modern american literature
Section 2 – Final Exam Notes
Blood
on the Forge
How
it Feels to Be Colored Me
The
Blacker the Berry
The
Negro Speaks of Rivers
Mother
to Son
The
Weary Blues
I,
Too
Mulatto
Songs
for a Dark Girl
Vagabonds
Genius
Child
Refugee
in America
Madam
and her Madam
Madam’s
Calling Card
Silhouette
Visitors
to the Black Belt
Note
on Commercial Theatre
Democracy
Harlem
Dancer
If
We Must Die
from
Cane
Georgia’s
Dusk
Fern
Invisible
Man
The
Man Who was Almost a Man
Going
to Meet the Man
Lady
Lazarus
Arial
Daddy
Howl
Dutchman
An
Agony
A
Poem for Willie Best
Will
They Cry When You’re Gone, You Bet
There are two questions you should ask of a modernist text:
1.
In what sense is this a modernist text?
2.
What kind of a modernist is the author?
*** We’ve seen every type of modernist author thus far in this
class. They include: Regionalists
(Masters), Experimentalists (Eliot), Protest Lit. (Yezierski, Sanburg, &
Miller), Feminist (Millay), Harlem Renaissance (Hurston, Thurman – although
Thurman is also classified as an experimentalist… & Attaway)
The Rise of Wealth – From a handful of millionaires before the civil
war, the number grew to over 4,000 by the early 1890s. With agrarian control of Congress ended by
secession, the government was able to enact a series of laws that gave added
power to Northern industrial interests.
Railroad subsidies, the National Banking Act, the relaxation of
immigration laws, increases in the tariff – these not only helped to achieve
victory, but continued, after the war, to provide convenient channels for rapid
industrial growth.
The Growth of the City/The City as the Site of Regeneration –
Between the wars city life – and, of course, the mind it fostered – came to
dominate American experience. Like the
increase in wealth, the city created new aspirations and new ways of satisfying
them. Both helped to shape the new,
widened consciousness of the age.
Nowhere more than the cities were the contrasts between poverty and
wealth so apparent or appalling.
Immigration – Cities were the first – and most often the last –
stop of the waves of immigrants that came to America’s shores following the
Civil War. Immigrants had decided
effects upon the American character; they were also a force for change. The immigrant, who had long used America as
a symbol of the Promised Land, helped to produce, as much as the Frontier, the
American character.
Technology – In a country ostensibly committed to agrarian
visions, technology was bound to generate feelings of anxiety. Most of the fears of technology, however,
were allayed by the abundance and luxury, which seemed to result from it: the
Pullman car, with “sofas and arm-chairs, bulging with soft and velvet-bound
cushions,” subdued and tranquilized any thought of menace.
Rapidly increasing wealth, the
rise of the city, expanding immigration, a widened spirit of reform, mass
education, a new scientific point of view, and a recognition of technology as a
way of life – these were the interests that modified, contradicted, and merged
with each other in American culture during the period between the civil war and
the first World War. The changes were
so rapid and wholesale that Americans found it difficult to accommodate them in
the mind.
It was through American writers
that the American consciousness was preserved and slowly began to evolve. Writers of the time understood and lived up
to their obligation to their fellows.
Immediately after the Civil War, in a direct counteraction to the
breakdown of consciousness and the loss of tradition that war always brings,
these writers turned almost as a group to the preservation of the landmarks of
civilization, now in danger of being forgotten or ignored. They insisted upon the past and tradition by
translating its classics. Individually
they set their work against particular deficiencies in society. They considered themselves conservators of
culture.
On or about December 1910, the world
changed—Virginia Woolf
We don’t know the extent to
which Woolf was after chronological accuracy here, but her point is well
taken. Something new was beginning to
amass or take shape around this time.
Whatever it was, the First World War gave it fuel. The assurance writers of the 19th
Century had dissipated in the aftermath of the war, the consequences of which,
along with other trends already in place since before the civil war, even they
could not fully account for in their literature.
Industrialization—The rise of wealth, labor in abundance due to mass migration and
immigration, and the development of technology made conditions ideal for
industrial development on a massive scale.
This development changed the nature and definition of “work” and changed
the nature, and as the literature of this period illustrates, definition of
America and Americans. In 1900 there
were only 4,000 registered car owners in the country, by 1910 there were nearly
200,000 automobiles built annually. In
1913 Ford organized the first automobile assembly line and soon 1,000. Model T
Fords were produced each workday. By 1929 the auto industry employed more than
375, 000 people and hundreds of thousands in related fields like tire
manufacturing, road building etc. In
1926 Ford said “The experience of Ford Motor co. has been that mass production
precedes mass consumption and makes it possible, by reducing costs and thus
permitting both greater use –convenience and price convenience.” Thus the beginnings of our consumer society
began.
The success of the assembly
line with cars led to innovations in other industries, typewriters, farm
machines, tools and other items. Growing industrialism meant growing
labor/capitalist inequalities. By 1914
the American Federation Labor had 2 million members—labor movements were big,
especially in the summer of 1919 when, for a brief moment the country was
unstable enough that people feared communist revolution. In addition, women are entering the
workforce in unprecedented numbers, particularly during the war period,
changing the nature of the work site, the family, and the community. How did
writers respond to this changing landscape of work, industry and labor
relations? How did all Americans, but
especially writers, respond to developments in technology? What was lost, what gained?
Urbanization—Urbanization refers to a process in which an increasing proportion of
an entire population lives in cities and the suburbs of cities. Historically,
it has been closely connected with industrialization and the same was true
during the early decades of the 20th Century in America. When more
and more inanimate sources of energy were used to enhance human productivity
(industrialization), surpluses increased in both agriculture and industry.
Larger and larger proportions of a population could live in cities. Economic
forces were such that cities became the ideal places to locate factories and
their workers.
In the United States, about
5% of the population lived in cities in 1800 by 1920, 50% of the population
lived in cities. Throughout the 19th and early 20th century, the US
was urbanizing. Urbanization changed,
linked, and brought people together in and from rural America in ways that had
not been done before.
As the Christian socialist
Josiah Strong said, “We must face the inevitable. The new civilization is certain to be urban and the problem of
the twentieth century will be the city where the majority of the immigrants and
workers congregate. We might want to
put Strong’s statement next to W.E.B. Du Bois’s “The problem of the twentieth
Century will is the problem of the color line.” What trends in American society do these statements predict? How were issues of race, class and gender
dealt with in these growing and emerging cities?
Culture—
The Modernist period fostered a sense that American culture had lost its
bearings, that there was no center or cogency, that there was a collapse or
bankruptcy of values. Industrialization
and the consequent displacement of persons from their previous physical and
psychic groundings called into question ontological (the study of what “being”
is) issues which were previously unquestioned. Traditional values lead to a
horrible war, industrial squalor, the breakdown of traditional rural society,
exploitation of other races and cultures, and a society built on greed.
Reaction to World War I was
strong, particularly the sense of alienation the conflict brought on due to the
vast devastation it caused. In terms of lives, America suffered an estimated
58,480 dead, 189,955 wounded, and 14,290 missing. This alienation was also caused by an inability to recognize the
world as a familiar, predictable place.
There was a growing
awareness of a variety of cultures, which had differing but cogent
–valid-worldviews. The locus of judgment moved from the traditional
sites—consensus, social authority and textual authority—to individual judgment
and phenomenological (lived experience) validation, hence to the location of
meaning (and, in a sense, truth) in individual experience. Related to this we
have the development of studies and ideas which have as there focus the nature
and functioning of the individual: the discipline of psychology, psychotherapy;
a growing democratization in politics; in aesthetics, movements such as
impressionism and cubism which focus on the process of perception.
There was a shift in
paradigms from a closed, finite, measurable, cause and effect universe of 19th
century science to an open, relativistic changing, strange universe—Einstein
was a Modernist thinker.
These issues led people to
wonder: Where was America heading? What
was the essence of American identity?
The literature might be seen as one way of addressing these
questions.
Literary Modernism—Literary Modernism is no one thing, by any stretch, but rather a
confluence of responses and reactions to (and against) America’s emergence as
an industrial power. Writers try to
grapple with a sense of social breakdown, the recognition that old patterns of
social organization are inadequate to reflect the realties of a new
America.
The world seemed a
fragmented place. Patterns of
construction out of fragments, unrelated pieces, become a feature of the
literary works. The poetry is very
allusive, allusions to myth, the bible, foreign languages, street life, and is
also personal. This seems very similar
to what we might see in the British Romantics, but it is different in a crucial
way: meaning is not in nature but rather in the work of art itself, or in the
consciousness of the artist. “Stream of Consciousness” develops as a popular
literary device, along with protest poetry and prose and confessional
writing. Those who see Art as
intrinsically propaganda challenge those who proffer Art for Art’s sake.
Modernism also meant the
emergence of new voices in literature from immigrants to African Americans to
women who were eager to rethink traditional ways and to imagine new
possibilities in the literature. The impact of immigrant literature, the Harlem
Renaissance, and the growth and development of Women’s literature are key
features of Literary Modernism.
American Literary
Modernism: The Beginnings of an Understanding
In this initial
contemplation of American Literary Modernism, given the works of E.L. Masters,
Edwin Arlington Robinson, and Willa Cather to consider, a brief examination of
exactly what the Modernist movement was and how it was brought about,
originating with the advent of the First World War, seems the most sensible
place to start. According to The Bedford Glossary of Critical and Literary
Terms, “Modernist authors sought to break away from traditions and conventions
through experimentation with new literary forms, devices, and styles.” (Murfin,
et al., 268) It is important to note with respect to this point that the tactics
used by these modernist authors were viewed as “avant-garde” or bold and
innovative. The term, “avant-garde” itself is defined by dictionary.com as “a
group active in the invention and application of new techniques in a given
field, especially in the arts.” Thus, the modernists were those who sought to
create fresh and unique works of art, challenging in style, form and content.
Many of the innovative techniques used by the modernists drew inspiration from
the theories of such figures as Sigmund Freud, Carl Jung, and Karl Marx. For
example, a Marxist perspective can be seen in the main character of Willa
Cather’s Neighbor Rosicky, who states that: “Dem big cities is all right fur de
rich, but dev is terrible hard fur de poor.” (1132) This statement is meant to
imply a distinct class dichotomy between the rich and the poor, or the working
class and the ruling class. This statement could also be taken differently, as
the story progresses and the reader discovers more about Rosicky himself and
his immigration to America, in that, it could be argued that Cather wishes to
illustrate a distinction between the new immigrants of the late nineteenth /
early twentieth centuries and those whose families came before that time.
It is further important to examine, as The Bedford Glossary indicates, that the
work of the modernists “reflected the pervasive sense of loss, disillusionment,
and even despair in the wake of the Great War, hence their emphasis on
historical discontinuity and the alienation of humanity.” (Murfin, et al., 268)
The cost of life and the shattering destruction of the First World War and the
subsequent advent of the Great Depression left many around the world feeling
bitterly depressed and disconnected from the rest of humanity. According to A
Glossary of Literary Terms by M.H. Abrams, “the catastrophe of the war had
shaken faith in the moral basis, coherence, and durability of Western
civilization and raised doubts about the adequacy of traditional literary modes
to represent the harsh and dissonant realities of the postwar world.” (Abrams,
167) It seems that the works assigned in this initial reading, including the
collected poems of Edwin Arlington Robinson, the Spoon River Anthology by E.L.
Masters, Neighbor Rosicky by Willa Cather, and lastly selections from
Winesburg, Ohio by Sherwood Anderson, illustrate the disillusionment and
deterioration of coherence apparent in American society between the First and
Second World Wars.
This deterioration of coherence, or meaning, becomes evident in a brief survey
of the works of Masters, Cather, Anderson and Robinson, in that, their
characters seem, for the most part, to be nursing reservations about their
lives or ailments of some sort. The fact that the characters of E.L. Masters’
Spoon River Anthology are actually deceased and speaking to readers from beyond
the grave is an example of this depressed and disconnected state of being
apparent in many characters and equally in the readers contemporary to its
publication.
Another extremely significant characteristic of the modernist movement, as
mentioned in the introduction to the Norton Anthology of American Literature,
Volume D, and as apparent in each of the works of Anderson, Masters, Robinson,
and Cather, is that of fragmentation. “a key formal characteristic of the
modernist work, whether a painting, a sculpture, or a musical composition, is
its construction out of fragments. The long work is an assemblage of fragments,
the short work a carefully realized fragment.” (1078) This “assemblage of
fragments” is evident in all of the works mentioned above, perhaps with the
exception of Neighbor Rosicky by Willa Cather, although Cather is described by
her biography within the Norton Anthology as a writer of chronicles because of
her lack of formal structure. (1112) Masters’ Spoon River Anthology and
Anderson’s Mother, Adventure and Queer are the most effective as an “assemblage
of fragments” because of the fact that the characters share a home town and
are, one might suspect, known to one another. Each of the poems or stories in
these two collective anthologies demonstrate the arbitrary nature of modernist
works, as further expressed by the Norton Anthology, in that, they “begin
arbitrarily,” “advance without explanation,” and “end without resolution,
consisting of vivid segments juxtaposed without cushioning or interrogating
transitions.” (1079) An example of this would be found in Masters’ Spoon River,
in the story of Serepta Mason who states as follows: “My life’s blossom might
have bloomed on all sides / Save for a bitter wind which stunted my petals.”
(Masters, lines 1:2) In this instance, the reader does not have any idea where
Serepta Mason is coming from or why she has been “stunted.” The poem begins
arbitrarily with a statement by Serepta of her potential cut short.
Lastly, it seems that the work of the modernists is fraught with concrete
imagery and “reference (allusion) to literary, historical, philosophical, or
religious details of the past as a way of reminding readers of the old, lost
coherence.” (1079) The authors of the modernist era seem to be making the
attempt to restore some coherence through the employment of the “assemblage of
fragments” technique, and more specifically through the use of specific
language that they expect their readers to recognize. Such an example of this
use of specific language is prevalent in Robinson’s collected poems. Robinson’s
use of latin in the titles of both Credo and Eros Turannos are meant to be
evocative to the reader, giving him or her a sense of the poem’s purpose and
direction at first glance.
Each of the works included within this week’s initial survey of early modernist
techniques and the characteristics of early American Modernist Literature,
demonstrates at least one of the major characteristics prevalent at the
beginnings of the modernist movement. The taking of inspiration from new
“avant-garde” thinkers, the disillusionment and despair caused by the ruin of
World War I, the lack of coherence in-between the wars and leading up to the
Great Depression, the “assemblage of fragments,” the arbitrary nature of
structure, and the employment of concrete images or references are all
significant to the beginnings of an understanding of what Modernism was, how it
began and what direction the movement took throughout the first half of the
twentieth century.
The New Bedford Glossary
of Literary Terms defines imagism as follows:
Imagism: A school
of poetry that flourished in North America and England, and especially in the
United States, at the beginning of the twentieth century. Imagists rejected the sentimentalism of
late-nineteenth century verse in favor of a poetry that relied on concrete
imagery. Ezra Pound originally led the
movement, which drew upon T.E. Hulme’s poetic theory, but Amy Lowell soon
became its most famous proponent; “Amygism” was first used by the displaced
Pound to refer derogatorily to the movement.
Imagists believed that
poetry should (1) regularly use everyday speech, but avoid clichés (2) create
new rhythms (3) address any subject matter the poet desired (4) depict its
subjects through precise, clear images.
Imagist poems, which are
typically written in free verse, are generally short since Imagists seek above
all else to write concentrated poetry.
They seek to render the poet’s response to a visual impression as concisely
and precisely as possible; in this, at least, the influence of such short
nature poems as the Japanese haiku is obvious.
An example of this influence can be seen in Ezra Pound’s In a Station of
the Metro, where the poem itself is a haiku-like sentence or Ezra-fied form of
a haiku.
Example: William Carlos Williams’s “The Red
Wheelbarrow” (1923) presents a single concrete image that exemplifies his edict
about poetry, “No ideas but in things”:
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
Water
beside the white
chickens.
A cultural movement in
1920s America during which black art, literature, and music experienced renewal
and growth, originating in New York City's Harlem district; also called Black
Renaissance, New Negro Movement
Example:
African-American authors
and poets, artists, musicians, and movie stars found greater freedom of
expression and greater support from white sponsors during the Harlem
Renaissance than existed previously.
There
are basically two camps of the Harlem Renaissance
1. Alain Locke -> Aesthetic Movement -> New Negro
Movement
2. Zora Neal Hurston -> “Folk,” Real Life Black
America (emphasis on “primitivism” and how African Americans need to “catch up”
Biography of Claude McKay
in the Norton Anthology calls it a “resonant label encompassing artists with diverse aims” (1456).
Blood on the Forge
1.
What connection do you
see between the land and the characters?
How, for instance, is “identity” connected to the land?
1.
Part II of the novel
seems to be a migration story. What
themes within the
idea
of migration are most prevalent? How
does travel happen, how does this
contribute
to our understanding of the novel and its major characters?
2. Part
III appears to be an introduction to the industrial north. How is does Attaway inform us that the
bothers are “displaced”? How are their
present surroundings different from their home? How does “home” get (re)defined?
Pg. 45.
3. We are
also introduced to Smothers who simultaneously is our introduction into a
“mythology” about this new environment.
How is this new mythology about the environment conveyed to the reader? What, for instance is the origins of steal.
1.
This part of the text
deals with n interracial relationship, the breakup of the Moss brothers as a
family, and the big blast. How does
Anna attraction with wealth register with her belief that Big Matt can achieve
it for her? How, in what ways, is she similar to, say, Hanneh in “The Lost
Beautifluness”?
2.
How does Attaway
implicate “industrialization” into the break up of the family?
1.
This portion of the
text deals with issues of unionized labor and race. How is race used against the union by the powers that be?
2.
How does Big Matt
become the Riding boss he beats up earlier in the novel?
3.
Why is the end of the
novel ironic?
William Attaway’s Blood on the Forge captures the desperate unrest
within different American communities surrounding the massive influx of
immigrants to America, and the migration of people within America in the
earlier decades of the twentieth century. In the novel, the characters of Big
Matt, Chinatown and Melody are motivated to migrate themselves for a number of
different reasons – the most obvious of which being the trouble caused between
Big Matt and Mr. Johnston. Big Matt states specifically, however, that
“trouble” will not be the motivating factor behind his migration, but his
belief that the land itself is “tired,” giving the impression that it will not
be able to provide them with a crop to sustain their living.
“The hills bigger ‘n any white man, I reckon. Take more ‘n jest trouble to run
me off the hills. I been in trouble. I been born into trouble. Shareworked
these hills from the bad land clean to the mines at Madison. The old folks make
crop here afore we was born. Now the land done got tired. All the land got
tired, ‘ceptin’ the muck in the bottoms. It do somethin’ to a man when the corn
come up like tired old gents.” (36)
Big Matt goes on to say that since the land is “tired” and it has given up,
that they should give up to: “The land has jest give up, and I guess it’s good
for things to come out like this. Now us got to give up too.” (37)
In contemplating Blood on the Forge, it later becomes evident that there is a
feeling of disillusionment evident, as previously seen in such works as Edgar
Lee Masters’ Spoon River Anthology, where people talk about how machines and
industrialized plants are outmoding humankind.
“What do we count for against machines that lift tons easy as a guy takes a
spoonful of gravy to his mouth? The magnets, traveling cranes and steam shovels
that do the loading and unloading – in a week they handle piles of stuff that
would keep a crew of a thousand guys busy for months. The charger, for an
instance – it fills eight furnaces quicker than it takes the crews to make back
or front wall. Them hoppers moving up the side of the blast they fill it before
a guy can get a sweat off his forehead. What does that make a man?” (56)
The industrialized world of the North, as presented in Blood on the Forge is,
as the character of Melody later reflects, an “endless clash of big forces
playing up and down the banks of long rivers. This place had been a monster,
beautiful in an ugly strength that fascinated a man so that it made him sing
his fear. It was a new, big world” (234). The North is depicted as a place
where greater possibilities and opportunities exist and, if anything, as a
different place where the novel’s main characters believe they might not just
be “makin’ the white man crop for him.” (5) Melody and Chinatown remark, upon
receiving a roll of money from a Northerner toward the beginning of the novel:
“Must be a lot of that kind of up-North money” (33)
Blood on the Forge is really the story of three brothers and their own personal
experiences through the massive migrations of African Americans in the early
twentieth century. It is a tragic story about how one family is torn apart
amidst the turmoil and disillusionment of a rapidly changing society and how,
in the end, two of the three brothers are forced to follow so many other
African Americans in their migration – to the “lowest points” of such an inner
city as Pittsburgh. As Melody and Chinatown board the train at the end of the
novel, Melody having left behind his guitar, which could perhaps be seen as
Melody's loss of hope/faith in the American Dream, or in any of his dreams of a
better life.
“Many Negroes had gone to Pittsburgh before them; many were castoffs of the
mills. They had settled in the bottoms of that city, making a running sore at
those lowest points.” (235)
“Oh, Mat, my ridin’ boss
tells me there some jacklegs around, lyin’ to the niggers about how much work
they is up North, Jest you remember how I treat you and don’t be took in by no
lies.” (16)
“his novel is saturated with regret for the historical truth, that
the mill owners and the police are able to exploit the antagonism between
immigrants and blacks, preventing them from recognizing that as workers they
share common interests. Historically,
blacks had been barred from unions, and were often used as strikebreakers and
scab labor.” (x)
“There are lessons from the South to ‘unlearn.’” (xii)
“Mr Johnston said that they could not have any more food
credit. He claimed their share of the
crop for the next two years in payment for his mule.” (7)
“Chinatown and Melody wheeled and hurried away. They had no need to speak to each
other. In both of them was the fear
brought from Kentucky: that girl might
scream. Back in the hills young Charley had been lynched because a girl
screamed.” (47)
How it Feels to Be Colored
Me
1
How is this text a
narrative about the origins of consciousness both collective and
individual? Think especially about how
Hurston comes to understand that she is colored?
2.
How does the origins
of consciousness play into the idea of myths or a mythology in the text? How might you connect this mythology to
Blood on the Forge’s Smothers?
In her remarkably candid and
sincere self-introduction, entitled How It Feels to Be Colored Me, Zora Neal
Hurston delivers an elucidation of her own self-concept, as it is specifically
related to the issue of her own racial background, culture and heritage in
modernist America in the earlier half of the twentieth century. Her dynamic
prose in How it Feels to Be Colored Me, which was first written in 1928, is
indicative of the vibrant tapestry of artistic expressions produced by African
Americans working to capture their identity as individuals and as a community
during the Harlem Renaissance, a period of writing, poetry, music, and art
among African Americans during the 1920s and 1930s. The text of How It Feels to
Be Colored Me, most specifically illustrates her awareness of her own color,
and details her experiences in coming to grips with her own personal
realization of the many “colors” in her life and further invites the reader on
a quest seeking out how those colors have affected the development of her
psyche or, to use her own words, how they helped to bring out “the cosmic Zora”
(Hurston, 1518). Hurston’s proclamation of self further expresses how she feels
her own color identity relates to and has shaped her process of writing and her
duties/goals as a writer-representative of African American literature.
