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I am drowning in dreams of you. Real life warbles in through the cracks between my reveries of you and the work I bury myself in. What is this music that dances with me when nobody is there, this compulsion to be devoted to the sight of your eyes, I have not seen; the image of your lips, I have not met; to a dream within a dream. |
Copyright ©2015 Ashi Shadow - 5/14/16 on Averi but written on her like she is fictional.
The last stanza was one that I was having difficulty with and I'm still not completely satisfied with it.
I had tried moving the compulsion line after the image line.
There needs to be more transition from compulsion to sight or some other change.