Topic: Here is some of a book I am working on:) IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 06, 2003 05:47 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The wind swept across the flat sandy landscape as far as the eye could see. Harsh sunlight and an unnaturally bright sky beat down on the parched earth sending waves of heat shimmering and hovering over the sandy plain. No plants grew here and no birds or animals circled in the air. Only a single out of place shape could be seen moving slowly but steadily across the dusty dessert, bent against the wind, and defying the heat. He walking at a hard pace despite the heat and dust that swirled around his face. He was sun-dried and tough, breathing and walking in sync, his eyes focused straight ahead. The position of the sun was his only guide to getting out of the hot, blasted dessert alive. A small whirring noise from off in the distance was lost in the constant howl of wind, a dangerous black shape coming up fast on the mans tracks. It was not flesh and blood, this monster, it had wheels and metal and gun turrets above itís maligned head, and orders to kill. The man still seemed as if he had not heard the approaching machine, and kept his steady pace as the artificial killer started to train itís weaponry from over 200 yards off to quickly dispatch the dessert intruder. Suddenly, the man disappeared, the target was lost. The machine screamed to a halt and sat completely still, seeming to ponder the disappearance like a child. The massive guns on the turrets lowered back down and still the machine did not move. For minutes nothing happened. Then slowly the hatch cranked open, and with a woosh of dust and cool air, the lid fell foreward. A dark head with springy black hair peeked out. Seeing no immediate danger, the man stood up completely, surveying the endless sand. It was against protocol for him to open the hatch, he had been warned by his superiors to, ďNot on any circumstance leave the CLV,Ē or he would be sanctioned or even shot. This man was dangerous, they said, more dangerous than any other enemy of the New Republic. The thick lips twisted into a smug smile as he thought of the scared look of his superiors and then he leveled his FN.308 assault rifle and swept the gun left to right across the empty waste-land. He couldnít have just disappeared, he thought, narrowing his eyes, getting more agitated by the second. He wasnít going back empty handed. This was his chance to make Captain of his squad and become something more than a low ranking officer that was constantly shit on by everyone in the damned New Republic. The man still wasnít anywhere to be seen. ď What the fuck is this shit?Ē He swore under his breath and wiped away the sweat pouring down his face with the back of his arm. He started to lower himself back down into the driving chamber when a warm gushing sensation erupted from his stomach, followed by sudden heat and pain. He looked down, his face frozen in terror, as his blood poured and squirted his life onto the blistering metal and sand. He fainted and fell foreward, landing face first into a large puddle of his blood. The large knife was imbedded perfectly between the blackís shoulder-blades, and had been thrown with perfect accuracy as the man from the dessert had crouched in the sand behind the tank, watching the unsuspecting man rise from his shelter and become the hunted. Pulling the rest of the sweaty black body from the chamber, he dumped it on the ground and jumped effortlessly down into the small cramped quarters of the small tank. His eyes adjusted to the dim light and focused on the complex instrument panel. Taking only seconds to peruse the blinking lights, his fingers lightly tapped out the commands, and gun turrets raised, ready for attack, as the agile vehicle started foreword blasting dry white sand under itís wheels. There was a dull thud as the tracks ran over the nearly lifeless shape, and if the man noticed, it didnít show in his hard steely gray eyes. END OF PROLOGUE -Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 06, 2003 01:37 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- that's VERY GOOD! i pictured this advanced super hero or cyborg man destroying that black govt worker or agent. i also pictured the sci-fi movie "screamers" with the beggining part of your story. it's about these robotic sand robots that hunt people. sort of like tremors but sci fi. i also thought of "hardware" from your descrition. very cool. did you write this yourself and just think it up? if so, it's very good. lemme know about the idea i presented if you can. add some things too and i can sort of check n balance it. cool -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 358 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 06, 2003 05:51 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks Roman, I am glad you think its cool, I havent really shown anyone "The Destroyer" yet. It is a futuristic typr story about a guy who is a one man killing machine, and a young kid he picks up and trains, and then the kid ends up becoming like a son to him as they train an underground army;) A good idea for the movie, if you want something cool and edgy, could be a story of four or five loners, moving up in the world(cool jobs needing intelligence ect.) and finding eachother on the computer? They are all super smart and when they decide to meet underground, they realalize