In contemplating How It Feels
to Be Colored Me, it is as important to take Zora Neal Hurston’s intentions to
express her self-concept into account, as it is to acknowledge the social and
political context of her work and to further consider how her approach to
writing defines her work. Hurston is often defined through analysis of her
writing and is described by such as Ann Ducille, a professor of English and
African-American Studies at Wesleyan University, as a person who was “by most
accounts a flamboyant, infinitely inventive chameleon of a woman, who could
make herself equally at home among the Haitian voodoo doctors who informed her
research and the Park Avenue patrons who financed it. She was a lightning rod
of contradiction and controversy” (DuCille, 1). From her own perspective
Hurston wrote both for and about color-identity and the African American
community via a more anthropological approach to writing whereby she would
present her own self, her community and those whom she wrote about exactly as
she perceived them to be and without further aesthetic augmentation. It is
because of her definitive approach, similar to that of contemporary Claude
McKay, that Hurston was characterized by many throughout her career as an
extremely controversial modernist figure of the Harlem Renaissance. Although,
in spite of her prodigious talent and posthumous notoriety, the opinions of her
contemporaries regarding her work were not always marked with appreciation.
During the Harlem Renaissance
many writers and artists sought to elevate or to create a higher, more
contemporary standard of writing by African Americans, while others moved away
from traditional works and imitation of white writers to explore their own
culture and affirm pride in their race. Zora Neal Hurston pursued this latter
objective by combining literature with anthropology. Ann DuCille further
describes Hurston as “a devoted daughter of the rural South, she was, on the
one hand, a fierce cultural nationalist who championed the black folk at every
turn of the page” (DuCille, 1). Hurston was expressly proud of her African
American identity and consistently grappling with what it meant to be black in
America in the earlier half of the twentieth century. Through her
anthropological approach, Hurston presented her self-concept and her characters
as she perceived them to be, which earned her criticism from contemporaries
because many felt she was portraying African Americans in a negative light. It
is important to note, as the Norton Anthology of American Literature does
explicitly that:
[Hurston] rejected the idea that a black writer’s chief concern should be how
blacks were being portrayed to the white reader. She did not write to ‘uplift
her race,’ either; because in her view it was already uplifted, she (like
Claude McKay) was not embarrassed to present her characters as mixtures of good
and bad, strong and weak. Some of the other Harlem writers thought her either
naïve or egotistical, but Hurston argued that freedom from all coercion, no
matter what the source. (Reidhead, 1506)
Hurston’s lack of inhibition in
her presentation of How It Feels to Be Colored Me is what lends authenticity
and sincerity to her work. Although, “[she] experienced a difficulty that all
the black artists of the Harlem Renaissance had to face – the fact that
well-off white people were the sponsors of, and often the chief audience for,
their work,” she made it a point to write as she saw and to record as she
perceived the world around her to be from her own experiences. (Reidhead, 1506)
Some of Hurston’s contemporaries might have thought, as Richard Wright did,
that:
Miss Hurston voluntarily continues in the tradition, which was forced upon the
Negro in the theatre, that is the minstrel technique that makes the "white
folks" laugh. Her characters eat and laugh and cry and work and kill; they
swing like a pendulum eternally in that safe and narrow orbit in which America
likes to see the Negro live: between laughter and tears. (Wright, 1)
Others still might have
interpreted her presentation in How It Feels to Be Colored Me, as it depicts
her character and her own sense of self accurately as it was in actuality and
thusly of particular worth. Such an interpretation would place greater emphasis
on celebrating real life, “folk” or traditional, commonplace depiction and
would not allow any coercion or influence upon her depictions of character.
Hurston’s style of “folk” characterization made a strong political statement
during the Harlem Renaissance, which stood in opposition against those who
believed her depictions were grossly inaccurate, demeaning, or derogatory
depictions of African Americans. It rivaled those whose writing merely
attempted to emulate, internalize and reproduce or put a different spin on the
styles and forms of high modernism found in the works of such authors as Ezra
Pound and T.S. Eliot, white modernist writers who were trying to “make it new”
with their avant garde experimentalism.
In contemplating Hurston’s
approach, it becomes somewhat confusing when taking into account something that
Hurston herself was quoted in an interview to say about her characterizations
in conjunction with her emphasis on “color” in the text of this particular
work: "You see, I have ceased to think in terms of race; I think only in
terms of individuals. I am interested in you now, not as a Negro man but as a
man. I am not interested in the race problem, but I am interested in the
problems of individuals white ones and black ones” (Ford, 1). When one
contemplates this statement in conjunction with the text of How It Feels to Be
Colored Me and Hurston’s explicit directive of targeting the expression of her
self-concept, however, the reader can understand that, although she did not
necessarily take race into account on purpose or as a result of an act of
coercion, it is significant to note that her own color is integral to her
identity.
In fact, it is fairly obvious
based upon any interpretation of the text that her realization of her color was
a pivotal moment in her development as a person. As Hurston makes it a point to
express: “I remember the very day that I became colored” (Hurston, 1516).
Hurston expresses, through her prose, that she never did realize she was “colored”
until she was put into close contact with more white people as she was growing
up because of the fact that, within the confines of her neighborhood the only
exposure that she had to white people was when they sped through the town.
Hurston specifically states as follows: “white people differed from colored to
me only in that they rode through town and never lived there” (Hurston, 1516).
This childlike innocence of interpretation is not to last, for Hurston later
states that it was not until later that she realized there was a “difference.”
She states specifically as follows:
But changes came in the family
when I was thirteen, and I was sent to school in Jacksonville. I left
Eatonville, the town of the oleanders, as Zora. When I disembarked from the
river-boat at Jacksonville, she was no more. It seemed that i had suffered a
sea change. I was not Zora of Orange County any more, I was now a little
colored girl. I found it out in certain ways. In my heart as well as in the
mirror, I became a fast brown-- warranted not to rub nor run. (Hurston, 1517)
The Norton Anthology of
American Literature confirms that Hurston’s own childhood was similar to that
of the character Zora in How It Feels to Be Colored Me. The Norton Anthology
states, “[Hurston’s] early childhood was protected from racism because she
encountered no white people. With her mother’s death, Hurston’s wanderings and
her initiation into American racism begins” (Reidhead, 1506).
Hurston writes about herself as
a young African American, regardless of race, because she is more concerned
with her own concept of self and how it relates to her African American
Identity, which she calls “the cosmic Zora” (Hurston, 1518). Zora further
expresses that “At certain times I have no race, I am me.” (Hurston, 1518) She
reveals her confidence, in spite of “coercion” as she expresses herself as a
rock amidst a thousand “white persons” and how regardless of the fact that she
is sometimes “overswept” she remains herself and when the tide of influence
sweeping over her ebbs, she is revealed to be herself again. Zora states
specifically: “I belong to no race nor time.” (Hurston, 1518) This statement
seems to express that race is not important, in that, she is a person
regardless with a unique and individual identity, or a “fragment of the Great
Soul that surges within the boundaries. My country, right or wrong.” (Hurston,
1518)
This revelation of Hurston’s
biography lends an insight into an understanding of what Hurston is trying to
say through her short story about “Zora” of Eatonville, FL. The character of
Zora expresses her excitement over the chances and opportunities that she is
afforded because of the social advancement of African Americans and their
triumph over and freedom from slavery. Her freedom is a large focus of the work
and seems to be the inspiration behind her writing to express herself. Hurston
makes sure to express that, her color is important to her feeling, emotion and
her experience of certain things such as the many “reds” and “blues” of jazz
music and that in instances where others allow color to impede their experience
(whether consciously or unconsciously) she does not. She specifically states
that, despite the fact that the is “colored” she is “… not tragically colored.
There is no great sorrow dammed up in my soul, nor lurking behind my eyes. I do
not mind at all. I do not belong to the sobbing school of Negrohood who hold
that nature somehow has given them a lowdown dirty deal and whose feelings are
all hurt about it” (Hurston, 1517).
Hurston goes on to express that
she does not “weep at the world” and that she is “too busy sharpening [her]
oyster knife” (Hurston, 1517). What she means by this is that she does not
allow the difficulties, which arise in any way, shape or form because of her
color to affect her outlook on life or to hold her back in any way. Zora goes
on to reaffirm that “Slavery is sixty years in the past. The operation was
successful and the patient is doing well, thank you” (Hurston, 1517). What she
means by this is that, as she states elsewhere within the text, there has been
no better time for “colored” people to take steps toward success. Hurston
states that she is “off to a flying start and I must not halt in the stretch to
look behind and weep” and that “no one on earth ever had a greater chance for
glory.” (1517)
Although her proclamations of
self ring true, it is also important to remember that Zora is proud of her own
racial identity as well and acknowledges it and the differences separating the
Caucasian and African American populations of the time – while maintaining that
she is herself a human being and, although an African American she is “colored
me” or “colored” with her own identity, a part of which is her own African
American heritage, but not the only part. Hurston expresses that she can “feel”
her race in a metaphor likening herself to a “dark rock” which is “surged upon”
and “overswept” by a “creamy sea,” which becomes a metaphor for white society.
Despite the fact that her rock is “covered by the waters,” Hurston is revealed
to be herself whenever the waters recede – thus expressing her strength of
character and her valuation of self-concept and identification with her color.
(Hurston, 1517)
Most importantly, what Hurston
reveals toward the end of her proclamation is that there is an equality in
distinction among all people and that each and every person is the same as each
and every other person, in that, they all share in their uniqueness – their “priceless[ness]”
and their “worthless[ness]” (Hurston, 1518) In a calculated review of Hurston’s
major points in How It Feels to Be Colored Me, it becomes evident that Hurston
values the presentation of her “colored” life and that she neither regrets her
consequent experiences nor begrudge the world for the life she has given. It
becomes further evident that she believes that if more people would realize
their similarities in their differences and if more African Americans would
themselves get in touch with their own “color” as it relates to the world
around them that they might be happier, and a great deal more enabled in the
modernist era – a time of greater opportunity than any other time.
The Blacker the Berry
1.
How is Thurman’s novel a Modernist text?
-
Deals with migration
-
Emma Lou is prototypical modernist woman
-
Emma Lou buys into false consciousness
-
Industrialization/urbanization
2.
Thurman does not spend a great deal of time
developing characters. What does he
spend time doing? Why the five
chapters?
-
Each chapter tells the same basic story
-
Thurman to underscore the notion of migration
… It doesn’t matter where Emma Lou
goes, she is facing the same problem everywhere.
3.
What is the main tension in the text?
4.
Describe Emma Lou’s character? Find instances in the text that suggest she
has internalized the very prejudices that keep her on the margins of society.
5.
Discuss Thurman’s treatment of male characters in
this text. How might you account for
this?
6.
Comment specifically on how gender socially
construct the importance of skin tone in the novel?
-
It is significant that Wallace Thurman himself grew
up in Utah, moved to Los Angeles where he attended the University of Southern
California just like Emma Lou, and then he moved to Harlem… so his experiences are the same as
hers. It is further significant that he
chose to make Emma Lou a woman because of the fact that women experience the
“pigmentocracy” much differently from men.
Emma Lou’s mother and grandmother often lament how she might have gotten
along better as a man and not have had as much of a problem fitting in.
7.
In what instances in the text does social class
“trump” skin complexion? What does this
tell you about the relationship between the two?
8.
The Blacker the Berry certainly gives us insight on
the Harlem Renaissance, and the Black community in the 1920’s, but how does it
comment on current social realities?
9.
Truman argues (143-144) that you can’t blame
light-skinned blacks for being racist. How do you assess his rationale?
-
The lighter skinned or “fair” skinned blacks within
the novel are established as a “ruling” class or a more pure class and thusly
they are allowed more freedom and choices.
They are racist toward the darker skinned blacks and treat them poorly
because they do not want to be dragged down by association.
10.
Discuss Gwendolyn Johnson’s character. How do you account for her hatred of
light-skinned blacks – though she is one, and then her marriage to Benson
Brown?
11.
Can Emma Lou, from our perspective as readers,
“blame” Emma Lou for her psychological disposition regarding issues of skin
tone?
-
Emma Lou is partly responsible because she is
“Color-conscious” as Alva accuses her of being, however, the society in which
she is living and the African American community itself continues to perpetuate
and to foster this type of “pigmentocracy” and thusly Emma Lou is merely
participating in a practice which extends beyond her own self and her control.
The Blacker the Berry
***From
the Introduction by Shirlee Taylor Haizlip, Author of “The Sweeter the Juice”
“Since
earliest recorded history, skin color has been put on a vertical chromatograph
with the lightest color, usually called ’white,’ at the top, and the darkest
color, generally labeled ‘black,’ at the bottom.” (9)
Color:
“A quality of visible phenomena, distinct from form and from light.”
Southern
Saying: “The Blacker the Berry the Sweeter the Juice”
“My
father’s Women’s Day sermon was a powerful lesson I would carry with me
throughout the year and for the rest of my life. It was a lesson that would
empower me to speak out against America’s pigmentocracy, to rail against our
intraracial colorism, andto advocate revision and repositing of the skin
chromatograph to a new horizontal bar whose center color is a dark brown and
fromwhich on each side radiates, glows, explodes shades whose range include
tan, beige and honey and fudge.” (15)
PART 1: EMMA LOU
Main
Character: Emma Lou
Her
mother was a lighter skinned African American and married a man with darker
skin, Emma Lou’s father…
Emma
Lou grew up in Boise, Idaho (the only “black” girl amongst a number of “white”
children and the only girl of color in her high school graduating class)
knowing what it was like to be resented for her color by her mother and
grandmother.
Only
her Uncle Joe treated her like a person and suggested to her mother that she
attend University in California
“She
should have been a boy, then color of skin wouldn’t have mattered so much, for
wasn’t her mother always saying that a black boy could get along, but that a
black girl would never know anything but sorrow and disappointment?” (22)
About
her High School Diploma:
“The
tragedy of her life was that she was too black. Her face and not a slender roll
of ribbon-bound parchment was to be her future identification tag in society.”
(23)
“Emma
Lou had been born into a semi-white world, totally surrounded by an all-white
one, and those few dark elements that had forced their way in had either been
shooed away or else greeted with derisive laughter.” (24)
***One
of the reasons they moved to Boise was because it separated them further from
those African Americans who had been emancipated or were one generation away
from emancipation. Living in Boise allowed them to break away from the African
American culture and their own cultural/historic identity.
Her
father is referred to as a “dirty black nogooder” and “durn his ornery hide”
***Too
much hatred in Kansas and in the south for African Americans… Thurman calls it
a “virus, nigger hatred.” (26)
“Then,
too, in Kansas all Negroes were considered as belonging to one class. It didn’t
matter if you and your parents had been freedman before the Emancipation
Proclamation, nor did it matter that you were almost three-quarters white. You
were nevertheless, classed with those hordes of hungry, ragged, ignorant black
folk arriving from the South in such great numbers, packed like so many
stampeding cattle in dirty, manure-littered box cars. From all of this these
maternal grandparents of Emma Lou fled to the Rocky Mountain states which were
too far away for the recently freed slaves to reach, especially since most of
them believed that the world ended just a few miles north of the Mason Dixon
line.” (26)
“Emma
Lou’s grandmother was the founder and the acknowledged leader of Boise’s blue
veins, and she guarded its exclusiveness passionately and jealously. Were they
not a superior class? Were they not a very high type of Negro, comparable to
the persons of color groups in the West Indies? And were they not entitled,
ipso facto, to more respect and opportunity and social acceptance than more
pureblooded Negroes?” (28)
“Her
birth had served no good purpose.” (31)
“There
was no place in the world for a girl as black as she anyway.” (34)
Emma
Lou thinking about going to University in Los Angeles:
“In a
city the size of Los Angeles there were Negroes of every class, color, and
social position.” (34)
“Her
Uncle Joe’s insistence upon the differences of social contacts in larger cities
intrigued her.” (35)
Her
Uncle Joe speaking to her:
“’People
in large cities,’ he had said, ‘are broad. They do not have time to think of
petty things. The people in Boise are fifty years behind the times, but you
will find that Los Angeles is one of the world’s greatest and most modern
cities, and you will be happy there.” (35)
“Boise
was a provincial town, given to the molding of provincial people with
provincial minds. Boise was a backward town out of the mainstream of modern
thought and progress. Its people were cramped and narrow, their intellectual
concepts stereotyped and static. Los Angeles was a happy contrast in all
respects.” (37)
About
the girl Hazel whom Emma Lou meets at the University:
“Emma
Lou classified Hazel as a barbarian who had most certainly not come from a
family of best people.” (42)
***Important
to note that Hazel acts poorly, is uneducated, and makes a clown out of
herself, bolstering some of Emma Lou’s unfortunate prejudices against those
with darker skin color. Emma Lou refers to Hazel as “ignorant” and “ugly” (43)
About
Hazel:
“[Emma
Lou’s] skin was not rough and pimply, nor was her hair kinky, nor were her
nostrils completely flattened out until they seemed to spread all over here
face. No wonder people were prejudiced against dark-skin people when they were
so ugly, so haphazard in their dress, and so boisterously mannered as was this
present specimen.” (43)
Emma
Lou “could easily take her place in a society of the right sort of people”
whereas she feels that Hazel cannot.
“All
of her life she had heard talk of the ‘right sort of people,’ and of ‘the
people who really mattered,’ and from these phrases she had formed a mental
image of those to whom they applied. Hazel Mason most certainly could not be
included in either of these categories.” (50)
***Important
to note that Hazel fails out of college and does not return after winter break.
Emma Lou remains here friend though until Hazel leaves because she notes that
Hazel is generous and honest.
“Emma
Lou was determined to become associated only with those people who really
mattered, northerners like herself or superior southerners, if there were any,
who were different from whites only in so far as skin color was concerned.”
(50)
In
Reaction to finding out that Verne (another female college “colored” student
whose pigmentation is similar to Emma Lou’s, in that it is darker) is not
discriminated against because Verne’s father is a rich Cardinal:
“Emma
Lou did not know what to make of this. She did not want to believe that the same
color prejudice which existed among the blue veins in Boise also existed among
the colored college students.” (56-57)
On her
thoughts regarding dating a man darker in pigmentation than herself or,
basically, a man who isn’t lighter than herself (this applies to friendships
and associations as well it seems):
“Emma
Lou was determined not to go out of her class, determined either to associate
with the ‘right sort of people’ or else to remain to herself.” (59)
“all
the Negro leaders and members of the Negro upper class, were either light
skinned themselves or else had light-skinned wives. A wife of dark complexion
was considered a handicap unless she was particularly charming, wealthy, or
beautiful. An ordinary-looking dark woman was no suitable mate for a Negro man
of prominence. The college youths on whom the future of the race depended
practiced this precept of their elders religiously.” (60)
***The
University is no better than Boise, in that, the young African Americans
practice the same pigmentocracy …
On
Weldon Taylor (a guy she has a series of intimate encounters with during her
time at home over the summer):
“Here,
thought Emma Lou, is the type of man I like. Only she did wish that his skin
had been colored light brown instead of dark brown. It was better if she was to
marry that she did not get a dark skin mate.” (62-63)
Weldon
uses Emma Lou and leaves her
“And
rather than remain home Emma Lou returned to Los Angeles and spend another long
miserable, uneventful year in the University of Southern California, drawing
more and more within herself and becoming more and more bitter. When vacation
time came again she got herself a job as a maid in a teater, rather than return
home, and studied stenography during her spare hours. School began again and
Emma Lou re-entered with more determination than ever to escape should the
chance present itself. It did, and once more Emma Lou fled into an unknown town
to escape the haunting chimera of intra-racial color prejudice.” (70)
PART 2: HARLM
***There
is an immediate sense that Harlem in NY is no different from Idaho or
California
“And
she still found herself unable to understand why two sets of people in two
entirely different communities should seemingly become almost hysterically
excited because she, a woman of twenty-one, with three years’ college training
and ample sophistication in the ways of sex and self-support, had decided to
take a job as an actress’ maid in order to get to New York.” (76)
***She
goes to NY & goes to an employment office… the situation looks grim.
The
First glimpse of NY we really get is when Emma Lou describes the agency:
“But
she was looking for a job. Sour smells assailed her nostrils once more. Rasping
voices. Pleading voices. Tired voices. Domineering voices. And the insistent
ring of the telephone bell all re-echoed in her had against her eardrums.” (81)
Also
the agency is described as “cagey” and “crowded,” “noisy” and “pregnant with
clashing body smells.” (81-82)
More
about the agency:
“The
only window facing a brick wall on the outside. Two telephones, both busy.”
(84)
People
in the agency are described as having “sullen faces” “Dull black eyes in watery
sockets” (85)
In
describing the apartments of NY:
“No
privacy” and “little fresh air” (95)
In
describing a man who is looking at Emma Lou
“He
was too pudgy and dark, too obviously an ex-cotton picker from Georgia.” (97)
A
Nasty Remark made by a derisive passing man with his two friends about Emma Lou
when his friends chide him that she is a girl for him:
“Man,
you know I don’t haul no coal.” (98)
PART 3: ALVA
***We
are introduced to Alva, who later becomes the love interest if sorts for Emma
Lou
***Emma
Lou becomes maid to Arline Strange in this part; she is an actress of a lighter
complexion than Emma Lou who is in a “mulatto Carmen” which is referred to as “Cabaret
Gal.”
***Emma
Lou goes to a cabaret where there is a largely white audience and witnesses a
display put on by two African American women, which she is embarrassed to laugh
at and enjoy, but which she also becomes totally wrapped up in. On their
performance:
“They
muddled their words and seemed to impregnate the syncopated melody with
physical content.” (108)
Also referred
to as:
“melodramatic
and absurd” and “disturbingly pleasant” (109)
***She
dances with Alva in this Cabaret and then does not see him again until later in
the story.
The
director of “Cabaret Gal” tells her, when she asks if she can be onstage, that
they have “worked out a specific color scheme.” (116)
***Emma
Lou notices that none of the women in “Cabaret Girl” are dark in complexion …
“She
noticed that there were several black men in the ensemble, but that none of the
women were dark. Then the breach between Emma Lou and the show people widened.”
(117)
***
This is particularly important because the show people kind of look down on her
and she similarly looks down upon them, as the narrative voice of the story
reveals.
Emma
Lou remembers how only the mulatto girls were allowed to pledge sorority at the
University.
Her
home is said to smell of “fish and cabbage smells,” obviously not speaking well
of NY. (118)
She
reads headlines in the Amsterdam News: “Headless Man Found in Trunk” “Number
Runner Given Sentence” & “Benefit Ball Huge Success” Thus showing the
elements of crime and tawdry high society in NY.
Emma
Lou has trouble looking for a new place to live:
“From
then on Emma Lou intensified her suffering, mulling over and magnifying each
malignant experience. They grew within her and were nourished by constant
introspection and livid reminisces.” (121)
John,
a friend of hers in NY is described as having a body that is “distasteful to
her” because he is darker in complexion. (123)
She is
taken advantage of by a guy named Jasper, who is nice to her and asks her for
money so that he can secure a job, but then she never hears from him again.
While waiting in the lobby for him:
“the
dirty marble hallway where she was stifled by urinal smells and stared at by
passing people, waited for about ten minutes, then, in answer to his call,
climbed one flight of stairs, and was led into a well furnished, though dark,
apartment.” (126)
She
goes to the Renaissance Casino, buying a nice dress and getting herself all
pretty hoping to run into Jasper or to see someone else nice.
