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I hope your feelings for me are not a dream evaporating under the rising sun's rays like the morning mist. That the way you felt in my arms was not a mirage that you'll feel that way inside them the next time I see you. You are so beautiful, inside, like a crystal vase with blue and purple flowers. And I want to feel my heart melt inside my chest, again. |
Copyright ©2015 Ashi Shadow - 10/4/15 on Gabbie.
Originally didn't start with an ending.
First ending was "You are so beautiful, inside, / like a crystal vase / with blue and purple flowers / on vines." then wanted to make it more like I intended and came up with "You are beautiful and warm, inside. / and I want to feel my heart / melt inside my chest, again."
I wasn't really either happy with either, or the combination, but i have combined them for now since I like aspects of each.
They both capture parts of the feeling...
Maybe what's needed is a line in between.