that put together they can really raise some hell, and they end up winning:) Your idea's:) 2 girls and three guys could work. One girl could be a secratary in the FBI, or some government wing. Another girl could be an Intern at a hospital. One of the Guys is a club owner,and they are able to meet at the club(like a cool gothic style club(and I know the owner of a perfect club, we could use it. One guy is ex-military, and a techie, and the last guy is a photgrapher, and really laid back. Belinda Stokholm:(me)Intern/sexy,proffessional. Fast paced and used to some crazy shit Fallon Underwood :secratary/ intelligent,kind of naive, but a quick learner with a mean streak Wolfgang Pollard: Club owner/Tough, handsome and looking for a way to make some changes, and with enough money and time to do something Marcus Graham:ex-military/ Wolfangs best friend. He likes to come in and get sloshed at the club. He has a lot of baggage, but you only find out later when he becomes a very serious non-white killer why he is so pissed Justin Baxtor: Photographer/kind of gets pulled in because he likes Belinda. He wants to make her happy and uses his skills to blackmail high up Jews until he realizes the truth OK, what do you think? I would love to do this!!!!!!!!! Ok w/b -Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 06, 2003 11:54 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- okay don't have a lot of time to type cause i';m going to bed. your destroyer story is very cool. >A good idea for the movie, if you want something cool and edgy, could be a story of four or five loners, moving up in the world(cool jobs, needing intelligence ect.) and finding eachother on the computer? good plot idea so far! >They are all super smart and when they decide to meet underground, they realalize that put together they can really raise some hell, and they end up winning:) Your idea's:) sounds good so far. >2 girls and three guys could work. One girl could be a secratary in the FBI, or some government wing. Another girl could be an Intern at a hospital. sounds good, how do we tie in the hospitol thing? or do we need to? the govt job is good for info but how does th hospitol work? lemme know. ;] >One of the Guys is a club owner,and they are able to meet at the club(like a cool gothic style club(and I know the owner of a perfect club, we could use it. One guy is ex-military, and a techie, and the last guy is a photgrapher, and really laid back. sounds good but should the it he be a club owner for the story as well? explain why you think he should. remember i'm just trying to really make sure and see this. >Belinda Stokholm:(me)Intern/sexy,proffessional. Fast paced and used to some crazy shit hahaha good so far. we need to find out if belinda is a jewish name though. i'm very anal about names now. ;] >Fallon Underwood :secratary/ intelligent,kind of naive, but a quick learner with a mean streak] don't like the name fallon. any other names? >Wolfgang Pollard: Club owner/Tough, handsome and looking for a way to make some changes, and with enough money and time to do something sounds good. the name is good too. >Marcus Graham:ex-military/ Wolfangs best marc is a jewish used name isn't it? i'd like to use the name "alex" in this, for one of the guys. alex was used for ewan mcgreggor in "shallow grave"(you should see that movie) and of course clockwork orange. >friend. He likes to come in and get sloshed at the club. He has a lot of baggage, but you only find out later when he becomes a very serious non-white killer why he is so pissed good plot so far and i think the key will be that it's not senseless killing, but defensive. i.e. he sees mudds or yids doing wrongful things to a white girl or doing gang crap on people. he can sort of be the super hero. ;] maybe he can be the alex. or alexander. >Justin Baxtor: Photographer/kind of gets pulled in because he likes Belinda. He wants to make her happy and uses his skills to blackmail high up Jews until he realizes the truth erg, justin could be a yid name. let's go for very white names. wolfgangs great and so is alex. and how about he wants to make her happy but he's not too over infatuated with her although i do like this idea very much. also, how about he uses his skills to hack or photgraph or whatever to give her what she wants. which is info and then he stumbles onto some big secret thing that the yids are trying to do. what that would be i don't know. >OK, what do you think? I would love to do this!!!!!!!!! Ok w/b -Iantha excellent so far. great ideas!!! the charactor descriptions and style is excellent so far! cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 358 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 09:45 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hehe, was asking my husband to help me with names, and he couldnt think of one quick enough, so I asked him for some girls he slept with, and Fallon was one of them;) We can change it if you'd like. How about Jamie? That is very White. Belinda is English, but I don't know about Justin. Marcus I thouught was Latin. Why dont we change the names a little? Alex Granger/military Wolfgang Pollard/club owner Belinda Stokholm/intern(by the way the intern doc is a good idea because if someone ever get hurts in the movie, bang you have a doctor right there to help fix em up , and I have scrubs and medical knoweledge:) I also wanted to add a scene where Belinda helps to save her