Revision #10

    My final poem for the semester is called Domestic Bliss. This is my latest favorite poem. I really think I have improved on this and my class agrees with me. However, it still needed a little bit of an improvement. I happily did so. I took out a couple of lines and then added some other lines. I fixed up some grammar and lower cased some of the beginning letters in each line that were a part of a sentence. I did not really have to do too much work to this gem. I think it looks much better now.