back, closing her eyes and thinking back to the days and weeks before the launch of the Eden Project ships. She tried to remember all she could about the warrant officer, Britt Navarro.

When Danziger and Baines returned from their ride along the lake shore, she was still there. Alonzo hadn't come out of the storage shed.
Baines told Danziger he wanted to listen to the message himself, and he ambled off through the trees.
Alonzo was not in the shed. Baines went inside and saw the stasis pods, and recognized the people within them. After listening to the Navarro message, he, too, was suddenly hit with the realization that no one had come back for them. Unlike Solace, he didn't feel anger in reaction. He felt sadness. After all these people went through, the risks they took to save themselves and the others in their group, the four of them might well be the only survivors.
He went outside and found the other man near the solar collector. A gap in the trees on the north side of the small structure offered a view of part of the lake. Alonzo was standing beside one of the wires holding the collector steady.
Stopping next to him, Baines said, "Danziger and I drove up the shore a ways. Two of the engines are on the waterline. Doesn't look like we'll be able to get to them. The lander bay is underwater. Mechanisms are probably stuck fast."
Alonzo stared straight ahead. "Never get a break, do we?"
"Do we need one? We've been making our own and doing okay."
A derisive sound came from Alonzo. "So even if the lander was inside, it would still be lost to us, eh?"
"Looks that way. Hey, the main group will be here soon, Danziger is going to go down the hill and meet them. Show them where to make camp. Julia's going with him."
Alonzo finally turned and looked in the direction of the ship. "I'm staying. I'll wait for Zero to reach the pod, then I'm climbing after him. No matter what Julia or Danziger say."
Baines nodded, putting his hands in his pockets. "Yeah. Me, too." He started walking away. "I left my gear on the ATV. I'll go tell them we're staying." He stopped and spoke over his shoulder. "I might have spoke too soon about Navarro."
Alonzo drew in a deep breath, audible to Baines despite the distance between them. "The kid did good, though, didn't she, Jake?"
He smiled. "Yep. Sure did."
"Think she made it? They made it?"
"I hope so."
Alonzo nodded. "Me, too."

Danziger got behind the wheel of the dunerail and waved as Baines went into the trees toward the storage shed. Julia waved, too, then gave John an overly bright look.
"Let's go," she said. "I'm all set."
"No, you're not. Something's bothering you. What is it?"
She raised her eyebrows and gave him a patient look. "Nothing important. Let's go meet the others."
He started the engine and angled through the trees away from the ship. They had almost reached their campsite of the previous night before Julia finally spoke.
"I've been thinking about Navarro. Whether they made it to the comdish. I don't remember her much. Just she was young and seemed to know her job. I spoke to her briefly when the pharmaceutical supplies were being loaded. Did you know her well?"
So that was it. In some way Alonzo hadn't been discreet about the subject of the warrant officer, and now Julia's concern was jostled awake.
"As much as I knew all the ops crew," he answered. "She was young but she was a sleep run veteran. She made about a dozen eighteen month to three year jumps. She was the W/O on the two jumps I made. Comet hauls, getting water for the stations. Knew her job. When I started putting together the crew I hoped she would be available for this project. Would have begged, borrowed or stolen to get her if she wasn't."
"I suppose all of you got to know her well during preparation. Alonzo, too."
"I can't speak for Alonzo. Ask him about it."
"Well, I mean generally speaking. As fellow Eden Project crew members went."
Danziger made a noncommittal noise and swung the dunerail sharply away from the lake and stopped. They'd reached their campsite. Looking over the side of the hill to the open land far below, they could see in the distance the transrover and the other ATVs leading the way toward the spot where they left their marker.
As John reached for his jumpers, he looked at Julia. "Alonzo can answer that a lot better than I can."
She took the jumpers he handed her and raised them to her eyes. "We had an argument. He was angry, and one thing led to another. He said something. . . Well, something he shouldn't have said."
"Ah," Danziger said in a knowing way. "It'll pass. It's not like you never argued before, right? By tonight he'll be sorrier than hell. You'll work through it."
Julia was silent. She wasn't so sure. She had no idea so much anger and frustration lurked under so thin a surface in Alonzo. Not since their first days on the planet as he wallowed in guilt and anger and pain, had she heard such callousness from him. ". . .you're preprogrammed life laid out ahead of you? What do you know. . (about) failure?" The words still stung. How could he think such a thing when she had given up so much the day after she was abandoned and he returned for her and took her back to the group? Before she could brace herself she felt tears brimming in her eyes and gliding over her cheeks like rain. She put the jumpers in her lap and lowered her head to cry.
Danziger was taken aback for a moment. "Hey, come on. Can't be that bad."
She gripped her upper arms with her hands and shook with the emotion.
He watched her for a second or two, then laid a hand on her shoulder, squeezing gently. "I wish I knew the right words to say," he told her.
She turned toward him and leaned closer to clutch his jacket and press her face against his chest.
He turned slightly toward her and moved his arm around her shoulders, and for the next few minutes he patted her on the shoulder and let her vent her emotions.
Presently she stopped and wiped at her face. "Maybe. . . you'd better get us to the bottom. . . of the hill," she said, hiccuping a little. "There's some. . .thing about being on this very spot. . .that seems to make me want to cry."
Danziger had to laugh shortly. "Yeah. No more stopping or camping here."
Julia pulled away slightly and reached up to place one hand on the side of his head and pull him closer for a kiss on the cheek. "Thank you."
Why he didn't pull away to let it end there, John wasn't sure. It took a few seconds to get his bearings and he lifted his arm over her head and grabbed the steering wheel, stepping on the accelerator pedal and sending the rail forward in a lurch. He looked at her and just nodded his head.
This has been one twenty four hour period for the books, man, he told himself. Is it ever going to end?

