Sing to Me

My poem is about a one-night stand. I have it based off of two different characters talking. I took different lyrics from songs I thought were sexy and put them together. I used the following songs in the poems:

“Temptation” by Heaven 17

“Super Massive Black Hole” by Muse

“Blue Orchid” by the White Stripes

“Laffy Taffy” by D4L

“Rebel Yell” by Billy Idol

“Remedy” by Seether

“I Feel Loved” by Depeche Mode

“Try Again” by Aaliyah

“More, More, More” by Andrea True Connection

“Suga Suga” by Baby Bash with Frankie J

That is a total of ten songs which I took different lyrics from. Next, someone suggested that I throw in punctuation. I have never done that in a poem before. I just have been taught not to do that unless it was an exclamation or a question. The teacher suggested that I use punctuation as well. So, I tried it out. The poem looks a little bit better with it. It makes the lines sound much dirtier to me.