Why
Vinnie Carponzo Hates Trains
A
Screenplay By
Michael
Fox
Story
By Corey Strong
OPENING
TITLE SESSION
FADE
IN:
1.
EXT. - RAILROAD - DAY
The
color is made up of brown and white. That is all. For this is not a story of
laughter or love. Its dark bliss is not to be shown in color that so many use
to exempt such emotions. For it is a story of such bliss and depicts certain
issues in scenes and dialogue that I’m not particularly proud to write about.
The setting is of a pale, spring scenario in a small town in the state of
MISSISIPPI. Upon the opening fade in, the titles appear on-screen over the
early morning setting over an open railroad track. Walking along with his hands
in his pockets is VINNIE CARPONZO. Vinnie finally stops walking to take a quick
breather and ponder a few thoughts. He looks behind him, and sees the long
stretch of railroad that is now behind him.
VINNIE
(V.O)
I
don't know why I came back here. Actually, let
me
re-phrase that. There are two reasons why I
came
back here. I just don't know which of the
two
is more important. One reason is that there
is
someone here that I love, and I came back to
tell
her that. The other reason is that somebody
here
wants me dead and I need to find out why.
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2.
INT. - CONVENIENCE
STORE - DAY
Vinnie
enters a nearby convenience store along the tracks and walks in. The place is
empty with the exception of a young man behind the counter who immediately
recognizes Vinnie.
LOUEY
Vinnie
Carponzo... I can’t believe it! What has
it
been, a year?
VINNIE
Yeah,
it's been a year.
LOUEY
Where
the hell have you been man?
VINNIE
Where
ever, and I wouldn't be back here if it
weren't
for some unfinished business. Do you know
where
Siloen Daily is?
LOUEY
Siloen?
Man, he comes in here all the time. But
not
yet today. Why what's up?
VINNIE
Old
business. Old promises. I need to find him.
LOUEY
Are
you planning to stop in and say hello to your
girl?
VINNIE
(a loss for words)
She
still around?
LOUEY
She's right where you left her.
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3.
INT. - APARTMENT BUILDING
- DAY
Vinnie's
finger scrolls down the list of names next to the intercom and finally stops
when he reaches the name "Carponzo". He presses the button but there
is no answer. Vinnie sits down on the floor along the wall, underneath the
intercom and stares at the glass door noticing his reflection. He begins to
talk to himself.
VINNIE
Hi.
The
reflection is faint but he can still make it out, he proceeds to present himself.
VINNIE
I'm
Vinnie Carponzo, pleased to meet you! And you
are?
Genesis LeClerc? Well that is the most beaut-
iful
name I have ever heard in my life. Oh, I just
want to... start over.
Vinnie
buries his head in his face. He doesn't cry, he holds it back but he lets
thoughts and memories of her race through his head while he continues to look
at his reflection. Now he begins to practice.
VINNIE
Genesis, I'm sorry. Well, sorry doesn't
really cut
it. Sorry doesn't take away the pain. Oh God, how
do I put this into words? All I ever thought about
in the past year was you, and how it could've been.
I guess I just want to tell you that I'm ready to
forget about it, all of it. I wish I could change
the past. But I can't but I want to make things
better. I would give anything for one last chance
to take you away.
GENESIS
(Over
the Intercom)
Do
you really mean that?
Vinnie
is slightly startled, but only slightly. He looks up at the intercom speaker
and smiles.
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TO:
4.
INT. - APARTMENT FRONT DOOR
- DAY
The
door opens, revealing Vinnie, who smiles at her. Genesis approaches him, with
tears in her eyes and then slaps him.
GENESIS
You
came back for me?
Genesis
throws herself into his arms. Vinnie holds her for a brief moment and then after
they break, Genesis shows him in.
GENESIS
Where
have you been in the past year? Do you know
what
it’s been like for me? NO! Wait! Hold your
thought.
I’m going to the bathroom, I’ll be right
back.
Put on a pot of coffee.
Vinnie
slowly walks into the kitchen and begins searching for the coffee tin. He stops
once he sees a mirror in the kitchen. In a trance, he gazes into it.
CROSSFADE
TO:
The
following series of scenes take place approximately one year earlier then what
just happened.
5.
INT. - DR. SHARP'S ROADHOUSE
- NIGHT
The
lights are dim and people all around are sitting and enjoying their meals with
little to no ruckus going on in the background. Vinnie Carponzo enters the
restaurant and approaches the front counter.
GRACE
Hey
Vinnie, How are ya?
VINNIE
I'm
still alive.
GRACE
Will
your table be for smoking or non-smoking?
VINNIE
That
depends on Siloen. I'll be joining him.
GRACE
No
problem, he's in the far booth at the back.
VINNIE
Thanks.
Vinnie
ever so slowly takes his time as he makes his way through the restaurant. He
approaches SILOEN DAILEY's table and at first he doesn't sit. Siloen lights up
a cigarette; beside him on the same side of the booth is JENESIS LECLERC, an
attractive young girl.
SILOEN
Vinnie!
VINNIE
How
ya doin'? How's the leg?
SILOEN
Oh,
it's getting better. Have a seat.
Vinnie
sits in the booth across from Siloen and Genesis. Siloen hands Vinnie a menu.
SILOEN
Tabs
on me, just keep it under 10 bucks.
VINNIE
No
thanks, I already ate.
SILOEN
Well
then have a beer or something.
VINNIE
No
really, I'm fine.
SILOEN
Geez
Vinnie, where've you been all week? I haven't
seen
you at all!
VINNIE
I
was at my mother's place.
SILOEN
Ha!
Your mother's place? What for?
VINNIE
I
had some thinking to do. Her place is out the
woods
by the lake and it's nice now that winter's
ending.
The sunlight just glistens off the skin
of
the lake.
SILOEN
(chuckling)
Jesus
Vinnie, what did being away for a week turn
you
into a poet? Ha!
VINNIE
It's
just a nice place to think.
SILOEN
Did
you find Jesus while you were out there?
VINNIE
Sorry?
SILOEN
Isn't
it out in the peaceful woods where people
find
Jesus?
Vinnie
is silent on account of the comment. After a small pause, Siloen starts to
laugh. The conversation is halted when the waitress comes to the table.
GRACE
Did
you want anything Vinnie?
SILOEN
Yes.
He'll have a draft.
VINNIE
No,
really, I'm fine.
SILOEN
A
nice cold one.
VINNIE
Siloen,
I... (to Grace) I'll just have a glass of
water.
Vinnie
turns his head to Siloen and notices that he's smiling.
VINNIE
What?
SILOEN
Water...
GRACE
Ok,
I'll be right back.
Grace
leaves. Siloen continues to chuckle.
VINNIE
What
if I turned the water to wine?
SILOEN
You'd
need the power of God to do that.
VINNIE
No,
I'd just tell the waitress.
They
both laugh over the little joke.
SILOEN
Oh
it's good to see you again Vinnie. You heading
over
to the hotel tonight?
VINNIE
I
suppose.
SILOEN
Aramond
wants to see me, so I could give you a ride.
VINNIE
I
think Aramond would prefer to see less of me.
SILOEN
What
are kidding, Vinnie? I'd be surprised if he
were
to remember your name. You're not that important.
VINNIE
It's
nice to be loved.
Out of
the corner of Siloen's eye, he spots GRAY HOUSER. Houser signals Siloen to come
talk to him.
SILOEN
Will
you excuse me a moment.
Siloen
gets up and leaves Genesis and Vinnie alone. They sit in silence, until the
trance is broken by the arrival of the waitress with Vinnie's water. She places
it on the table in front of him.
VINNIE
Thanks.
Vinnie
sips it slowly. To break the ice, Vinnie strikes up conversation.
VINNIE
Haven't
seen you around.
GENESIS
You've
been away for a week.
VINNIE
How
old are you? May I ask?
GENESIS
You'd
like my age before my name?
VINNIE
Excuse
me, what's your name?
GENESIS
My
name is Genesis LeClerc and I am 17 years old.
VINNIE
Seventeen,
eh?
GENESIS
(getting
angry)
Why?
If you have something to say just say it.
VINNIE
I
have nothing to say.
GENESIS
But
you stereotype me.
VINNIE
Listen
Genesis, I think we've gotten off to a bad
start,
let's try again. Name's Vinnie Carponzo.
GENESIS
Genesis
LeClerc.
Vinnie
smiles. He turns his head to see what Siloen is up to. He eyes Siloen laughing
with Gray and then pointing towards Genesis. A moment later, Siloen returns to
the table with Gray.
GRAY
Hey
Vinnie.
VINNIE
How're
ya doin' Gray?
SILOEN
Jen,
it's time to go.
Without
saying a word, Genesis rises from her chair and gets her coat.
SILOEN
I'll
meet you at the door.
Siloen
heads to the washroom.
GRAY
How
was your retreat? I heard you went to go find
Jesus
or something.
VINNIE
Did
Siloen say that?
GRAY
Yah.
So are you heading to the hotel?
VINNIE
In
a bit, yeah.
GRAY
Cool.
VINNIE
Excuse
me.
Vinnie
grabs his coat and heads to the washroom.
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TO:
6.
INT. - WASHROOM - NIGHT
Upon
entering he looks at Siloen through the mirror while he's checking his hair.
Vinnie darkens the door way and wastes no time in confronting Siloen.
VINNIE
Seventeen
years old?
SILOEN
They
come pretty young eh?