It would be another hour or so before the transrover reached the base of the hill, late afternoon, Bess Martin thought from her seat beside the passenger door. Yale was driving and the children had fallen asleep between the two of them. Anxious to reach the site, no one was walking today. Everyone was crowded onto the back of the vehicle or perched along the sides. She was in the cabin to help control the overly excited children. Making them play a word game with her had put them to sleep after only a few minutes. When Yale seemed preoccupied with what they would find ahead, Bess amused herself with studying the approaching hillside with the jumpers the children were playing with earlier.
The section of sensor arm was disappearing behind the foreground trees, and like everyone else, she would look at it and wonder how she missed recognizing it. Like so many of the others, she and Morgan had embarked and disembarked from the ship numerous times during the two weeks before the scheduled launch. Initially, they had gone aboard and just looked around the ship. Morgan said it was because he wanted to know every inch of it before the flight. She had used the opportunities to meet the crew and other passengers. At one point she remembered watching some of the cargo pods being put into place, but she'd never really noticed the rest of the ship. It was just a ship, and after nearly two years on the stations she'd seen so many.
She'd just lowered the jumpers when a glint of sunlight on a shiny surface caught her eye for just a second. She quickly raised them again and looked at the clearing high on the hill ahead of them. There it was!
"Yale," she said excitedly. "There's the dunerail! Someone's coming to meet us."
"Yes. I saw the reflection."
Bess leaned forward, elbows on the vehicle's dashboard to steady her hands. "It's John and Julia," she said with a smile. "They probably can't pry Alonzo and Jake away from the ship."
Yale's amusement showed in his voice. "I don't imagine they can." He swung his gear eyepiece into place. "I'll contact them and tell them we'll be at the base of the hill in just over an hour."
"No!" Bess said, glued to her jumpers. "Let me do it. I haven't talked to either of them since before they left." She turned to look at Yale. Her eyes wide and mouth open in surprise.
"Alright," he agreed, keeping his eyes on the terrain ahead of them, unaware of her stunned expression.
Not at all sure of what she'd just seen, she slowly put on her gear and fiddled with it unnecessarily until she thought an adequate amount of time had passed. Figuring Danziger would not be wearing his unit nor even have it turned on in his pocket, Bess flicked on hers and spoke Julia's name.
Immediately the doctor answered. From the background image, Bess could see the rail was in motion, and the doctor seemed to be doing her best to appear glad to hear from her. They talked for a few minutes. As Bess turned hers into a powered off state, she leaned back in the seat and thought about what just happened on the hilltop.
Behind Julia's smile and pleased expression was the hint of weeping in her eyes. What the kiss she'd witnessed between Danziger and Heller had to do with that, Bess couldn't even guess, but she was definitely going to look into it!
She settled back more comfortably and turned her head to look out the window and smile to herself. After weeks of half noticing what was going on around her, of missing Devon Adair and Eben Sinh, of wondering if and when life would ever return to normal again, the life she was worried about had sneaked up behind her and kicked her in the ass.
She couldn't stop the giggle from issuing from her throat. "I think we're going to be alright, now, Yale. Don't you think so, too?"


To be continued. . .

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Saturday, 11 October 2003
Filler Post
While looking for the J&B story, I went through a lot of old disks and found quite a few E2 stories I had started but never finished, and many of them had to do with the secondary characters and their backgrounds. Everyone who has ever written E2 stories has their own idea about what these people were doing on the project, which were colonists and which were crew, and what they did before joining the Eden project. I was reading over some of the stories and discovered most were unfinished because what I was writing for individuals led to ideas for stories about the group that I did finish.
One story I found was a lengthy one where some of the crew return to the stations on the colony ship and then make plans to return by stealing an up to date colonizing ship. I must have had a thing back then for Danziger and Heller getting together because I was amused to find a passage where they do just that. It revolved around a plot device that I'm going to use in 9 Weeks. It threw a whole new spin on the Britt Navarro/Alonzo connection that I think is going to be better than what I originally planned.
I completely forgot about it, but now that I'm reminded about it I think I can get something interesting out of it by way of sending the Julia/Alonzo romance in a new direction.
In fact, it's going to be the "hard choice" Alonzo thinks about in the story "Inland Sea," too.
Anyway, in addition to working on Chapter 5 of 9 Weeks, I'm also finishing the back stories of the other crew members that I started. The only one that isn't a completely original idea is the Cameron story. It's become kind of fanon with Earth 2 fanfic writers that he is a geologist and a colonist - I think the actor suggested this himself. I think I read that somewhere.
Rereading the unfinished stories is giving me a whole new interest in finishing them. Hey, I might even finish the long one and get the crew back to G889 in their stolen ship, too.





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Sunday, 28 September 2003
No Guarantees
This was my Bess and John story written to show my sister it wasn't a foregone conclusion that Devon and John would end up together. With the right circumstances occurring, things could go in another direction. Like the Julia story, this one has Bess discovering something about a friend, too.
There is no real hurry Caine to speak of, but there is reference to a bunch of screaming grandmothers attacking Bess' corn. Now that's a picture I can't get out of my head.
I think all of the corrections are made that needed to be made. If not, I'll find them later and fix 'em before I move the story to my web page.

NO GUARANTEES

Autumn, Looking Back. . .

The chill breeze was a good indication summer was ending, and, looking around, one could see the first hints of fall were beginning to show. Bess Martin stood beneath the arched mess tent and sipped at the cup of water she held in her hand. It was early evening and work for the day was winding down. Outside, just across the grassy field, the first wing of the hospital and a few barracks style living units were bathed in the orange tinged sunlight. She was reminded of the prefab units in which her family had lived on Earth. Sturdy in appearance, bland and virtually identical, the units would hold five families each in relative comfort.
Devon Adair's colony town was taking shape slowly but surely.
Though Bess had long since accepted the group's decision to build their settlement on the bluffs above the beautiful beaches, it didn't stop her from worrying that they were making a mistake for which they would some day pay.
They had reached the com dish in early spring, laden with the tools and vehicles they would need to start building, and, very quickly, the weeks had turned to months, and life atop the bluffs had fallen into a routine. Her companions were happy with that, but she was not. The end of their long journey had brought to a close more than just their nomadic lifestyle.
The teamwork that had brought them across kilometers of the continent became the driving force behind the building of the structures taking shape across the green field. Their dependence on one another for day to day existence, however, had almost immediately started to change.


Spring. . .