white patients while making a quick and easy to decision to let a non white die:) Juliette Campbell/secratary Nick Webster/photograpgher ( I like your idea about him stumbeling into something big. I wanted him to get into this whole thing a little naive though with his infatuation of the girl, so we can portray the average dumb american at first and then show him realize the truth, and become ideological. (could be first scene) Alex and Wolfgang are both sick of the dating scene, and like to sit and bullshit at the bar after closing time, and all the idiots have finnaly left. Alex is a little drunk, and talks wildly about giving up on everything and going on a murderous rampage. Wolfgang laughs and humours his friend, but feels the need to help him get a better perspective on life, because he feels Alex could contribute more to the world. He tells him about this web-site he found, not a dating site, but a place for people who talked about real-stuff. "this is for the anti-socials with no goddamned time to fuck with the herd" he could say. Alex is a little skeptical, but takes home the napkin with the web address. Next idea, an girl arrives at the scene of a dorm fire, and people are being brought to to the grass, burned and dying. She screams she can help and runs from person to person, knowing she cant save them all, checking for pulses. When the ambulences arrive she points them to the white kids and says the others don't have a chance. She doesn't really even know why she did it, but had felt like kicking at the hand of a black as he tried to grab onto her pant leg. She goes home tired and exausted and gets online. (help me with this idea because I don't know much about online stuff. Make a name for the site, and develoup an idea, my husband can actually make it for the movie, and then we can keep it up as a part of our movie hype:) She writes on the site about her night, and why she felt that she didnt want to save everyone. "As politically incorrect as this sounds, not everyone needs saving"she could say. This is when you realize Alex is checking out the site. He writes to her and says he feels the same. You get an insight into to why he is upset because he tells her a little about his time in the military.(He was an elite soldier for three years with an all white team of course, but when a Jew was elected president, he disolved the all white elite teams and put them into early retirement. Alex had no idea what kind of operations the military used anymore) Well, I have to go right now, but I am working on this, I went to that club last night, and it is as cool as I remember. It is old style , with candels and dark walls, and beautiful paintings, and its small, not all big and wierd. Leather couches, and lots of mirrors. Perfect. I will talk to the owner if you'd like:) Tell me if you like the new names -Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 10:59 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i like the concept so far. "they all have one thing in common and it's this club and culture that has advanced music and lifestyle." in regards to them meeting on the net, i think maybe 1 or 2 at the most, meet on the net and meet up for the club. but maybe it's more of a "mailing list" and people just get notices to meet and find out when events are? anyway, i LOVE the begging premise of the story about 2 posts ago, so don't lose that, we should incoporate the jist of it somehow. maybe you can make a "TASK" list on a computer notepad where you write 1. 2. 3. and after each number, it's just a general plot in sequence. >We can change it if you'd like. i'll come up with some other names in a couple hours. >How about Jamie? it's not bad but perhaps too common? i'm going to analize that euro name thread. >That is very White. Belinda is English, belindas ok but i think of belinda carlisle or something. maybe something edgy and elite for a name. roxy? no too cheesey. pleae let me get back to you on the names. >but I don't know about Justin. i've known too many jews with that name. plus justin co. makes cowboy boots. >Marcus I thouught was Latin. Why dont we change the names a little? marcus arelius. i think some how it is biblical but not positive. let's stay as far away from the hebrew bible as possible. also, before we finalize this, we will ask the board, if these names are jewish rooted or not, >Alex Granger/military i don't like granger, i knew a fat kid named granger. what would he do in the military? remember, they gotta be elite so no jarheads. >Wolfgang Pollard/club owner this will work. but what about, "wolfgang vortek"? or alexander vortek? >Belinda Stokholm/intern(by the way the intern doc is a good idea because if someone ever get hurts in the movie, bang you have a doctor right there to help fix em up , and I have scrubs and medical knoweledge:) I also wanted to add a scene where Belinda helps to save her white patients while making a quick and easy to decision to let a non white die:) ahaha good stuff. okay if you don't mind, make a section for internal movie aspects. you know like saving whitye pateients. letting the darkies go. 