VINNIE
Siloen,
there are some things that you just don't
do.
SILOEN
Did
Jesus tell you this? What are you anyway?
Twenty
Three? Twenty Four?
VINNIE
Twenty
Four.
SILOEN
So,
you think you're any better?
VINNIE
I
don't know how to answer that.
SILOEN
Then
don't.
Siloen
pats Vinnie on the shoulder and then exits the bathroom.
VINNIE
See
you tomorrow.
Vinnie
stands silent. At first he looks down at the floor but then raises his head and
takes a deep breath. He turns and looks at himself in the mirror for several
seconds and then sighs.
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TO:
7.
EXT. - ROADHOUSE PARKING LOT
- NIGHT
Vinnie
leans up against the side of the building and gazes into the parking lot and as
he sees Genesis get into the car with Gray. He sighs as the car pulls off
towards the hotel.
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TO:
8.
INT. - CASA BONNA VISTA HOTEL
- NIGHT
The
first thing we see in the lobby of the hotel is a campaign poster for DARREN
NEIGHTENDACK, who is currently in the stir of the of the upcoming governor
election (and the odds on favored). As the camera pans to the left, Siloen
enters as immediately greeted by RUFUS HOWSER.
RUFUS
Siloen,
good to see ya?
SILOEN
Hey
Rufus. Big man upstairs?
RUFUS
Neightendack
is with him. I don't think he'll
be
too long.
SILOEN
Ah,
it's just like him to keep a man waiting. How's
your
night been so far?
RUFUS
Oh
you know how it is nothing changes. We did have
a
dispute earlier. A couple of niggers came in here
and
started causin' trouble?
SILOEN
Rufus,
to you, asking to use the phone would mean
trouble.
RUFUS
I
tell ya, their startin' to drown us. We seriously
ought
to have a big sign on the front door saying:
"NO
NIGGERS ALOUD."
SILOEN
Oh
Rufus, please I'm not in the mood to here your
segregation
bull shit tonight.
RUFUS
I
mean it, I'll talk to Aramond tomorrow...
SILOEN
You
do that! Just leave me out of it.
Siloen
walks away from Rufus and heads towards the elevator. He presses up on the
panel and enters.
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TO:
9.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE
- NIGHT
Sitting
in a tight, luxurious office is HOWARD ARAMOND with a cigar in his mouth. He
sits at his desk opposite to Darren Nightendack who is seated in one of the two
chairs in front of Aramond's desk.
ARAMOND
You've
got to ask yourself what you're goal is. Is
it
your own gain or the good of the people? What is
it?
The people, of course. What do they know? What
does
anyone know? They know what we tell them to know
and
that's how it works. That's why I'm up here and
their
down there.
NIGHTENDACK
Just
so long as my name isn't attached to any of this.
ARAMOND
Darren,
Darren, Darren. You're not chickening out are
you?
NIGHTENDACK
No,
I'm not chickening out.
ARAMOND
Then
what is your problem, there's nothing to worry
about.
With your savvy and my know-how, your going to
be
the next governor of this state, don't forget that.
It's
the people that need to be reminded.
A
knock on the door interrupts their conversation. The door opens revealing
Siloen.
SILOEN
Mr.
Aramond.
ARAMOND
Just
a moment, Siloen. I'll be with you in a moment.
Siloen
waits outside. Aramond turns back to Nightendack and places his hands of his
shoulders.
ARAMOND
Just
remember; The good of the people. We don't need
a
nigger running things around here.
Nightendack
nods, then turns and leaves.
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TO:
10.
EXT. - CITY HALL - DAY
We are
introduced to a second campaign poster for Jerith Coggswood. He is set to
deliver an important speech this morning concerning his social issues. A group
of KKK activists, a number of approximately seven, have stationed in front of
the hall in protest against his campaign. Another group of people stand in
horror watching their protest. In lead is none other than Rufus Howser,
speaking into the microphone.
RUFUS
What
has become of our state now? Who here believes
that
this man should be considered strong enough to
be
in office? What has become of our nation? Power
has
been taken out of our hands and it's high time
that
we got it back. White power!
The
six others behind him raise their fists in the air and shout in unison.
ALL
White
power!
Among
the crowd is Vinnie Carponzo who is looking on at Rufus. Siloen comes up behind
him.
SILOEN
Hey
Vinnie, sorry I ditched you last night.
VINNIE
Don't
worry about it! I just went home. I was tired.
SILOEN
Vinnie,
you know that if you ever need a room at the
hotel,
I'm here. There's always free breakfast in the
morning
and all you can eat buffets. All the best for
a
friend of mine.
VINNIE
What
do you want?
SILOEN
Want?
VINNIE
Yah,
I know you want something.
Siloen
half changes the subject.
SILOEN
Do
you want to go get a soda er something, this party
is
getting dull.
VINNIE
Party?
This is down right satanic. Who does this guy
think
he is?
SILOEN
Vinnie,
your best bet is to stay away and not ask.
Let's
get some ice cream.
Siloen
leads out and Vinnie follows him. Rufus, speaking in the background finishes
his speech.
RUFUS
The
future should begin now. Our lives should not be
taken
over. We must fight now. White power!
ALL
White
power!
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TO:
11.
INT. - ICE CREAM SHOP - DAY
Almost
as it were slightly run down, the Malt Shop is styled with a fifties look.
Vinnie and Siloen are sitting on to stools, facing one another. Vinnie has a
small butterscotch sundae while Siloen is chowing down on a banana split.
VINNIE
Siloen,
have you ever met this guy Coggswood.
SILOEN
Yep.
VINNIE
What
do you have against him?
SILOEN
Me,
personally? Nothing. It's business. With Aramond's
guy
in office, things don't get as hairy...
VINNIE
Aramond's
guy? You mean Nightendack?
SILOEN
It's
business.
VINNIE
But
if it weren't business, you'd go with Coggswood.
SILOEN
Let
me put this way. I'll tell you about this guy
Jerith
Coggswood. You could walk right up to him, not
say
a word and slap him in the face...
Siloen,
imitating Jerith Coggswood, slaps Vinnie in the face lightly.
SILOEN
...and
he'd say, "Vinnie? What'd you do that for?"
Then
you could go on, "Dunno, felt like it."
Siloen
slaps Vinnie in the face again.
SILOEN
This
guy wouldn't even raise his voice he'd just say,
"Vinnie,
that's irritating. Could you please stop?"
VINNIE
What
are you getting at?
SILOEN
Who
would be the better man in office? One who is an
associate
of a protected felon or one who is for the
people,
one who Jesus would vote for?
Vinnie
takes the point and takes a mouthful of his ice cream.
SILOEN
Ah,
but who wins in the end? The one with the power.
VINNIE
That's
the way it's always been.
SILOEN
Do
you the know the bank down at the end of Clemmons?
VINNIE
Where's
that?
SILOEN
Right
by the outskirts? By the train tracks?
VINNIE
Oh
yeah that's the one right next to the police
station.
SILOEN
Extra
guard, I guess. Any-hoo, the entire Neight-
endack
campaign fund is sitting around in that
bank.
VINNIE
What
do you mean? How much.
SILOEN
Of
course, Aramond pulled a few strings. He had a
New
account created under the name of "Gregory
Redfield" and
balanced it out so that all his
expenses are tax
deductible.
VINNIE
So,
he's rich. He can do that, what's so big.
SILOEN
He
put the claim on everything under his name. Since
this
guy Redfield doesn't exist, he can't be found.
Everything
from pay checks to poster purchases to
air-time
are all going to go in one big circle.
VINNIE
So
this thing is a fraud. He's cheating money out
of
hardworking people and his guy'll still get into
office?
SILOEN
It's
blood money Vinnie.
VINNIE
How
much?
SILOEN
Half
a mil.
Vinnie
spits out the serving of ice cream on account of the shock.
VINNIE
Half
a million dollars?
SILOEN
That's
what he said.
VINNIE
Where
does five-hundred grand come from?
SILOEN
Insurance
on Redfield. Tax-cheating, I dunno.
VINNIE
But
if that money disappears he's toast. Right?
SILOEN
What
do you mean?
VINNIE
I
mean Nightendack won't get into office, he'll lose
benefits
and then it's gone. The whole 500 thou.
SILOEN
Somebody
should rip it off.
VINNIE
With
a police station next to it? Yeah right.
SILOEN
It's
just a thought, but for once I'd like to see the
good
guy win, wouldn't you?
VINNIE
So
in essence, we'd be helping the good-guy by becoming
the
bad-guys which would make us, in the end, good-guys.
SILOEN
Exactly.
VINNIE
No,
no, no. Not exactly. As long as we're ripping off
money,
no matter from who, we're the bad-guys.
SILOEN
How
so? It's blood money.
VINNIE
We're
the bad guys... in Jesus’ eyes.
Siloen
is taken aback by the comment.
VINNIE
Aren't
we?
SILOEN
Vinnie...
you're all right.
Siloen
gives Vinnie a nudge on the shoulder.
CROSSFADE
TO:
12.
INT. - SILOEN'S ROOM - DAY
A
couple days have gone by. Siloen is chilling out in his room and is startled by
a knock at the door. He opens it and finds Genesis.
SILOEN
Hello,
and what do I owe this visit.
Genesis
has tears in her eyes. She is as pale as a ghost and her breaths are short and
rapid. She has the look as though she is deathly afraid.