She
meets up with Alva again there and they dance
He
gives her his number
She
calls him once and he dismisses her…
She
calls him again and they strike it up… (134)
He
says, in response to his roommate Braxton’s criticism of her darker complexion:
“The
blacker the berry, the sweeter the juice.” (134)
PART
4: RENT PARTY
***She
& Alva get into a fight at the end of this section. Emma Lou says the
following in response to Alva’s claim that she is a bit too “color-conscious”:
“Color-conscious
. . . who wouldn’t be color-conscious when everywhere you go people are always
talking about color. If it didn’t make any difference they wouldn’t talk about
it, they wouldn’t always be poking fun, and laughing and making jokes.” (179)
Alva
leaves Emma Lou
***Alva
returns home to find Geraldine pregnant with his child…
PART
5: PYRRHIC VICTORY
“things
had seemed against her from the beginning, and she had continued to go down,
down, down, until she had little respect left for herself.” (189)
***Emma
Lou starts working toward “economic independence” and goes to “Teacher’s
college” (200)
She
dates a guy named Benson, a “yellow-skinned man” (201)
Benson
shows her, by stopping to listen to a street preacher (the self-styled mayor of
Harlem), about the state of Harlem… (203)
Geraldine
leaves Alda & Alda, Jr. (who is a sickly baby and somewhat deformed or
improperly developed, in that, the baby cannot walk properly and has an
oversized head).
Alva
becomes a drunk
Emma
Lou comes back to Alva
She
works and takes care of the baby for some time until she realizes that she has
become Alva, Jr.’s “black mammy” … that she has been used by Alva during both
instances of their relationship. (212)
“How
could the world be happy when she felt like she did? There was no place for her
in the world. She was too black, black is a portent of evil, black is a sign of
bad luck.” (215)
Emma
Lou considers going home after leaving Alva & Alva, Jr.:
“She
had once fled to Los Angeles to escape Boise, then fled to Harlem to escape Los
Angeles, but these mere geographical flights had not solved her problems in the
past, and a further flight back to where her life had begun, although facile of
accomplishment, was too futile to merit consideration.” (215)
***She
doesn’t… goes to see Alva once more… finds that the man she loved is no longer
there, and in his place is a total wasted drunken mess of a man who doesn’t
love her, starts packing her stuff to leave (and continues even though the baby
is crying and wakes the neighbors)…
That’s
how the book ends…
The Blacker the Berry
The Skin Chromatograph & “the haunting chimera
of intra-racial color prejudice.” (70)
In
contemplating Wallace Thurman’s “The Blacker the Berry” it is important to take
into account the thoughts of Shirlee Taylor Haizlip, author of the Introduction
to Thurman’s book as well as the “The Sweeter the Juice,” when she states that
“since earliest recorded history, skin color has been put on a vertical
chromatograph with the lightest color, usually called ’white,’ at the top, and
the darkest color, generally labeled ‘black,’ at the bottom” (9). This concept of a “chromatograph” as used
in this particular instance is suggestive of the process of chromatography,
which involves the separation of complex mixtures and thusly implies that
pigmentation or “complexion,” as Thurman’s Emma Lou refers to differentiations
in skin color, can be grouped and/or dichotomized based upon their particular
shade, hue or tint. Haizlit’s belief
that color, otherwise known as “a quality of visible phenomena, distinct from form
and from light,” is something that has been used to implement a
quasi-“pigmentocracy,” or hierarchy dependent upon the different levels of
protein within each of our own skins and further that this “pigmentocracy” has
been structured such that the lighter the color of one’s skin the higher one’s
prestige. Haizlit implies that
implications of this “pigmentocracy” even go so far as to foster “intra-racial
colorism” and that she herself is an advocate of the “revision and repositing
of the skin chromatograph” to eliminate the existence of a hierarchy based upon skin color
altogether.
Thurman’s
novel is fraught with incidents brought about as a result of this
“pigmentocracy.” For example, the main
character, a young girl by the name of Emma Lou is introduced as being much
darker or “blacker” than any of the other people around her in Boise
Idaho. She is the only girl of color at
her high school graduation and is thusly embarrassed by the fact that she is
forced to wear white, emphasizing a contrast between the whiteness of the robes
and her “black” skin. She further
expresses, regarding her high school diploma, that “the tragedy of her life was
that she was too black. Her face and
not a slender roll of ribbon-bound parchment was to be her future
identification tag in society” (23).
This expression is the first clear illustration of Emma Lou’s awareness
of the “pigmentocracy” affecting her life.
Emma Lou confesses that she is treated poorly as a result of her skin
complexion by her mother and grandmother and that it is only her Uncle Joe who
suggests that she is worth much more than everyone seems to be giving her
credit for. An example of her mother’s
discrimination against Emma Lou, which is often recounted is that her mother
felt that “[Emma Lou] should have been a boy, then color of skin wouldn’t have
mattered so much, for wasn’t her mother always saying that a black boy could
get along, but that a black girl would never know anything but sorrow and
disappointment?” (22) Throughout the novel, Emma Lou recounts disturbingly
mantra-esqe statements, constantly reminding herself of the present
“pigmentocracy” such as follows: “Her
birth had served no good purpose,” and “There was no place in the world for a
girl as black as she anyway” (31-34).
She expresses that her own grandmother is involved in a group practicing
in the structuring of the “pigmentocracy,” in that, her grandmother firmly
believed in her own superiority over other African Americans of darker
complexion. Example of her
grandmother’s specific beliefs can be found as follows: “Were they not a superior class? Were they not a very high type of Negro,
comparable to the persons of color groups in the West Indies? And were they not entitled, ipso facto, to
more respect and opportunity and social acceptance than more pureblooded
Negroes?” (28) This ideology seems to be firmly imprinted
within Emma Lou’s psyche to the point where it becomes inhibitory, in that,
wherever Emma Lou goes she is of the perception that worth seems to be measured
by color. It is not that she is entirely
incorrect, in that, there are many who seem to measure worth, within the
context of the novel, by the complexion of one’s skin. Example of this can be seen, in particular,
when Emma Lou asks to be given a chance at joining “Cabaret Gal” later on and where
the director informs her that a particular “color scheme” is intended and that
she does not fit in. As a result of
this, Emma Lou perceives a widening differentiation between herself and those
of mulatto or lighter skin complexions, such as her employer Arline.
Emma
Lou is constantly concerned with becoming involved with the “right type of
people.” She specifically states, upon
meeting Hazel Mason at the University of Southern California that “All of her
life she had heard talk of the ‘right sort of people,’ and of ‘the people who
really mattered,’ and from these phrases she had formed a mental image of those
to whom they applied. Hazel Mason most certainly could not be included in
either of these categories.” (50) Through Emma Lou’s perception of Hazel we
see Emma Lou’s own participation in the structuring and maintenance of a
“pigmentocracy,” which seems to be preventing any possibility of a unified
African American community emerging out of reconstruction. Emma Lou compares herself to Hazel, in that,
she believes “her skin was not rough and pimply, nor was her hair kinky, nor
were her nostrils completely flattened out until they seemed to spread all over
here face. No wonder people were
prejudiced against dark-skin people when they were so ugly, so haphazard in
their dress, and so boisterously mannered as was this present specimen.” (43)
Hazel is further likened to a “barbarian” and labeled as “ignorant” and
“ugly” by Emma Lou, all illustrating the depths to which the “pigmentocracy”
has affected and, perhaps skewed Emma Lou’s perception.
Emma
Lou learns that this “pigmentocracy” is not limited to her semi-white
surroundings in “provincial” Boise, but upon learning that the character of
Verne, who appears to be of the same complexion as Emma Lou, is only accepted
because of her wealthy and powerful father the Cardinal, Emma Lou comes to the
realization that the chromatograph is not merely a regional problem. “Emma Lou did not know what to make of this. She did not want to believe that the same
color prejudice which existed among the blue veins in Boise also existed among
the colored college students.”
(56-57) She further expresses
that “all the Negro leaders and members of the Negro upper class, were either
light skinned themselves or else had light-skinned wives. A wife of dark complexion was considered a
handicap unless she was particularly charming, wealthy, or beautiful. An ordinary-looking dark woman was no
suitable mate for a Negro man of prominence.
The college youths on whom the future of the race depended practiced
this precept of their elders religiously” (60). This illustrates a fundamental problem, in that, a cycle of
discrimination dependant upon complexion is being perpetuated by the elders
within the “negro” community teaching their children prejudice. Emma Lou learns that whether Boise or Los
Angeles the unfortunate “pigmentocracy” abounds, even in the simplest of
practices keeping all but mulatto girls out of a sorority founded by African
American girls.
Thurman’s
“The Blacker the Berry” illustrates the significant movements and migrations of
African Americans in the earlier years of the twentieth century, in that, Emma
Lou’s own grandparents are described as having fled to the Rocky Mountains to
escape the “virus,” otherwise called “nigger hatred” and also to escape the
“hordes of hungry, ragged, ignorant black folk arriving from the South in such
great numbers, packed like so many stampeding cattle in dirty, manure-littered
box cars” (26). This description is
disturbing, in that, it fully illustrates their own prejudices against “black
folk.” “The Blacker the Berry” further
emphasizes the issue of migration, in that, Emma Lou’s hope is that she will be
able to escape the “pigmentocracy” of Boise by moving to Los Angeles. She is lead to believe, by her Uncle Joe,
that “’People in large cities … are broad.
They do not have time to think of petty things. The people in Boise are fifty years behind
the times, but you will find that Los Angeles is one of the world’s greatest and
most modern cities, and you will be happy there” (35). As stated earlier, Emma Lou is of the
opinion that “Boise was a provincial town, given to the molding of provincial
people with provincial minds. Boise was
a backward town out of the mainstream of modern thought and progress. Its people were cramped and narrow, their
intellectual concepts stereotyped and static.
Los Angeles was a happy contrast in all respects.” (37)
Further, when Emma Lou travels to Harlem in New York, there
is an immediate sense that Harlem in NY is no different from Boise in Idaho or
Los Angeles in California. The first
real glimpse of Harlem that the reader gets is when Emma Lou describes the
employment agency she visits: “Sour
smells assailed her nostrils once more.
Rasping voices. Pleading
voices. Tired voices. Domineering voices. And the insistent ring of the telephone bell
all re-echoed in her had against her eardrums” (81). Also the agency is described as “cagey” and “crowded,” “noisy”
and “pregnant with clashing body smells” (81-82). Further the agency is described as having only one window in a
particular room “facing a brick wall on the outside” and “two telephones, both
busy.” (84) People in the agency are
described as having “sullen faces”
“Dull black eyes in watery sockets”
(85) Once Emma Lou leaves the
agency, her apartment complex is described as having “No privacy” and “little
fresh air” (95) Prejudices are evident in Harlem, just as
they were in Boise and Los Angeles as remarks, such as “Man, you know I don’t
haul no coal” are made about Emma Lou by passers even by the character of
Braxton who, in talking to the character of Alva later on, expresses his
disappointment in Alva for becoming involved with such a dark skinned girl. The city is further made to seem like a
horrible place, in that, Emma Lou’s apartment is said to smell of “fish and
cabbage” (118). Emma Lou is further
taken advantage of by a character named Jasper, who is nice to her and asks her
for money so that he can secure a job, but then after she helps him, she never
hears from him again. The lobby in
which she waits for Jasper is described as follows: “the dirty marble hallway where she was stifled by urinal smells
and stared at by passing people, waited for about ten minutes, then, in answer
to his call, climbed one flight of stairs, and was led into a well furnished,
though dark, apartment” (126). Toward the end of the book, it becomes clear
that no matter where Emma Lou might travel, whether Boise, Lose Angeles, New
York, or Kansas, the specter of a “pigmentocracy” will follow her and she will
not be able to escape the discriminatory prejudices of society around her. Emma Lou reflects, upon coming to a Western
Union and while thinking about returning home after Alva turns out to be taking
advantage of her and using her as a “black mammy” for Alva, Jr. as
follows: “She had once fled to Los
Angeles to escape Boise, then fled to Harlem to escape Los Angeles, but these
mere geographical flights had not solved her problems in the past, and a
further flight back to where her life had begun, although facile of
accomplishment, was too futile to merit consideration” (215).
What
is unclear is the degree to which Emma Lou brings these problems associated
with color upon herself. In a fight,
which ends her first experience with Avla, prior to Geraldine’s return and the
birth of Alva, Jr., Emma Lou states as follows: “Color-conscious . . . who wouldn’t be color-conscious when
everywhere you go people are always talking about color. If it didn’t make any difference they
wouldn’t talk about it, they wouldn’t always be poking fun, and laughing and
making jokes.” (179) Alva seems to be of the impression that Emma
Lou is incorrect in her assessment and that if she would be less focused or
“color-conscious” that she would be more comfortable and more able to maneuver
socially regardless of the obvious chromatograph and resultant
“pigmentocracy.” It is obvious that
this problem extends beyond Emma Lou’s own mind, however, in that, many of the
people she encounters suffer from the same nurtured misconceptions – that
differentiation in complexion really makes a difference in the worth of a human
being.
Born in 1902 in Joplin, Missouri, Langston Hughes
grew up mainly in Lawrence, Kansas, but also lived in Illinois, Ohio, and
Mexico.
By the time Hughes enrolled
at Columbia University in New York, he had already launched his literary career
with his poem "The Negro Speaks of Rivers" in the Crisis,
edited by W E. B. Du Bois. He had also committed himself both to writing and to
writing mainly about African Americans.
Hughes's sense of
dedication was instilled in him most of all by his maternal grandmother, Mary
Langston, whose first husband had died at Harpers Ferry as a member of John
Brown's band, and whose second husband (Hughes's grandfather) had also been a
militant abolitionist. Another important family figure was John Mercer
Langston, a brother of Hughes's grandfather who was one of the best-known black
Americans of the nineteenth century. At the same time, Hughes struggled with a
sense of desolation fostered by parental neglect. He himself recalled being
driven early by his loneliness 'to books, and the wonderful world in books.’
Leaving Columbia in 1922,
Hughes spent the next three years in a succession of menial jobs. But he also
traveled abroad. He worked on a freighter down the west coast of Africa and
lived for several months in Paris before returning to the United States late in
1924. By this time, he was well known in African American literary circles as a
gifted young poet.
His major early influences
were Walt Whitman, Carl Sandburg, as well as the black poets Paul Laurence
Dunbar, a master of both dialect and standard verse, and Claude McKay, a
radical socialist who also wrote accomplished lyric poetry. However, Sandburg,
who Hughes later called "my guiding star," was decisive in leading
him toward free verse and a radically democratic modernist aesthetic.
His devotion to black music
led him to novel fusions of jazz and blues with traditional verse in his first
two books, The Weary Blues (1926) and Fine Clothes to the Jew (1927).
His emphasis on lower-class black life, especially in the latter, led to harsh
attacks on him in the black press. With these books, however, he established
himself as a major force of the Harlem Renaissance. In 1926, in the Nation,
he provided the movement with a manifesto when he skillfully argued the
need for both race pride and artistic independence in his most memorable essay,
'The Negro Artist and the Racial Mountain."
By this time, Hughes had
enrolled at the historically black Lincoln University in Pennsylvania, from
which he would graduate in 1929. In 1927 he began one of the most important
relationships of his life, with his patron Mrs. Charlotte Mason, or
"Godmother," who generously supported him for two years. She
supervised the writing of his first novel, Not Without Laughter (1930)--about
a sensitive, black midwestern boy and his struggling family. However, their
relationship collapsed about the time the novel appeared, and Hughes sank into
a period of intense personal unhappiness and disillusionment.
One result was his firm
turn to the far left in politics. During a year (1932-1933) spent in the Soviet
Union, he wrote his most radical verse. A year in Carmel, California, led to a
collection of short stories, The Ways of White Folks (1934). This volume
is marked by pessimism about race relations, as well as a sardonic realism.
After his play Mulatto, on
the twinned themes of miscegenation and parental rejection, opened on Broadway
in 1935, Hughes wrote other plays, including comedies such as Little Ham (1936)
and a historical drama, Emperor of Haiti (1936). Most of these plays
were only moderate successes. In 1937 he spent several months in Europe,
including a long stay in besieged Madrid. In 1938 he returned home to found the
Harlem Suitcase Theater, which staged his agitprop drama Don't You Want to Be
Free? The play, employing several of his poems, vigorously blended black
nationalism, the blues, and socialist exhortation. The same year, a socialist
organization published a pamphlet of his radical verse, "A New Song."
With World War II, Hughes
moved more to the center politically. His first volume of autobiography, The
Big Sea (1940), written in an episodic, lightly comic manner, made
virtually no mention of his leftist sympathies. In his book of verse Shakespeare
in Harlem (1942) he once again sang the blues. On the other hand, this
collection, as well as another, his Jim Crow’s Last Stand (1943),
strongly attacked racial segregation.
Perhaps his finest literary
achievement during the war came in the course of writing a weekly column in the
Chicago Defender that began in 1942 and lasted twenty years. The
highlight of the column was an offbeat Harlem character called Jesse B. Semple,
or Simple, and his exchanges with a staid narrator in a neighborhood bar, where
Simple commented on a variety of matters but mainly about race and racism.
Simple became Hughes's most celebrated and beloved fictional creation, and the
subject of five collections edited by Hughes, starting in 1950 with Simple
Speaks His Mind.
After the war, two books of verse, Fields of Wonder (1947)
and One-Way Ticket (1949), added little to his fame. However, in Montage
of a Dream Deferred (1951) he broke new ground with verse accented by the
discordant nature of the new bebop jazz that reflected a growing desperation in
the black urban communities of the North. At the same time, Hughes's career was
vexed by constant harassment by right-wing forces about his ties to the Left.
In vain he protested that he had never been a Communist and had severed all
such links. In 1953 he suffered a public humiliation at the hands of Senator
Joseph McCarthy, who forced him to appear in Washington, D.C., and testify
officially about his politics. Hughes denied that he had ever been a party
member but conceded that some of his radical verse had been ill-advised.
Hughes's career hardly
suffered from this episode. Within a short time McCarthy himself was
discredited and Hughes was free to write at length about his years in the
Soviet Union in I Wonder as I Wander (1956), his much-admired second
volume of autobiography. He became prosperous, although he always had to work
hard for his measure of prosperity and sometimes called himself, with good
cause, a 'literary sharecropper.’
In the 1950s he constantly
looked to the musical stage for success, as he sought to repeat his major coup
of the 1940s, when Kurt Weill and Elmer Rice had chosen him as the lyricist for
their Street Scene (1947). This production was hailed as a breakthrough
in the development of American opera; for Hughes, the apparently endless cycle
of poverty into which he had been locked came to an end. He bought a home in
Harlem.
The Simple books inspired a
musical show, Simply Heavenly (1957), that met with some success.
However, Hughes's Tambourines to Glory (1963), a gospel musical play
satirizing corruption in a black storefront church, failed badly, with some
critics accusing him of creating caricatures of black life. Nevertheless, his
love of gospel music led to other acclaimed stage efforts, usually mixing
words, music, and dance in an atmosphere of improvisation. Notable here were
the Christmas show Black Nativity (1961) and, inspired by the civil
rights movement, Jericho--Jim Crow (1964).
For Hughes, writing for
children was important. Starting with the successful Popo and Fifina (1932),
a tale set in Haiti and written with Arna Bontemps, he eventually published a
dozen children's books, on subjects such as jazz, Africa, and the West Indies.
Proud of his versatility, he also wrote a commissioned history of the NAACP and
the text of a much praised pictorial history of black America. His text in The
Sweet Flypaper of Life (1955), where he explicated photographs of Harlem by
Roy DeCarava, was judged masterful by reviewers, and confirmed Hughes's reputation
for an unrivaled command of the nuances of black urban culture.
The 1960s saw Hughes as
productive as ever. In 1962 his ambitious book-length poem Ask Your Mama, dense
with allusions to black culture and music, appeared. However, the reviews were
dismissive. Hughes's work was not as universally acclaimed as before in the
black community. Although he was hailed in 1966 as a historic artistic figure
at the First World Festival of Negro Arts in Dakar, Senegal, he also found
himself increasingly rejected by young black militants at home as the civil
rights movement lurched toward Black Power. His last book was the volume of
verse, posthumously published, The Panther and the Lash (1967), mainly
about civil rights. He died in May that year in New York City.
In many ways Hughes always
remained loyal to the principles he had laid down for the younger black writers
in 1926. His art was firmly rooted in race pride and race feeling even as he
cherished his freedom as an artist. He was both nationalist and cosmopolitan.
As a radical democrat, he believed that art should be accessible to as many
people as possible. He could sometimes be bitter, but his art is generally
suffused by a keen sense of the ideal and by a profound love of humanity,
especially black Americans. He was perhaps the most original of African
American poets and, in the breadth and variety of his work, assuredly the most
representative of African American writers.
From The Oxford
Companion to African American Literature. Copyright © 1997 by Oxford University
Press.
langston hughes
I've known rivers:
I've known rivers ancient as the world and older than the
flow of human
blood in human veins.
My soul has grown deep like the rivers.
I bathed in the Euphrates when dawns were young.
I built my hut near the Congo and it lulled me to sleep.
I looked upon the Nile and raised the pyramids above it.
I heard the singing of the Mississippi when Abe Lincoln
went down to
New Orleans, and I've seen its muddy
bosom turn all
golden in the sunset.
I've known rivers:
Ancient, dusky rivers.
My soul has grown deep like the rivers.
With its allusions to deep
dusky rivers, the setting sun, sleep, and the soul, "The Negro Speaks of
Rivers" is suffused with the image of death and, simultaneously, the idea
of deathlessness. As in Whitman's philosophy, only the knowledge of death can
bring the primal spark of poetry and life. Here Langston Hughes became
"the outsetting bard," in Whitman's phrase, the poet who sings of
life because at last he has known death. Balanced between the knowledge of love
and of death, the poetic will gathers force. From the depths of grief the poet
sweeps back to life by clinging to his greatest faith, which is in his people
and his sense of kinship with them. His frail, intimidated self, as well as the
image of his father, are liquidated. A man-child is born, soft-spoken, almost
casual, yet noble and proud, and black as Africa. The muddy river is his race,
the primal source out of which he is born anew; on that "muddy bosom"
of the race as black mother, or grandmother, he rests secure forever. The angle
of the sun on the muddy water is like the angle of a poet's vision, which turns
mud into gold. The diction of the poem is simple and unaffected either by
dialect or rhetorical excess; its eloquence is like that of the best of the
black spirituals.
From Arnold Rampersad, The
Life of Langston Hughes, Vol. 1. Oxford University Press, 1988. Copyright
© by Arnold Rampersad.
"The Negro Speaks of
Rivers" is perhaps the most profound of these poems of heritage and
strength. Composed when Hughes was a mere 17 years old, and dedicated to W. E.
B. DuBois, it is a sonorous evocation of transcendent essences so ancient as to
appear timeless, predating human existence, longer than human memory. The
rivers are part of God's body, and participate in his immortality. They are the
earthly analogues of eternity: deep, continuous, and mysterious. They are named
in the order of their association with black history. The black man has drunk
of their life-giving essences, and thereby borrowed their immortality. He and
the rivers have become one. The magical transformation of the Mississippi from
mud to gold by the sun's radiance is mirrored in the transformation of slaves
into free men by Lincoln's Proclamation (and, in Hughes's poems, the
transformation of shabby cabarets into gorgeous palaces, dancing girls into
queens and priestesses by the spell of black music). As the rivers deepen with
time, so does the black man's soul; as their waters ceaselessly flow, so will
the black soul endure. The black man has seen the rise and fall of
civilizations from the earliest times, seen the beauty and death-changes of the
world over the thousands of years, and will survive even this America. The
poem's meaning is related to Zora Neale Hurston's judgment of the mythic High
John de Conquer, whom she held as a symbol of the triumphant spirit of black
America: that John was of the "Be" class. "Be here when
the ruthless man comes, and be here when he is gone." In a time and place
where black life is held cheap and the days of black men appear to be numbered,
the poem is a majestic reminder of the strength and fullness of history, of the
source of that life which transcends even ceaseless labor and burning crosses.