"Morgan, you've got to help me make them listen."
Bess and Morgan Martin were in their tent after the evening meal. Bess was agitated. Morgan was poring over his notes and records, getting them in order and trying to make a comprehensive report out of them. Bess paced the small space behind him.
"There is a long, wide valley just ten kilometers inland. It has a fresh water spring and a pond beneath it. It's a better location than this. We're too close to the beach."
Morgan stopped what he was doing and ran his hands through his hair. He turned his head to speak over his shoulder, eyes and hands emphasizing his words even though Bess couldn't see them. "How many times do I have to tell you? It's a losing argument. Devon is determined to build here. It's her worry anyway, Bess." His voice lowered, and the tone changed only slightly and he looked at her out of the corner of his eye. "It's not like we're going to be spending the rest of our lives here, you know. Once we're on our way home, your worries about no one heeding your doomsday advice will be all for nothing."
Bess' step faltered for just an instant. She paced another few steps and then turned to look at her husband's back. "Honey, we're not going back. Remember? We talked about it months ago and decided to stay. You said sending a recorded log back to the stations would be an acceptable report on the Advance team's mission."
She could tell by the way he ducked his head and began to fiddle with the gear chips spread out in front of him that he had changed his mind, that he was going to try to avoid an argument and duck out on her. Well, there had been too much of that lately and she wasn't going to have anymore of it.
Bess crossed her arms and went to stand beside Morgan, putting herself between him and the tent's flap. "When did you change our plans? How long were you going to wait before you told me about it?"
Morgan glanced at her quickly and nervously. "I really have to get these reports in order, Bess."
"No. You really have to talk to me and you'd better have a good explanation for what you just said to me, Morgan Martin."
"But, Bess," he said, waving his hands over the materials on the table in front of him, "you already know how important my report to the stations is going to be!"
Her expression hardened and her voice lowered. "You know that's not what I meant."

There were no guarantees on Earth nor on G889, and Bess Martin was getting tired of trying to drive that point home with her fellow Edenites. Since reaching the com dish and the ocean, everyone's main priority was creating a safe home environment to receive the people aboard the colony ship.
All of a sudden Bess' practical knowledge gleaned from growing up and surviving on the surface of Earth was deemed not as important as it had been when they were on the march to get here. The advance group, intended to be here or not, had reached their destination safe and sound with few sorrows to change them; and now they were all working toward preparing for the arrival of the colony ship, and after that, the departure of the crew members who were going home.
Bess had left the meeting under the big dome tent feeling exasperated and angry. No one was listening to her at all anymore. It wasn't that she was feeling left out or ignored or that her ego was being bruised. She knew she was being ignored and dismissed, and maybe that resulted in a little ego bruising, but she also knew the feeling of euphoria at reaching New Pacifica with time to spare was blinding the others to the dangers found here. What was worse, they were resisting all attempts by her to stop it. Even Morgan, dependable, reliable Morgan who counted on her for so many things, had gotten caught up in the race to have a hospital and living quarters erected soon. After yet another disagreement with him, while the other members of the group pretended to not notice, she'd gotten up and walked out of the tent without a word to anyone.
Of course, getting the hospital ready was their priority. It always had been and Bess didn't want them to not meet that goal. She wanted them to do it all in a safer place. Somewhere a little farther inland.
What difference would it make if they weren't right on the ocean?
Time and again she had tried to talk to them about it, but no one was listening. It was bad enough to be brushed off by Morgan, but even Yale, who should know these things, too, was not taking her views into account. Morgan and Yale were the smartest men she knew, each in their own way, and until now they had both respected and listened to her opinions.
It was like everyone had contracted a bad case of being full of themselves. She hoped it ended on it's own before something bad happened to cure it.
All in all, life on the beach wasn't what she thought it would be. Morgan was once again looking forward to going home to the stations, life on this planet under rustic conditions just wasn't for him, after all. He had learned to survive along with the rest of the group, he explained, but it hadn't changed the basic needs in him. The Martins were going back to the stations when the colony ship arrived.
The trouble was, Bess didn't want to go back, and nothing she said or did could convince Morgan she really meant it. Their decision to remain, made during their stay at the group's last winter camp, was as binding to her as their G889 marriage had been. It was a painful thing to know Morgan had dismissed it so easily without asking for her input.
As the weeks turned to months and the colony began to take shape one structure at a time, Bess was feeling the gap between herself and the group, including Morgan, growing wider. She was alone in her convictions that living a stone's throw from the beach was a mistake.
She scuffed along through the sandy earth, walking past the tents and vehicles, worrying what was going to happen when the group finally saw the worst that living planetside had to offer. Morning dew still coated the grasses and brush and she kicked at them carelessly, watching the droplets coat her boots with a film of liquid.
"Hey," the voice of John Danziger interrupted her thoughts unexpectedly, causing her to jump and turn to give him an annoyed look. He'd left the meeting before she did, after the topics under discussion turned to those he had nothing to do with, as far as implementing them went. "Don't wander too far. Got no time to be looking for you if you get lost."
His tone was friendly, not irritated or angry.
Bess decided he was just making sure she was safe, so she let her annoyance pass. Instead she remembered how he and Devon had managed to lead them across the continent to this very spot despite never having done anything like it before. "Danziger, can I ask you something?"
He wasn't doing anything, just seemed to be sitting on the back of the transrover and looking at the ocean, as bored by the meeting as she was irritated. He raised one knee and hooked an arm over it. "Sure. Go ahead."
"Did you train anywhere else on Earth besides in the Arctic?"
He frowned. What the. . . ? "Uh. . . In the desert on the African continent, in the blue zones on the South American continent."
"Did you ever experience a storm during those times?"
Danziger sighed. He saw where this was leading and made a vague gesture with his hands. "In the desert we had to ride out a sandstorm. Thought the wind was going to blow our tents away, but we managed."
Bess took a few steps closer to him, the fingers of one hand rubbing the other at her waist. "That was a windstorm on an unhealthy planet. The weather patterns have been all screwed up for centuries. This is a healthy planet. So far all we've really experienced is rainstorms, snow and ice storms and a couple of thunderstorms. They were nothing compared to a hurricane."
"Look, Bess. You've been trying for weeks to get Adair to listen to you about building the colony too close to the shore, but this isn't Earth. Yale said?"
"I know what Yale said, but what if he's wrong?" Bess boosted herself onto the rover and sat with her back against one side and looked at Danziger. She drew her knees up and wrapped her arms around them. "We lived in the eastern part of what was called Tennessee in the old days. Still is by everyone but the mappers on the stations. There was a hurricane in the Atlantic to the east of us. Hurricanes are at their strongest when over water, and after they come to land they start to lose power. That hurricane came to land and was headed right toward us, but there was a mountain range and so much land between us and the ocean that no one paid it any attention. What no one knew was it was one of the biggest storms to ever form in that part of the world since the old times. It wiped towns and forests right off the map in one of the green zones along the east coast. It did lose strength, but what was left of the storm that hit us uprooted trees, blew houses off their foundations and poured so much rain on us in so little time there was flash flooding that did more damage than the storm did. I remember it, Danziger. Our town never recovered completely. The damage was that bad, the loss of life was worse. For the rest of my life on Earth, we lived in prefab, steel huts from government relief. There were parts of the mines flooded with water that no one ever was able to pump out." After a moment, she added, "John, there weren't supposed to be storms that big on Earth anymore. No one could figure out how it could have happened, but it did. The right conditions just popped up.""
In the silence that followed, Danziger listened to the roar of the ocean waves and considered this.
"Okay," he said after a while. "I'll admit none of us really knows the variety of weather there can be on a planet's surface. We've been through a lot of storms, though, Bess. Thunderstorms on the grasslands, the rainstorm that kept us pinned down with no shelter for almost a week. Snow, ice. We've come through a lot."
"We were lucky, Danziger!" Bess said angrily. "We were lucky to not see a tornado. We were lucky to not see an avalanche from the snowstorms in the mountains. And the thunderstorms were nothing compared to a hurricane!"
Avalanche? he thought, as he raised a hand to calm her. "All right, all right. So if you could get the others to listen, what would you suggest we do? Besides finding a site farther inland for the colony village? You know Devon will never go for that."
Bess threw her hands in the air. "Any number of things! First we could plant the fields farther in and be sure our food crops are safe. Most of it would be ruined by high winds no matter where we planted if a hurricane did come through, but at least it wouldn't be wiped out completely. The fields we've planted here haven't even got wind breaks from the sea breezes. Without a few trees to protect them all the soil will either blow away or wash away. Do you realize how high the waves can get in a really bad storm? We're only forty or fifty meters above the sea. A wave with the power of a hurricane behind it can get twice as high as that."
Danziger had to admit to himself that made sense. They'd seen a dust storm ahead of them while crossing the pan just before reaching their second winter camp. The dust cloud had stretched for kilometers. The dust had hung in the air for days after the storm ended, getting into everything as they went through the area.
"Is there any particular reason why you're telling me this, Bess?"
"Yes, there is. While everyone is busy with the meeting, I'd like to show you something."
"What?" he asked, suddenly wishing he has stayed under the tent and sat through the rest of the meeting.
"I have a special project I've been working on whenever I have the time."