'i'm sorry misses waneequA but laquefa just had too many bullet holes in her" hahahaa we had to let her go. or perhaps she assists on the asshole who is plotting to frame everyone and undoes the all the plugs. hehehehehe a perfect ending. >Juliette Campbell/secratary can't do juliette,(you must hate me by now, lol) >Nick Webster/photograpgher webster is english but a lot of jews used it. urgh. ( I like your idea about him stumbeling into something big. I wanted him to get into this whole thing a little naive though with his infatuation of the girl, so we can portray the average dumb american at first and then show him realize the truth, and become ideological. i want that too. keep both those odeas together with him. for each charactor, write down their role and what their part in the movie is please. i'm sure you're already doing this anyway. ;] >(could be first scene) alright. >Alex and Wolfgang are both sick of the dating scene, and like to sit and bullshit at the bar after closing time, and all the idiots have finnaly left. maybe not though. remember this is an elite atmosphere. maybe there a rag tag group of people still mingling and alex and wolfgang are the "well known" regulars for the management so the management or manager, owner, bar tender etc. likes them. is friendly, partners? etc. i'm also picture some nig or jew who weasels into the underground club only to realize that he has come to the wrong place. or perhaps he's trying to break in afterhours and rob the place, get info, etc. while some people are still there? to his surprise =))))) >Alex is a little drunk, and talks wildly about giving up on everything and going on a murderous rampage. nah too careless. has to be more elite. like he's drunk and he's talking and he'd really like to get a certain jew company back or some dickhead-jew back because he's portraying their group or whites in bad light. and the jew is a pedophile, dirtbag, etc. maybe the phot guy for the cool underground magazine finds some old articles on the corrupted jew? or maybe alex finds them on the web. or maybe someone gets files on him somehow. from the web would be a good idea. then they come to the club and he plops the files down on the table and their group get to work on it. we can call the jew, "ginsberg" or shalom. or sharon. ;] we'll think of a name for the slob. the fire part i don't completely like. no offense of course. remember it's got to be an elite movie. very advanced. he medical skills come into play in more crucial situations. remember the witty and edgy situations. >She goes home tired and exausted and gets online. (help me with this idea because I don't know much about online stuff. Make a name for the site, and develoup an idea, She writes on the site about her night, and why she felt that she didnt want to save everyone. good so far but the fire aspect is not my cup of tea. also i want too make sure that alex and wolfgang are the driving part of this movie. the medical person has her great points but i want these other to have the strongest role. belinda definitly charms and amazes though. she's the quick thinking one but not the lead. is that okay? >Alex is checking out the site. He writes to her and says he feels the same. alex and wolfgang, know eachother already and belinda knows wolfgang, but not alex. alex is this computer genius and just drinking at home, kind of being horny after melinda gives her computer info(we'll think or terms later dosen't matter now), he hacks into belindas personal journal on her computer and her pictures and he's reading that she actually likes him. for instance wolfgang tells belinda that an old friend from *whereever* is going to meet them at the club. belinda immediately likes his edgyness and then she writes about him in her personal journal and he sees her personal sexy pics. not nude mind you but sexy. do you want to play that part? i doubt you'd have to do anything too skin like. now of course wolfgang has a girlfriend already and she should be in the movie somewhere obviously. whether with the group or not. >Well, I have to go right now, but I am working on this, I went to that club last night, and it is as cool as I remember. It is old style , with candels and dark walls, and beautiful paintings, and its small, not all big and wierd. Leather couches, and lots of mirrors. cool, i don't like the goth stuff so much like candles and stuff but the mirros could be cool. but decor can always be done later. that would come much later after the story is done. > Perfect. I will talk to the owner if you'd like:) Tell me if you like the new names -Iantha if you want? just tell him you're thinking about a script and you "might" want to use his club or maybe he'd want to let you use it for the film? that's kinda far ahead though. we gotta get a script first. i'm hoping this can be done and dgitally if possible. so it would be a real indy film but without cheeseness of super 8. i think there's some good ideas, scenes, scenarios and plots to go with now. lemme know. ;] cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 358 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 11:22 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If your wondering at my ability to type endlessly today, its because its my day off:) About stuff you do and do not like, the more ideas the better. I just threw some of that stuff out there, and of course the script in the end is going to be perfect because I am sure we will go through tons of different scenerios to make it perfect:) I agree that Wolfgang and Alex should be the leads. What age range do you think we should do? I think 25-30? but with maturity. Should we drop the intern thing? I cant really think of any cool way to use it anymore:( Think