Hughes's first poem,
published in The Crisis in June, 1921, attracted the attention it did
precisely because its author revealed the acute sensitivity to the racial past
that Garvey, with his racial romanticism, was then trying to instill in the
minds of all. "The Negro Speaks of Rivers" heralded the existence of
a mystic union of Negroes in every country and every age. It pushed their
history back to the creation of the world, and credited them with possessing a
wisdom no less profound than that of the greatest rivers of civilization that
humanity had ever known, from the Euphrates to the Nile and from the Congo to
the Mississippi. . . .
Readers rarely notice that
if the soul of the Negro in this poem goes back to the Euphrates, it goes back
to a pre-"racial" dawn and a geography far from Africa that is
identified with neither blackness nor whiteness--a geography at the time of
Hughes's writing considered the cradle of all the world's civilizations and
possibly the location of the Garden of Eden. Thus, even in this poem about the
depth of the Negro's soul Hughes avoids racial essentialism while nonetheless
stressing the existential, racialized conditions of black and modern identity.
Hughes captures the African
American's historical journey to America in what is perhaps his signature poem,
"The Negro Speaks of Rivers." Dedicated to W E. B. Du Bois and using
water or the river as a metaphor for the source of life, the poem traces the movement
of black life from the Euphrates and Nile rivers in Africa to the Mississippi.
Hughes subtly couches his admonishment of slavery and racism in the refrain
"My soul has grown deep like the rivers." The first time the line
appears in the poem it follows the poet's assertion that he has known rivers
"ancient as the world and older than the flow of / human blood in human
veins." The poet here identifies himself and his blackness with the first
human beings. The second and only other time the line appears in the poem
occurs after the poet has made reference to Mississippi, New Orleans, and Abe
Lincoln. He places the lines "My soul has grown deep like the rivers"
at the end of the poem, this time suggesting that he is no longer the same man
who "bathed in the Euphrates" and "built [his] hut near the
Congo." He is now a black man who has experienced the pain of slavery and
racism, and his soul now bears the imprint of these experiences.
"The Negro Speaks of
Rivers," then, is only the beginning of a long chain of poems by Hughes
which confront, distill, extend, and transform the historical experience of
black people into an art both limpid and programmatic. As in all of Hughes'
hallmark poems, its distillation is as extreme as any in Issa's haiku. The
"I" of the poem is not that of "a" Negro but
"the" Negro, suggesting the whole of the people and their history.
Most of the consonants--d's, n's, l's, s's—are
soft, and of the vowels, long o's reoccur, contributing by sound the
effect of an ancient voice. The tone of the repeated declarative sentences is
muted, lulling. Every element of the poem combines to suggest that when the
Negro speaks of rivers it is with the accumulated wisdom of a sage. The
function of a sage is to impart the sometimes secret but long accumulated
history of a people to its younger members so that they might make the lessons
of the past active in the future. This impartation occurs in the central stanza
of the poem:
I bathed in the Euphrates
when dawns were young.
I built my hut near the Congo and it lulled me to sleep.
I looked upon the Nile and raised the pyramids above it.
I heard the singing of the Mississippi when Abe Lincoln went
down to New Orleans, and I've seen its muddy bosom
turn all golden in the sunset.
Moving by suggestion, by
naming particular rivers and particular activities performed nearby, the poem
implicates the whole history of African and American slavery without ever
articulating the word. "I bathed in the Euphrates" and "I built
my hut near the Congo" are the normal activities of natural man performed
in his natural habitat. That may be an unnecessarily anthropological way of
putting it, but the lines are the equivalent of the speaker having said,
"I made my life undisturbed in the place where I lived." The
shift--and the lesson--occurs in the next two lines. Raising the pyramids above
the Nile was the act of slaves, and if ever "Abe Lincoln went down to New
Orleans," it would have been in the context of American slavery and the Civil
War. Implicit in the history of a people who had first been free and then
enslaved is the vision of freedom regained, and therein lies the program. The
final line of the poem, "My soul has grown deep like the rivers,"
suggests wisdom in the word "deep." The wisdom imparted by the poem,
beyond the memory of the suffering of slavery, includes a more deeply embedded
memory of freedom. This is perhaps the more powerful memory, or the more
sustaining one, and even if deferred, will reemerge in one form or another.
The double identification
with penetrative time and receptive timelessness appears perhaps most notably
in "The Negro Speaks of Rivers" (Crisis, June 1921), a poem
dedicated to the late W. E. B. Du Bois. "Rivers" presents the
narrator's skill in retracing known civilization back to the source in East
Africa. Within thirteen lines and five stanzas, through the suggestion of
wisdom by anagoge, we re-project ourselves into aboriginal consciousness. Then
the speaker affinns the spirit distilled from human history, ranging from 3000 B.C.
through the mid-nineteenth century to the author himself at the brink of the
Harlem Renaissance. The powerful repetend "I've known rivers. / Ancient,
dusky rivers" closes the human narrative in nearly a circle, for the verse
has turned itself subtly from an external focus to a unified and internal one:
"My soul has grown deep like the rivers." Except for the physical and
spiritual dimensions, the subjective "I" and the "river"
read the same.
When the Euphrates flows
from eastern Turkey southeast and southwest into the Tigris, it recalls the
rise as well as the fall of the Roman Empire. For over two thousand years the
water helped delimit that domain. Less so did the Congo, which south of the
Sahara demarcates the natural boundaries between white and Black Africa. The
latter empties into the Atlantic ocean; the Nile flows northward from Uganda
into the Mediterranean; in the United States the Mississippi River flows
southeast from north central Minnesota to the Gulf of Mexico. Whether north or
south, east or west, "River" signifies the fertility as well as the
dissemination of life in concentric half-circles. The liquid, as the
externalized form of the contemplative imagination, has both depth and flow.
"The Negro Speaks of Rivers" reclaims the origins in Africa of both
physical and spiritual humanity.
langston hughes
Mother to Son
Well, son, I'll tell you:
Life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
It's had tacks in it,
And splinters,
And boards all torn up,
And places with no carpet on the floor --
Bare.
But all the time
I'se been a-climin' on,
And reachin' landin's,
And turnin' corners,
And sometimes goin, in the dark
Where there ain't been no light.
So boy, don't you turn back.
Don't you set down on the steps
'Cause you finds it's kinder hard.
Don't you fall now --
For I'se still goin', honey,
I'se still cimbin'
And Life for me ain't been no crystal
stair.
langston hughes
The Weary Blues
Droning a drowsy syncopated tune,
Rocking back and forth to a mellow croon,
I heard a Negro
play.
Down on Lenox Avenue the other night
By the pale dull pallor of an old gas light
He did a lazy
sway . . .
He did a lazy
sway . . .
To the tune o' those Weary Blues.
With his ebony hands on each ivory key
He made that poor piano moan with melody.
O Blues!
Swaying to and fro on his rickety stool
He played that sad raggy tune like a musical fool.
Sweet Blues!
Coming from a black man's soul.
O Blues!
In a deep song voice with a melancholy tone
I heard that Negro sing, that old piano moan--
"Ain't got
nobody in all this world,
Ain't got
nobody but ma self.
I's gwine to
quit ma frownin'
And put ma troubles on the shelf."
Thump, thump, thump, went his foot on the floor.
He played a few chords then he sang some more--
"I got the
Weary Blues
And I can't
be satisfied.
Got the Weary
Blues
And can't be
satisfied--
I ain't happy
no mo'
And I wish
that I had died."
And far into the night he crooned that tune.
The stars went out and so did the moon.
The singer stopped playing and went to bed
While the Weary Blues echoed through his head.
He slept like a rock or a man that's dead.
In The Big Sea
Hughes reported that his "Weary Blues," which won him his first
poetry prize, "included the first blues [he's] ever heard way back in
Lawrence, Kansas, when [he] was a kid."
The blues verse in
"The Weary Blues:"
I got de weary blues
And I can't be satisfied.
Got de weary blues
And can't be satisfied.
I ain't happy no mo'
And I wish that I had died.
is very close to the
"Texas Worried Blues" recorded by songster Henry Thomas in 1928:
The worried blues
God, I'm feelin' bad.
I've got the worried blues
God, I'm feelin' bad.
I've got the worried blues
God, I'm feelin' bad.
In "The Weary
Blues" Hughes dealt with the blues singer and his song in relation to the
speaker of the poem. The poem gave its title to Hughes'' first volume,
published in 1926.
Donald Dickinson saw the
first verse of "The Weary Blues" as "an alliterative innovation
in the style of Lindsay's 'The Congo.'" However, the verse, with its
references to crooning, its strategic repetition of the "lazy sway"
line, and its description of a blues performer and his playing, seems to derive
partly from the vaudeville blues tradition as well. For example, Richard M.
Jones's "Jazzin' Baby Blues," recorded in 1922 by Alberta Hunter and
by Ethel Waters, and in 1923 by King Oliver and by Eva Taylor, discussed the
way "that old piano man he sure can jazz 'em some":
Jazzin' baby blues are
drivin' me insane
There's nothin' to them but that lonesome blue refrain.
But when that cornet and that flute begin to play,
Just make me get right up and throw myself away.
Just play those jazzin' baby
Blues for me all night and day.
Bessie Smith's recording of
Fletcher Henderson's "Jazzbo Brown from Memphis Town" celebrated the
clarinet playing of a man with no professional training:
Jazzbo Brown from Memphis
Town,
He's a clarinet hound!
He can't dance,
He can't sing,
But Lawdy, how he can play that thing!
He ain't seen no music,
too.
He can't read a note.
But he's the playin'est fool
On that Memphis boat.
Hughes's poem, too, deals
with the singer and his song, but Hughes presents the flip-side of the romantic
vaudeville blues image of the wild and celebrated jazz player, good-timing his
way through life. It is doubly significant that Hughes gave his volume the
title of this poem and that it is the first poem (following "Proem")
in the volume. It suggests that the entire volume begins with and is informed
by the "weary blues," and the tradition with which one must come to
grips.
The poem itself is a
third-person description with some interpolated first-person, eight- and
twelve-bar blues lyrics, giving it a sophisticated structure not unlike some
vaudeville blues songs.
. . .
Clearly in this poem the
blues unite the speaker and the performer in some way. There is an immediate
implied relationship between the two because of the ambiguous syntax. The
"droning" and "rocking" can refer either to the
"I" or to the "Negro," immediately suggesting that the
music invites, even requires, the participation of the speaker. Further, the
words suggest that the speaker's poem is a "drowsy syncopated tune"
as well, connecting speaker and performer even further by having them working
in the same tradition. The performer remains anonymous, unlike Bessie Smith's
Jazzbo Brown, because he is not a famous, celebrated performer; he is one of
the main practitioners living the unglamorous life that is far more common than
the kinds of lives the most successful blues stars lived. His "drowsy
syncopated tune," which at once implies both rest and activity (a tune
with shifting accents), signals the tension between the romantic image and the
reality, and very likely influences the speaker to explore the source of the
tension between the singer's stoicism and his resignation to his fate as
expressed in his blues lyrics. Significantly, the eight-bar blues stanza, the
one with no repeat line, is his hopeful stanza. Its presence as an eight-bar
stanza works by passing more quickly, reinforcing both his loneliness and the
fleeting nature of the kind of hope expressed. This is especially true since the
singer's next stanza, a twelve-bar blues, uses the repeat line to emphasize his
weariness and lack of satisfaction, and his wish to die.
All the singer seems to
have is his moaning blues, the revelation of "a black man's soul,"
and those blues are what helps keep him alive. Part of that ability to sustain
is apparently the way the blues help him keep his identity. Even in singing the
blues, he is singing about his life, about the way that he and other blacks
have to deal with white society. As his black hands touch the white keys, the
accepted Western sound of the piano and the form of Western music are changed.
The piano itself comes to life as an extension of the singer, and moans,
transformed by the black tradition to a mirror of black sorrow that also reflects
the transforming power and beauty of the black tradition. Finally, it is that
tradition that helps keep the singer alive and gives him his identity, since
when he is done and goes to bed he sleeps like an inanimate or de-animated
object, with the blues echoing beyond his playing, beyond the daily cycles, and
through both conscious and unconscious states.
Another source of the
melancholy aura of the poem is the lack of an actual connection between the
performer and the speaker. They do not strike up a conversation, share a drink,
or anything else. The speaker observes, helpless to do anything about the
performer and his weariness save to write the poem and try to understand the
performer's experiences and how they relate to his own. Ultimately he finds the
man and his songs wistfully compelling; and he hears in his song the collective
weary blues of blacks in America and tries to reconcile the sadness with the
sweetness of the form and expression.
The poem is a fitting
opening not only to this volume, but to all of Hughes's volumes. It combines
traditional blues stanzas that emphasize the roots of African-American
experience, touches of vaudeville blues as the roots were being
"refined," pride in African-American creativity and forms of expression,
and a sense of the weariness that ties together generations of
African-Americans. With the words "Sweet Blues," Hughes strikes upon
the central paradox with which the poem attempts to come to terms. It is one of
his central themes.
From: Tracy, Steven C. Langston
Hughes and the Blues. Urbana: University of Illinois Press, 1988. Copyright
©1988 by the Board of Trustees of the University of Illinois.
The paradoxes of
self-veiling [an unassertive, undemanding adaptation to the environment. Its
motive--to survive--is positive, but its vision limited] are sharply etched in
the title piece of Langston Hughes's first volume of poems, The Weary Blues.
The blues singer in the poem transcends "his rickety stool," which
seems to represent his life condition and not just the appurtenances of the
joint: "He played that sad raggy tune like a musical fool." We can
reasonably infer that nothing in his life conveys the concentration and depth
of his music. He collapses after he plays, and it almost seems that he must
alternate between comatoseness and music. His life, then, deeply veils what his
music expresses.
But how much certainty do
we have concerning what his music expresses? The manner of playing ("like
a musical fool") and thematter involved do not chime together. Where his
play is vivid, sure, superior, what he sings is all depression and defeat:
. . . .
His stamina as a singer
("far into the night he crooned that tune") does little to offset the
intensification of woe in the song, and woe finally seems to have undone him
when he "stopped playing and went to bed," for "he slept like a
rock or a man that's dead." He has played himself out, and it is
impossible to tell whether his woe or his playing has contributed more to his
undoing. The blues may give us more than the life, but it gives us meanings
veiled in paradox.
But the poem contains a
complex reversal. The blues singer's apparent self-exhaustion (for his state is
a product of his will, his soul) is counterbalanced by the fact that he has
played himself into the heart and mind of the speaker in "The Weary
Blues." This effect is less obvious here than in Wordsworth's "The
Solitary Reaper," a strangely analogous poem, but the speaker's attachment
comes out in two ways. First, more than the coming of daylight is indicated in
the line "The stars went out and so did the moon"; we may understand
also that the speaker is possessed by the singer's woe, and his art, and so
loses a sense of the world beyond. And second, the speaker is telling as much
about himself as about the singer when he says:
The singer stopped playing
and went to bed
While The Weary Blues echoed through his head.
He slept like a rock or a man that's dead.
Has the speaker followed
the singer home in fascination, in obsession? And in whose head does the echo
of the weary blues play? The singer's, yes, but not his alone. The speaker is
also bearing "that music," as Wordsworth says, in his heart. Not even
the speaker's empathy with the blues singer, though, can enable us to penetrate
the latter's veil of sleep, a veil as opaque as rock and as deep as death.
It is an accident that
offsets the singer's repetitious self-veilings. Clearly he goes through his routine,
his ritual, every night, and as clearly a Langston Hughes does does not often
happen by.
From Afro-American
Literature in the Twentieth Century: The Achievement of Intimacy. Copyright
© 1984 by Michael Cooke.
Hughes's aesthetic works
out a trope that brings internality and externality into a state of opposition.
One sees an example of how this unfolds in "The Weary Blues." The
speaker in the poem documents the experience of listening to a piano player in
Harlem play the blues. Steven Tracy's compelling argument asserts that the
piano player and speaker are united by the performance.
I would like to argue to
the contrary however. In my view, the poem works out Hughes's apprehension, his
feeling that his ability to understand the emotions that generated this form of
artistic expression was not on a par with the expression itself This is
indicated by the last line of the poem, where the speaker notes that the piano
player "slept like a rock or a man that's dead." The key word here is
"or," for it denotes the imprecision of the speaker's understanding.
What the blues articulates is the simultaneous presence of the "tragic and
comic aspects of the human conditions." Thus, the blues in the poem is not
the conventional "either/or" condition configured within the
Cartesian construct. Rather, the piano player, by metaphorizing loneliness has
already chosen self-recovery. The poem's last line, then, ignores the blues
performer's ability to articulate pain and likewise to subsume it. That the
speaker and the piano player never meet, or as Tracy asserts, "strike up a
conversation, share a drink, or anything else," suggests that the
experience does not rupture the speaker's externality. He never enters that
space whereby the piano player is speaking for him, giving utterance to his
loneliness. Finally, at no point in time does the speaker in the poem insert
himself into the lyrics.
What this implies is that
"The Weary Blues" can also be read as an anti-Jazz Age poem. That is,
a case can be made in which we need not equate the speaker in the poem with
Hughes at all. While Hughes obviously had a strong desire to "link the
lowly blues to formal poetry," locking him into the poem ignores its
efficacy as cultural commentary. Given the increasing number of whites
traveling to Harlem to be entertained in clubs like The Cotton Club, the poem
can be seen as an attempt on Hughes's part to warn the community that African
American expression was being appropriated by mainstream culture.
The poem's structure
enables this reading, if only because the speaker "quotes" the
lyrics, but never allows his own voice to give way to them. Moreover, the
speaker is "Down on Lenox Avenue. . . " which also, interestingly
enough, marks the location of the Cotton Club and thus implies travel from
downtown Manhattan. The I/he dichotomy Hughes establishes never collapses,
which means that we can read the exteriority of the speaker as that which
pertains to someone being entertained, who will leave Harlem after the
performance is over. In this respect, the "or" in the last line calls
our attention to the slippage that occurs when an understanding of the blues is
lacking. That the speaker utters the possibility that the piano player has
killed himself illustrates his failure to realize that the blues is performed
reflection and not a preface to suicidal behavior.
From "Dead Rocks and
Sleeping Men: Aurality in the Aesthetic of Langston Hughes," in The
Langston Hughes Review.
The performance in the
title poem [. . . .] completes the ritualistic conversion from Black American
suffering into epic communion. On 1 May 1925, during a banquet at an
"elegant" Fifth Avenue restaurant in New York City, the poem won a
prize from Opportunity magazine, where it subsequently appeared. The thirty-five-line
lyric presents a singer and pianist who plays on Harlem's Lenox Avenue one
night. Having performed well in the club, he goes to bed, as the song still
sounds in his mind: "I got de weary blues / And I can't be
satisfied." In the "dull pallor of an old gas light," his ebony
hands have played on the ivory keys. During the "lazy sway" from the
piano stool, he has patted the floor with his feet, struck a few chords, and
then sung some more. Finally, he sleeps "like a rock or a man that's
dead," the artistic spirit exhausted.
His performance clearly
implies several dramatic actions. While one sets the dynamic playing--the Black
self-affirmation against what fades--a second presents a vital remaking of the
Black self-image. A third shows the transcendence through racial stereotype
into lyrical style. From the dramatic situation of the player, both musical as
well as performed, the poem imposes isolation and loneliness yet the refusal to
accept them. The song marks a metonym for the human imagination. In a deftness
often overlooked, Hughes uses anaphora to narrate an imperial self so as to
sustain the blues stanza as countermelody and ironic understatement:
"Ain't got nobody in all this world, / Ain't got nobody but ma self."
What most complements the lyric skill is the dramatic movement of feeling. In
narrative distancing his speakers achieve a double identification.
From The Art and
Language of Langston Hughes. Copyright © 1989 by The University Press of
Kentucky.
langston hughes
I, Too
I, too, sing America.
I am the darker brother.
They send me to eat in the kitchen
When company comes,
But I laugh,
And eat well,
And grow strong.
Tomorrow,
I'll be at the table
When company comes.
Nobody'll dare
Say to me,
"Eat in the kitchen,"
Then.
Besides,
They'll see how beautiful I am
And be ashamed--
I, too, am America.
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Mulatto
Mulatto
mulatto
children are not accepted by their white fathers…
Modernist
features ~> Protest, denial of white and black
Imagery~
Something you look for in a text…
Imagism~
a movement that lasted 10-12 years in modernism…it does something specific…its something stark that demands attention…contrast…
Imagistic
Poetry~ In a Station at the Metro…The Red Wheel Barrow…the end of The Lost
Beautifulness…
Realism~
presents reality as reality is…
This dramatic dialogue
offers a tensely individualized conflict between father and son that is
hardened by the vigor and scorn of the words and broadened by carefully placed,
suggestive details from nature. The son's adamant voice opens the poem, but is
transformed into a passive Negro feminine presence exuberantly recalled by the
white father, who feels half-pleasurably nagged in his fancied return to the
conception and infancy of his son. The poet, employing the past awakened in the
white man, leaves him musing and moves the growing child swiftly through years
of hostile rejection by his white half-brothers--implying virtual estrangement
from his father, whom he no longer reminds of sexual freedom in the Negro
quarter. "Niggers ain't my brother" is the rebuff so
ungrammatically worded as to show the displacement of reason and truth by blind
social restrictions. In the last third of the poem, the father's reminiscences
of woods, stars, and exploitable black women are slightly rephrased,
indistinctly merging the author's voice with the father's. At the end, "I
am your son, white man!" is repeated as a challenging accusation,
weaker now, yet taking precedence over the phrases enclosing it, the
author-father's echoes of earlier sensuous memories. Oddly, this is the
father's poem. The delicious memories, the unweakened sense of arbitrary power
to take and to withhold, the expansive portents of nature, even though
ironically misconstrued--all are his. The son is the catalyst, but the father glows.
The author expands his profoundly racial material and so convincingly explores
a white father's subconscious that the poet's own hovering irony becomes
inseparable from the ambivalent remembrances of his subject.
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Songs
for a Dark Girl
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Vagabonds
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Genius
Child
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Refugee
in America
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Madam and her Madam
I worked for a woman,
She wasn't mean--
But she had a twelve-room
House to clean.
Had to get breakfast,
Dinner, and supper, too--
Then take care of her children
When I got through.
Wash, iron, and scrub,
Walk the dog around--
It was too much,
Nearly broke me down.
I said, Madam,
Can it be
You trying to make a
Pack-horse out of me?
She opened her mouth.
She cried, Oh, no!
You know, Alberta,
I love you so!
I said, Madam,
That may be true--
But I'll be dogged
If I love you!
