Mr. Ripplinger's latest novella:
"Paradise Shattered"
An epic tale of Canadian military terror with a daycare twist, is in the hands of editors now.
Watch this page in coming weeks for more information such as reviews and publication dates.
Well, the verdict is in. The editors have done a great job, and the second draft of “Paradise Shattered” has begun.
However, although they are fine editors, their review writing skill’s are limited. So I have done my best to piece together some of their written and verbal comments into short reviews of my book:
- Thank you for letting me read and edit your book. I liked it. The story line is fairly good and I liked the characters. I recognized some of the tongue in cheek, and thought some of the scenes were quite funny.
Kelly
Ottawa, ON
- Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your book. Good “Tech” details. Great characters.
Jan
Penticton, BC
- Thank you for letting me read your book, but I have to say the harsh language was unnecessary and I found the religious references and violent scenes quite offensive.
This is definitely not the kind of book I normally like to read. I enjoyed your first book much more.
Judy
Penticton, BC
Well, two out of three isn’t too bad I guess. Will post more reviews once the second draft is complete and once again submitted to peer review and final editing, before being passed on to publishers.