SILOEN
What's
wrong?
GENESIS
I...
I...
SILOEN
Come
inside. Come in.
Siloen
leads her inside and shuts the door behind her.
SILOEN
What's
the matter Gen?
GENESIS
It
was Gray. I...
SILOEN
What
about Gray?
GENESIS
I'm
pregnant.
Genesis’s
eyes fill with tears. Siloen is, for a moment in a state of shock but quickly
overcomes it. Siloen comforts her.
SILOEN
There,
there. It's okay.
Siloen
takes Genesis into his arms and holds her as she cries.
SILOEN
I'm
not mad. It's okay, you'll be fine. You under-
stand?
You'll be fine.
Genesis
nods her head "YES" as Siloen continues.
SILOEN
I'll
take care of you. There's a clinic downtown.
I'll
have you go done there and spend a week or so.
You'll
be fine.
Genesis
continues to weep in his arms.
SILOEN
Just
settle down.
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TO:
13.
INT. - CORNER BAR - DAY
Gray
is sitting at the bar drinking a glass of vodka. In the corner, Siloen enters
the bar. He walks over towards Gray and sits beside him.
SILOEN
How
ya doin'?
GRAY
Hey.
SILOEN
Care
to take a walk with me?
GRAY
Where?
SILOEN
I
want to walk and talk.
GRAY
About
what?
Siloen
pulls a twenty out of his wallet and slaps it on the counter to cover the
damages on Gray's order. At that, Siloen turns and heads to the door.
SILOEN
Let's
go.
Gray
gets out of his chair and heads out the door. He follows Siloen out to the back
alleyway.
GRAY
What
is this about?
Just
at the end of his sentence, three goons grab him and throw him to the ground
and begin to beat the living piss out of him. Siloen turns and looks on as he
lights up a cigarette. Gray begins to plead for his life but the beating
continues. Siloen just stands in the corner and watches.
FADE
OUT:
FADE
IN:
14.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE
- NIGHT
Siloen
enters Aramond's office and is immediately greeted by the big man. In the
corner is SIMON REI.
ARAMOND
Siloen,
Siloen. I'm glad your hear. I'd like you to
meet
Simon Rei. He handles all of the transactions
for
the Nightendack case.
Simon
stands up and shakes Siloen's hand.
SILOEN
Good
to meet you.
SIMON
Yah,
I've heard a bit about you. I can't stay though,
I've
got to be going. You know, people to see.
Simon
leaves the office.
SILOEN
Don't
tell me that you have a record being kept?
ARAMOND
Under
Redfield's name of course.
SILOEN
Well,
it's not my business. What can I do you for?
ARAMOND
I
need one of your girls.
SILOEN
When,
tonight?
ARAMOND
Tonight.
I think I earned a little break. Let's say
eight
o'clock.
SILOEN
You
got it. Right here?
ARAMOND
Yep.
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TO:
15.
INT. - JENESIS'S ROOM
- DAY
Vinnie
Carponzo knocks upon Genesis' door. After a few knocks, Genesis finally arrives
and looks through the peep-hole and sees that it is Vinnie. She smiles and
quickly fixes her hair and then opens the door.
VINNIE
Hello
Genesis.
GENESIS
Vinnie.
This is a pleasant surprise. Won't you come
in.
VINNIE
I
had a request for you.
GENESIS
(getting
eager)
And
what is that?
VINNIE
I
was wondering about a date.
Genesis’s
eager smile suddenly turns to a look of insult.
GENESIS
Oh,
I see. Well you'll have to go talk to Siloen about
that
one. Thanks a lot.
VINNIE
No,
no, no. I don't mean that at all. I just want
to...
I just want to... go out that’s all.
GENESIS
Really?
VINNIE
Yeah.
GENESIS
When?
VINNIE
Tonight,
if that's okay with you.
GENESIS
(thinking
for a moment)
Tonight?
VINNIE
Well,
if you have other plans then...
GENESIS
No,
no, no. That's fine, I'll just get ready.
Genesis
heads for the bathroom to get ready. With a half smile, Vinnie waits patiently.
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TO:
16.
INT. - DR. SHARP'S ROADHOUSE
- NIGHT
Vinnie
and Genesis are seated in a booth in the furthest corner of the restaurant,
across from one another.
VINNIE
So
where've you been, I haven't seen you for a bit.
GENESIS
Siloen
sent me to Isseri Clinic.
VINNIE
I
see.
Genesis
begins to weep, but hides her tears.
GENESIS
Vinnie,
I'd prefer not to talk about it. I don't
want
you to make anymore assumptions about me.
VINNIE
I
wasn't making assumptions. I just want to know
what
has happened to you.
GENESIS
I'll
be fine.
VINNIE
I'm
not sure about that. It doesn't seem that way
at
all.
GENESIS
Vinnie...
VINNIE
Yes.
GENESIS
Do
you ever just want to get away? Away from all of
this?
I do. Sometimes it drives me nuts, but I'm
trapped
here.
Vinnie's
stray away to the corner of the table, feeling his shame.
GENESIS
I
wish I could get away from this. As far away from
it
as possible.
Ever
so gently, Vinnie touches Genesis’s hand and then holds it. Genesis returns his
touch with a glance into his eyes and a smile.
CUT
TO:
17.
INT. - GENESIS'S ROOM
- NIGHT
Through
the pitch black there is a sound of keys rattling and then the door opens.
Genesis enters and Vinnie is not with her. The light is suddenly turned on
Genesis is startled.
JENESIS
Siloen!
Siloen
is sitting on the sofa with his hand on the light switch. He smiles and walks
over to Genesis.
SILOEN
How
was your evening?
GENESIS
Listen
Siloen.
Siloen
wastes no time and slaps her in the face.
SILOEN
Do
you have any idea who that was? That was my boss.
GENESIS
I'm
sorry Siloen, I just.
He
slaps her again.
SILOEN
After
all I've done for you, I get this.
Siloen
throws her onto the couch and takes off his belt.
SILOEN
Genesis,
there's one thing you have to learn. That
is
to show me the proper fucking respect.
Siloen
straps her across the back with her belt. Genesis seizes up in pain while
Siloen begins to repeatedly whip her with his belt.
CUT
TO:
18.
EXT. - MALL PLAZA - DAY
Vinnie
is chilling out sitting on a bench drinking a soda. He is alone and letting his
mind trail off. From behind him approaches Siloen.
SILOEN
Hey
Vinnie, what's up?
VINNIE
Good
morning.
SILOEN
Man
have I got a treat for you.
Vinnie
shows no reaction to his statement.
SILOEN
What's
wrong?
VINNIE
I'm
just thinking.
SILOEN
Oh
yeah, what about?
VINNIE
Well...
SILOEN
Come
on, spit it out.
VINNIE
I
was thinking about going clean.
SILOEN
Clean?
Vinnie, take a shower if you wanna be clean!
You
get your head filled up with what people like
to
call the truth and before you know it. Nothing
makes
sense. Ya know Vinnie if life were easy
we'd
all be dead by now.
Vinnie
takes in the advice but does not react.
SILOEN
Come
with me, there's a payphone inside.
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TO:
19.
INT. - MALL LOBBY - DAY
Vinnie
is standing in the corner about ten feet away from Siloen. Siloen is on the
payphone leaning up against it.
SILOEN
Yeah
it's all good. Are you set to go? Good then
where
should we meet? Uhh, somewhere with ice
cream, let's see...
VINNIE
Why
don't we just meet here?
SILOEN
Here's
good. Twenty minutes ok? What do you mean
where's
here? We're at the mall! We'll be in the
Food
Court, I'm hungry.
Vinnie
and Siloen are now stationed at a table, Siloen is munching on french fries and
Vinnie is having nothing.
VINNIE
Who
exactly are we waiting for?
SILOEN
You
remember the half mil we were talking about?
VINNIE
Yeah.
SILOEN
It
be a nice half mil to have wouldn't it? Especially
since
you're going clean and all.
VINNIE
You're
planning to rip off a half million dollars
from
your boss? Just who is going to help you with
this.
At
that moment, in strolls Simon Rei. He greets Siloen and haves himself a seat at
the table.
SILOEN
None
other than Mr. Nightendack's personal accountant.
SIMON
Please
to meet you Vinnie.
VINNIE
Siloen,
I don't want any part of this.
SILOEN
Here
me out first.
VINNIE
Siloen,
I'm not going to rob a bank.
SILOEN
Simon
hear has all the read-outs and bank numbers.
I
need you to be there with me on the floor ground.
We'll
be in and out in three minutes.
VINNIE
Three
minutes?
SILOEN
Three
minutes.
VINNIE
May
I remind you that the local police station is
a
football field away.
SILOEN
Vinnie,
you worry too much.
VINNIE
Yah,
I worry about cops when I'm robbing a bank. I
know
I'm funny like that but I just can't help
myself.
SILOEN
Let
me lay it on the line for you.
Siloen
takes a few French fries, straws and napkins to map out an overhead view of the
terrain.
SILOEN
Alright
listen up, here's the bank and the police
station.
Over this way is a set of train tracks
enclosing
the bank from the city's limits. Across
these
tracks is nothing but God's country, trees,
rocks,
etc. Basically the whole nature walk, find
Jesus
thing.
Vinnie
rolls his eyes.
SILOEN
Both
the bank and the police station are within the
closed
off space. So basically, the train-tracks are
a
wall closing in the city limits.