And, so, Danziger found himself, mag-pro across his lap, sitting in the passenger seat of the dunerail as Bess drove it across the grasslands on the bluffs above the ocean. They were going east at a very good clip.
"You know how I like to get up early and go for a run most days?" Bess was talking loudly over the sound of the rail moving along. "One morning I went a little farther than normal and I found a valley with a spring in it. It was beautiful and I told Morgan it would be an ideal place to build a house for ourselves someday. If we stay here, that is."
She swung the rail around an outcropping of rocks and barreled on.
Danziger set his feet against the flooring and grabbed the side rails as casually as he could considering he expected to be thrown out of the vehicle at any moment. He didn't want to tell her to slow down and take it easy. That would be admitting he was fearing for his life. Instead he tried to keep the conversation going.
"You always run this far out by yourself?"
"Oh, no. Morgan usually follows in one of the little ATVs, but going up and down the hills, it's easy to get ahead of him. Of course, if one or both of the kids are running with me, I only go until they get tired, then we rest and turn back.`"
That was a surprise. "The kids go with you?"
"Sure! Once in a while. Uly loves to run, and True hates to let him get faster than she is, so they come with me now and then." She glanced over at the look on his face. "They're kids, Danziger. They need to let off steam once in a while and just play and be kids."
The dunerail labored up a rocky hillside and at the top, Bess drove through a thick stand of trees where a path had been cleared. When the ground began to drop away at the other side of the hill, she stopped suddenly and turned off the engine. She leaned forward against the steering wheel and waved her hand at the valley floor.
"What do you think?"
Below them was a wide L-shaped valley. The trees under which they parked extended downward and partway across the valley floor, covering the north end of it. The rest of it was open, but the land had been tilled and planted, and moving slowly among the rows of growing produce was the solitary figure of a zero unit. A small tent sat on a section of undisturbed ground next to a small pond. Just above it, watered gurgled out of the ground and flowed over rocks and stones to splash lightly into the pond, and from there it flowed away to the south.
Before Danziger could answer, the whine of another vehicle sounded behind them and one of the ATVs pulled to a stop beside the rail. True and Uly were on it.
"We saw you leave camp," True said. "We thought you might be coming here."
Uly hopped off the back of the ATV and stood beside Danziger. "Isn't it great?" he said.
"I might have known the two of you would be in on this." John pointed at the valley floor. "Is that. . .?"
Bess and the kids laughed. "Yep!" said Bess. "That's the damaged zero from the old ship that kept wandering off and getting lost. After you had him deactivated we brought him up here. True and Uly were able to figure out how to bypass his damaged programming, and then we just gave him instructions on how to care for the fields. We come out to check up on him as often as we can."
Danziger smoothed his hair back with one hand and let out a breath of air. "Look, I don't know how you've been able to keep this a secret for so long. I didn't even notice anything was missing. Why are you telling me about it now?"
Bess sat back in her seat. "I wanted someone from the inner circle to know about it. So if the worst happens and we need this food we can bring it in without Devon building the first jail on G889 and throwing me in it."
"Inner circle?"
She smiled. "That's what those of us in the outer circle call it," she started the engine again and roared down the hill as Uly scrambled back onto the ATV to follow with True.
Danziger felt an adrenaline rush and grabbed the side of the rail as it flew downward suddenly and bounced along the track being worn in the soil.