"Madam
and Her Madam"
Main
character relates to Hannah in "The Lost Beautifulness"
Unlike Hannah…the character doesn't
have a false consciousness
All
of the characters in the poem…according to Hughes…are equal…
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Madam’s Calling Card
"Madam's
Calling Cards"
Shows
a struggle for identity…
The
character…Alberta K. Johnson…wants to be recognized as an American…
She
defends her identity as an American…
She
might be uneducated because she doesn't understand the different writing
styles…
Hughes
makes a point in poetry that Ellison tries to make in prose…
- Invisible…and insistence on
Americaness…
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Silhouette
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Visitors
to the Black Belt
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Note
on Commercial Theatre
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Democracy
Democracy
will not come
Today, this year
Nor ever
Through compromise and fear.
I have as much right
As the other fellow has
To stand
On my two feet
And own the land.
I tire so of hearing people say,
Let things take their course.
Tomorrow is another day.
I do not need my freedom when I'm dead.
I cannot live on tomorrow's bread.
Freedom
Is a strong seed
Planted
In a great need.
I live here, too.
I want freedom
Just as you.
from Cane
Georgia’s Dusk
Fern
Georgia Dusk
The sky, lazily disdaining to pursue
The setting sun, too indolent to hold
A lengthened tournament for flashing gold,
Passively darkens for night's barbecue,
A feast of moon and men and barking hounds,
An orgy for some genius of the South
With blood-hot eyes and cane-lipped scented mouth,
Surprised in making folk-songs from soul sounds.
The sawmill blows its whistle, buzz-saws stop,
And silence breaks the bud of knoll and hill,
Soft settling pollen where plowed lands fulfill
Their early promise of a bumper crop.
Smoke from the pyramidal sawdust pile
Curls up, blue ghosts of trees, tarrying low
Where only chips and stumps are left to show
The solid proof of former domicile.
Meanwhile, the men, with vestiges of pomp,
Race memories of king and caravan,
High-priests, an ostrich, and a juju-man,
Go singing through the footpaths of the swamp.
Their voices rise . . the pine trees are guitars,
Strumming, pine-needles fall like sheets of rain . .
Their voices rise . . the chorus of the cane
Is caroling a vesper to the stars . .
O singers, resinous and soft your songs
Above the sarcred whisper of the pines,
Give virgin lips to cornfield concubines,
Bring dreams of Christ to dusky cane-lipped throngs.
***Important to note that
if you couple Toomer with anyone it should be Eliot or Poud because of his
experimentalism.
Jean Toomer brings several
themes together that we’ve talked about this semester.
1.
How does “Georgia
Dusk” capture the theme of Industrialization?
2.
What is Toomer trying
to say about it in relation to the characters that he draws?
3.
How is “Fern” a symbol
of Georgia the place, and simultaneously a symbol of the African Americans
community of Georgia?
-
Important to note that
Fern is a person, place and a thing. It
is a metaphor for how the African Americans are rooted in the soil and thusly
how they are rooted in the concept of their own nation / America.
4.
Analyze “Portrait of
Georgia.” How does personification work
in the text?
How is Seventh Street a
commentary on urban life?
Harlem Dancer
“McKay’s
radical politics, already formed in Jamaica, rose from his belief that racism
was inseparable from capitalism, which he saw as a structure designed to
perpetuate economic inequality. To him,
attacking capitalism was attacking racial injustice.” (1457)
“In
the later years of his life, appalled by Stalin’s purges, McKay repudiated his
earlier Communist sympathies.” (1457)
APPLAUDING youths laughed with young prostitutes
And watched her perfect, half-clothed body sway;
Her voice was like the sound of blended flutes
Blown by black players upon a picnic day.
She sang and danced on gracefully and calm, 5
The light gauze hanging loose about her form;
To me she seemed a proudly-swaying palm
Grown lovelier for passing through a storm.
Upon her swarthy neck black, shiny curls
Profusely fell; and, tossing coins in praise, 10
The wine-flushed, bold-eyed boys, and even the girls,
Devoured her with their eager, passionate gaze;
But, looking at her falsely-smiling face
I knew her self was not in that strange place.
Everyone
is watching her but she’s not there…
There are some characters in the poem who are into the music and into
the dancer in a way we see in “How it Feels to Be Colored Me” … Music
connection similar to that we see in Blacker the Berry and How It Feels to Be
Colored Me
Baldwin,
Langston Hughes and McKay all find Jazz music to be a mechanism of going below
the surface of consciousness. Inviting
you to think about it as something which holds the African American Community
together.
Dancer
in Harlem Dancer is creating an effect where the girl is not actually
there.
This
is a sonnet form … rhyme couplet … inversion of music and language as we have
spoken about it (in that the dancer isn’t into the music, but the characters
watching are). The girl represents
Harlem.
claude mckay
If We Must Die
If We Must Die
IF we must die—let it not be like hogs
Hunted and penned in an inglorious spot,
While round us bark the mad and hungry dogs,
Making their mock at our accursed lot.
If we must die—oh, let us nobly die, 5
So that our precious blood may not be shed
In vain; then even the monsters we defy
Shall be constrained to honor us though dead!
Oh, Kinsmen! We must meet the common foe;
Though far outnumbered, let us still be brave, 10
And for their thousand blows deal one death-blow!
What though before us lies the open grave?
Like men we’ll face the murderous, cowardly pack,
Pressed to the wall, dying, but—fighting back!
***McKay
argues that racism is a necessary component / element of capitalism (as we see
in his biography): “McKay’s radical
politics, already formed in Jamaica, rose from his belief that racism was
inseparable from capitalism, which he saw as a structure designed to perpetuate
economic inequality. To him, attacking
capitalism was attacking racial injustice.”
(1457)
This
is a sonnet… You can compare this work
to Blood on the Forge, in that, there is a distinction between nfighting
against the riding boss and the fight of suppression in the north (qualitatively
different).
It
is important to remember Carl Sandburg’s “Chicago” and the riots of 1919 in
which lots of people organizing around radical left wing causes.
Who
is the audience of this poem: “The folk”
or the masses
We’ve
taken all your blows, now we’re going to give you one.
Evacuated
sonnet form and given it this reflects his dual identity.
Invisible Man
1.
Interpret the following from Ellison's prologue..
"That invisibility to which I
refer occurs because of a peculiar disposition in the eyes of those with whom I
come in contact. A matter of the construction of their inner eyes, those eyes
with which they look through their physical eyes upon reality (2077)"
Answer~
invisibility comes with skin color and prejudice. People can physically see him
but he is insignificant….People are raised to feel that way towards black
people… Even after the fight with the white guy, the black guy was still
invisible …He is not a form of humanity that is deserving of equal treatment to
the white guy…He is invisible to the ideology that the white guy has…
Beginnings
of post modernism~ presents two forms of reality…the one that exists in the
white world…and the one that exists for the invisible man…
2.
Interpret the following…"…I had a notion that of all in the room she saw
only me with her impersonal eyes (2086)." How is this similar to what we
see in Harlem Dancer…how is this different?
Answer~ It is similar because…the gender
relationship….the women are viewed as objects of desire…and the people don't
belong where they are…
It
is different because…the race…the consciousness…and the way that the women were
viewed as objects of desire…
3.
Interpret
the following…"There was nothing to do but what we were told. All ten of
us climbed under ropes and allowed ourselves to be blindfolded with broad white
clothes…I wanted to see, to see more desperately than ever before. But the
blindfold was tight as a think skin-puckering scab and when I raised my gloved
hands to push the layers of white aside a voice yelled, "oh no you don't
black bastard! Leave that alone!" (2086-2087)
They
had no choice, they had to do what they did, and they didn't fight it. He
doesn't mind being invisible but he needed to see that he was something. He was
in the dark and needed to know what was going on. Refers back to slavery and
share croppers. Technically there is a choice, but they didn't have one.
Education is important to him, the scholarship is not an avenue towards upward
mobility.
It
didn't matter where he thought he was…he was interested in the specific form of
power. CAPITALIST POWER Racial separation is used as a hook for capitalist
power…Without capitalism…there is no racism…and vice versa…Individuals are no
longer human, they exist for capitalist power…
The
invisible man thought that his speech was the one thing that would move him up
in the world…He wants to use the system because he thinks that the system will
make room for him…Ultimately, he will always be black…
Ellison
points out that he is interested in being a writer rather than a spokesman for
a cause or a representative figure. Does your reading of Invisible Man provide
affirmation for his desire, or does your reading contradict his desire? What do
you make of this statement? Is it possible for an African American to simply be
a writer? What, for instance, does it mean to suggest that "the richness
of life and art becomes possible when the imagination is liberated from close
realism."
Answer~
He is not trying to live an aristocratic life. At one point he agrees with
society and how they see him. The society only recognizes him (black people
altogether) when they do something wrong. He builds his story off of his
experiences.
Social
interaction is essential to human beings…
Ellison
attaches construction of racism to capitalism and materialism…He (the invisible
man) wanted to show the art in the construction of society- racism, whiteness,
blackness.
He uses his intellect to draw pictures and he
makes illusions to obscure things..
Going to Meet the Man
One Never forgets What They are Taught James
Baldwin, an African American author born in Harlem, was raised by his violent
step-father, David. His father was a lay preacher who hated whites and felt
that all whites would be judged as they deserve by a vengeful God (Klinkowitz
and Pritchard, p.1999). Usually, the father's anger was directed toward his son
through violence. Baldwin's history, in part, aids him in his insight of racism
within the family. He understands that racists are not born, but rather
racists' attitudes and behaviors are learned in the early stages of childhood.
Baldwin's Going to Meet the Man is a perfect example of his capability to
analyze the growth of a innocent child to a racist. Every child is born with
innocence. During the flashback to Jesse's childhood, where he witnesses the
mutilation and torture of a blackman, Jesse's innocence is apparent. Jesse has
a black friend named Otis who he hasn't seen for a few days. When he asks his
father where Otis is, the father replies, I reckon Otis's folks was afrad to
let him show himself this morning(Baldwin, p. 2006). Jesse naturally responds,
But Otis ain't do nothing. His father explains, We just wanna make sure Otis
don't do nothing, and you tell him what your Daddy said(Baldwin, p. 2006). This
statement implies that because Otis is black, he is eventually going to do
something wrong. The father has subconsciously put negative thoughts inside of
Jesse's head. Baldwin's own father also acted in this way when he stereotyped all
whites as being bad and claimed they would be punished by a vengeful God. In
the midst of all the commotion, Jesse is unable to sleep the night before the
lynching. Within another flashback to that night, Jesse feels a strong need to
have his mother close to him but he knew his father would not like
this(Baldwin, p. 2006). He wanted to call his mother and becomes very
frustrated and angry with his father because the father is the reason that he
could not got to his mother. He knows that they are going to have intercourse
and this bothers him. He heard his mother's moan, his father's sigh; he gritted
his teeth(Baldwin, p. 2006). Sigmund Freud's Edipus Complex explains Jesse's
reaction. The Edipus Complex is a son's sexual longing for his mother. Jesse becomes
jealous and his father's breathing seemed to fill the world(Baldwin, p. 2006).
As result of the longing for the mother, a resentment toward the father arises
because the father has the mother all to himself. Jesse, in this situation,
would like to replace the father so that he may experience the mother in a
sexual manner. Jesse does not shake this feeling until he replaces the longing
of his mother with a clossnes to the father, a common effect of the Edipus
complex. Jesse's innocence disappears completely during the flashback of the
day of the lynching. The father is getting Jesse excited about the violence to
come as he assures him, We're going on a picnic. You won't ever forget this
picnic(Baldwin, p. 2007), Jesse replies, Are we going to see the bad nigger?(Baldwin,
p. 2007). He uses the adjective bad, revealing the influence of the father 's
previous comments about the black man. They arrive at the lynching and Jesse's
father shows concern toward how Jesse is feeling, you all right?(Baldwin, p.
2009). Then, the father reached down suddenly and sat Jesse on his shoulders,
making Jesse feel like he was bonding with his father. He felt secure. They
watched the relentless burning of the negro together and Jesse last thought of
innocence arouse, What did the man do?(Baldwin, p. 2010). After asking himself
he looked to his mother and felt, she was more beautiful than he had ever seen
her before and he began to feel a joy he had never felt before(Baldwin, p.
2010). After the Negro genitals were mutilated he was left to slowly die, the
father looked to Jesse with peaceful eyes and said, Well, I told you, you
wasn't ever going to forget this picnic(Baldwin, p.2010). It is as this moment
that Freud's Edipus complex is once again displayed. The bonding and identification
felt by Jesse toward the father has replaced the longing for the mother. Jesse
loved his father more than he had ever loved him(Baldwin, p. 2010). He feels
like a man because, his father had carried throught a mighty test, had revealed
to him a great secret which would be the key to his life forever. He
subconsciously traded his innocence for closness to his father. There has
surely been no black writer better able to imagine whit experience, to speack
in various tones of differents kinds and behaviors of people or places other
than his own(Klinkowtiz and Pritchard, p. 1999). Going to Meet the Man allows
readers to recongnize how a racist is built through ingnorance. Baldwin ends
his story with Jesse in bed with his wife. The memories of the mutilation of
the negro arise in his mind and he feels arrounsed. He turns to his wife and
says, Come on sugar, I'm going to do you like a nigger. Jesse cannot recognize
that these memories of the lynching have made him sexually arroused by
violence. As a result, he has become a violent man with a disturbed idea of
love, sex and blacks.
1.
Baldwin’s
exploration of the inner workings of a southern racists mind may, today, seem
presumptive. Discuss the ways in which
he succeeds (or not) in this difficult and dangerous feat. Why might his text be considered difficult
and dangerous?
Extremity
of the slurs and actions … it is
interesting how we might perceive as hyperbolic nowadays because we are removed
from this, however, there are many who are afraid that they may not even come
home when they go out the door.
***Baldwin
is concerned with the psychology of racism…
what are necessary components going into a racist psychology. Sex, violence and concept of race connected
and according to Baldwin create racism.
According to Professor, on plantations there would be black males
utilized for the purpose of impregnating and propagating workforce and thusly
African Americans were treated as livestock.
White male psyche needs to possess black sexual prowess, as Jesse
becomes depressed man who needs escape so he has sex with black women and
abuses/kills black men.
2.
In
what ways is Baldwin’s text an important political (perhaps even moral) act or
gesture that resonates beyond the usual scope of imaginative fiction?
Wanted
to show the radical violence of racism… making political statement but getting
into the nature of human beings through social context and through unraveling
their psychology.
3.
“These
men were his models, they had been friends to his father and they had taught
him what it means to be a man” (2195).
What is the significance of this exerpt? How does it contribute to our understanding of Jesse both as a
character in the text and as a prototype?
The
perpetuation of a system… violence
begets violence… dehumanization of
African Americans allows the white characters to treat the blacks like less
than human.
Jesse is a prototype, in that, he is bred like others
into a vicious cycle
What
creates Jesse? - Jesse is
representative of changing in concept of morality of this issue of racism. He knows right –vs- wrong, however, he
perpetuates system regardless of what he feels
because it is dictated by social norms mores and learning.
4.
What
is the relevance of this story to the period of late modernism we are
studying? How does it reflect the
breakup of traditional approaches to texts, American culture, etc.?
Story
starts and ends with sex… people so entrenched in their racism that it affects
every aspect of their daily life, even the most intimate.
***
Emmett Till was killed for whistling to a white woman and was beaten and shot
and mutilated … He had gone home to
visit … His mother put his body on
display and a photograph was shown in
Jet Magazine… this event kick
started the Civil Rights Movement.
The Man Who was Almost a
Man
The
Man Who Was Almost a Man" chronicles the story of Dave, a young, African-American
farm laborer struggling to assert his identity in the restrictive racist
atmosphere of the rural South. Longing for a symbol of power and masculinity,
Dave fantasizes that owning a gun will win him the respect he craves. After he
gets a gun, he learns that he needs more than a gun to earn respect.
It
runs counter to the politically sensitive rules about how we talk about race.
It's not just that there's the word "nigger." The protagonist is a
liar and he's comically stupid, and an angry, confused black man with a gun.
The only reasonable character in the story without any glaring vices is white
Mr. Hawkins. Dave, the protagonist, wishes he had an extra bullet to shoot at
this decent man's "white
house."
Wright doesn"'"t
emphasize his dysfunctional family and downplay his stupidity and his habitual
lying.
On the surface, the message of the story is that black people are stupid,
deceitful, unkind, violent and a threat to white people. This man who was almost a man,
but not quite, deserves to be called "boy" at 17 and forever. The
story ends with a kindly white man
being cheating out of $50 and Dave, the black boy-man, riding off into the night with nothing but anger, a
gun and a long track record of poor judgment.
But upon further examination, Dave appears to be less responsible for his
shortcomings. His poverty is deep and his parents are awful and he has no
future. His desire to get a gun so he can become a man is ignorant, but what other recourse does he have? In
his environment there is practically no way he could grow up and develop self
respect and the respect of others. Dave is treated just like a mule. He's given
no responsibility, not even the chance to hold on to part of his earnings.
At first we might think he's on such a short leash because he's semi-retarded
but when taking a look at the treatment from his parents and his future
prospects, it's not hard to see that it could be the result of lowered
expectations.
Dave doesn't want a gun, he wants to be a man,
which is a natural, healthy desire that hasn't yet been beat out of him. The
fact that he thinks a gun will do the trick is the only solution his
environment can have him imagine. Dave's belief that having a gun will make him
a man is ridiculous and
repellent but as the story turns out, his pursuit of having a gun is his ticket
out of town, his only hope for becoming a man.
Dave stumbles forward in this story, not backward. He's placing trust not in
his solutions, but in his burning desire to become a man. And that's what pushes him forward. Some protagonists
struggle with their situations and their conflict creates light along with the
heat. They learn a lesson, they have a realization, and they take a step
forward. Not so for Dave. He burns with desire and the most critical action he
takes is one with his eyes closed. He kills the mule and though he doesn't
realize it, this sets in motion his liberation, his chance to become a man.
His environment was too oppressive for him to leave in daylight, with his eyes
wide open, knowing exactly what he was doing.
Growing up, maturing, becoming a man,
is not a smooth process. It is not an even series of progressive steps. The
past doesn't always fade away. Often you have to kill it before the future can
be born. Dave had to kill a mule so that he would not forever be one himself.
A first glance, it looks like Mr. Hawkins is just a fairly nice fellow. But
when Dave inexplicably arrives early for work, Mr. Hawkins just gives him more
work to do. In a way, that's what you'd do with a beast of burden that
exhibited extra energy and willingness to work. When it is revealed that Dave
shot the mule, Mr. Hawkins isn't emotional. Dave didn't disappoint him--he
doesn't think of Dave in those terms. He sees Dave as a mule. If he fires him
it would be like shooting his own mule. The point is to keep Dave working. Dave
senses this and that's why he talks about taking a goodbye shot at his
"white house" to put a little fear in him. At least he would be
reacting to him with a little human emotion and the fear would serve him right.
Lady Lazarus
I have done it again.
|
Dying |
In contemplating Sylvia
Plath’s “Lady Lazarus,” as a modernist work my thoughts initially lingered on
imagism and the use of imagist metaphors to liken herself to a victim of the
holocaust and the likening of the antagonistic forces in her life, within the
context of her poem to Nazis or implements of Nazi destruction. In the following quoted lines, she likens
her skin to that of a holocaust victim, whose skin has been used to make a
lampshade, as per one of the twisted Nazi practices: “A sort of walking miracle, my skin / Bright as a Nazi lampshade”
(lines 5:6) She goes so far as to
express that her face is “a
featureless, fine / Jew linen” (lines 8:9).
Understanding that Sylvia Plath herself committed suicide is significant
in a reading of the poem, in that, it brings out the theme of suicide and
death. As the poem states: “Dying / Is an art, like everything else. /
I do it exceptionally well” (lines
42:45) The implication in these lines
is that death is an action, perhaps carried out by the narrative voice (Plath
herself). Even the name of the poem
“Lady Lazarus” hints toward a character re-born out of resurrection and raised
from the dead, as the footnotes explain Lazarus was by Jesus in John
11.1-45. The likening of the narrator to
a cat, in that, the expression that the narrator (Plath) has as many lives as a
cat and is already on the third rebirth is further example of this repetitive
pattern of life, death, and rebirth. If
indeed “Lady Lazarus” is indicative of Plath’s world view and if indeed the
thoughts presented in it are intrinsic to her being then the reader gains a
sense of what it must be like to live in Plath’s shoes, to experience the
“perfect” or typical 1950’s lifestyle, which the introductory biography
expresses she lived. As the
introductory biography further indicates: “In her poems, however, we find the
strings of such a life; the work is galvanized by suffering, by a terrible
construction against which she unlooses ‘the lioness, / The shriek in the bath,
/ The cloak of holes.’ In articulating
a dark vision of domestic life, Plath was adopting the license of Robert Lowell
and Anne Sexton, a fellow student in Lowell’s poetry seminar, to write about
‘private and taboo subjects’” (2968).
Therefore, in spite of her experiences in education and abroad, her
marriage to another young poet and the makings of potentially romantic
experiences, the real details of her life and her thoughts about her marriage
are released through her poetry.
The name of the poem itself
alludes to Lazarus, who himself was raised from the dead by Jesus in John
11.1-45.
imagism
“I may be skin and bone, /
Nevertheless, I am the same identical woman” (lines 33:34)
“For the eying of my scars,
there is a change / For the hearing of my heart - / It really goes.” (lines 58:60)
“Flesh, bone, there is
nothing there –“ (75)
“Out of the ash / I rise
with my red hair / And I eat men like air.”
(lines 82:84)
From
Sparknotes.com:
"'Lady Lazarus'"'
is an extraordinarily bitter dramatic monologue in twenty-eight tercets. The
title ironically identifies a sort of human oxymoron, a female Lazarus—not the biblical male. Moreover,
she does not conform to society"'"s traditional idea of ladylike
behavior: She is angry, and she wants revenge. She is egocentric, using
'"'I'"' twenty-two times, '"'my'"' nine. Her resurrection
is owing only to herself. This is someone much different from the grateful man
of John 11:2 who owes his life to Jesus.
Given Sylvia Plath"'"s suicide, one might equate this Lazarus with Plath. Self-destruction
pervades the poem as it did her life, but she has inventively appropriated Lazarus in constructing a mythical female
counterpart that is not simply equatable with herself. This common tactic of
distancing autobiography tempers one"'"s proclivity to see the poem
as confessional. As confession mutates to myth, subjectivity inclines to
generalized feeling.
Lady Lazarus resurrects herself habitually. Like the cat, she
allows herself nine lives, including equally their creation and cancellation.
The first line may stress her power over her fate, but '"'manage'"'
(line 3) suggests an uneasy control. It also connotes managerial enterprise, an
implication clarified when the speaker"'"s language takes on the
flavor of the carnival.
The first eight stanzas largely vivify this ugly but compelling experience. The
reader sees the worm-eaten epidermis and inhales the sour breath. More cadaver
than person, Lady Lazarus intends terror, however
problematic her bravado. Nevertheless, she will soon smile, when time restores
flesh eaten by the grave. (The smile will not prove attractive.) For the
moment, however, she is only a '"'walking miracle'"' of defective
parts: a shell of glowing skin, a face blank as linen, a paralyzed foot. Almost
spectral, she remains finely, grotesquely palpable.
