Script 2 "untitled" by Arcaene/Nathan
Page 1, Panel 1: ¾ panel, a barbarian in a loin cloth wielding a huge
two
handed battle axe is battling a beastman, (waist down is that of a man
and
the waist up is that of either a deformed pig or goat) in a forest
clearing
with snowcapped mountains in the background. The beastman is a goat
type
and is wielding a crude club and shield. While a half-naked girl
watches in
horror.
Cap. : In this world chaos rules all. Chaos has spawned the beastmen
and the
daemons that plague this world.
Panel 2: ¼ panel, the barbarian swings for the beastmans stomach but
misses,
then the beastman brings his club down on the barbarians head.
Barbarian: Unnh…
Page 2, Panel 1: ¼ panel, the barbarian lays dead and bleeding on the
stony
ground.
Panel 2: ¼ panel, a side view of the beastman's head as the beastman
looks
back in the direction of the girl with hatred in his eye.
Panel 3: ½ panel, black silhouettes against a red background. The girl
is
laying on the ground and raises her hands to defend herself as the
beastman
brings down his club on the girl.
Girl: Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh…
Page 3, Panel 1: Full panel, a back view of a fur clad barbarian as he
aims
bow and arrow at a pig beastman on his hands and knees taking a drink
from a
stream in a wooded area.
Cap.:
Though the chaos is powerful and unrelenting, some of the human
inhabitants
still fight back effectively.
Page 4, Panel 1: ½ panel, a front view of the barbarian as he lets go
of the
arrow.
SFX: TWANG!!
Panel 2: ½ panel, view of the beastman as he slumps over dead.
Page 5, Panel 1: ¼ panel, front view of the barbarian as he stands up
and
smiles.
Barbarian's thoughts: Looks like we eat tonight.
Panel 2: ¼ panel, back view of the barbarian as he picks up the
beastman.
Panel 3: 3/8 panel, back view of the barbarian as he walks away with
the
carcass slumped over his right shoulder.
Barbarian's thoughts: The camp will be pleased.
Panel 4: 1/8 panel, the glaring red eyes of a pig beastman.
Page 6, Panel 1: ¾ panel, front view of the barbarian as he walks by
two
staring male children dressed basically the same as the barbarian.
Child #1: What is it papa?
Barbarian: It's a pig-beast Calli. Now both of you go tell the camp
that I
have returned and I have food.
Child #2: We're gonna eat it papa?
Barbarian: Yes young Gorcnak. Now go….
Panel 2: ¼ panel, back view of the boys as the run to the village.
Calli: I lay claim to the heart.
Gorcnak: Awww….
Page 7, Panel 1: Full Panel, front view of barbarian as he walks into
camp
and a women in a red gown walks towards him. Just put occasional
barbarians,
children, dogs and tents in the background.
Women: Oh, Gonit I'm glad you're home…, oh and you brought food.
Gonit: Jaella! I missed you so much my wife.
Jaella: Come and rest. Tonight we will feast on this pig-beast and you
can
tell us you're tale around the bonfire.
Page 8, Panel 1: ¼ panel, front view of a grisly old barbarian with an
old
grey beard.
Old barbarian: Bah, Gonit you bring back only one pig-beast? When I was
your
age we would bring back a dragon's load of something good tastin' like
moose.
Gonit(off panel): Oh Ogdin, all you ever do is lay around and mope,
make
yourself useful and be bait for luring in a dragon.
Ogdin: Humph….
Panel 2: ¼ panel, the back view of a portion of Gonit's head and the
front
view of a jolly fat barbarian with a fine trimmed blonde beard.
Fat barbarian: Gonit you have returned! You were gone for so many weaks
we
were getting' worried.
Ogdin(off panel): speak fer yerself Chibbs.
Chibbs: Oh shut your mouth old man. You should be thankful that we're
eatin'
tonight.