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You made all of those promises to me, promises you didn't intend to keep. We were lovers who would have begged on our knees to be allowed to be together, but there were no bars to hold us apart, so we kissed and our lips locked. I tripped and fell into your love headfirst, and you left me in a puddle. |
Copyright ©2009 Ashi Shadow -6/11/09 written while listening to Wedding Dance by Slow Dazzle.
"The" promises instead of "those" promises? "keep" instead of "hold?"
Ending not how originally intended.
Puddle = melancholy.
Picture in current version is on butt with legs in front, hands on ground in back.