Stanzas 9 to 19 present Lady Lazarus as sideshow freak, stripper, and
barker. Her emergence from the winding-sheet (perhaps a straitjacket) is a
'"'striptease.'"' The '"'peanut-crunching crowd'"' thrills,
pruriently. She alters the introductory '"'Ladies and gentlemen,'"'
but her phrasing retains the master of ceremonies"'" idiom. Reference
to her '"'theatrical/ comeback in broad day'"' plays poetically with
the jargon of show business and magic.
In presenting the history of her efforts to die, Lady Lazarus
assures the reader of her honor. This integrity gives continuity, making her
the same woman at thirty that she was at ten. It is nothing against her that
her first attempt at annihilation was accidental; it was premonitory.
Eventually, intention ruled—both descent and resurrection. In the eighteenth
stanza, she says that each '"'comeback'"' is, however, to the
'"'same place'"' and the '"'same brute/ Amused shout.'"'
The prosody allows '"'brute'"' to be a noun (hence, person) in the
line, an adjective in the sentence. As it is the '"'same brute'"'
each time, beginning with her tenth year, and as she finally intends the
destruction of '"'men,'"' this brute is always the father or his
replica. This explains why Plath renders the customary '"'Ladies and Gentlemen'"'
as '"'Gentleman, ladies.'"'
Stanzas 19 through 26 clarify Lady
Lazarus"'"
victimization at the hands of '"'Herr Enemy'"' and '"'Herr
Doktor,'"' who are one and the same and merely the latest incarnation of
the '"'brute'"' father. The German spelling of doctor and the choice
of Herr create the stereotype of Germanic male authority. Lady Lazarus
is this creature"'"s '"'baby,'"' more particularly his
'"'opus.'"' Thus, this menacing figure reminiscent of Josef Mengele,
of the Nazi concentration camp at Auschwitz, fathers her '"'art'"' of
dying. She sarcastically repudiates his inauthentic '"'concern'"' for
her but allows him his role in her fiery death and resurrection. Because she
was '"'pure gold,'"' he expected profit from her. He pokes among her
ashes for valuable residue, but she has reduced herself to
'"'nothing'"' but a '"'shriek.'"' Spiritually, however, she
is a virtual reliquary, which turns the tables; '"'Herr Enemy'"' will
pay, and dearly, for her victimized body and consciousness. There will be a
'"'very large charge'"' for '"'eyeing [her] scars,'"' for
discovering that her heart '"'really goes,'"' even for a '"'bit
of blood'"' or a '"'word.'"'
Having taken up the battle with the enemy on his terms, she concludes by
warning the male deity and demon that when she rises from the ashes, she
consumes men as fire does oxygen.
Forms and Devices
'"'Lady Lazarus'"' plays distinctively on
the ear. It blends staccato, irregular versification with a dense mixture of
highly patterned sounds. End and internal rhymes, both exact and slant, are
rapidly mixed and steadily joined to consonance, assonance, alliteration, and
sheer repetition.
At the outset, Plath makes end rhymes of '"'again,'"'
'"'ten,'"' '"'skin,'"' '"'fine,'"'
'"'linen,'"' and '"'napkin'"' before the eleventh line. She
dares, in one line, '"'grave cave ate'"' and, in another,
'"'million filaments.'"' The '"'brute'"' that ends line 53
is followed at once by the only slightly dissimilar '"'amused.'"'
Plath"'"s prosody ingeniously restrains the metronome while rendering
sound almost childlike.
The nazification of the speaker"'"s antagonist is a perhaps
hyperbolic but crucial feature of the poem. Plath once said to George Macbeth,
'"'I see you have a concentration camp in your mind too.'"' For Lady Lazarus,
the model of her victimization is the modern slaughter of the Jews. The
'"'Nazi lampshade'"' refers to the commandant"'"s practice
at Buchwald of flaying inmates and stretching the skin, often tattooed, over a
lampshade frame. The most notorious of the Nazi gas chambers and crematories
were housed at Auschwitz, where blankets were made of human hair and soap from
human fat. Those who emptied the ovens poked in the ashes for hidden gold
wedding bands and for gold fillings missed by camp '"'dentists.'"' It
was at Auschwitz that the infamous and sadistically curious Doktor Mengele
listened to the camp symphony, oversaw experiments on humans, and quizzically
dropped in at the ovens. Hence the primal '"'brute'"' becomes '"'Herr
Doktor'"' and '"'Herr Enemy.'"' '"'Herr God'"' and
'"'Herr Lucifer,'"' two sides of the same coin, are but extensions of
the Nazi male stereotype.
To this frame of reference, Plath adds an amusing filmic touch, after the
fashion of the '"'vampire'"' and the '"'villagers'"' in her
poem '"'Daddy.'"' '"'So, so, Herr Doktor./ So, Herr
Enemy'"' parodies the stereotypical speech of Nazi officers interrogating
prisoners in American war films of the 1940"'"s. That the words are Lady Lazarus"'"
indicates that she is exorcising the victim within her and preparing to adopt
her enemy"'"s tactics against him. She had, of course, told her
nemesis to '"'Peel off the napkin'"' of her '"'featureless
face,'"' the manifestation of her passivity, represented as a '"'Jew
linen.'"'
Themes and Meanings
People who return from the edge of death often speak of it as rebirth. '"'Lady Lazarus'"'
effectively conveys that feeling. It is principally, however, about the
aspiration to revenge that is felt by the female victim of male domination,
conceived as ubiquitous. The revenge would be against all men, though the many
are rendered as singular in the poem. The text forces the reader to take the
father as prototype, which drives one to read it in terms of the Electra
complex. Why, one asks, is the speaker malevolent toward the father rather than
amorously yearning? What has he done to inspire the hatred which has displaced
love?
The poem is mythic. It leaves the father"'"s, the male"'"s,
basic offense at the general level of brutal domination. One might rest there,
taking control and exploitation as the male"'"s by nature, practiced
universally and with special vigor toward spouses and daughters. The idea will
come short of universal acceptance, but the text does not disallow it.
If one looks at the '"'Enemy'"' as modeled on Plath"'"s own
father, one finds something else, though certainly no Fascist. Otto
Plath"'"s blameless offense was his death in Sylvia"'"s
childhood, which seems to have left her feeling both guiltily responsible and
angry, a common reaction. One normally expects the adult child to overcome this
confusion by reasonably understanding it. This poem is not about that
experience; it is about the wish, however futile, to turn the tables on the
father and his kind. Its dramatic overstatement of male evil may be, for one
reader, an offense against fairness. For another, it may not even pertain to
that problem, but only represent the extremity of long-borne suffering.
Whether the poem depicts the onset of successful revenge is problematic. Lady Lazarus
has surely arrived at the point of reversing roles with her antagonist. She
understands and intends to exploit his means of violent mastery, and at the
last, the prefatory myth of the halting Lazarus
is altered to the myth of the ascendant phoenix, the bird which immolates
itself every five hundred years but rises whole and rejuvenated from its ashes.
Lady Lazarus"'" '"'red hair'"' suggests
fire, which lives (easily) off oxygen. '"'I eat men like air,'"'
therefore, seems the foreshadowing of victory, in the restoration of the true
self and the annihilation of its detractor(s).
For a person, however, the '"'eating'"' of air is not nourishing;
also, Lady Lazarus confronts men in every quarter of
the universe, and her battle plan is of their design. She is even nominally
male herself. Whether the phoenix is male or female is even uncertain, though
Plath preferred to think it female. Perhaps the poem ultimately envisions the
tension created in the victim by the wish for revenge and the fear of its
frustration.
On "Lady Lazarus"
Robert
Phillips
She fears, in "Sheep in Fog," that her
search will lead instead to a "starless and fatherless" heaven,
carrying her into dark waters. Such dark waters are the subject of "Lady
Lazarus," a much-quoted poem in which Plath compares herself to that
Biblical figure once resurrected by Christ (and to a cat with its nine lives)
because she has been "resurrected" from attempted suicide three
times. The poem is also an act of revenge on the male Ego:
Out of the ash
I rise with my red hair
And I eat men like air.
From "The Dark Tunnel:
A Reading of Sylvia Plath." Modern Poetry Studies 3.2 (1972).
Eillen
M. Aird
A companion piece to
'Daddy', in which the poet again fuses the worlds of personal pain and
corporate suffering, is ‘Lady Lazarus'. In this poem a disturbing tension is
established between the seriousness of the experience described and the
misleadingly light form of the poem. The vocabulary and rhythms which approximate
to the colloquial simplicity of conversational speech, the frequently
end-stopped lines, the repetitions which have the effect of mockingly
counteracting the violence of the meaning, all establish the deliberately
flippant note which this poem strives to achieve. These are all devices which
also operate in Auden's 'light verse', but the constantly shifting tone of
'Lady Lazarus' is found less frequently in Auden's more cerebral poetry. At
times the tone is hysterically strident and demanding:
The peanut-crunching crowd
Shoves in to see
Them unwrap me hand and
foot—
The big strip tease.
Gentlemen, ladies
These are my hands
My knees.
Then it modulates into a
calmer irony as the persona mocks herself for her pretensions to tragedy:
'Dying/is an art, like everything else./I do it exceptionally well.' As in
'Daddy' Sylvia Plath has used a limited amount of autobiographical detail in
this poem; the references to suicide in 'Lady Lazarus’ reflect her own
experience. As in 'Daddy’, however, the personal element is subordinate to a
much more inclusive dramatic structure, and one answer to those critics who
have seen her work as merely confessional is that she used her personal and
painful material as a way of entering into and illustrating much wider themes and
subjects. In 'Lady Lazarus' the poet again equates her suffering with the
experiences of the tortured Jews, she becomes, as a result of the suicide she
inflicts on herself, a Jew:
A sort of walking miracle,
my skin
Bright as a Nazi lampshade,
My right foot
A paperweight,
My face a featureless, fine
Jew linen.
The reaction of the crowd
who push in with morbid interest to see the saved suicide mimics the attitude
of many to the revelations of the concentration camps; there is a brutal
insistence on the pain which many apparently manage to see with scientific
detachment. ‘Lady Lazarus’ represents an extreme use of the 'light verse'
technique. Auden never forced such grotesque material into such an insistently
jaunty poem, and the anger and compassion which inform the poem are rarely
found so explicitly in his work. 'Lady Lazarus' is also a supreme example of
Sylvia Plath's skill as an artist. She takes very personal, painful
material and controls and forms it with the utmost rigour into a highly wrought
poem, which is partly effective because of the polar opposition between the
terrible gaiety of its form and the fiercely uncompromising seriousness of its
subject. If we categorize a poem such as 'Lady Lazarus' as 'confessional' or
'extremist’ then we highlight only one of its elements. It is also a poem of
social criticism with a strong didactic intent, and a work of art which reveals
great technical and intellectual ability. The hysteria is intentional and
effective.
From Sylvia Plat: Her
Life and Work. Copyright © 1973 by Eileen M. Aird
Margaret
Dickie
Plath’s late poems are full
of speakers whose rigid identities and violent methods not only parody their
torment but also permit them to control it. The peculiar nature of the speaker
in "Lady Lazarus" defies ordinary notions of the suicide. Suicide is
not the joyous act she claims it to be in her triumphant assertion that she has
done it again. Her confidence, at the moment of recovery, that her sour breath
will vanish in a day and that she will soon be a smiling woman is a perverse
acceptance of her rescuers' hopes, although she calls her rescuers enemies. The
impulse of the speaker is the overwhelming desire to control the situation. She
is above all a performer, chiefly remarkable for her manipulation of herself as
well as of the effects she wishes to have on those who surround her. She speaks
of herself in hyperboles, calling herself a "walking miracle,"
boasting that she has "nine times to die," exclaiming that dying is
an art she does "exceptionally well," asserting that "the
theatrical/ Comeback in broad day" knocks her out. Her treatment of
suicide in such buoyant terms amounts to a parody of her own act. When she
compares her suicide to the victimization of the Jews, and when she later
claims there is a charge for a piece of her hair or clothes and thus compares
her rescued self to the crucified Christ or martyred saint, she is engaging in
self-parody. She employs these techniques partly to defy the crowd, with its
"brute / Amused shout:/ 'A miracle!' " and partly to taunt her
rescuers, "Herr Doktor," "Herr Enemy," who regard her as
their "opus." She is neither a miracle nor an opus, and she fends off
those who would regard her in this way.
The techniques have another
function as well: they display the extent to which she can objectify herself,
ritualize her fears, manipulate her own terror. Her extreme control is
intimately entwined with her suicidal tendencies. If she is not to succumb to
her desire to kill herself and thus control her own fate, she must engage in
the elaborate ritual which goes on all the time in the mind of the would-be
suicide by which she allays her persistent wish to destroy herself. Her control
is not sane but hysterical . When the speaker assures the crowd that she is
"the same, identical woman" after her rescue, she is in fact telling
them her inmost fear that she could (and probably will) do it again. What the
crowd takes for a return to health, the speaker sees as a return to the
perilous conditions that have driven her three times to suicide. By making a
spectacle out of herself and by locating the victimizer in the doctor and the
crowd, rather than in herself, she is casting out her terrors so that she can
control them. When she boasts at the end that she will rise and eat men, she is
projecting her destruction outward. That last stanza of defiance is really a
mental effort to triumph over terror, to rise and not to succumb to her own
victimization. The poet behind the poem allows Lady Lazarus to caricature
herself and thus to demonstrate the way in which the mind turns ritualistic
against horror. Although "Lady Lazarus" draws on Plath's own suicide
attempt, the poem tells us little of the actual event. It is not a personal
confession, but it does reveal Plath's understanding of the way the suicidal
person thinks.
From Sylvia Plath and
Ted Hughes. Copyright © 1979 by the Board of Trustees of the University of
Illinois.
Arthur
Oberg
"Lady Lazarus"
and "Daddy" are poems which seem written at the edge of sensibility
and of imagistic technique. They both utilize an imagery of severe
disintegration and dislocation. The public horrors of the Nazi concentration
camps and the personal horrors of fragmented identities become interchangeable.
Men are reduced to parts of bodies and to piles of things. The movement in each
poem is at once historical and private; the confusion in these two spheres
suggests the extent to which this century has often made it impossible to
separate them.
The barkerlike tone of
"Lady Lazarus" is not accidental. As in "Daddy," the
persona strips herself before the reader ... all the time utilizing a cool or
slang idiom in order to disguise feeling. Sylvia Plath borrowed from a sideshow
or vaudeville world the respect for virtuosity which the performer must acquire,
for which the audience pays and never stops paying. Elsewhere in her work, she
admired the virtuosity of the magician's unflinching girl or of the unshaking
tattoo artist. Here, in "Lady Lazarus," it is the barker and the
striptease artist who consume her attention. What the poet pursues in image and
in rhyme (for example, the rhyming of "Jew" and
"gobbledygoo") becomes part of the same process I observed in so many
of her other poems, that attempt, brilliant and desperate, to locate what it
was that hurt.
Sylvia Plath never stopped
recording in her poetry the wish and need to clear a space for love. Yet she
joined this to an inclination to see love as unreal, to accompanying fears of
being unable to give and receive love, and to the eventual distortion and displacement
of love in the verse. Loving completely or "wholly" she considered to
be dangerous, from her earliest verse on.
[. . . .]
Poems like"Daddy"
and "Lady Lazarus’ in the end may not be the triumphs which their momentum
and inventiveness at times celebrate. Instead, and this is my sense of them,
they belong more to elegy and to death, to the woman whose "loving
associations" abandoned her as she sought to create images for them.
From Modern American
Lyric: Lowell, Berryman, Creeley,-and Plath. Rutgers University Press, 1978
Jon
Rosenblatt
. . . The poem reflects
Plath's recognition at the end of her life that the struggle between self and
others and between death and birth must govern every aspect of the poetic
structure. The magical and demonic aspects of the world appear in "Lady
Lazarus" with an intensity that is absent from "The Stones."
The Lady of the poem is a
quasi-mythological figure, a parodic version of the biblical Lazarus whom
Christ raised from the dead. As in "The Stones," the speaker
undergoes a series of transformations that are registered through image
sequences. The result is the total alteration of the physical body. In
"Lady Lazarus," however, the transformations are more violent and
more various than in "The Stones," and the degree of
self-dramatization on the part of the speaker is much greater. Four basic
sequences of images define the Lady's identity. At the beginning of the poem,
she is cloth or material: lampshade, linen, napkin; in the middle, she is only
body: knees, skin and bone, hair; toward the end, she becomes a physical
object: gold, ash, a cake of soap; finally, she is resurrected as a red-haired
demon. Each of these states is dramatically connected to an observer or
observers through direct address: first, to her unnamed "enemy";
then, to the "gentlemen and ladies"; next, to the Herr Doktor; and,
finally, to Herr God and Herr Lucifer. The address to these
"audiences" allows Plath to characterize Lady Lazarus's fragmented
identities with great precision. For example, a passage toward the end of the
poem incorporates the transition from a sequence of body images
(scars-heart-hair) to a series of physical images" (opus-valuable-gold
baby) as it shifts its address from the voyeuristic crowd to the Nazi Doktor:
[lines 61-70]
The inventiveness of the
language demonstrates Plath's ability to create, as she could not in "The
Stones," an appropriate oral medium for the distorted mental states of the
speaker. The sexual pun on "charge" in the first line above; the
bastardization of German ("Herr Enemy"); the combination of Latinate
diction ("opus," "valuable") and colloquial phrasing
("charge," "So, so . . . ")—all these linguistic elements
reveal a character who has been grotesquely split into warring selves. Lady
Lazarus is a different person for each of her audiences, and yet none of her
identities is bearable for her. For the Nazi Doktor, she is a Jew, whose body
must be burned; for the "peanut-crunching crowd," she is a
stripteaser; for the medical audience, she is a wonder, whose scars and
heartbeat are astonishing; for the religious audience, she is a miraculous
figure, whose hair and clothes are as valuable as saints' relics. And when she
turns to her audience in the middle of the poem to describe her career in
suicide, she becomes a self-conscious performer. Each of her deaths, she says,
is done "exceptionally well. / I do it so it feels like hell."
The entire symbolic
procedure of death and rebirth in "Lady Lazarus" has been
deliberately chosen by the speaker. She enacts her death repeatedly in order to
cleanse herse1f of the "million filaments" of guilt and anguish that
torment her. After she has returned to the womblike state of being trapped in
her cave, like the biblical Lazarus, or of being rocked "shut as a seashell,"
she expects to emerge reborn in a new form. These attempts at rebirth are
unsuccessful until the end of the poem. Only when the Lady undergoes total
immolation of self and body does she truly emerge in a demonic form. The doctor
burns her down to ash, and then she achieves her rebirth:
Out of the ash
I rise with my red hair
And I eat men like air.
Using the phoenix myth of
resurrection as a basis, Plath imagines a woman who has become pure spirit
rising against the imprisoning others around her: gods, doctor, men, and Nazis.
This translation of the self into spirit, after an ordeal of mutilation,
torture, and immolation, stamps the poem as the dramatization of the basic
initiatory process.
"Lady Lazarus"
defines the central aesthetic principles of Plath's late poetry. First, the
poem derives its dominant effects from the colloquial language. From the
conversational opening ("I have done it again") to the clipped
warnings of the ending ("Beware / Beware"), "Lady
Lazarus" appears as the monologue of a woman speaking spontaneously out of
her pain and psychic disintegration. The Latinate terms
("annihilate," "filaments," "opus,"
"valuable") are introduced as sudden contrasts to the essentially
simple language of the speaker. The obsessive repetition of key words and
phrases gives enormous power to the plain style used throughout. As she speaks,
Lady Lazarus seems to gather up her energies for an assault on her enemies, and
the staccato repetitions of phrases build up the intensity of feelings:
[lines 46-50]
This is language poured out
of some burning inner fire, though it retains the rhythmical precision that we
expect from a much less intensely felt expression. It is also a language made
up almost entirely of monosyllables. Plath has managed to adapt a heightened
conversational stance and a colloquial idiom to the dramatic monologue form.
The colloquial language of
the poem relates to its second major aspect: its aural quality. "Lady
Lazarus" is meant to be read aloud. To heighten the aural effect, the speaker's,
voice modulates across varying levels of rhetorical intensity. At one moment
she reports on her suicide attempt with no observable emotion:
I am only thirty.
And like the cat I have nine times to die.
This is Number Three.
The next moment she becomes
a barker at a striptease show:
Gentlemen, ladies,
These are my hands.
Then she may break into a
kind of incantatory chant that sweeps reality in front of it, as at the very
end of the poem. The deliberate rhetoric of the poem marks it as a set-piece, a
dramatic tour de force, that must be heard to be truly appreciated. Certainly
it answers Plath's desire to create an aural medium for her poetry.
Third, "Lady
Lazarus" transforms a traditional stanzaic pattern to obtain its
rhetorical and aural effects. One of the striking aspects of Plath's late
poetry is its simultaneous dependence on and abandonment of traditional forms.
The three-line stanza of "Lady Lazarus" and such poems as
"Ariel," "Fever 103°," "Mary's Song," and
"Nick and the Candlestick" refer us inevitably to the terza rima of
the Italian tradition and to the terza rima experiments of Plath's earlier
work. But the poems employ this stanza only as a general framework for a
variable-beat line and variable rhyming patterns. The first stanza of the poem
has two beats in its first line, three in its second, and two in its third; but
the second has a five-three-two pattern. The iambic measure is dominant
throughout, though Plath often overloads a line with stressed syllables or
reduces a line to a single stress. The rhymes are mainly off-rhymes
("again," "ten"; "fine," "linen";
"stir," "there"). Many of the pure rhymes are used to
accentuate a bizarre conjunction of meaning, as in the lines addressed to the
doctor: "I turn and burn. / Do not think I underestimate your great
concern."
Finally, "Lady
Lazarus," like "Daddy" and "Fever 103°," incorporates
historical material into the initiatory and imagistic patterns. This element of
Plath's method has generated much misunderstanding, including the charge that
her use of references to Nazism and to Jewishness is inauthentic. Yet these
allusions to historical events form part of the speaker's fragmented identity
and allow Plath to portray a kind of eternal victim. The very title of the poem
lays the groundwork for a semicomic historical and cultural allusiveness. The
Lady is a legendary figure, a sufferer, who has endured almost every variety of
torture. Plath can thus include among Lady Lazarus's characteristics the
greatest contemporary examples of brutality and persecution: the sadistic
medical experiments on the Jew's by Nazi doctors and the Nazis' use of their
victims' bodies in the production of lampshades and other objects. These
allusions, however, are no more meant to establish a realistic historic norm in
the poem than the allusions to the striptease are intended to establish a
realistic social context. The references in the poem—biblical, historical,
political, personal—draw the reader into the center of a personality and its
characteristic mental processes. The reality of the poem lies in the
convulsions of the narrating consciousness. The drama of external persecution,
self-destructiveness, and renewal, with both its horror and its grotesque
comedy, is played out through social and historical contexts that symbolize the
inner struggle of Lady Lazarus.
The claim that Plath
misuses a particular historical experience is thus incorrect. She shows how a
contemporary consciousness is obsessed with historical and personal demons and
how that consciousness deals with these figures. The demonic characters of the
Nazi Doktor and of the risen Lady Lazarus are surely more central to the poem's
tone and intent than is the historicity of these figures. By imagining the
initiatory drama against the backdrop of Nazism, Plath is universalizing a
personal conflict that is treated more narrowly in such poems as "The
Bee-Meeting" and "Berck-Plage." The fact that Plath herself was
not Jewish has no bearing on the legitimacy of her employment of the Jewish
persona: the holocaust serves her as a metaphor for the death-and-life battle
between the self and a deadly enemy. Whether Plath embodies the enemy as a
personal friend, a demonic entity, a historical figure, or a cosmic force, she
consistently sees warfare in the structural terms of the initiatory scenario.