of some more proffessions, we should have back-ups. All these people should have intellect and independent thinking in common, and jobs that allow them that. Maybe one of them could actually be a spy for a secret organization of powerful white people, and it slowly starts to come out as the group gets mysterious help with their projects while the underground organization puts them to the test until at the end they are excepted, and they realize that their race is farther along in the fight than they think. In fact the photo guy could have something to do with the groups growing suspicion that someone is helping them, and they might turn temporarily against one of there own when suspicious pics come to light. I am really just throwing stuff out there, but I think it would be cool and edgy with some secrets and suprise endings. ian -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 11:35 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i'm thinking late 20's or 27-31 age range. im at werk so it's easy for me to type. let's see, i really DO like the job scenarios we have. the higher org. type thing sounds cool but it might be better if these are just spophistos rebelling against the jewish masters. sort of a microcosm of people in the u.s. just doing their own part, without any help from an org. or maybe some help towards the end? i dunno. i know people like the underdog. -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 358 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 11:53 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yup, that is what I was thinking too. But do White power people like the underdog? I dont really know. Our age range is the same, we like our charactors, so how do you want to do this? Do you want me to start with cataloging pages with charactors, traits, and setting. Or do you want to do the setting?(Setting has a lot to do with the actual story) Once we have the names and traits of our charactors, we can start a script. Then we do a storyboard, and then we shoot:) I like your idea about how the group meets. They shouldnt all meet on the comp, and maybe they are drawn together at the club. There definatly should be some sort of cool connection. Maybe one of the girls is dancing at the club and that Jew you said sneaks into the club hits on her, and maybe gets a little pushy, and Alex saves her. Or maybe she doesnt realize that Alex has been into her personal files, and maybe he hires the photo guy to check her out, and they find out she is a racist, so Alex sneds her an anonymous note to meet at the club. Why don't we make the club owner and the secratary the couple? The club guy might already be doing stuff, using his girlfriend as his connection, and they just get bigger as they meet eachother. (Do you think a little romance is good in a movie?) I dont know, just some more ideas:) -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 01:45 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- >Yup, that is what I was thinking too. maybe 27-30 would be better on the age range. it's a good demographic. >But do White power people like the underdog? i think they do and if this movie is too "follow my command" type of thing than people may not like that. keep in mind i want it to be as far away from something like "fight club" as much as possible. that's why a microcosm or small groups would be best. and it's also damn realistic! what we have in our movement is elite microcosm's. and usually people nOT alligned or signed up to one org or another. however WE COULD bring in a main organization member to kind of kick some ass. i'm picturing some bad ass with a shiney leather jacket. some type of cleaner, if you get my point? >Do you want me to start with cataloging pages with charactors, traits, and setting. yes exactly, do it on note paper or on the computer blank notepads, but if you do it on the comp be careful you don't erase it. i've fucked up before and done that. so do each charactor, name their traits, and then make a seperate note pad/paper of the possible settings we just went through in these last couple of pms. sound okay? >Or do you want to do the setting?(Setting has a lot to do with the actual story) well let's sort of both do it unless you don't like my editing, no offense taken either way. i'd say we have a few things, 1.a club where they escape, meet, dciscuss things, the music, the things that happen at the club and around the club. etc. 2.each charactors jobs and little insights at those jobs or personal moments with them, whereever they happen to be. example the girl at the hospitol or i.c.u. area. 3.the meeting of belinda's and alex. her diary and computer being looked at. believe it or not, these 3 things and the intricasies of explaining them in the movie might actually take up an hour!? of film time, so the rest has to be tied in. the photographer guy. etc. the discoveries he makes. >Once we have the names and traits of our charactors, we can start a script. i agree can you continue to do it and leave a section for each person and storyline? then i can give you my input and then you can modify it. and then we can both look back at each section and see how it's improved or hasn't. you know how to use a basic computer notepad correct? if not ask your husband, he will know. or if you want to do it on paper that would be sweet too but more of a pain in a way. >Then we do a storyboard, and then we shoot:) sounds