By the time they returned to the beach camp it was mid morning and people were breaking up into pairs or work crews to begin their labors for the day.
Danziger waited until he climbed out of the rail - which he had driven back - to turn to the other three. "All right," he said. "I won't tell anyone about your special project," he stopped to wave away their relieved and happy looks, "yet. If someone notices seeds or plants are missing, or even that the broken Zero is gone, I'll have to tell them. I don't like keeping secrets from anyone. We're still trying to survive here, and I'll agree with you that maybe we aren't going about it in an absolutely perfect manner. Still, we made it from the crash site to this spot by working together and by being a team. I don't like putting that aside even for a special project as well thought out as yours is."
Bess and True ran around the dunerail to give him a grateful joint hug.
"Thank you, John. You won't regret it. I promise," Bess assured him.
True smiled up at him. "I told her we could count on you. I knew we could!"
"Yeah, yeah," he muttered as they drew away and turned to leave. He wished he could smile back but he felt as if he'd just been suckered into being the fourth hand helping them harvest their crops when the time came.
Footsteps coming around the transrover caught their attention.
"Well, there you are," Devon's voice interrupted the moment. She walked slowly toward the three of them and nodded politely as True and Bess hurried past her with cheery good mornings and big smiles. Uly followed after them with the same look on his face. Odd that Danziger looked as if he'd just been outsmarted at something.
She decided to take a lighter approach to his long absence from the camp, just in case. "What did you do? Tell them another flying man story?"

Summer. . .

Bess waited by the ATV for quite a while, stretching more than usual before she decided Morgan wasn't coming. Something must have come up. Something was always coming up. He wasn't going to be accompanying her on her run this morning. She started back toward their tent angrily, but stopped halfway there and decided to go alone after all. She went to the line of vehicles, picked one of the small ATVs and drove it past the gap in the lasers she had opened earlier. After getting out and resetting the alarms, she drove away toward the valley in the hills.
This quiet spot with the ever toiling Zero unit for company had become Bess' sanctuary in the past weeks. The carefully tended crops were doing well. She was going to have a bountiful harvest, and her only worry was how to blend her produce in with that of the colony's fields when the time came.
The plants were tall and healthy, well tended and a first picking would be at hand soon. The corn was getting so high one couldn't see the pond from the hilltop anymore, and only the very top of the domed tent still was visible above the gently waving stalks.
Bess had been lucky the children were able to find a way to reprogram the Zero. They were resourceful kids and growing up fast. Uly had the idea to make a small canal system along the farthest rows of plants for getting water to them without having to carry filled containers by hand from the pond. The first irrigation system on G889 was a big success.
At the valley, she drove down the hillside and made a long swing to the north around the crops - the only downside to the irrigation system. You couldn't drive directly to the tent by the pond anymore, you had to circle around the crops.
She stopped beside the pond and climbed out of the ATV. Another little vehicle was already parked beside the tent. She smiled. Well, if the children are going to be getting up this early and coming into the hills, she might as well ask them to accompany her for morning exercise.
Before going inside the tent, Bess surveyed her gardens with satisfaction. Earth seeds and G889 seeds grew and proliferated side by side, unlike the colony gardens where the emphasis was on growing familiar foods from the stations. The plan was to grow a few of the more nutritious native plants in the garden and look for other plants growing in the wild if the need arose.
Not Bess. Those plants had saved their lives - something else the others had forgotten - and she wanted to see if they could be domesticated, if the ones from her garden would turn out as good as the plants they'd found in the wild.
Turning to the tent she walked the few steps to the flap, and leaned down to duck inside.
Danziger, working on the zero unit, glanced at her quickly before going back to what he was doing. "Mornin', Bess."
She straightened up and stared for a few seconds. "John! Good morning."
"Made a spare memory pack for the unit." he said. "Thought I'd fix his voice mod, too. Nothing I can do about the cracked motivation mod, gotta save our spares for the units doing the heavy construction, but he'll be able to answer you now instead of having to hook him to a com unit. You can give him voice commands, too."
She was impressed. "Wow. That's great. Thanks."
He shrugged. "Well. . . In case that natural disaster happens, you can give him a warning over your gear without having to drive out here."
"Good idea."
She dropped to her knees beside him to watch what he was doing. "Sometimes I wish I could just pick up and move out here," she said. "The peace and quiet would be so relaxing after all the noise and heavy work involved in building." She looked at his face and grinned a little. "I notice you feel the effects of the hard work, too. Weightlessness makes a difference, doesn't it?"
He laughed shortly. "Tell me about it." He glanced at her again. "What's the problem? Morgan think this is too far away from the main camp?"
Surprising herself as much as Danziger, Bess said, "I wasn't including Morgan."
In the silence that followed, both searched for something to say.
Danziger could sympathize with her, in a way, but had no idea how to say it aloud. He and Devon had begun disagreeing and arguing as much as they ever did in the early days of their relationship, and everyone knew the Martins were having problems.
The relatively calm period that had settled onto the group after Devon's return from cold sleep was giving way to complacency. The worst was over and it was back to business as usual.
The colony ship was close at hand and half of the group was thinking of going home. The other half was looking toward the future and fulfilling the promise of helping the Syndrome children and their families prosper on G889. Devon and Morgan had found a renewed sense of commitment to the Eden Project.
Bess rose to her feet and began to pace. "You know, Danziger, I was thinking about making this dome into a greenhouse. Something kind of like the biodome, you know? Putting my crops together with what the settlement is growing - we're going to have a lot of food to preserve for winter. When the ship arrives most of our fresh food will be used up immediately, and by mid winter we're all going to be missing fresh fruit and vegetables." Hands on hips she turned around in a circle and surveyed the tent. "Do you think it can be done?"
John was at a loss for a moment. He made a motion with his head and hands. "Well, sure. . . I suppose it could be done. We learned a lot about how one works at the biodome. But, uh. . . Shouldn't you be making plans for returning to the stations instead of for growing food throughout the winter here?"
The look Bess gave him was pure fire. "The final decision about that hasn't been made yet. The Martins returning to the stations hasn't been set in stone."
He nodded slowly and went back to work. Even though it was meant for someone else, he didn't like that look coming in his direction.
Taking a deep breath, Bess let her irritation with Morgan dissipate and she felt a little annoyed at herself for taking it out on Danziger, or nearly so. Making an oh, well gesture with her hands she smiled. "Anything I can do to help?"
She was surprised when he answered, "Yeah, as a matter of fact."
It took a few minutes more to finish the job, and both knew they'd better hurry to get back to the camp before they were missed. Danziger packed his tools and waved his hand in dismissal when she asked again if he needed help.
"No. Better get going. I'll be right behind you."
"Okay. See you later, John."
Bess leaned forward and raised the tent flap, ducking under and looking back as her hand fell away from the stiff material. She turned for her ATV and stopped dead in her tracks. "Ohhhh. . . my!" she whispered. She took a small step back toward the tent and reached her hand behind her, searching for the corner of tent flap she had just dropped. It took a second to find her voice. In a tone more shrill than she intended for it to be, she said,
"Danziger?! There's a grendler out here!"