VINNIE
Right.
SILOEN
Well,
next Thursday night a shipment of coal is being
loaded
up and traveling west-bound, right by our bank.
And
believe me, it's a large shipment.
VINNIE
How
large is large?
SILOEN
The
train is set to hold 97 cars. The railway crossing
down
on Fifth has scheduled a close off for the road
at
about 8:37 on Thursday night. Because nothing would
be
crossing it for forty minutes.
VINNIE
Forty minutes? That's a long train!
SILOEN
Picture
this: nothing can follow you, you get on the
opposite
side of the tracks and your scot-free for
forty
minutes. Vinnie, we'd have forty minutes on
our
hands to get as far away from that bank as
possible
and nobody could follow us.
Vinnie
is impressed with the plan. Siloen, admiring his genius eats one of his fries.
CUT
TO:
20.
EXT. - RAILROAD TRACKS
- DAY
Vinnie
and Siloen are standing on the open railroad tracks. Behind them is the bank
and further to their right, within view is the police station.
SILOEN
This
is it. We're in and out in three minutes. We
get
across the tracks just as the forty minute
train
zips by and we're free. What do you think?
Vinnie
looks up and sighs. He then speaks.
VINNIE
Nice
bridge.
Siloen
stops in his tracks. He is frozen with despair as he looks up and sees a
roadway bridge, running overtop of the train-tracks.
VINNIE
Was
that not in the brochure?
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TO:
21.
INT. - DARKENED BAR - DAY
Gray
is sitting at the bar sipping away. A scenario much similar to the one
described earlier. Siloen enters and comes up behind him.
SILOEN
Gray,
I need a favor.
GRAY
What
the hell do you want?
SILOEN
I
need your help...
GRAY
Me?
What do you need me for? First you beat me up
and
now you want my help?
SILOEN
Oh
don't be such a baby. They were just love taps.
GRAY
Love
taps?
SILOEN
Look,
I know that you and I don't get along so I'm
here
to appeal to your wallet.
GRAY
What
and how much?
SILOEN
We're
pullin' a job. You'll get ten percent of what
we
make which will be nine thousand.
GRAY
Nine
eh?
SILOEN
We're
splittin' it right down the middle. Even shares
for
all.
GRAY
What
do you need?
SILOEN
A
car accident.
GRAY
What?
SILOEN
A
diversion, on the bridge next to the bank. Your car
will
meet another one stationed on the opposite side
of
the bridge. Then report the accident by 9:02. That
will
give any stand-by units a chance to be diverted
away
before they notice anything. Also the bridge will
be
blocked off.
GRAY
Well,
I don't like you but for nine thousand...
SILOEN
Seven
thousand.
GRAY
No
it was nine thousand.
SILOEN
I
said seven thousand.
GRAY
No.
I distinctively heard you say nine.
SILOEN
It
was seven Gray.
GRAY
Was
it?
SILOEN
Yep.
GRAY
Okay,
seven thousand.
CUT
TO:
22.
INT. - GENESIS'S ROOM
- DAY
Genesis
is sitting at the table. She is alone in the apartment and is weeping. After a
short period of time she raises her head and reaches for a knife from the
kitchen and places it against her left wrist. She prepares to apply pressure
and pierce her skin but gives up after a moment. She is then startled by a
knock at the door. Vinnie enters.
VINNIE
Hello.
Am I interrupting?
GENESIS
No.
Vinnie
pulls up a seat by Genesis.
GENESIS
You're
going to help Siloen aren't you?
VINNIE
For
a 170 thousand dollar cut. It's tempting.
GENESIS
Vinnie,
we could go. We could leave right now. You
and
I together.
VINNIE
What
would I turn to? Genesis I have no other life
that
I can turn to. I'm stuck just like you are.
GENESIS
I'm
begging you. Don't rob that place.
VINNIE
Genesis,
with 170 grand we could be set. Then we
could
run away. Together.
GENESIS
But
then it's just the same! We wouldn't be running
away
from anything because it would be right there
following
us, tormenting us. The guilt of hurting
others.
VINNIE
I
want to take you away Genesis but...
GENESIS
Then
let's go. Right now.
VINNIE
But
this is something I need to do.
Vinnie
gets up and approaches the door. He leaves Genesis at the table to drown in her
tears. She gets up and lies down on the couch.
CUT TO:
23.
INT. - SILOEN'S HOTEL ROOM
- NIGHT
Vinnie
and Siloen are chilling out in Siloen's hotel room. Siloen is smoking a
cigarette while Vinnie is sitting in his chair contemplating many thoughts.
Siloen is the first to break the silence.
SILOEN
Vinnie,
can I ask you a question?
VINNIE
Shoot.
SILOEN
Yesterday
you said you were thinking about going
clean.
Why?
VINNIE
Why
do I want to go clean?
SILOEN
What
possessed you to think that?
VINNIE
You
want to know as my friend or as my business
partner
or as my friend?
SILOEN
What
makes us friends Carponzo?
VINNIE
Well,
Daily, friends help each other out when they
need
a hand. I would think that if you weren't my
friend
then you would ask me about a life-changing
decision.
SILOEN
Okay
Mr. Carponzo. Tell me, as my partner in
business,
why is it that you wish to cease leading
this
life?
VINNIE
You
see, Mr. Daily, when you've reached a certain
point
in your career you feel a need for change.
It's
like you've done it already and you're just
getting
tired of it. I need a change.
SILOEN
A
change in your career, eh?
VINNIE
The
job is getting stressful. I just need out.
SILOEN
But
you're going to pull this job right?
VINNIE
I
don't know.
SILOEN
Vinnie,
I need you. I need someone I can trust.
VINNIE
When
you can tell someone that you trust them and
are
comfortable on a first name basis, it usually
implies
that you consider them a friend.
SILOEN
No
it doesn't. Trust and friendship are two com-
pletely
different things.
VINNIE
How
so?
SILOEN
Friends
screw friends over all the time. The very
thought
of utter dependence that we give our so
called
friends is the under-lining boarder of
weakness
that we bestow upon ourselves.
VINNIE
It's
that dependence that makes us human.
SILOEN
It's
that dependence that makes us weak.
What is
a
friend? "Hey, Vinnie do you want to go shoot
some
pool tonight? Vinnie, can I borrow some money?
I
promise I'll pay you back! I haven't gotten
around
to paying you yet. Sorry not yet. I should
have
it really soon. Not yet, but hey, we're still
friends,
right?"
VINNIE
Hmmm.
SILOEN
A
friend is someone who holds you in a vulnerable
position.
Who do you least suspect when something
goes
wrong. Of course, your friends. When your house
is
robbed, when your car is broken into? It's never
the
ones who know where you leave your
spare set
of
keys. It's never the ones who know
what your pin
number
is, how much gas is in your car, who you've
dated,
where your parents live, or who you love.
Their
the ones who the last ones you suspect. But
they're
the most likely to screw you over.
VINNIE
That's
when you know you love someone though. When
you
trust them.
SILOEN
It's
a risk...
VINNIE
...and
risks are what make us human.
Siloen
falls to the back of his chair and takes another puff of his cigarette.
SILOEN
Okay,
Vinnie, tell me, as a friend, why do you
want
to go clean?
VINNIE
What's
the point? You'd laugh.
SILOEN
No,
I won't laugh.
VINNIE
It's
about Jesus.
Siloen
is gets disgruntled and exhales his smoke.
SILOEN
Oh,
I knew it. Somehow I just knew that this was
going
to be about Jesus.
VINNIE
Let's
just forget it.
SILOEN
I
promised I wouldn't laugh, and I didn't.
VINNIE
Yeah,
but you know what I meant.
SILOEN
Okay, okay, go ahead. What's on your mind?
VINNIE
Once
there was a man who walked along the beach
with
Jesus at his side. Behind him were foot-
prints.
For the most part there were two sets of
footprints
running across the beach. The foot-
prints
represented the road of his life.
SILOEN
Vinnie,
you're starting to get poetic on me.
VINNIE
He noticed that during the more trying parts of
his parts of his life that there was only one set
of footprints visible and asked Jesus, “Why is it
that when I needed you most you had abandoned me?”
And then Jesus responded, “I didn’t abandon you,
Those points in your life that you see only one
Set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.”
SILOEN
So what, are you saying that while your worried
about robbing a bank Jesus is carrying you though
it? When you steal money from those who work for
it and feel a little guilty, Jesus is carrying you
through it?
VINNIE
No, not at all.
SILOEN
(confused)
Then what does what you just said have anything
to with you?
VINNIE
When I look at my life and see all the horrible
things that I’ve done to people. I think that
maybe there’s hope. Maybe there’s something I
can do to fix things. Maybe, just maybe somebody
will help me make the right decision.
SILOEN
This, Vinnie, is why you need a friend.
VINNIE
Maybe, or maybe I need to look back and see one
set of footprints.
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24.
EXT. - PARK - DAY
Vinnie
is sitting on a deserted bench in the park. For the longest time, he just sits
and thinks. Should he leave with Genesis or go with Siloen and be set up for
his new life? He ponders many questions.
CROSSFADE
TO:
25.
INT. - SILOEN'S ROOM
- NIGHT
Siloen
is sitting on the couch topless smoking a joint. He stares into space, worried
about what is to happen, excited and afraid. His facial expression of no
emotion remains motionless as Genesis comes up from behind him and gently
kisses his cheek trying to make some form of immense. When she sees no reaction
Genesis becomes upset and stammers away into the other room.