"Lady Lazarus" is simply the most powerful and successful of the
dramas in which that enemy appears as the sadistic masculine force of Nazism.
from Sylvia Plath: The
Poetry of Initiation. Copyright © 1979 by University of North Carolina
Press.
Helen
Vendler
"Lady Lazarus,"
written in the same feverish thirtieth-birthday month that produced
"Daddy" and "Ariel," is a mélange of incompatible styles,
as though in a meaningless world every style could have its day: bravado
("I have done it again"), slang ("A sort of walking
miracle"), perverse fashion commentary ("my skin/Bright as a Nazi
lampshade"), melodrama ("Do I terrify?"), wit ("like the
cat I have nine times to die"), boast ("This is Number Three"),
self-disgust ("What a trash/To annihilate each decade"). The poem
moves on through reductive dismissal ("The big strip tease") to
public announcement, with a blasphemous swipe at the ecce homo ("Gentlemen,
ladies/These are my hands/My knees"), and comes to its single lyric
moment, recalling Plath's suicide attempt in the summer before her senior year
at Smith:
I rocked shut
As a seashell.
They had to call and call
And pick the worms off me like sticky pearls.
Almost every stanza of
"Lady Lazarus" picks up a new possibility for this theatrical voice,
from mock movie talk ("So, so, Herr Doktor./So, Herr Enemy") to
bureaucratic politeness, ("Do not think I underestimate your great
concern") to witch warnings ("I rise with my red hair/And I eat men
like air"). When an author makes a sort of headcheese of style in this
way--a piece of gristle, a piece of meat, a piece of gelatin, a piece of
rind--the disbelief in style is countered by a competitive faith in it. Style
(as something consistent) is meaningless, but styles (as dizzying provisional
skepticism) are all.
Poems like
"Daddy" and "Lady Lazarus" are in one sense demonically
intelligent, in their wanton play with concepts, myths, and language, and in
another, and more important, sense not intelligent at all, in that they
willfully refuse, for the sale of a cacophony of styles (a tantrum of style),
the steady, centripetal effect of thought. Instead, they display a wild
dispersal, a centrifugal spin to further and further reaches of outrage. They
are written in a loud version of what Plath elsewhere calls "the zoo yowl,
the mad soft/ Mirror talk you love to catch me at." And that zoo yowl has
a feral slyness about it.
From "An Intractable
Metal." The New Yorker (1982).
Paul
Breslin
"Lady Lazarus,"
another anthology-piece, reveals that this vacillation has, in addition to its
misplaced mimetic function, a rhetorical function as well. This poem, much more
overtly than "Daddy," anticipates and manipulates the responses of
the reader. The speaker alternately solicits our sympathy and rebukes us for
meddling. "Do I terrify?" she asks; she certainly hopes so. By
comparing her recovery from a suicide attempt to the resurrection of Lazarus,
she imagines herself as the center of a spectacle—we envision Christ performing
a miracle before the astonished populace of Bethany. But unlike the beneficiary
of the biblical miracle, Plath's "lady Lazarus" accomplishes her own
resurrection and acknowledges no power greater than herself. "Herr God;
Herr Lucifer, I Beware I Beware," she warns. Her self-aggrandizing
gestures invite attention, and yet we are to be ashamed of ourselves if we
accept the invitation:
The peanut-crunching crowd
Shoves in to see
Them unwrap me hand and
foot—
The big strip-tease.
The crowd is aggressive
("shoves"), its interest lascivious; it seeks an illicit titillation,
if not from the speaker's naked body, then from her naked psyche.
Again, one might argue that
the divided tone of "Lady Lazarus" is a legitimately mimetic
representation of the psychology of suicide. A suicide attempt is partly
motivated by the wish to get attention and exact revenge on those who have
withheld attention in the past by making them feel responsible for one's death.
Those who attempt suicide in a manner unlikely to succeed—and Plath 's
attempts, including the successful one, seem to have been intended to fail—are
torn between the desire "to last it out and not come back at all" and
the hope that someone will care enough to intervene. Moreover, a suicide
attempt is itself a confession, a public admission of inward desperation:
Recovering from such an attempt, one would have to contend with the curiosity
aroused in other people. One might indeed feel stripped naked, sorry to have
called so much attention to oneself, and yet suddenly powerful in commanding so
much attention.
Plath's analogy of the
strip-tease or the sideshow conveys, with force and precision, the ambivalence
of suicidal despair. Had she extended that metaphor through the entire poem,
holding its complexities in balance, "Lady Lazarus" might have
achieved the stability of tone and judgment lacking in "Daddy." But
unfortunately, Plath succumbed to the urge to whip up further lurid excitement
with the analogy of the concentration camp, introduced in stanzas two and three
but dormant thereafter until it returns at the end of stanza twenty-one. It
reenters stealthily:
There is a charge
For the eyeing of my scars,
there is a charge
For the hearing of my heart.
It really goes.
And there is a charge, a
very large charge,
For a word or a touch
Or a bit of blood
Or a piece of my hair or my
clothes.
The first five lines of
this passage, which continue the metaphor of strip-tease or freak show, are
witty and self-possessed in their bitterness. "Large charge" is of
course, slang for "big thrill" and so glances at the titillation the
audience receives as well as the price of admission. But with "a bit of
blood / Or a piece of my hair or my clothes," we suddenly recall the
"Nazi lampshade" of stanza two. The speaker's "enemy"'
whether it be Herr God, Herr Lucifer, or the peanut-crunching crowd, would kill
her and dismember the body for commodities (or, in the context of biblical
miracle, relics; in either case she is martyred). Interestingly, as the irony
becomes less controlled, more phantasmagorical and unhinged, the rhythm begins
to fall into anapests, and the rhyme on "goes" and
"clothes" is one of the most insistent in the poem. The sound of the
poetry, reminiscent of light verse, combines strangely with its macabre sense,
rather like certain passages in "The Raven" where one feels that Poe
has been demonically possessed by W. S. Gilbert ("For we cannot help
agreeing that no living human being / Ever yet was blessed with seeing bird
above his chamber door").
In the last twenty lines of
"Lady Lazarus," irony vanishes, its last glimmer coming ten lines
from the end in "Do not think I underestimate your great concern." By
this point, the speaker has turned from the crowd to address a single
threatening figure:
So, so, Herr Doktor
So, Herr Enemy.
I am your opus,
I am your valuable
The pure gold baby. . . .
The enemy, hitherto
unspecified, turns out to be a German male authority figure, perhaps a scholar
like Otto Plath ("Herr Doktor"), who thinks of the speaker as his
"pure gold baby." An inward confrontation with this father imago
replaces the confrontation with the intrusive crowd. The poem enters a realm of
pure fantasy as the "Herr Doktor" rapidly assumes the cosmic
proportions of "Herr God, Herr Lucifer." There is also a shift in the
figurative language, corresponding to the shift in tone and implied audience.
The clammy imagery of "the grave cave" and "worms . . . like
sticky pearls" gives way to an imagery of death by fire. The resurrection
of Lazarus becomes the birth of the Phoenix, and the extended metaphor of a
public spectacle abruptly disappears. The threat of the final line, "And I
eat men like air" (SP, 247), has little connection with anything in the
first twenty-one stanzas.
As with "Daddy,"
one may try to save consistency by declaring the speaker a "persona."
The poem, by this reckoning, reveals a woman gradually caught up in her anger
and carried by it toward a recognition of its true object: not the crowd of
insensitive onlookers, but the father and husband who have driven her to attempt
suicide. The end of the poem, thus understood, breaks free of defensive irony
to release cathartic rage. But it is hard to see why this rage is cathartic,
since it no sooner locates its "real" object than it begins to
convert reality back into fantasy again, in a grandiose and finally evasive
fashion. Was it that Plath unconsciously doubted her right to be angry and
therefore had to convict her father and her husband of Hitlerian monstrosities
in order to justify the anger she nonetheless felt? Or did she fear that the
experiential grounds of her emotions were too personal for art unless mounted
on the stilts of myth or psycho-historical analogy? On such questions one can
only speculate, and the answers, even if they were obtainable, could illuminate
the poems only as biographical evidence, not as poems.
from The
Psycho-Political Muse: American Poetry since the Fifties. Chicago:
University of Chicago Press, 1987. Copyright © 1987 by the U of Chicago P.
Kathleen
Margaret Lant
"Purdah" and
"Lady Lazarus" - written within a week of each other during October
1962 - further reveal Plath's conviction that undressing has become for her a
powerful poetic gesture, and in these poems it is the female speaker who
finally disrobes - and here she attempts to appropriate the power of nakedness
for herself. Plath does not simply contemplate from the spectator's point of
view the horrors and the vigor of the act of undressing; now her female subject
dares to make herself naked, and she does so in an attempt to make herself
mighty. At this point, nakedness has somehow become strongly assertive, at
least at one level in these poems. "Purdah" and "Lady
Lazarus" take up the power of the uncovered body that Plath began to
explore in "A Birthday Present." But in these two later poems, that
figurative nakedness is compromised by the metaphorical significance of the
female body. The naked force in "A Birthday Present" is ultimately
masculine since it has the potential to enter the speaker like a cruelly sharp
knife; the body that is unclothed encodes the assertiveness of the revealed
male body. The body made bare in "Lady Lazarus" and
"Purdah," however, is female, and for that reason the power of that
body's undraping must be - at least in terms of Plath's metaphorical universe -
necessarily diminished.
[. . . . ]
"Lady Lazarus"
conveys the same sense of confusion or ambivalence in that the power of the
speaking subject of the poem seems undermined by the melodramatic unclothing of
that subject. Lady Lazarus is clearly - like the speaker of "Purdah"
- meant to threaten; she asks rather sarcastically, "Do I terrify?",
but the language by means of which she shapes her unclothing seems to
compromise the grandeur of her act. She is not covered by grime or grit or falseness;
her covering is somehow already too feminine, too ineffectual: My face a
featureless, fine / Jew linen. // Peel off the napkin" (244). "Lady
Lazarus" presents most clearly one of the central problems with Plath's
use of the metaphor of nakedness, for in this poem Plath refers to this act of
unclothing as "The big strip tease." And in this act, no woman is
terrifying, no woman is triumphant, no woman is powerful, for she offers
herself to "the peanut-crunching crowd" in a gesture that is
"theatrical" (245) rather than self-defining, designed to please or
to appease her viewers more than to release herself.
To strip is to seduce; it
is not to assert oneself sexually or psychologically. And by the end of the
poem, the speaker seeks to shame the male viewer who is exploiting her; she
threatens him openly: "Out of the ash / I rise with my red hair / And I
eat men like air" (247). But the threat is empty. Alicia Ostriker
observes, too, that the rage here is "hollow" because the reader is
fully aware that the speaker of this poem "is powerless, she knows it, she
hates it" (102). But Ostriker does not name the source of this
powerlessness - the speaker's physical vulnerability. The female subject has
offered here pieces of herself, she has displayed herself not in an assertive
way but in a sexually provocative and seductive way, and - at the very end -
she resorts to descriptions of her appearance - her red hair - but not
delineations of her reality - her anger. She does not convince the audience
that she is, in fact, dangerous, for she must offer the female body as an
object rather than assert it as a weapon. It is telling, too, that the
speaker's audience in "Lady Lazarus" is made up entirely of men (Herr
God, Herr Lucifer, Herr Doktor), for by revealing herself only before such an
audience, she ensures that her unveiling will be read not as a powerful
assertion of identity but rather as a seductive gesture of submission and
invitation.
from "The big strip
tease: female bodies and male power in the poetry of Sylvia Plath." Contemporary
Literature 34.4 (Winter 1993)
Al
Strangeways
In "Lady
Lazarus," for example, Plath collapses the "them and us"
distinction by confronting readers with their voyeurism in looking at the
subject of the poem. To apply Teresa De Lauretis's theorizing of the cinematic
positioning of women to Plath's poem, in "Lady Lazarus," the
speaker's consciousness of her performance for the readers (who are implicitly
part of the "peanut-crunching crowd") works to reverse the gaze of
the readers so that they become "overlooked in the act of
overlooking."
By extension, in her
parodic overstatement (Lady Lazarus as archetypal victim, archetypal object of
the gaze) Plath highlights the performative (that is, constructed rather than
essential) nature of the speaker's positioning as object of the gaze, and so
(to extend Judith Butler's terms), Lady Lazarus enacts a performance that
attempts to "compel a reconsideration of the place and
stability" of her positioning, and to "enact and reveal the performativity"
of her representation. This sense of performativity and the reversal of gaze
likewise extends, in "Lady Lazarus," to compel reconsideration not
only of the conventional positioning of the woman as object, and of the
voyeurism implicit in all lyric poetry, but also of the historical metaphors as
objects of the gaze. Readers feel implicated in the poem's straightforward
assignment and metaphorizing of the speaker in her role as object and
performer, and contingently are made to feel uncomfortable about their similar
easy assimilation of the imagery (of the suffering of the Jews) that the
speaker uses. In "Daddy," a similar relationship between reader,
speaker, and metaphor is at work.
From "’Boot in the
Face’: The Problem of the Holocaust in the Poetry of Sylvia Plath." Contemporary
Literature 37.3 (Fall 1996).
Christina
Britzolakis
Although Plath's
'confessional' tropes are often seen in terms of a Romantic parable of
victimization, whether of the sensitive poetic individual crushed by a brutally
rationalized society, or of feminist protest against a monolithic patriarchal
oppressor, her self-reflexivity tends to turn confession into a parody gesture
or a premiss for theatrical performance. The central instance of the
'confessional' in her writing is usually taken to be 'Lady Lazarus'. M. L.
Rosenthal uses the poem to validate the generic category: 'Robert Lowell's
'Skunk Hour' and Sylvia Plath's 'Lady Lazarus' are true examples of
'confessional' poetry because they put the speaker himself at the centre of the
poem in such a way as to make his psychological shame and vulnerability an
embodiment of his civilization.' The confessional reading of the poem is
usually underpinned by the recourse to biography, which correlates the
speaker's cultivation of the 'art of dying' with Plath's suicidal career.
Although Plath is indeed, at one level, mythologizing her personal history, the
motif of suicide in 'Lady Lazarus' operates less as self-revelation than as a
theatrical tour de force, a music-hall routine.
With 'Daddy', 'Lady
Lazarus' is probably the single text in the Plath canon which has attracted
most disapproval on the grounds of a manipulative, sensationalist, or
irresponsible style. Helen Vendler, for example, writes that 'Style (as
something consistent) is meaningless, but styles (as dizzying provisional
scepticism) are all . . . Poems like 'Daddy' and 'Lady Lazarus' are in one
sense demonically intelligent, in their wanton play with concepts, myths and
language, and in another, and more important, sense, not intelligent at all, in
that they wilfully refuse, for the sake of a cacophony of styles (a tantrum of
style), the steady, centripetal effect of thought. Instead, they display a wild
dispersal, a centrifugal spin to further and further reaches of outrage.' Here,
the element of 'wilful' pastiche in 'Lady Lazarus' is measured against a
normative ideal of aesthetic detachment. Yet the poem's ironic use of
prostitution as the figure of a particular kind of theatricalized
self-consciousness—of the poet as, in Plath's phrase, 'Roget's trollop,
parading words and tossing off bravado for an audience' (JP 2I4)—calls
for a reading which takes seriously what the poem does with, and to, literary
history.
Like 'Lesbos', 'Lady
Lazarus' is a dramatic monologue which echoes and parodies 'The Love Song of J.
AIfred Prufrock'. The title alludes, of course, not only to the biblical story
of Lazarus but also to Prufrock's lines: 'I am Lazarus, come from the
dead, | Come back to tell you all, I shall tell you all'. Like Eliot,
Plath uses clothing as a metaphor for rhetoric: the 'veil' or 'garment' of
style. By contrast with Eliot's tentative hesitations, obliquities, and
evasions of direct statement, however, Plath's poem professes to 'tell all'.
Lady Lazarus deploys a patently alienated and manufactured language, in which
the shock tactic, the easy effect, reign supreme. Her rhetoric is one of direct
statement ('I have done it again'), of brutal Americanisms ('trash', 'shoves',
'the big strip tease', 'I do it so it feels like hell', 'knocks me out'), of
glib categorical assertions and dismissals ('Dying is an art, like everything
else') , and blatant internal rhymes ('grave cave', 'turn and burn'). As
Richard Blessing remarks, both 'Lady Lazarus' and 'The Applicant' are poems that
parody advertising techniques while simultaneously advertising themselves. The
poet who reveals her suffering plays to an audience, or 'peanut-crunching
crowd'; her miraculous rebirths are governed by the logic of the commodity.
Prufrock is verbally overdressed but feels emotionally naked and exposed,
representing himself as crucified before the gaze of the vulgar mass. Lady
Lazarus, on the other hand, incarnates the 'holy prostitution of the soul'
which Baudelaire found in the experience of being part of a crowd; emotional
nakedness is itself revealed as a masquerade. The 'strip-tease' artist is a
parodic, feminized version of the symbolist poet sacrificed to an
uncomprehending mass audience. For Baudelaire, as Walter Benjamin argues, the
prostitute serves as an allegory of the fate of aesthetic experience in
modernity, of its 'prostitution' to mass culture. The prostitute deprives
femininity of its aura, its religious and cultic presence; the woman's body
becomes a commodity, made up of dead and petrified fragments, while her beauty
becomes a matter of cosmetic disguise (make-up and fashion). Baudelaire's
prostitute sells the appearance of femininity. But she also offers a
degraded and hallucinated memory of fulfilment, an intoxicating or narcotic
substitute for the idealized maternal body. For the melancholic, spleen-ridden
psyche, which obsessively dwells on the broken pieces of the past, she is
therefore a privileged object of meditation. She represents the loss of that
blissful unity with nature and God which was traditionally anchored in a female
figure. Instead, Benjamin argues, the prostitute, like commodity fetishism,
harnesses the 'sex-appeal of the inorganic', which binds the living body to the
realm of death.
Lady Lazarus is an
allegorical figure, constructed from past and present images of femininity,
congealed fantasies projected upon the poem's surface. She is a pastiche of the
numerous deathly or demonic women of poetic tradition, such as Foe's Ligeia,
who dies and is gruesomely revivified through the corpse of another woman.
Ligeia's function, which is to be a symbol, mediating between the poet and
'supernal beauty', can only be preserved by her death. Similarly, in Mallarme's
prose poem 'Le Phenomene Futur', the 'Woman of the Past' is scientifically
preserved and displayed at a circus sideshow by the poet. For Plath, however,
the woman on show, the 'female phenomenon' is a revelation of unnaturalness
instead of sensuous nature, her body gruesomely refashioned into Nazi
artefacts. Lady Lazarus yokes together the canonical post-Romantic, symbolist
tradition which culminates in 'Prufrock', and the trash culture of True
Confessions, through their common concern with the fantasizing and staging of
the female body:
I rocked shut
As a seashell.
They had to call and call
And pick the worms off me like sticky pearls.
The densely layered
intertextual ironies at work in these lines plot the labyrinthine course of
what Benjamin calls 'the sex appeal of the inorganic' through literary history.
They echo Ariel's song in The Tempest, whose talismanic status in
Plath's writing I have already noted. Plath regenders the image, substituting
Lady Lazarus for the drowned corpse of the father/king. The metaphor of the
seashell converts the female body into a hardened, dead and inorganic object,
but at the same time nostalgically recalls the maternal fecundity of the sea.
The dead woman who suffers a sea change is adorned with phallic worms turned
into pearls, the 'sticky', fetishistic sublimates of male desire. In Marvell's
poem of seduction, 'To His Coy Mistress', the beloved is imagined as a decaying
corpse: 'Nor, in thy marble vault shall sound | My echoing song: then worms
shall try | That long-preserved virginity: | And your quaint honour turn to
dust; | And into ashes all my lust.' In T. S. Eliot's The Waste Land, the
refrain 'Those are pearls that were his eyes' is associated with the drowned
Phoenician sailor, implicit victim of witch-like, neurotic, or soul-destroying
female figures, such as Madame Sosostris and Cleopatra.
Lady Lazarus stages the
spectacle of herself, assuming the familiar threefold guise of actress,
prostitute, and mechanical woman. The myth of the eternally recurring feminine
finds its fulfilment in the worship and 'martyrdom' of the film or pop star, a
cult vehicle of male fantasy who induces mass hysteria and vampiric hunger for
'confessional' revelations. Lady Lazarus reminds her audience that 'there is a
charge, a very large charge | For a word or a touch | Or a bit of blood | Or a
piece of my hair or my clothes.' It is as if Plath is using the Marilyn Monroe
figure to travesty Poe's dictum in 'The Philosophy of Composition' (I846) that
'the death of a beautiful woman is, unquestionably, the most poetical topic in
the world'. The proliferation of intertextual ironies also affects the
concluding transformation of 'Lady Lazarus' into the phoenix-like, man-eating
demon, who rises 'out of the ash' with her 'red hair'. This echoes Coleridge's
description of the possessed poet in 'Kubla Kahn': 'And all should cry Beware!
Beware! His flashing eyes, his floating hair!' The woman's hair, a
privileged fetish-object of male fantasy, becomes at once a badge of daemonic
genius and a flag of vengeance. It is tempting to read these lines as a
personal myth of rebirth, a triumphant Romantic emergence of what Lynda
Bundtzen calls the female 'body of imagination'. The myth of the
transcendent-demonic phoenix seems to transcend the dualism of male-created
images of women, wreaking revenge on 'Herr Doktor', 'Herr God', and 'Herr
Lucifer', those allegorical emblems of an oppressive masculinity. Yet Lady
Lazarus's culminating assertion of power—'I eat men like air'—undoes itself,
through its suggestion of a mere conjuring trick. The attack on patriarchy is undercut
by the illusionistic character of this apotheosis which purports to transform,
at a stroke, a degraded and catastrophic reality. What the poem sarcastically
'confesses', through its collage of fragments of 'high' and 'low' culture, is a
commodity status no longer veiled by the aura of the sacred. Lyric inwardness
is 'prostituted' to the sensationalism of 'true confession'. The poet can no
longer cherish the illusion of withdrawing into a pure, uncontaminated private
space, whose immunity from larger historical conflicts is guaranteed by the
'auratic' woman. . . .for Plath the female body, far from serving as expiatory
metaphor for the ravages of modernity, itself becomes a sign whose cultural
meanings are in crisis.
from Sylvia Plath and
Theatre of Mourning. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1999. Copyright © 1999 by
Christina Bitzolkais
Susan
Gubar
[NB. Prosopopoeia: a rhetorical figure involving the adoption of the
voices of the imagined, absent dead.]