Nothing could have surprised Danziger more. He knew there were Terrians in the area. Both Alonzo and Uly had confirmed that. And though there were plenty of signs that grendlers were also living nearby, no one had seen one in the months since they'd reached the com dish. The dish itself had taken a beating from the creatures. Peripheral bits and pieces had been ripped from it, but the grendlers either hadn't been able to open the casing and reach the main components, or they hadn't tried.
John dropped his tools on the ground and rushed through the tent flap, hitting Bess in the lower back with his shoulder and sending her a few quick steps forward, toward the grendler, before she could stop her momentum and scurry backward.
Danziger grabbed her by the shoulders and stopped her from plowing into him, as well as helping her stay upright when she stumbled against him.
"What does it want?" he asked.
"How should I know?" she answered. "Maybe we should go back into the tent until it leaves."
"What good would that do? If it wanted to come inside, too, what would stop it?"
"How should I know?"
Danziger looked down at the top of her head. "Well, you've done this before!"
She shook her head. "I traded with one before, sure, but not this one! Besides, I had something to offer then." She turned her head looked at him from the corner of her eye. "You're the one with the tools."
"I ain't trading my tools!"
"Well, we can't stand here all day, Danziger!"
"Why not? It seems to want to." He gestured toward it with one hand. The grendler was, indeed, staying in one place and looking at the two of them curiously.
Bess went silent for a moment, looking at the creature, as if really noticing it for the first time.
Beneath his hands Danziger could feel the tension leave her and she straightened her shoulders, leaning away from him. He dropped his hands and watched.
She started to speak in her most charming manner, gesturing with her hands. "You. . .frightened us. We've never seen any of you here before. We've been living on the beach for a while now and . . .you guys just never come to visit!"
The grendler remained silent, looking at her. It shifted it's position a little, toward the crops and away from the vehicles.
"Bess, I think it's here to see your garden. It might be-"
"Oh!" She stepped forward. "I'll bet you're wondering why we have another field planted here when we have so many larger ones growing over by the beach camp. Well, this is my garden." She placed her hands on her chest. "I planted this over here because I think the fields by the camp are too close to the ocean, the water. I think a storm might come and knock over a lot of the plants there and destroy them."
The grendler moved toward the corn stalks and began to gesture and make rumbling, grunting noises to her.
"This is corn," she explained and hurried over to touch it. "This is a food we humans brought with us from the place where we used to live to see if we could grow it here in this planet. It's something that we can grow ourselves to eat."
In a flash the grendler moved with incredible speed and stood beside her, grabbing a long leaf and leaning forward to bring it's face closer to it.
"Uh, Bess," Danziger said from the tent, waving his hand, index finger raised. "That's an Earth plant. It might be something an anim - a native from here shouldn't eat. We don't want to get it sick and angry."
She looked at the grendler. "That's right! What my friend just said. You should be careful about trying to eat it, because. . . Well, that's not the part you eat anyway. The part you eat is still growing and it might not be good for you."
She touched a small ear just forming along the stalk, but the grendler paid her no attention and began to scurry about from stalk to stalk, grabbing and sniffing the leaves. It took a bite out of one, then another, and another.
Bess looked at John. "I think he likes it. Umm. . . What do you think we can trade it for?"
Danziger took a few steps closer, frowning but looking surprised as the grendler munched on the leaves from the corn stalks. He stopped beside Bess. "As long as it leaves the corn alone, taking a few leaves won't be so bad."
"But what to trade for?"
As if understanding, the grendler began it's growling way of communication and produced a metal object from somewhere within it's layers of clothing and draped materials on it's body.
"That's a signal booster!" Danziger said.
"Okay," Bess said quickly and pointed to the object. "That's good! We'll trade you leaves for more things like that."
"Electronics, like the stuff we use in our camp. Anything like that."
"Yes," she agreed. "Anything made of metal, like this." She rapped her knuckles against the roll bar of the closest ATV. "We'll take anything like that in trade for leaves." She frowned suddenly. "Are they called leaves or fronds?"
"The grendler doesn't care. It's food to him. A new kind of food."
"Okay. Look. We come here every morning to check the garden." She motioned toward the sun. "Only in the mornings before the sun is way up. If you want to trade, come here then and we'll look at what you have to offer. All right?"
The grendler growled and rumbled something in reply and turned back to the corn stalks.
"Hold on, hold on!" Bess said. "Danziger, do you have a knife?"
"Well, yeah. . ."
"Good! Give it to me. I'll cut off some leaves and make a bundle and we'll give it to him for that signal thing. Of course it might not work, you know. He probably tore it out of a crashed prisoner transport or something."
Danziger dug out a pocket knife and gave it to her. "Doesn't matter. It has parts that might still be good."
Bess moved quickly from plant to plant, cutting off leaves until she had a small bundle. "Okay," she said to the grendler. "We can't trade a lot of leaves because the plant needs them to grow, but we can trade a little bit at a time. After the corn, these things, are bigger we can give you more. Taking too many now will make the plant die and then neither of us will have anything we want, will we?"
The grendler eagerly reached for the bundle of leaves, but Bess was hit with a wave of inspiration. She drew it back. "Oh, no. Show us what else you have first."
In the end, they decided the signal booster, an intact looking power pack and a broken wing assemblage from a small hovercraft was worth two bundles of leaves.
After the grendler disappeared over the eastern hilltop above the spring, Bess and John looked at one another and started to laugh. After a moment they could barely stand up under their own power.
Danziger regained control of himself and sat on an ATV tire. "That was quick thinking, Bess. I was imagining us running back to camp while it ransacked the tent and the vehicles."
"Well, you noticed it seemed curious about the garden. It was easy to go from there." She wiped her face and sank to the ground in from of him. "Oh, boy, that was fun!"
They started to laugh again.
"We might have been killed and we're laughing like idiots," Danziger said.
Bess nodded. "Julia said it was a common reaction after a fright."
He stood and reached out a hand and pulled her to her feet. "And speaking of Julia, let's get out of here. We better get back to camp before anyone starts looking for us."
In the days that followed, Bess was never really sure why what happened next did. John was pulling her to her feet, and as she rose, she raised her other arm and grabbed his shoulder for support. How that simple gesture turned into a kiss and a strong, warm embrace between the two of them, was something she wondered about for days afterward.
At the time, it took a few seconds to realize what was happening, and then draw away quickly in astonishment. Neither knew what to say, and after a few false starts, they each turned to a vehicle, climbed inside and drove away.
Bess was back at the main camp for several minutes before Danziger roared in from a different direction. She smiled ruefully to herself and gathered the tools she would be using that day. At least he was still thinking. She had driven straight back to camp, still so surprised by the kiss, she didn't even remember crossing the distance.
After the evening meal, Bess finally went to speak to Danziger. He was working alone, putting away the lasers and locking down the other equipment they used that day.
"Hey," she ventured, looking at him to see if he was still feeling as puzzled and slightly embarrassed as she was. With Danziger one could never tell, really. "I told the kids about the grendler." She shrugged. "You know. They go up there, too."
He nodded. "Good idea. I was thinking about it. You can get out of camp every morning easier than I can. You should have one or both of them go to the valley with you just to be sure. I'll come when I can, but. . . Well, it would be noticed if I started going somewhere early every day." He finished what he was doing and went on as he worked, "I'm going down the beach tomorrow to set-up gear relays. I'll tell Devon I saw grendlers. It'll be an excuse to take one or both of the kids and an ATV with you when you go running in the mornings."
"Great! That'll work. Thanks." She smiled and swung around to march away. She was glad he wasn't going to let that little bobble up there in the valley come between them. It wasn't as if they were interested in each other, after all. Good. Those things happened when people faced danger together, and she was glad he could see that.
It wasn't until she began getting ready for bed, she began to wonder why Danziger found it so easy to put the whole matter behind him. Why was it so easy for him to forget about it?
No, she thought. It isn't me. It's his problem.
Still, it irked her for a long time that he was so easily past the incident.