SILOEN
What
are you doing?
Genesis
begins to gather up her things.
GENESIS
I'm
leaving.
SILOEN
You're
leaving? And just where are you going to go?
GENESIS
As
far away from you as possible.
SILOEN
Oh,
this is the thanks I get after all of done for
you?
When I first found you, you were nothing but
a
miserable whore working on the side of the road.
GENESIS
And
now I'm a miserable whore working for criminals.
SILOEN
You're
a respectable whore.
GENESIS
Don't
call me a whore.
SILOEN
All,
I've asked for is a little respect around here.
You've
given me nothing but shit. GET THE HELL OUTTA
HERE
NOW!
Genesis
charges out of the hotel room. Siloen shrugs it off, sits down and finishes his
joint.
CUT
TO:
26.
INT. - VINNIE'S APARTMENT -
NIGHT
Genesis’s
finger scrolls down the list of names next to the intercom and finds the name
"Carponzo". She presses the buzzer. Vinnie opens the door and sees
Genesis standing at his doorway with fear in her eyes.
VINNIE
Come
right in.
Not
before long, Genesis is asleep on Vinnie's bed. She is exhausted and Vinnie let
her crash. Vinnie stands in the doorway to his bedroom and just watches her
sleep. He leans over to her and kisses her cheek.
VINNIE
(whispering)
I'll
take you away Genesis.
CUT
TO:
27.
INT. - SILOEN'S CAR - NIGHT
Siloen
is in the driver's seat. Vinnie is riding shot gun and Simon is in the back.
The three of them are dressed in black. Also in the back is Dougy, the driver.
SIMON
Alright,
this is late night closing period. Vinnie
what
you're going to want to do is keep the front
entrance
sealed off. Siloen will take care of the
nice
ladies working there and I'll hit the safe.
SILOEN
Okay,
the train makes it's pass at 9:11 and so that
gives
us twenty minutes from now. You ready Vinnie?
VINNIE
I'm
ready.
Simon,
Vinnie, and Siloen all exit the car. Siloen turns to Dougy who gets in the
driver's seat.
SILOEN
Okay
Dougy, you've have an ETA of 9 minutes until
Gray
shows up at the bridge.
DOUGY
Alright,
I got it.
SILOEN
Now
Dougy, don't go smash up my car...
DOUGY
(concerned)
What?
Has their been a change of plans?
SILOEN
No.
It's a... It's a joke.
DOUGY
Oh.
Dougy
is puzzled but then laughs to make Siloen feel better.
SILOEN
Aww,
forget it.
Dougy
starts the car and drives off. Siloen, Simon, and Vinnie are now left alone,
each armed with a pistol.
SILOEN
Okay
then, let's split up.
Vinnie
heads to the front and Simon heads to the side. Before Siloen moves, his Cell
phone rings.
SILOEN
Hello.
GRAY
(on
the other end)
Uh,
hi Silly Siloen. Listen I had to stop at Wendy's
for
a minute so I'm going to be a little late.
SILOEN
What
do you mean a little late? How late?
GRAY
About
35 seconds. I hope it doesn't throw off your
sync
too much.
SILOEN
Thirty-five
seconds is fine.
GRAY
Could
I trouble you for 36?
SILOEN
Don't
push it Gray. If you want your six thousand
then
just make sure you're here.
Siloen
hangs up the phone. Dougy is now parked with the radio on, facing the bridge
waiting for Gray's arrival.
CUT
TO:
28.
INT. - BANK - NIGHT
Only
two bank tellers are working at the time. Without warning, three men dressed in
black with black masks on enter the room with guns.
SILOEN
Alright.
Be cool. Don't make a move if you want to
get
through this.
The
bank tellers are frozen in fear and don't move a muscle.
SILOEN
The
account, let's go.
SIMON
Give
me a minute.
Simon
gets on the computer and works his magic. He pulls out the readout of the
Redfield account. Siloen and Vinnie keep the guns on the bank tellers.
SILOEN
Don't
move a muscle.
VINNIE
In
and out?
SILOEN
In
and out.
CUT
TO: Dougy
Dougy is
sitting in the car, waiting for his moment. He’s passing the time by listening
to tunes and eating chips. Finally he puts attempts to start the car but for
some reason it’s not working.
CUT
TO: Gray
Gray
is in his car listening to tunes and singing along while beating his hands
against the steering wheel as he approaches the bank.
CUT
TO: The Bank
Vinnie
is sitting next to one of the bank tellers who is frozen in fear. His gun is
exposed but it not pointed at her.
VINNIE
You okay?
The
bank teller doesn’t respond but she looks up at him with a face of helplessness
and curiosity.
VINNIE
You’ll
be all right. We’ll be done here soon
Enough
and then you can go home. Okay?
The bank teller nods “YES” to Vinnie. At that moment, Siloen's cell phone
rings. Agitated, he grabs it and answers it.
SILOEN
What?
DOUGY
(on
the other end)
Car
won't start.
SILOEN
What
do you mean the car won't start?
DOUGY
I
mean, I'm turnin' the keys and the engine ain't
goin'
vrrrrrr vrrrrr.
Dougy
is startled by the sudden shock of a knock on his side window. Standing outside
is a police officer. He signals Dougy to roll down the window.
DOUGY
Ummm,
I gotta go.
Dougy
hangs up the phone. Siloen turns to Vinnie.
SILOEN
We
have this under control Vinnie. Get out there.
When
you push the key in, tap the gas and then
smack
the dashboard really hard. Then get your ass
back
in here.
VINNIE
Nice car Siloen. Real Nice.
Vinnie
exits the bank.
CUT
TO: Dougy
The
police officer continues to knock on the window. Finally Dougy gives in and
rolls it down.
OFFICER
How
ya doin'?
DOUGY
Fine,
just fine.
OFFICER
Do
you realize that you’re parked in a Federal
Parking
Zone? You’re going to have to move your
vehicle.
DOUGY
Yeah,
I'll move it in one second.
OFFICER
Sir,
would you step out of the car please?
Dougy,
feeling frustrated steps out of the car and faces the police officer. In the
distance, he sees Vinnie Carponzo walking towards the car from the bank.
DOUGY
Uh
oh. Gotta think.
Dougy
makes a break for it. He runs in the opposite direction of the bank. The police
officer screams at him to halt and then chases after him on foot. After the
coast is clear, Vinnie arrives on scene.
VINNIE
Okay
Dougy, Listen. When you turn...
Dougy
is nowhere to be seen.
VINNIE
What
the?
Vinnie
turns his head to see Gray's car pulling up towards the bridge. Quickly he gets
in the car and tries to start it.
CUT
TO: Siloen & Simon
Siloen
is still standing by the door with his gun pointed at the bank tellers while
Simon is at the computer crunching in numbers. Boldly, one of the bank tellers
reaches underneath the desk and presses the silent alarm.
SIMON
I
found it.
SILOEN
Just
hurry it up. What's taking Vinnie so long?
CUT
TO: Vinnie & Gray
Vinnie
finally gets the car started and races it up towards the bridge as Gray's car
draws ever so closer.
VINNIE
Come
on. Let's go.
Suddenly
the car stalls.
VINNIE
What
the hell?
Gray,
grobbling up the last of his burger, is suddenly confused when his car stops
moving. He's out of gas.
GRAY
Bull
shit I'm out of gas!
Vinnie
begins to struggle with the ignition as the two cars, going about 3 km/h
approach one another. Vinnie hits the gas pedal but it does nothing. Finally
the two cars hit, with a force of not even one Newton without even denting the
bumpers.
VINNIE
Shit.
GRAY
Shit.
CUT
TO: Siloen & Simon
SIMON
Shit!
While
crunching in the numbers, Simon failed somewhere down the lign because the
alarm has just gone off.
SILOEN
Shit!
The
safe opens up and to the delighted eyes of Siloen and Simon is the half million
in cash.
SIMON
We've
got to load this up now!
SILOEN
The
train's not going to be here for five more
minutes.
We've got time, but the cops'll be here
in less then two. Let's
hope they reported the
accident, that'll buy us
a little time.
CUT
TO: Vinnie & Gray
Vinnie and Gray get out the cars that are still in perfect condition parked about a millimeter away from the other.
GRAY
Hear
that Vinnie? Sounds like an alarm!
VINNIE
They'll
load up the money. The train isn't coming
for
another five min---
Vinnie's
sentence is interrupted by the choo-choo sound of a train.
VINNIE
It's
early. The train is early. GET DOWN THERE!
I'll
park a barricade.
Siloen
and Simon quickly run out of the bank with the bags of money but are interrupted
by three cops with guns pointed at them. Siloen opens fire on them and a small
shoot out begins.
CUT
TO: Siloen & Simon
Siloen
hears the train from inside the bank.
SILOEN
It's
early! Yes!! It's early. Keep crunching those
Numbers!
CUT
TO: Vinnie & Gray
VINNIE
Shit!!
It's early!
Vinnie
sets up the small barricade and then heads down towards the tracks. Meanwhile,
Siloen and Gray have already gotten across. Simon heads off to the side.
Bullets continue to zoom in their direction. Vinnie bursts onto scene and runs
as fast as he came for the tracks as the train comes closer and closer.
POLICE
Freeze,
you’re under arrest!