If identification with the
victims who could not disidentify with their tormentors constitutes the trap of
prosopopoeia in "Daddy," the trope functions as a trip in "Lady
Lazarus." What does it mean to think of the imperilled Jews as—to borrow a
phrase Maurice Blanchot used to approach the complex subject of Holocaust-related
suicides—fetishized "masters of un-mastery"? The wronged speaker here
can only liberate herself from "Herr Doktor" or "Herr
Enemy" by wresting the power of persecution from him and turning it
against herself. We know that the ongoingness of the torments of the Shoah
perpetuated postwar suicides, but did those casualties mutate into mystic
scapegoats whose envied status as paradigmatic victims would in turn generate
ersatz survivor-celebrities? This is one way to grasp the shock of "Lady
Lazarus," for the narcissistic and masochistic speaker has become obsessed
with dying, relates to it as "a call." With her skin "Bright as
a Nazi lampshade," her foot "A paperweight," and her face
"featureless, fine / Jew linen," Lady Lazarus puts her damage on
theatrical display through her scandalous suicide artistry (244). Have Jews
been made to perform the Trauerspiel for a "peanut-crunching
crowd" at the movies and on TV, like the striptease entertainer through
whom Plath speaks? Does Lady Lazarus's "charge" at making death feel
"real" and at "the theatrical / / Comeback" anticipate a
contemporary theatricalization of the Holocaust? Certainly, her vengeful
warning that "there is a charge / for the hearing of my heart" evokes
the charge—the cheap thrill and the financial price and the emotional cost—of
installations, novels, testimonials, college courses, critical essays, and
museums dedicated to the six million.
The commodification of Lady
Lazarus's exhibitionism issues in spectators paying "For a word or a touch
/ Or a bit of blood / / Or a piece of my hair or my clothes"; she brags
about her expertise at the art of dying: "I do it so it feels like hell.
/ I do it so it feels real" (245, emphasis mine). The spectacular
quality of Plath's figure adumbrates the notorious celebrity of a writer like
Benjamin Wilkomirski, whose gruesome bestseller Fragments (about a
child's experiences in the camps) was praised as "free of literary
artifice of any kind" before it was judged to be a fraud. In remarks that
gloss Plath's suicide-performer's pandering to her audience, Daniel Ganzfried
argued that Wilkomirski's suicide would be read as an authentication of his
identity as a victim: "These people talking about suicide will suggest it
to him. . . . Some of his supporters would love him dead because then it looks
like proof that he's Wilkomirski." Plath's poetry broods upon—just as
Ganzfried's argument reiterates—the contamination of the very idea of the
genuine. As Blanchot cautions, " If there is, among all words, one that is
inauthentic, then surely it is the word 'authentic."' To the extent that
the impresario of Plath's stage, "Herr God" / "Herr
Lucifer," has reduced Lady Lazarus from a person to an "opus" or
a "valuable," the poem hints that even reverential post-Shoah
remembrances may be always-already defiled by the Nazi perpetrators—that
prosopopoeia will not enable the poet to transcend the tarnished uses to which
the past has been, can be, will be put. In the voice of a denizen of disaster,
Plath mocks the frisson stimulated by the cultural industry she herself helped
to spawn.
Revolted by her own
dehumanization, Lady Lazarus then imagines triumphing over the murderous Nazis
by turning vengeful herself, if only in the incendiary afterlife conferred by
the oven:
Ash, ash—
You poke and stir.
Flesh, bone, there is nothing there—
A cake of soap,
A wedding ring,
A gold filling.
Herr God. Herr Lucifer
Beware
Beware.
Out of the ash
I rise with my red hair
And I eat men like air.
As it feeds on "men
like air"—predatory psychic dictators but also perhaps men turned to
smoke—the red rage that rises out of the ashes only fuels self-combustion,
debunking the idea of transcendence or rebirth at the end of the poem. With its
ironic echo of the conclusion of Coleridge's "Kubla
Kahn"—"Beware, beware, his flashing eyes, his floating
hair"—"Lady Lazarus" repudiates Romantic wonder at the power of
the artist, replacing the magical "pleasure dome" of his artifice
with the detritus to which the Jewish people were reduced. The poem's speech
act amounts to a caustic assessment of the aesthetic sellout, the
disaster-imposter luminary: "there is nothing there—." That no
consensus exists among contemporary historians over whether the Nazis made
cakes of soap out of their victims (though they certainly did
"manufacture" hair and skin, rings and fillings and bones) drives
home the bitter irony that propels the poem, namely that imaginative approaches
to the Shoah may distort, rather than safeguard, the dreadful but shredded
historical record. Reenactments of the calamity, including her own, are
indicted, even as Plath issues a warning that they will take their toll.
Will the figure of
prosopopoeia, so seductive for poets from Jarrell and Plath to Simic and Rich,
outlive its functions as the Holocaust and its atrocities recede into a past to
which no one alive can provide firsthand testimony? Or will the imperatives of
"post-memory" imbue this rhetorical strategy—which insists on
returning to the unbearable rupture of suffering—with newfound resonance once
the Shoah can no longer be personally recalled? Given the passage of time as
well as the flood of depictions of the catastrophe, the very vacuity of the
desecrated (buried alive, incinerated, unburied, dismembered) bodies that licensed
the personifications of prosopopoeia may make verse epitaphs seem shoddily
inadequate. Plath's taunting sneer—"I turn and burn. / Do not think I
underestimate your great concern" (246)—chronologically preceded the
highly profitable entertainment industry the Holocaust business has so recently
become. However, besides forecasting it, "Lady Lazarus" offers up a
chilling warning about the fetishization of suffering with which the figure of
prosopopoeia flirts. Indeed, Plath's verse uncannily stages the bases for
accusations of exploitation, larceny, masochism, and sensationalism that would
increasingly accrue around Holocaust remembrance. In addition, her
impersonation of the real victims invariably generates awareness of the
spurious representation put in the place of the absence of evidence. Calling
attention to what Geoffrey Hartman and Jean Baudrillard term our propensity to
adopt a "necrospective," poems deploying prosopopoeia draw us closer
to an event that is, simultaneously, distanced by their debased status as
merely simulated and recycled image-substitutions.
from "Prosopopoeia and
Holocaust Poetry in English: Sylvia Plath and Her Contemporaries." Yale
Journal of Criticism (2001)
Ariel
Ariel Stasis in darkness. |
Hauls me through air --- And now I |
“Suicidal, at one with the
drive / Into the red” (lines 29:30)
“The posthumous Ariel
collection, published by Hughes in 1965, does not follow Plath’s intended
sequence; it omits what Huges called ‘some of the more personally aggressive
poems from 1962’ and includes the dozen or so poems Plath wrote in the months
before her death and which she had envisioned as the beginnings of a third
book. Nonetheless, the powerful, angry
poems of Ariel, mining a limited range of deep feeling, are Plath’s best known
work” (2968).
sylvia plath
Daddy
You do not do, you do not do |
I have always been scared of you, Bit my pretty red heart in two. |
It tends to be the trend for women who have had
traumatic childhoods to be attracted to men who epitomize their emptiness felt
as children. Women who have had unaffectionate or absent fathers, adulterous
husbands or boyfriends, or relatives who molested them seem to become involved
in relationships with men who, instead of being the opposite of the “monsters”
in their lives, are the exact replicas of these ugly men. Sylvia Plath’s poem
“Daddy” is a perfect example of this unfortunate trend. In this poem, she
speaks directly to her dead father and her husband who has been cheating on
her, as the poem so indicates. The first two stanzas, lines 1-10, tell the readers
that Plath, for thirty years, has been afraid of her father, so scared that she
dares not to “breathe or Achoo.” She has been living in fear, although she
announces that he’s already dead. It is obvious that she believes that her
father continues to control her life from the grave. She says that she “has had
to kill” him, but he’s already dead, indicating her initial promise to forget
him. She calls him a “bag full of God,” telling us that she considers her
father a very strong, omnipotent being, someone who is superior in her eyes. In
the middle of the poem, she begins to refer to herself as a Jew, and her father
the German, who began “chuffing me off like a Jew…to Dachau, Auschwitz,
Belson.” What Plath’s intent here is to allow us to understand that her father
was a German, and she relates his behavior as a person to a Nazi. But later,
she becomes more enraged, and strips the title of God from her father, and
labels him a swastika and a brute. “Every woman adores a Fascist” is Plath’s
way of describing her feelings toward her father, since he was German. It also
explains that women tend to fall into that tragic sequence where an absent
father or a brutal father is the reason women attract violent men – “…the boot
in the face, the brute brute heart of a brute like you.” In stanza 11, we begin
to see Plath calling up memories of her father in photographs, and she now
refers to him as a devil. In stanza 12, she tells us that he has “bit her
pretty red heart in two.” Next, she states that he died when she was ten, and
when she was twenty years old, she attempted suicide - “…I tried to die, to get
back back back to you.” In stanza 13 is where she starts talking about her
husband. She says that instead of dying, her friends “stuck her together with
glue,” and since she could not die to get back to her father, she would marry
someone who was similar. “I made a model of you, A man in black with a
Meinkampf look For a love of the rack and the screw. And I said I do, I do.”
These lines are frightening, but unfortunately real. Plath tells us that she
has married someone exactly like her father, a man who has a “my struggle”
look, a German look. The third line above seems to mean that her husband, who
was poet Ted Hughes, cheated on her, in turn abandoning her. But she still said
“I do” and agreed to be with him. The last two stanzas are the darkest, and
ultimately appear to put some type of closure on Plath’s life. She obviously
believes that she killed her father when she was ten years old, stating that
“if I’ve killed one man, I’ve killed two.” When parents die, and a child is
very young, the child will often believe it to be his or her fault, because
children cannot grasp the concept of death or the fact that a parent has left
them. Therefore, it is apparent that Plath thinks she killed her father at ten,
and is now killing her husband, because he has been cheating on her. She refers
to her husband as a vampire, who has “drank my blood for a year, seven years,
if you want to know.” Plath considers her husband to be the vampire version of
her father, coming back to life to torture her and “drink” her life away. But
in the last stanza, it seems obvious that Plath has come to a realization. She
tells her father to “lie back now” because “there’s a stake in your fat black
heart” letting us know that she will be “killing” the vampire version of him;
she will be ending her relationship with her husband, and will finally be free
from her father’s torture. Plath tells us that “the villagers never liked you”
and that “they always knew it was you.” This is saying that everyone around her
knew that her father and her husband were monsters in her life, destroying her,
but that she has just noticed. “Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I’m through” is the
last line in the poem. It is not until the end that we realize that not only is
she through with the memories of her dead father and the adulterous behavior of
her husband, but she is through with herself. This last line is clear – Plath
has just announced to her readers that she will be committing suicide again,
and plans on being successful at it. So, instead of this poem being Plath’s
victorious confession to the horrible men in her life, and finally allowing
closure, the poem is an outline of her promising death. Plath is still pained by
these men, and cannot completely go on being alive. She believes that death is
her only solution, and maybe in a way it was. Perhaps she is finally free, and
finally able to “breath” and “Achoo.”
Images
of victimization in Sylvia Plath's poem "Daddy" - of Nazis,
swastikas, barbed wire, fascists, brutes, devils, and vampires - are so
frantic, imposing, and vituperative that the poem seems more out of control
than it actually is. When read rapidly and angrily, without ample attention
paid to its many unexpected pauses, Plath's poem, indeed, seems like a runaway
train barreling through one psychic nightmare after the other, until the
speaker pulls the emergency cord that irrevocably separates the self from the
tormenting other in the very last line: "Daddy, daddy, ...
Allegory in Plath’s Daddy
In her poem "Daddy", Plath artfully intermixes the
"factually" true with the "emotionally" true. There are
scraps of her own life here, but the poem is much bigger than that, and goes
beyond the face-value interpretation that is it nothing but a self-indulgent
literary vengeance spree. Daddy works on both a biographical/personal level for
Plath, but also on an allegorical level as well.
I see this poem as a dual testament to Plath's (and all women's) struggle
against male power, authority, influence, etc. She never "had time"
to define her feminine self in opposition to her father, in the context of this
male relationship, or legitimately break free of it, because of his untimely
death. She first resented his being emotionally absent in her life, and then physically
absent. In her journals she admits how she struggles in her relationships with
men because of this lack. Accounts by both Plath and Aurelia, assert that her
father was quite the stereotypical authoritarian male, and although she loved
him, she came to hate what he represented and how he had treated Aurelia and
her. Many women of that time, (and all times) can understand this
dynamic---loving men, but hating how they treat us and view us and exploit
us--- consciously or unconsciously, on either a personal, or societal level.
Taken from this perspective, the Holocaust/victim analogy takes on a whole
different slant. Rather than referring (exploitatively) to the personal
sufferings of one individual woman, it can allegorically represent the mass, historical
victimization of women by patriarchy, which has been well-documented (witch
hysteria) and which continues (female circumscision) She says "every woman
adores a Fascist in boots"--all women in some way participate (if only in
their passivity, in refusing to reject the roles that society attempts to force
upon them) in this social and cultural situation.
The child-voice of the poem can represent,on a deeper level, that innocence
young girls lose as they become women and find themselves being "chuffed
off like a Jew," often reluctantly or unknowingly, into the expected roles
for women in marriage and childbearing---when fairy tale expectations of love
crash into the reality of the Sisyphian tasks of dishes,
cooking,cleaning,laundry, child care, when so many women have their dreams and
identities erased under the daily grind of domesticity---a different sort of
confinement, slavery, suppression, another and altogether different kind of
death and destruction of the spirit. Remember Adlai Stevenson's speech at
Plath's commencement?
I think that this poem is more than "voodoo." It explores the pain
women feel in their various relations to and with men. It is the cry is an
injured, abandoned daughter, but it also possesses the undersong cry of all
women who have been abandoned emotionally or physically by the men they love.
It is a personal rebellion against her father and Hughes, but it also rebels
against society, against patriarchy, self-hatred, and women's silence.
Howl
It is difficult to read
Allen Ginsberg's poem _Howl_ in 1994, without
recognizing the influence
it had on a society that was moving towards a
banal and materialistic
existence. This poem has made great
progress
since its controversial
beginnings in the 1950s, and has made its way into
anthologies and classrooms
not only in the United States, but all over
the world. _Howl and Other Poems_ has sold 745,000
copies making it one
of the most read poetry
books of it's time. (Miles 105)
Allen Ginsberg has become synonomous with the Beat
Generation, a group
who coined the term
anti-establishment and set the stage for the peace
movement of the 1960s. In 1959 "Life" magazine did an article
about the
"Beat Generation"
which, as the story goes, made the beats celebrities
by bringing them into the
spotlight. Paul O'Neil writes in the article,
"No Beat work has so
startled the public or so influenced the Beat mind
as Ginsberg's long poem,
_Howl_, an expression of wild personal
dissatisfaction with the
world." (O'Neil 119)
_Howl_ broke away not only
from poetic literary traditions, but also from
the constraints of the
"silent generation." It was
as if Ginsberg's
_Howl_ was meant to be
heard by everyone,-- including the society that it
criticized. The public was not startled by what Ginsberg
was saying in
the poem, as much as by the
words that he chose in saying it. The
public
obscenity trial pushed
_Howl_ into mainstream popular culture, and changed
the way people read and
thought about poetry.
Although the media's fascination with _Howl_ made it a
success
with the general public,
the literary critics were not so taken by it.
In
_The Partisan Review_, John
Hollander states, in regards to _Howl and
Other Poems_, "It is only fair to Allen Ginsberg...to
remark on the
utter lack of decorum of
any kind in his dreadful little volume (Miles
161). Many critics felt
that breaking away from the traditional forms of
poetry meant that it could
not be taken seriously.
It wasn't until the sixties and seventies that _Howl_ broke
through the
literary resistance and
became viewed as one of the great poems of modern
American poetry. By this time _Howl_ was no longer media hype
and
critics decided to look at
the special qualities that made it an original
and extraordinary
poem. In "How I Hear Howl",
George Bowering explicates
the poem, and discusses how
the three parts are constructed in such a way
as to revolve around the
central unifying theme of the modern day
Moloch. The Moloch represents the modern day monster
which is symbolic
of Time. "Section 1 of
"Howl" shows portraits of people the poet knows,
caught in the eye of
Time" ( Bowering 372) "At the same time the martyrs
demonstrate against the
other oppressions, money & academy, prisons where
not criminals but children
are locked up, bent, warped, and trained to pass
thru the sacrifice fires of
Moloch (373).
Critics like Paul Portuges and John Tytell also made
contributions
to the literary study of
Allen Ginsberg and _Howl_. Portuges
discusses in
his book "visionary
poetics" and the impact that Blake's vision has had on
Ginsberg's work. He says, "(Howl) was indeed a surprise
to many,
and a threat to many
more. Ginsberg had fully realized his
quest to get
right into the terror. The individual, victimized by the
repression,
fear, and violence that so
permeates Western Culture, had surfaced as one
of Ginsberg's major
themes."(Portuges 46) This is symbolic of the change
in attitude about _Howl_ in
the 1970s. It was no longer perceived
as a
"wildly personal
disillusionment" but was a very
real and truthful vision
of what America had become.
In "Out of the Vietnam Vortex", James Mermann
recognizes "Howl" as an
anti-war poem, and states,
"It is readily clear that Ginsberg has no
specific war in mind except
the inevitable one that must come again and
again to the culture that
he describes; and it is clear that he sees the
daily experience of living
in that ambiance as a war against the
spirit."(Mersmann 56)
Although it is obvious that _Howl_ is dependent on
the zeitgest, it is
interesting to see the poem fit in to each decade
over and over again.
The interest and close analysis of _Howl_ seemed to get
lost in
the eighties, however, with
the emphasis moving toward theoretical
studies. In Marjorie
Perloff's book _Poetic Lisence_, she points out
that, "Charles Alteri's Enlarging the Temple,
Hugh Kenner's A Homemade
World, and Robert von
Hallberg's American Poetry and Culture, have tended
to ignore, if not
depreciate, Ginsberg's achievement, partly, perhaps, in
reaction to the
journalistic overkill devoted to the Beat Generation."
(Perloff 201) Mark Jarman
states in the Hudson Review that (Ginsberg's)
poetry, that is to say, is
judged thematically, and since the "themes" are
now passŽ, so is much of
Ginsberg's work." (224) But Arthur and Kit Knight
argue that the eighties
were a time when people needed to be particularly
retrospective, since,
"the complacency and the totalitarian atmosphere
that characterized much of
the fifties is again with us." (Knight, cover)
In their book Beat Vision,
they discuss the importance of "Beat
Generation" and how it
must be given the literary credit that it deserves.
I think one thing that many
critics overlook is the humorous aspect of
_Howl_. Ginsberg states, "You're free to say
any damn thing you want; but
people are so scared of
hearing you say what's unconsciously universal
that it's comical."
(Hyde 53)
Dutchman
An
Agony
A
Poem for Willie Best
Will
They Cry When You’re Gone, You Bet
IMPORTANT
TO TAKE INTO ACCOUNT THE FOLLOWING PAPER QUESTIONS (because he chose to ask
about works that we did not use in our papers on the first exam):
1.
Discuss the use of
“soil” or “land” in Cane by Jean Toomer, Blood on the Forge by
William Attaway, or “The Man Who Was Almost a Man” by Richard Wright.
2.
Discuss the ways in
which social class complicates race in any one text read in the second half of
the course.
3.
Explicate one of
Langston Hughes’s or Claude McKay’s poems.
Show how the poem illustrates the poet’s theory of poetry in its use of
vernacular, Jazz, social class. How is
the poem uniquely modernist?
4.
Discuss the implicit
image of the United States presented in any one of
the
Hughes poems. How does this image
contribute to your understanding of
Modernism?
5.
How does it feel to be
colored like Zora Neale Hurston?
Discuss her text as presenting both a social and political position in
the black community. What do you
understand the text to ultimately be say?
A Chronology of Important Events and Publications
During the Harlem Renaissance
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1919
1920
1921
1922
1923
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1924
1925
1926
1927
1928
1929
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1930
1931
1932
1933
1934
1935
1937 Publications of McKay, Long Way From Home; Hurston, Their
Eyes Were Watching God.
1939 Publication of Hurston, Moses: Man of the Mountain.
1940 Publications of Hughes The Big Sea; McKay, Harlem: Negro
Metropolis.
(Information for the above
chronology is from Kellner, Harlem Renaissance: A Historical Dictionary for
the Era and Watson, The Harlem Renaissance.)
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Nathan I. Harlem Renaissance. NY: Oxford UP, 1971.
1. Harlem Renaissance brought the Black experience clearly
within the general American cultural history.
a.
Remarkable coincidences and luck, provided a sizable chunk of real estate in
the heart of Manhattan.
b. The Black migration, from south to north, changed their
image from rural to urban, from peasant to sophisticate.
c. Harlem became a crossroads where Blacks interacted with
and expanded their contacts internationally.
d. Harlem Renaissance profited from a spirit of
self-determination which was widespread after W.W.I.
2. Harlem Renaissance could not escape its history and
culture in its attempt to create a new one.
a. The
"renaissance" echoed American progressivism in its faith in
democratic reform, in its belief in art and literature as agents of change, and
in its almost uncritical belief in itself and its future.
b. The creation of the "New Negro" failed, but it
was an American failure, similar to other frustrated promotions.
c. The future of the "New Negro" was accepted
without question.
d. Just as the Whites, Black intellectuals were unprepared
for the rude shock of the Great Depression; the HR was shattered by it because
of naive assumptions about the centrality of culture, unrelated to economic and
social realities.
3. Still the Harlem Renaissance had its significance.
a. It
became a symbol and a point of reference for everyone to recall.
b. The name, more than the place, became synonymous with
new vitality, Black urbanity, and Black militancy.
c. It became a racial focal point for Blacks the world
over; it remained for a time a race capital.
d. It stood for urban pluralism; Alain Locke wrote:
"The peasant, the student, the businessman, the professional man, artist,
poet, musician, adventurer and worker, preacher and criminal, exploiter and
social outcast, each group has come with its own special motives ... but their
greatest experience has been the finding of one another."
e. The complexity of the urban setting was important for
Blacks to truly appreciate the variety of Black life. The race consciousness
required that shared experience.
4. Harlem Renaissance's legacy is limited by the character
of the Renaissance.
a. It
encouraged the new appreciation of folk roots and culture.
b. Peasant folk materials and spirituals provided a rich
source for racial imagination and it freed the Blacks from the establishment of
past condition.
c. Harlem Renaissance was imprisoned by its innocence. The
Harlem intellectuals, while proclaiming a new race consciousness, became mimics
of Whites, wearing clothes and using manners of sophisticated Whites, earning
the epithet "dicty niggers" from the very people they were supposed
to be championing.
d. Harlem Renaissance could not overcome the overwhelming
White presence in commerce which defined art and culture. What was needed was a
rejection of White values; they had to see Whites, without awe of love or awe
of hate, and themselves truly, without myth or fantasy, in order that they
could be themselves in life and art.
e. Harlem Renaissance created an ethnic provincialism and
its biggest gift could be a lesson from its failures. The biggest is in the strange
separation of the Blacks from American culture. Except for a few Blacks, the
most striking thing about them is that they are native American. The negative
implications have been clear; Blacks, unlike other immigrants, had no immediate
past and history and culture to celebrate. But the positive implications of
American nativity have never been fully appreciated by them. It seems too
simple: the Afro-American's history and culture is American, more completely so
than most others in the country.
f. At least the decade of the 1920s seems to have been too
early for Blacks to have felt the certainty about native culture that would
have freed them from crippling self-doubt. ... that is why the art of the
Renaissance was so problematic, feckless, not fresh, not real. The lesson it
leaves us is that the true Black Renaissance awaits Afro-Americans' claiming
their patria, their nativity.