here is my story please give me honist feadback
The last week has to have been the most crazy week any one has ever seen. My friends and I were going on a road trip, except the trip we took was more exciting then the destination to which we arrived. It was only a week but it seemed like an eternity before it was through. I wasn?t a believer in things like this before, but since there is no way I can honestly explain the events you are about to read. I think I?ll let you figure out for your self but I must tell you these happened to us if you don?t believe me fine but it did happen.

MONDAY
?BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! CRASH!? This was the third time I broke my alarm clock since I bought it a week ago. And my fifth one this year. The end of the school year has arrived finally, my friends and I have planed this trip to LA since the beginning of the year.
As I sat groggy on my bed Max walked in the room we were lucky to be roommates after sending our request forms. ?Where have you been?? I moaned.
He threw a bag of Dunkun Doughnuts at me. ?You ready? We have to go pick up the girls soon hurry up ensign.? He liked to joke and call me by rank even though I am not even planing on going in to the military.
?Shut up. Ugh I just woke up?
?Yeah I can see that, and you broke my alarm clock?
?Oh sorry dude, haha I told you not to set it to wake me up.? I guess it wasn?t mine oops. ?I?ll pay you back. Thanks dude I needed that coffee.?
?Don?t worry about it, get dressed lets go?
It was the first time we ever went on a trip this long and we were already running late on my own accord. A half hour passed and we were on our way the ride just to pick up the girls was about an hour and a half. Once we got there things were great we were on out way nothing to stop us.
?Max I had the weirdest dream last night.? Ashley was Max?s girlfriend they had been together for a long time and I don?t think they?ll ever break up.
?What was it about babe?? He was driving so she had shot gun; Sarah and I were in the back.
?Well we were all driving on our way like were are now except Sarah was driving and Matt was here and we were in the back. You two,? she meant max and myself, ?were joking about something I don?t remember what. Then all of a sudden this guy ran in front of the car I yelled to watch out but it was too late we were right on top of that man.?
?Damn Ash, you on top of another guy?? I was kidding around.
?Shut up. Or I?ll sick Max on you!?
?That?s like a worm moving a mountain.? Max always jokes about his size; I was about twice as big and strong as he was. Everyone burst out in laughter.
All of a sudden Sarah screamed, ?LOOK OUT!? Her face was pail white staring straight out the windshield. I looked a head and this man just ran out in font of the car. Max slammed on the breaks to try and slow down, but the man seemed to come at us even faster. When he got to the point when the car would have hit him, he disappeared into a cloud of thick smoke that seemed to pass right threw the car. As a cold chill went threw my body we swerved and came to a stop in the breakdown lain.
?WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!? max yelled.
?I don?t know, is everyone alright?? I looked around every one nodded except Sarah she still had a blank face and stair. I placed my hand on her face and turned her face gently to mine.
?Hun are you ok? Its ok I don?t know how but no one was there we didn?t hit anyone every thing is ok.? Finally she came to and threw her arms around and squeezed me closer to her crying. ?Its ok.?
?He was in so much pain.? She was hysterical
?What do you mean? Who was??
?That man, he cant be near anyone or he vanishes.? When she said that I was a little scared but mostly I was just shaken.
?Max, lets get out of hear she?s freaking out? I can explain what we had seen but it couldn?t have been a ghost could it? We drove off in silence nobody spoke for what seemed like an hour. But you can only stay quiet for a little while.
?What was that?? I knew Ashley had to say something.
?It was a ghost!? Max said.
?No it, it couldn?t be there is no such thing as ghosts! He moved out of the way just in time and the light sun made it look like he was there.? I wasn?t sure myself on what it was but it couldn?t have been a ghost they don?t exist, do they? No of course not.
?Dude I looked all around the car that guy was gone. There was no sine of him anywhere. He was gone. Just gone.?
We all decided it would be best if we stopped for the night. We had just entered Pennsylvania so we got a double suite and spent the night. ?Don?t worry babe there wasn?t anyone there things will be ok.?
?Ok I guess we were just seeing things I?ll be ok. Lets just get to bed I?m tired.?


TUESDAY
?He is mad at you? a child?s voice was ringing in my ears. ?You must watch out for the others the twins will trick you, the old man will teach you, and He will hurt you! Go now WAKE UP!?
I opened my eyes groggy and my eyes suddenly focussed on a young girl standing, staring back in my eyes from the corner of the room she just stared at me her hair was covering most of her face the dark light in the corner was a little creepy. Then with a blink of an eye she seemed to run toward me only she never moved her legs. She just seemed to stand still but glide at me like a bullet. ?Wake up!?
I snapped up out of bed in a cold sweat and felt a cold hand on my back. ?Get the fuck away from me!?
?Baby what?s wrong?? Sarah looked almost as scared as I was. ?Calm don?t its ok it was just a dream.?
I sat there with the cold damp drops running down my back, wreathing threw my mind the strangely horrifying face of the young girl. Her face itself or even the way she looked wasn?t what had scared me (she was only burned on her right side but that didn?t scare me) it was the look in her eyes, like she could see right threw my soul her eyes had a cold caring hatred. The way she just slid toward me in a blink of an eye.
?Are you alright? You want me to get you some water?? Sarah was sitting next to me on the bed she looked as scared as I was.
?No just sit with me ill be ok.? I wasn?t sure what had happened just then, ?what a bad dream.? I never told her what I had seen but only told her it was a nightmare. It seemed so real but she assured me that it was only a bad dream and that I wasn?t going insane. Only a bad dream, only a bad dream, only a bad dream I repeated to myself over and over again.
We met up with Max and Ashley at the car they knew something was bothering me but I never told them what I had dreamed about. The awed thing was that Max seemed on edge kind of like I was, I wonder if he had the same dream? We decided to go out to a diner we had passed the night before for breakfast. As we sat in the booth it was strangely quiet even though it was about 10:30 in the morning. We sat in the dreary quiet for about ten minutes when Sarah nudged Ashley and said that she had to use the bathroom and they both got up and ran to the restroom. (It always surprised me that when one girl says that she needs to go to the bathroom they all seem to need to at the same time.)
While the girls were in the restroom Max gave me a scared look and said, ?Matt, did she come to you too??
?What?? I knew what he was talking about.
?You know what I mean, the girl she came to you too this morning.? He looked scared out of his mind.
?Damn. What did Sarah tall you??
?No, you see when I woke up Ash was still asleep and this girl was sitting on the foot of my bed. She was sitting there playing with a little dole that only had one leg. She said her sister had one just like it and asked me if I wanted to play? I didn?t know what to do, so I just sat there. And I think she took offence to that because she all of a sudden screamed at me and I got a good look at her face she had a large burn mark on the entire left side of her face. When she screamed her long hair that was covering her face revealed the large scar.?
?Umm, dude, I don?t think I saw her I think I saw her sister.? I told him what I had dreamed about and we agreed not to tell the girls about what had happened so when the girls got back we decided to get back on the road.
All that I could think about was what the girl had said to me. If there were more people looking for us then we must be careful.