Siloen
and Gray are already safe and Vinnie is running as fast as his feet can carry
him. But Vinnie trips on a rock and falls to the ground as everything goes into
slow motion.
SILOEN
Get
up Vinnie!
POLICE
Stop
where you are!!
Vinnie
lays on the ground, completely out of breath. He hears the sound of the
approaching cops and then his mind trails off.
CROSSFADE
TO:
29. INT. -
KITCHEN - DAY
Vinnie
looks at himself in the mirror inside his kitchen. He glances to his left and
sees that the coffee has finished brewing. Genesis returns.
GENESIS
I
always wondered when you would come back into my
life.
But I was never sure as to what exactly I
would
say. I didn't know whether I wanted to slap
you
or kiss you so I did both. I hope you don't
mind.
VINNIE
Yeah,
it's no big deal.
GENESIS
Was
the money so important?
VINNIE
I've
had a year to myself, Genesis. Plenty of time
to
think, to dwell on thoughts. You're what's
important
in my life.
GENESIS
Vinnie...
VINNIE
Genesis,
do you know where Siloen is?
GENESIS
Not
exactly. Why?
VINNIE
I
think there's more than meets the eye as to what
happened
that night.
GENESIS
Like
what?
VINNIE
That's
what I need to find out. I need a place to
stay.
You don't mind do you?
GENESIS
It's
your apartment.
VINNIE
Thanks.
GENESIS
Vinnie.
There's so much I wanted to say to you, and
I
never did get to tell you. I was so worried that
I'd
never see you again.
VINNIE
Hey,
I'm a survivor. Siloen's get help me out.
GENESIS
Siloen's
going to help you?
VINNIE
Yep.
I've got to go now. I'll be back in a few hours
and
we'll talk then.
Vinnie
heads to the door. Genesis stops him before he leaves.
GENESIS
Vinnie?
VINNIE
What
is it?
GENESIS
When
are you going to take me away?
VINNIE
The
minute I straighten this mess out.
CUT
TO:
30.
INT. - COFFEE SHOP - DAY
The coffee
shop is fairly empty. Only a few customers in pairs of twos are sitting at
their tables and the commotion level is minimal. Sitting at a table alone
sipping a coffee is Siloen Daley. Vinnie enters and pulls a chair right up to
Siloen's table.
VINNIE
Somebody
tried to kill me.
SILOEN
(shocked)
VINNIE!
VINNIE
It
was someone from Aramond's outfit. What's going
on
there's something you obviously didn't tell me.
SILOEN
What
are you doing here? I thought you were gone
for
good.
VINNIE
I
mean it Siloen, who wants me dead and why?
SILOEN
You're
supposed to be dead.
VINNIE
Then
kill me.
SILOEN
I
can't kill you.
VINNIE
You
called me before.
SILOEN
Yeah,
but that was under the condition that you'd
never
show your face in this town again.
VINNIE
Someone
tried to kill me before I came back.
SILOEN
My
advice Vinnie, leave town. Your being here puts
you
and me at risk.
VINNIE
I
want to know what the hell happened.
SILOEN
You’re
better off not knowing.
VINNIE
Where's
Aramond. How does he know I'm alive?
SILOEN
Vinnie.
Let's go outside and we'll talk.
VINNIE
Okay.
Vinnie
and Siloen get out of their chairs and head to the door. They make their way to
the back alley, behind the coffee shop.
VINNIE
Alright
Siloen, start talking!
Siloen
pulls out his gun and fires it at Vinnie.
VINNIE
Jesus!
Vinnie
jumps out of the way behind a dumpster and some crates. Siloen fires a few more
shots. Vinnie gets up while Siloen reloads his gun and makes a run for it. As
Vinnie scatters off Siloen fires two more shots which both miss.
SILOEN
Shit.
CUT
TO:
32.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE
- DAY
Aramond
is sitting down at his desk talking on the phone as Siloen enters the room.
Siloen very slowly and quietly takes a seat in the chair in front of Aramond's
desk.
ARAMOND
(on
the phone)
Are
you kidding me? You’re talking to the most
powerful
man in this entire state. Governor Night-
endack
works for me... I'll make it legal. Listen
I know this sounds bad
but can I call you back?
Thanks, bye.
Aramond
now turns to Siloen with a half smile. Siloen, however, has the grim look of
failure in his eyes.
ARAMOND
What
happened?
SILOEN
Vinnie's
back. He's alive.
ARAMOND
Yes,
this I know. What I don't know is why he is
alive?
You let him go didn't you?
SILOEN
I
thought that if you were to leave the scene he
wouldn't
make is and be arrested.
ARAMOND
Arrested!
Siloen, that doesn't make things any
better!
That would encourage an investigation into
the
matter wouldn't it?
SILOEN
Forgive
me.
ARAMOND
This
city is my oyster. A simple bank robbery with
three
dead robbers was what I wanted. And you messed
it
all up.
SILOEN
I'm
sorry.
ARAMOND
Sorry
doesn't cut it, Siloen. Jerith Coggswood is
in
jail. Do you have any idea what would happen
if
this figured out? The Greg Redfield account was
fraud
that could only be deciphered through a party
that
knew what exactly they were going after. A
man
who knew the exact details of it's origin. A
man
who knew that the account was not created by
an
associate of Jerith Coggswood.
SILOEN
This
should be Rufus's problem!
ARAMOND
It's
my problem now! And yours too.
CROSSFADE
TO:
33.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE
- NIGHT
In the
office standing in front of Aramond's desk are Darren Nightendack and Rufus
Howser. Aramond sits now in his office, this time with a look of interest on
his face as he listens to the words of Rufus.
RUFUS
Is
it not plain to see that Jerith Coggswood is on
the
verge of winning the public trust? I've been
born
and raised here on white pride has been one
of
many things that I've believed in. People are
starting
to loose sight in that.
NIGHTENDACK
Is
this really about cultural difference?
RUFUS
Let
me put it this way. This place is the grounds
that
me and all of my brothers have live our whole
lives.
This is not going to remain the same if some
damn
nigger is in office.
ARAMOND
People
aren't going to be quick to see your point.
RUFUS
That's
why Coggswood needs to be turned into some-
thing
he isn't.
NIGHTENDACK
You
mean frame him?
RUFUS
Just
half an hour ago, some niggers came in here
and
started calling my brothers racist and said
that
Coggswood has the wave of the future.
NIGHTENDACK
He
had no right to be here.
RUFUS
Damn
right. I'm going to head downstairs.
Rufus
leaves the office. Aramond and Nightendack are now alone. Aramond looks up to
him.
ARAMOND
Are
you prepared to go all the way with this?
NIGHTENDACK
What
do I have to do anyway?
ARAMOND
You've
got to ask yourself what you're goal is. Is
it
your own gain or the good of the people? What is
it?
The people, of course. What do they know? What
does
anyone know? They know what we tell them to know
and
that's how it works. That's why I'm up here and
their
down there.
NIGHTENDACK
Just
so long as my name isn't attached to any of this.
ARAMOND
Darren,
Darren, Darren. You're not chickening out are
you?
NIGHTENDACK
No,
I'm not chickening out.
ARAMOND
Then
what is your problem, there's nothing to worry
about.
With your savvy and my know-how, you’re going
to be
the next governor of this state, don't forget
that. It's the people
that need to be reminded.
A
knock on the door interrupts their conversation. The door opens revealing
Siloen.
SILOEN
Mr.
Aramond.
ARAMOND
Just
a moment, Siloen. I'll be with you in a moment.
Siloen
waits outside. Aramond turns back to Nightendack and places his hands of his
shoulders.
ARAMOND
Just
remember: The good of the people. We don't
Need a
nigger running things around here.
Nightendack
nods, then turns and leaves.
CUT
TO:
34.
EXT. - BANK - NIGHT
Siloen
and Gray are on the opposite side of the tracks. Vinnie is on the ground, on
his stomach. The cops are behind chasing after him and drawing nearer and
nearer. Vinnie gathers up an ounce of strength and
gets
up and runs as fast as he can. The train is drawing closer. The train has come
into view and Vinnie jumps as far as can just skinning the side of the train as
he makes it the other side. He turns his head to his right to find Siloen.
Siloen is about thirty feet away and has his gun in his hand. Vigorously, he
shoots Gray in the head.
VINNIE
What
the hell?
Vinnie
runs away but Siloen notices him. Siloen chases after him until finally they
confront.
VINNIE
What
happened? You killed Gray!
SILOEN
You
made it.
VINNIE
Gray's
dead.
SILOEN
You
shouldn't have made it Vinnie.
VINNIE
What's
going on?
SILOEN
I
can't kill you. Not you. Not Vinnie Carponzo.
VINNIE
Siloen...
SILOEN
Vinnie.
You have to run away. Run away and don't
ever
return. I'll see to it that they know that
you're
dead but if they ever find out then they'll
hunt
you down.
VINNIE
What's
going on?
SILOEN
In
a minute. For now we've got to get out of here.
CUT
TO:
35.
EXT. - WOODS - NIGHT
Siloen
and Vinnie run into the woods leading into the deserted out- skirts. They run
as fast as they can. Finally, they come to a stop.
SILOEN
Do
you hear that Vinnie?
VINNIE
Hear
what?
SILOEN
Sh.
It's coming from over here.
VINNIE
Is
it the police?
SILOEN
I
don't know.
Siloen
leans over and pulls back the branches blocking his view. Once the view is
clear he sees a large burning cross approximately twelve feet high. Surrounding
it are several men dressed in white cloaks.