A storm had begun brewing offshore three weeks after Bess and John met the grendler in the valley. The group had been able to see it taking shape far out on the horizon over a period of two terrian days. At first it looked as if it was a storm that would pass them by and continue northward to eventually dissipate over the ocean.
When it began to swing landward, it was obvious the worst of it would hit well to the north along the coast, but the group had decided to listen to Bess and they prepared for the first real storm they would encounter on G889.
The winds had blown, the ocean had swamped the beaches and pounded the bluffs, trees had bent in the wind, and one of the ATVs had been rolled a hundred meters away from camp. A few tents were damaged and many of the plants in the fields had been broken. The crew had taken shelter in a small cave system Uly and True had found in the early days of the encampment.
When they emerged afterward, the buildings had been slightly damaged, but the walls were still standing. The damage was nowhere near what the Advance group had been expecting after listening to Bess' warnings. It was easy for them to quickly become complacent about the disaster-that-wasn't. To make matters worse, Morgan, her most trusted ally, had swung completely to the camp believing the worst had come and they had survived. Scouts to the area hit by the brunt of the storm showed worse damage, but it was decided to be nothing that would have hurt their existence had it passed over them. Bess hadn't even tried to explain the difference between the plant and tree abundant land the settlement was on and the open area the center of the storm had ravaged. No one was listening.
Only Danziger seemed to notice with any concern the size and the type of flotsam and driftwood that washed up on the beaches for days after the storm. Though they never talked about it, she could see he was thinking about it and wondering.
Everything returned to normal, but it was a normal to which Bess was feeling a stranger.
The days passed and the items the grendler brought to the valley began to pile up even though the creature did not come every day, and Danziger had to make the time to visit the valley and sort through it all and glean the usable items from the junk. He made certain True was with him whenever he came. Bess wasn't sure what to make of this. She continued to do the trading and she continued to find peace within herself by coming to the valley as often as she could.

Autumn, Looking Ahead. . .

Bess drank the last mouthful of water and washed the empty cup in the disinfectant solution for dishes and utensils. Wash, rinse, dry. She'd done it so many times before she barely noticed, anymore. Instead of joining the group gathering around the fire outside, Bess decided to have a shower and turn in early tonight. She had to get up early the next morning and bring some of her vegetables to the caves before anyone else got up and she was needed for work.
Coming out of the bathhouse later, she looked around the camp. It was dark now, the sun was gone so even the ocean was dark and lost to sight. There were lights glowing in the tents and in the windows of the one finished barracks where some of the group were living. Her own tent was dark. Though she and Morgan still shared their living quarters, they were rarely there at the same time. Neither seemed to want to be the one to acknowledge there was anything wrong between them.
Presently, Morgan was inside the mess tent, having taken over one of the tables to spread out his equipment and gear chips so he could continue getting his personal reports in order. With the long hours spent in construction, he was using his spare time to do personal business. Under any other circumstances, she would have chided him for neglecting his rest and order him to come to the tent with her and retire for the night. Just a few shorts months ago, he would have protested halfheartedly and let her coax him to bed.
As Bess walked slowly toward the tent she decided it was time for her to move into one of the rooms in the barracks. Tomorrow after work on the other buildings was stopped for the day, she would ask Diane Denner to give her a hand moving her few belongings.
At the tent, she didn't bother turning on a light, just climbed onto the bed. A folded length of light material was at her feet. She spread it over herself and lay down. The murmur of voices at the fire blended with the low crash of the ocean on the beach and she was asleep long before she expected to be.

