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I love you like no other. You make me feel high like no other,- A buoyant swell of my heart's spirits Walking upon white clouds and the heartbeat of a blue sky along the peripheries. What more could I ask for? |
Copyright ©2011 Ashi Shadow - 8/23/11 on KatieBear.
Considered "What more could I want?" and feel like heartbeat might benefit from an adjective before it.
A few hours later, the 2nd line looks a bit suspicious, maybe should make it "as high up" or something like that?