SILOEN
Stay
low Vinnie.
Rufus's
face is covered by a white hood and he is holding a large burning torch.
RUFUS
We
call this session of pray, before the eyes of
God
and before all of us. This night is to be
marked
as a special one for all of us.
Vinnie
leans over so he can see too. Siloen and Vinnie both look on.
VINNIE
We'd
better get out of here.
SILOEN
You'd better get out of here. Vinnie,
promise me
that
you'll never come back. Go, now!
Vinnie,
not understanding what is happening, takes Siloen's advice and runs as fast as
he can through the dark woods.
CROSSFADE
TO:
36.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE
- DAY
It is
now the present and the same scenario in which Siloen and Aramond were speaking
earlier. Siloen sits in his chair biting his nails as Aramond speaks.
ARAMOND
You
failed me Siloen.
Siloen
makes no mark of apology but has a look of fear in his eye.
ARAMOND
Vinnie
must be found. He must be silenced forever.
SILOEN
You
got it.
Siloen
sits up out of his chair and exits the office. After he is gone Aramond picks
up the intercom and hits the button.
CUT
TO:
37.
INT. - SILOEN'S HOTEL ROOM
- NIGHT
Siloen
is sitting alone by himself, pondering thoughts about what is to become of
Vinnie. He lies, sprawled out on the bed with a joint in hand. His moment of
relaxation is interrupted by a knock upon his door. Siloen picks on his gun and
heads to the door. Slowly he opens it for RUFUS HOWSER.
RUFUS
What's
the matter with you?!
SILOEN
(placing the gun on the table)
Oh,
nothing, nothing.
RUFUS
You've
really screwed things up Siloen. You've screwed
up
big time!
Siloen
parks himself back down on the chair.
SILOEN
Looks
like we've both got problems.
Rufus
sits on the edge of the bed not far from Siloen. Siloen hands him the joint on
Rufus inhales a puff.
SILOEN
My
women's run away from me, my shit's just gone
hay-wire.
I don't even know anymore. I almost want
to
go clean.
RUFUS
This
is my head on the line.
SILOEN
Yeah,
your fucking KKK bullshit...
RUFUS
Bullshit?!
SILOEN
This
is starting to get on my-
RUFUS
Bullshit?!
Why don't we talk about bullshit for a
minute?
SILOEN
Sure
go ahead.
RUFUS
A
worthless pimp that isn't worth a dime to anyone,
strutting
his stuff around like he owns this town.
An
insignificant wreck of a human being with his
head
so far up Aramond's ass that he can't even see
the
direction his life is heading in.
SILOEN
Oh
really.
RUFUS
A
man with no cause with fighting for. When I think
of
all the work I've done for God, for my brothers,
for
my family, and for myself.
SILOEN
(mocking Rufus)
Kill
all the niggers! Burn them! Sacrifice
them to
God!
RUFUS
Work
that betters our society. Work for our holy father
when
nobody listens to him.
SILOEN
Have
you heard the poem of Footprints?
RUFUS
Yes.
A man walks along the beach, the beach repre-
senting
his life. Along the way, he sees two sets
of foot print, one his
own and the other that of
Jesus. He notices that
during the more trying parts
of his life he sees only
one set of footprints and
asks the lord, "why
is it that during my time of
need that there is only
my set of footprints? Why
would you abandon me when
I need you most?" and
the lord replies,
"During those times of grief,
it was then that I
carried you..."
SILOEN
Vinnie
Carponzo told me that story. It made me think.
RUFUS
It
made you think about your life and where it's
headed.
SILOEN
(getting furious)
There
is nothing wrong with my life!
RUFUS
A
seventeen year old girl comes off the street. Oh,
that looks like good money!
SILOEN
Look!
A black man is crossing the street! Let's
burn him and his fucking family.
RUFUS
Pushers
like you make me want to puke!
SILOEN
I love Genesis!
RUFUS
What's
love to you? You're a disgusting
pimp.
SILOEN
(fighting
through tears and anger)
What's
love to you!? Genocide? Sacrificing niggers
to
God? What's love to you?
RUFUS
You
badly need Jesus...
SILOEN
Fuck
Jesus!!
Rufus
drops every single thought racing through his head. He stares blankly at Siloen
on account of what was just said.
RUFUS
What
did you say?!
SILOEN
What
have I ever been but the shit on his boot.
RUFUS
You
take that back and thank the lord you have air
in
your lungs!!
SILOEN
Along
my beach there's been only one set of foot-
steps!
MINE!
RUFUS
(absolutely
irate)
You take back what you said
SILOEN
Fuck
you! Fuck God! Fuck Genesis for not appreciating
what
I've done for her. Fuck--
RUFUS
Fuck
everyone but you, is that it?
Siloen
can barely talk because he's so worked up. He tries to choke out words but
nothing comes over Rufus' voice.
RUFUS
God
fucked you over did he? God made you a pimp?
God
made you lick the shit off Aramond's boot?
You
are white my friend! You are one of God's
children!
Siloen
can barely breathe. He finally catches his breath and turns to Rufus.
SILOEN
You
don't know God. What the fuck do you know but
murder
and genocide? One day when you realize that
there
are things you just don't do, God is going
to
strike you down. Get out of here...
RUFUS
When
we're all worm food. I'm going to look down at
your
rotting soul from heaven and laugh...
Rufus
storms out of the room. Once all is silent, Siloen buries his head in the bed,
wiping away his tears and speaks to himself or perhaps to someone else who may
be listening.
SILOEN
Help
me. Help me, please. Just tell me what to do.
CUT
TO:
38.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE - NIGHT
Aramond
is on the phone with Nightendack. Nightendack is panicking on the other end.
Here is a series of shots that cut back and forth between the scenarios during
the telephone conversation.
NIGHTENDACK
You
still haven't found this guy Carponzo yet?
ARAMOND
Carponzo
isn't a worry of ours now.
NIGHTENDACK
What
is it?
CUT
TO:
39.
INT. - DARKENED BAR (1F)
- NIGHT
A very
intimate shot of Rufus sitting alone at the bar with a glass of vodka. He only
sips it slowly as he is drowning in a sea of thoughts. The silence is broken
when a short and well-groomed black man walks up to him and sits next to him.
BLACK
MAN
You
look down my friend.
Rufus
is obviously irritated but says nothing. Instead he wallows in his thoughts
ignoring the man beside him.
BLACK
MAN
If
you don’t want to talk that is fine. I just
wanted
to pass on the word of Jesus Christ.
The
man sets a small card down in front of Rufus’s drink. It’s a picture of Jesus
with text written on the back from a church that Rufus is not familiar with.
Rufus pays no mind to it. He simple grobbles as if to say “get away” and takes
another sip.
BLACK
MAN
Peace
of Christ be with you my brother.
With
no further word, the man gets up off the stool and proceeds outside of the bar.
Rufus, not ever looking once in the direction of the man, finally glances down
at the card.
CUT
TO:
40.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE - NIGHT
Aramond
continues his telephone conversation with Nightendack. The conversation
continues to become very heated.
ARAMOND
Your
job! This is about the common good.
NIGHTENDACK
It's
about the common good.
ARAMOND
Howser
plays an intricate role in this new
government
and so if you're not listening to me
then
listen to him. Just hold out. Deny every-
thing
to the press.
NIGHTENDACK
Oh,
the press. Accusations are killing me. You've
got
to get this thing buried and buried fast.
ARAMOND
I'll
take care of it.
CUT
TO:
41.
INT. - DARKENED BAR (1F)
- NIGHT
Rufus
reads the card but does not pick it up off the table. He simply skims through
the lines. Finally it a short fit of anger, he throws a dollar bill on the
counter to pay for his drink and then storms out of the bar.
CUT
TO:
42.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE - NIGHT
Siloen
interrupts the conversation as he enters Aramond's office and waits patiently
for him to get off the phone.
NIGHTENDACK
Listen
to me. Tomorrow’s the interview. Every local
news
broadcast in this state is going to be showing
it
live. I will not be made a complete ass of because
of
your fuck-ups.
ARAMOND
Don't
talk to me that way. Don't you ever talk to
me
that way again. Keep your mouth shut, this
conversation
is over.
Aramond
hangs up the phone and turns to Siloen who has a slightly uncomfortable and
nervous atmosphere, which is unusual for him.
ARAMOND
What?!
SILOEN
I
want out.
ARAMOND
What?
SILOEN
I
want out. I want out for good.
ARAMOND
Is
this a desk job in which you can just waltz into
my
office and give me your two weeks?
SILOEN
I
don't want your money. I no longer want your pro-
tection.
I want out.
ARAMOND
The
entire state is balancing on my shoulders. This
Carponzo
guy is running around with information that
could
bring down our government and even the state
of
our economy. Now is not the time for you to play
prodigal
son to Mama Dailey now is it.
CUT
TO:
43.
INT. - BACK LOT OUTSIDE BAR
- NIGHT
The
man is proceeding on his way through the back alley way where there is nobody
to be seen. Rufus, lurking in the shadows, follows him and finally catches up
to him. Once he does, he grabs the man and throws him into the wall and
proceeds to beat him up.
RUFUS
What
the fuck do you know about Jesus?
Rufus
continues to kick him in the stomach and through vicious punches at him. The
man does not fight back. He simply holds his hands up in an attempt to calm
Rufus down.