The next morning Bess left the camp alone, and reached the top of the hill overlooking the valley and stopped the vehicle. Well, one good thing came out of the whole matter, she thought. My tomatoes and corn are better than anything the colony gardens are producing. And my lettuce? Beats theirs hands down.
She heard an engine coming through the woods behind her, and stopping to her right. "I hope you two aren't neglecting chores to come out here," she said tiredly, assuming True and Uly, or one of them, had followed her.
"I'm neglecting every chore I've got," Danziger answered from the dunerail. "Thought you might need some help sneaking your stuff into camp. I'm supposed to be out looking for rock to quarry,
but I've already found a couple of good sites weeks ago. I can load up the rail with your crops and put it in the caves with the other stuff. Devon's got everyone learning to use the lasers so no one will be going near the caves. I can make as many trips as necessary."
Bess' smile was brilliant.

The zero unit had been busy, as always. Anything that could be used as a container for vegetables was filled and neatly lined up inside the tent. The zero itself was in shutdown and waiting for the sun to climb over the hills so it could recharge. Danziger looked through the latest offerings from the grendler.
"Hmm. I can melt most of this down now we got a working smelter from the last grendler cache we found down south."
Bess looked at him reproachfully. "I really don't think you ought to go raiding anymore grendler caves, Danziger. You might offend our partner. We don't need a pack of screaming grendlers coming in here and taking all of my corn one day."
He shrugged. "I know, but I can't get the point across to the others without telling them about the gardens."
"Oh. Well, I'm going to take three of these back with me and just say I stopped at the fields after my run and picked some food for meals this week. My turn to do meals. I can get away with that the rest of the week."
Danziger nodded.
She said, "I, uh, had an idea the other day, but I thought I?d better ask you what you think before I do anything about it."
Danziger laughed lightly. "You've been doing fine here, Bess. Considering all of the things the grendler has brought to trade, you've been picking the right stuff to keep. The junk pile could be a whole lot bigger than that little handful of stuff. Got sound judgement."
She smiled and shrugged a shoulder. "Well, this is something else. We have a lot of stuff here. I thought maybe the grendler might be able to take some of the harvest and trade it with other humans on the planet. Only thing is, it would alert the people to someone being here who has Earth seeds and stuff. It would be announcing our existence to the world."
"That it would," John agreed, pausing to scratch behind his ear. "Let's think about it a while. There might be a solution."
"I hope so. I've also been thinking about the Elder's people and the people at the second biodome back at our winter camp. If we could send them some of our crops they could start saving seeds for next year."
Danziger sat on the corner of one of the two small tables in the tent. "That would be the best way to go about it. Both of those groups know we're here, and neither is too interested in seeking us, or anyone else, out for any reason. They might appreciate second hand contact through the grendlers, though."
Bess crossed her arms at her waist and began to pace. "The problem would be getting it to them. Our grendler would have to deal with other grendlers and before we know it, we might be making trades with a lot more than just one."
"Not necessarily. I don't know much about grendlers, but I'd be willing to bet the one we're dealing with knows where all the spider tunnels are in this part of the country and exactly where they go." John raised a hand and gestured as he went on. "I've been thinking about that, myself. Maybe we can eventually trade for information on where the nearest tunnel is and where it goes. Never know when one might come in handy."
Bess stopped pacing and looked at him with her head tilted a little to one side. "And here I was thinking you were going to blow up and start hollering about trusting our grendler with a bigger role in the trading set-up. Where is the Danziger who told me, the first time I brought him here, he didn't like keeping this a secret from the others? Do the words we're a team ring a bell?"
"Uh," he ran a hand through his hair and seemed at a loss for words.
Bess closed the distance between them in less than a second. This time she had to doubts where the kiss and accompanying hug originated.
A short time later, Bess watched the dunerail disappear around the fields. As irritable and downright ornery as John Danziger could be most of the time, he had a very sweet side to him, too. She climbed into the ATV and followed after him.
Bess had no choice but to return to camp after taking part of her small load of produce to the cool caves where the yield from the main field was being stored. Throughout the day as she learned to cut stone blocks and plane wood with the lasers, she kept watch for Danziger's return. The zero would do the picking and packing while John did the transporting. It was a private amusement to think of them as employees of her agricultural consortium. She hoped he did know of sites to quarry more rock for the building as he claimed he had. She didn't want him getting in trouble with Devon on her account. Not now.
At midday when he reported in and gave the locations of the rock outcroppings, she had already asked Denner to help her move from the tent into a room in the barracks, and with that settled, the rest of the day flew past.

Finally released from their chores that evening, True and Uly raced across the dusty common area forming between the circle of barracks foundations and made a beeline for the storage tent where they had hidden the materials for a secret project they'd been working on. One of Yale's recent lessons had included showing them holos of things called kites that children on old Earth had played with sometimes. By accident they'd discovered some of the water soaked driftwood on the beach dried without shrinking and when you cut away long strips of it, the strips were light as a feather. Just the kind of wood Yale had mentioned was needed to built a kite light enough to rise in the air. It never occurred to either child the idea might have been planted by Yale and not an original inspiration of their own.
Racing in the lead, True neared the open flap of the tent and all of a sudden skidded to a halt on the trampled grass on front of it.
She had to be seeing things. That couldn't be her dad in there with Bess Martin. They definitely couldn't be kissing each other.
Uly was approaching fast. True looked away and turned. She ran toward Uly and caught him by the shoulders as he slowed to avoid a collision. "We have to wait a while before we get our stuff."
"Why?" the boy asked.
"You're not going to believe this. I just saw the weirdest thing."
"What?"
"You're not going to believe it. Bess Martin is kissing my dad."
Uly's eyes widened. "Whoa!" He took a step in the direction of the tent.
"No!" True said and stopped him. "This was a major kiss."
"Whoa. . . How major?"
"Really, really major. Like when you bump your head and see stars."
"Whoa. . ."
"Stop saying that!"
"Well. . . When can we get our stuff?"
True bit her lip. She wanted to finish that kite and see if it would fly. "Come on, but let's be really noisy." She started to trot toward the tent and called over her shoulder. "I'll get to the tent before you will!"
Uly started after her. "No, you won't!"
If there was a chance to see this major kiss before it stopped he wasn't going to miss it.
"Hey!" True yelled as he streaked past her. She slowed to a walk. Oh well, if that didn't announce their arrival nothing would. She composed her face and prepared to be surprised to see her father and Bess pretending to be putting their tools away. She had a feeling she would be doing that a lot for a while.
There were no guarantees this would be a secret for long.

The End



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