Revision #4

    The next poem is called One-Night Stands. This one was little better, but it still needed work. There was confusion and too many exclamation points. So, I fixed this one up too. I fixed up the title so that it does not say, One-Night Stands, but One-Night Stand. I have been told that it works much better that why and I can see why now. I cut back on the exclamation points and changed some of the “says” around to convey more emotion with what they are saying. I also took out a line from the stanzas to help clear up the confusion. Other than that, everything else is pretty much the same. The sexy poem now flows a little more smoothly now that I cleaned it up some.