RUFUS
Tell
me! Come on, tell me!
Rufus
picks up crowbar and whacks him in the back as hard as he can. He continues to
do so repeatedly.
RUFUS
You
don’t know Jesus! You don’t fucking know
Jesus!
CUT
TO:
44.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE - NIGHT
Siloen
in heat of tears and anger continues to debate with Aramond about what is to be
done.
SILOEN
I've
given my whole life for you and your cause. I'm
not
asking for my life back, I'm just asking for a
chance
to fix it.
ARAMOND
Go!
Just get out!
Siloen
leaves the room in a gust of relief but yet light tears of sadness and fury
still invoke his gesture.
CUT
TO:
45.
INT. - BACK LOT OUTSIDE BAR - NIGHT
Finally
Rufus smashes the crowbar across the man’s head. It begins to bleed profusely
and before Rufus can take a breath, the man is dead. Rufus drops the crowbar
and steps away from the corpse.
CUT
TO:
46.
EXT. - CASA BONA VISTA
- DAY
Siloen
exits the hotel and into the parking lot. He gets into his car and lets out a
long sigh of relief. After a moment of clarity he puts the key in the ignition
and starts the car. He listens to the song on the radio that comes on for a
moment before he pulls out. In front of his car, about fifteen feet away,
stands a man in a trench coat, just staring at Siloen. At first Siloen is
confused but the man pulls out a machine gun and Siloen reacts
SILOEN
Oh
shit.
The
machine gun burst into fire, shattering the windshield and spilling Siloen's
blood. The calmly walks away leaving Siloen's dead body in the front seat.
FADE
OUT:
FADE
IN:
47.
INT. - VINNIE'S APARTMENT
- NIGHT
Genesis
is sitting on the couch in tears, cuddling a pillow. The front door opens and
in steps Vinnie Carponzo. Quietly he takes off his shoes and heads into living
room.
VINNIE
You
heard?
GENESIS
I
just found out.
Vinnie
doesn't sit down. He just stands, still in his jacket and listens to Genesis.
GENESIS
All
in all I'm glad. Because, I'm free now. I'm
free
from him, but I won't lie by saying that he
meant nothing to me.
VINNIE
I
understand. He was an okay guy, even though he
tried
to kill me.
GENESIS
(starting
to cry)
Sometimes
at night, I dream. A dream of a small
boy
who is no more then one year old. Oh God,
he's beautiful. He has
blue eyes and soft blond
hair and he holds my
hand. It feels like he's
taking away some of my
pain. I reach over to feel
his skin but I can't.
Something is stopping me.
I dream this dream every
night. Every night he
appears to me and he
speaks to me.
VINNIE
What
does he say?
GENESIS
(barely
getting the words
out
passed her tears)
He
says, "Don't be afraid. I love you and I'm here
always
to protect you." I cry when here him
speak.
Last night though, he said in the most
heavenly
voice I've ever heard, "I forgive you,
mother."
Genesis
buries her head in the pillow and weeps almost uncontrollably.
GENESIS
What
could I do? What choice did I have? I did the
right
thing! I know I did. What could have i ever
done
for this little boy? What would he have thought
of
his mother...? He would've seen me as nothing
but
a miserable whore!
VINNIE
He
would've saw the exact same way that I see you,
beautiful.
GENESIS
I
didn't make a mistake...
VINNIE
You
did. And you have no desire to admit that then
you
don't deserve his forgiveness.
GENESIS
Oh,
what about you?
VINNIE
I
don't admit that anything I've ever done has been
right.
Nothing.
All is
silent. Only the sound of Genesis’s whimpering can be heard.
VINNIE
Only
by knowing your fault can you be sorry and be
forgiven.
Understand that Genesis. A year ago I
should
have taken you away, and for that I'm sorry
but
things aren't always that easy.
Vinnie
leaves the room. Genesis wipes the tears from her face but still she can’t step
them from coming out.
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TO:
48.
INT. - MALL PLAZA - NIGHT
Vinnie
is sitting all by his lonesome pondering many thoughts. Although his thoughts
are interrupted by the reappearance of a familiar face.
VINNIE
Simon
Rei!
SIMON
Vinnie...
VINNIE
Are
you here to kill me too?
SIMON
No.
Vinnie I've been waiting for you.
VINNIE
What
happened?
SIMON
The
whole thing was a set up, right from the very
beginning.
Coggswood's campaign was set up under an
anonymous
name, this was leaked out to Aramond's
outfit
who fitted in under secret documents the
name
Gregory Samuel Redfield.
VINNIE
The
fake account.
SIMON
All
the spilling of blood money, the half million,
it
was all set up. They just needed an attempted
bank
robbery and rupture of the account to have
it
exposed and put Jerith Coggswood behind bars.
VINNIE
Why?
SIMON
One
name, that's all you need. Rufus Howser.
VINNIE
(angry)
Damn
that pisses me off! An innocent man went to
jail
for this.
SIMON
I
have the documents to prove it.
Simon
shuffles a folder in front of Vinnie bearing multiple papers describing the
Redfield account and it's creation.
SIMON
If
they knew I had this, I'd been marked.
VINNIE
We've
got to get this to the police.
SIMON
What
are you nuts? We robbed the bank.
VINNIE
You
were deceived.
SIMON
I'm
still a criminal. I'm not going to put myself in
a
position in which I could be named an accessory.
VINNIE
An
innocent man is in jail.
SIMON
Better
him then me. I'm leaving town and I suggest
that
you do the same.
Simon
gathers up his stuff and leaves. Vinnie follows him downstairs to the parking
lot via elevator.
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49.
INT. - UNDERGROUND MALL PARKING LOT
- DAY
The
elevator finally reaches the lowest level, the parking lot. Vinnie and Simon
exit the elevator and proceed walking until a bullet blazes by Vinnie’s head.
Vinnie takes cover. Standing some ways away is Rufus Howser holding a gun. He
turns around and sees Simon lying dead on the ground with a bullet in his head.
RUFUS
Show
yourself Vinnie.
Vinnie
gathers up the documents that Simon was holding and slowly creeps along the
side of the parked cars trying to evade Rufus.
RUFUS
I
know you're here somewhere. Stop hiding and give
me
those documents Vinnie.
Rufus
is sweating profusely as he tries to hunt Vinnie down. Rufus fires his gun
again. Vinnie runs up through the exit gate and manages to evade Rufus. Before
he reaches the gate, Rufus finds him. Rufus fires his gun and misses. He runs
onto the driveway just as an oncoming car is passing. The car rams Rufus and
sends him flying onto the windshield, and then he rolls onto the ground. A
police siren flashes, stopping Vinnie dead in his tracks.
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TO:
50.
INT. - POLICE STATION
- DAY
The
police station is fairly busy as Vinnie is taken inside. The next thing he
realizes is a cop going through the documents that Simon was carrying.
POLICE
MAN
What
is all this?
VINNIE
It’s
information on the Redfield case. It maps out
Aramond’s
whole plan and all the players involved
in
it.
The
Police Man is stunned at first but then continues to go through it with a half
smile on his face.
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TO:
51.
INT. - ARAMOND'S OFFICE
- DAY
Aramond
is on the phone talking, sitting in his desk. The door is flung open and
several policemen in suits enter.
POLICEMAN
Howard
Aramond, we have a warrant for your arrest.
You
have the right to remain silent. Anything you
say
can and will be held against you in a court
of
law.
Aramond
looks on at the police in shock.
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TO:
52.
INT. - VINNIE'S APARTMENT
- DAY
Genesis
is drinking her morning cup of coffee and reading the news- paper. The headline
of the newspaper reads: "Governor Nightendack Impeached". Off to the
side there is a small article with a picture of Jerith Coggswood titled,
"Coggswood Released After Wrongful Imprison- ment". She places her
coffee down and holds up her gun. With a calm face with a single tear flowing
from her eye she holds the gun to her head. She’s interrupted by the sound of
her phone.
GENESIS
Hello.
VINNIE
Hello
Genesis.
All is
silent for a brief moment.
VINNIE
Genesis?
The
scene cuts back and forth between Genesis at home and Vinnie in the prison
phone booth, sitting down.
GENESIS
I can’t go on anymore Vinnie.
VINNIE
Genesis, it’s over.
GENESIS
No. It’s never going to end, is it?
VINNIE
You
can’t change the past Genesis. But you can
Make
up for it. Please... Listen.
GENESIS
What's
going to happen?
VINNIE
It
doesn't matter Genesis. What matters is that
you're
free. I told you I would take you away from
all
of this. You're free.
Genesis
wipes the small tear from her eye.
GENESIS
Last
night, I dreamt of my son. He said to me that
he'd
always be there for me. He said that you would
forever
be looking after me. But most of all, last
night,
I told him that I was sorry. I told him that
I
would give anything just to hold him in my arms
but
I couldn't. Vinnie... he forgave me. He forgave
me.
From
the other end of the phone, Vinnie begins to get misty-eyed as well. Slowly he
wipes the tears from his face.
GENESIS
I
was wrong. I've been wrong about a lot of things.
I
wish I could go back and change what has happened
but
I can't. The road up ahead is what is important
right?
VINNIE
Yes.
Always remember that.
GENESIS
Vinnie,
it feels like... it feels like...
Genesis moves the gun away from her head. She shutters for a moment and then places it on the table.
GENESIS
...We’re free...
FADE
TO BLACK
THE END