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The Immortal view
Sunday, 2 July 2006
Proluge
Mood:  mischievious
Now Playing: ...Silence..fun...
Topic: The Book
Prologue
Never swerve to avoid animals it just causes more damage.




The bright orbs of the creature caught in my headlights burned wide and bright in the dense fog. The rest of the creature was cloaked in the not quite air not quite water mixture making me unable to see what it was; truly all I needed to know was that it was there. Suddenly my hands tightened on the steering wheel and I jerked the black and silver Firebird off the road swerving to miss the creature who’s bright eyes had looked at me so helplessly through the nice thick fog that made driving dangerous.
The car hit the curb of the road and instantly flipped on to its back like a turtle. It spun around, it’s tires spinning against the air in a vain attempt to gain purchase again, after colliding with a few rocks that littered the side of the road it flipped back on it’s wheels but now it was too late the car was beyond the point of being able to drive. For those few moments all I could hear was the groaning of metal, glass breaking, my screams, and my heart the last of them was so loud that it almost drowned out the rest. My head smashed against the steering wheel making stars appear before my eyes and my vision to blur with painful tears. When the car finally stopped moving it was so silent so very still I wanted to scream again and panic but I knew it wouldn’t do any good so I assessed the damage. My stomach tumbled and I tried to keep all my dinner down but I couldn’t do it and tilted my face away from me and was sick all over the wonderful leather seats that I had just gotten installed a few days before. I never had been very good on the spinney rides at carnivals and this was ten times worse than even that. The air bag exploded in my face nearly suffocating me and yet at the same time making me laugh at the irony of the fact that it was over and it had just now deployed. I wished it had before because of the dull throb on my forehead where my head had smashed in to the steering wheel.
Shivering I sat still letting my mind calm before I tenderly lifted my arms and moved the fingers. The right hurt but not enough to be broken the left was just aching. I slowly moved each finger not only to make sure that I didn’t break any but because I was afraid to check out the pain that nearly blinded me. It came from my right leg and I was afraid that it was broken, no I take that back I knew it was broken. Slowly I moved my left leg then every toe slowly very slowly before looking at the other leg. I instantly regretted it, you know when you were a kid and you would get hurt but you wouldn’t cry till you saw the blood. Same concept here, only this still hurt just not as bad as when I saw what was wrong.
All the air in my lungs left me in a whoosh of air as I screamed in pain. The leg was defiantly broken. Blinded by pain I lifted my head and looked at the wound again trying to keep calm so I could see if I would be able to do anything but sit here. Blood already soaked my black and neon orange Tripps but I couldn’t tell how deep the wound was. Soon I saw something else that made me hurl again. ‘So much for Granny Annie’s pie,’ I thought bitterly as all the food I had eaten at my Granny’s house was expelled from my stomach. The reason behind all of this was because of the bone that stuck at least six inches out of my right thigh.
Holding back tears I looked at the door of my car. It was for the most part bashed in but ,by the looks of it, it was still in working order. Slowly very slowly I grabbed the handle and pulled on it. At first I was put out when the door didn’t swing open then I noticed that it was locked and quickly pulled the lock up and pushed the door open. Trembling I put my left leg out first then used it as leverage to push my body out of the car.
I hit the ground with a thud and nearly screamed in pain again but I just bit my lip hard and winced as I felt it split open. It was the worst thing I’ve ever felt in my life. It couldn’t be real it was too scary to think it was real but it hurt too much for it not to be. Lifting my self up on to my elbows I started dragging my self towards the road. I knew that it was late at night but I prayed someone would happen to drive by just maybe he or she could save my life.
As I pulled my self on to the Side of the road I saw a pair of glowing golden eyes looking at me through the fog. With a jolt I realized that the only way some one would see me was if I was in the center of the road and by the time they did I would be under their tires. Trembling I let the tears I had been holding back fall down my face like a waterfall. I was going to die here and I knew that now. Shaking I sobbed then I started feeling light headed. I was loosing too much blood slowly I closed my eyes letting my self black out thinking if I was out cold it would be less painful when I died. While I dropped in to oblivion the two golden orbs drew closer as if inspecting me for it’s next meal.




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Sunday, 2 July 2006 - 4:27 PM CDT

Name: planet/shadow-den

Hey this is the first part of my book The Immortal View. Some of the people in this book are real so I must say that yes I have promision to use them. Josh French, Jacob Looney, Kat Mariono, Granny Annie, and Laura Huffman are all real people. Some of the places are real as well but don't ask which ones I'm not telling.

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