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Sunday, 29 February 2004
Untitled (tree)
A lover once sighed into this tree.
His soul was warm; his spirit free.
And forever etched into this bark
two names live secretly in a park.

The oak shall keep their names in it's mold,
Even when their love has long been cold.
And though some moss may fill the cracks,
they will endure all but the axe.

The tree lies off the normal trail.
No one but me will hear it's tale.
As I lean back, I sigh without glee:
"One of those names once belonged to me."

Posted by rings/of_adamant at 4:11 PM EST
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Sunday, 29 February 2004 - 6:37 PM EST

Name: Brian

I like this one.

Tuesday, 2 March 2004 - 10:19 PM EST

Name: Holly

Out of all of them, I like this one the best... not really sure why though. I have no constructive criticism for this one especially since it seems fine the way it is (at least to me).

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