good. this is definitly what we need to do. the profiles and then the storyboard. can you do a little quick free homepage for it online? angelfire.com offers these. it's very easy. >I like your idea about how the group meets. They shouldnt all meet on the comp, and maybe they are drawn together at the club. i'm kinda set on the fact that wolfgang and alex have known eachother but alex and belinda have not. and then the scenes with belinda and alex. of course i wouldn't want it to be a love story otherwise i gotta stop now. hahaha There definatly should be some sort of cool connection. Maybe one of the girls is dancing at the club and that Jew you said sneaks into the club hits on her, okay now i've got an even better idea, the jew comes to the club and tries to infiltraite. the jew dosen't know what he's got himself into =). he threatens the club owner and tries to find out who the group of people inside are. tells the club owner that these people doing secret illegal activities(they're not though, it's just that they have evidence on this jew!! and he wants them dead!!! especially the photographer! the photographer has the photos of this jew doing wrong!!! i have no fucking idea what the evil thing the jew did yet though. lemme know if you can come up with anything.) anyway the jew wants to find out and obviously the jew can't infiltraite the group but he does come into the club/or alley of the club, trapping belinda with a gun! but then help arrives and they beat his ass and get out of their because the jew has mass backup. so it's like this jew and his other jew friend are trying to find out who these elite guys are and what they're plotting. sorry this is a rough draft. >Or maybe she doesnt realize that Alex has been into her personal files, and maybe he hires the photo guy to check her out and they find out she is a racist, so Alex sneds her an anonymous note to meet at the club. hmm this might be too much. >Why don't we make the club owner and the secratary the couple? okay >The club guy might already be doing stuff, using his girlfriend as his connection, connection for what? >and they just get bigger as they meet eachother. i don't want drugs or any of those aspects in the movie. drinking mixed drinks, and alcohol is fine. remember in clockwaork orange where they drank milk? lol i sorta of want to have certain new made up words or elite words and 'things" be an anthem for this movie. example, bartender says, "what'll it be this time alex?", alex says, "ahh just give me my usual "atomic boot" " of course that's sort of cheesey so we wouldn't use it but you get the point. each thing has a meaning. thusly it could become some good white lingo for movie fans. >(Do you think a little romance is good in a movie?) I dont know, just some more ideas:) a little but i know if you want a "fuckoff" in your face type movie, you HAVE to keep the romance to a minimum. example, goodfellas was good because it was violent and brutal. now don't get me wrong, their has to be some in their with the belinda and alex deal but that could be more FUN then "romance" per se. remember this is going to be an intense movie. not a lot of time for lovey douvy stuff. ;] -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 358 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 02:48 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Very good, OK, sounds like were on the same page. It sounds like we just have to work out how Alex and Belinda meet, and then how the photgrapher fits in. We need names for the photo guy and the secratary and we are almost there for the charactors. I think the Jewish bad guys that shows up at the club could be into smutting out white girls. That seems like what they are good at. They could be in a white sex slave ring, and when they realize that they are being watched, they go to the club to find out who is watching them. Only the Jewish guy is like the nephew or cousin of like some high ranked Jew in the government, who probably knows about the sex ring, so they are trying to keep this really quiet so no one can make any connections. Wolfgang and the secratary is a good idea because he is smart and rich, and has his girl recording the conversations she has at work. He has like a big vault in the basement of the club filled with incriminating tapes of officials and jews. (just an idea) They could find out the connection between the low sex-ring Jew and the high ranker and realize they have something big? I am really rethinking the Intern though, because in this movie, there is not much need for a doctor, but a lawyer would be OK. Maybe her dad is a judge with influence, and at the end helps them somehow. Or, one of her cases brings her across the realization of the sex ring, (but I could really use some more proffesion ideas because I want everything to fit for a reason:) so let me know what you think, and throw some name ideas out there:0 heres some from me Secratary/ Mackenzie,Thora,Madeline, Phot guy/Nick, Chris, Derek, William?? Hehe I like Madeline and Nick personally -Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 04:16 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i think hellcat's going to change this board over soon with the new one. don't tell anyone i told you that. and don't tell anyone. um, so i'm going to cop n paste and save these threads we made in case the profiles get deleted. you do the same if you can. thanks. now to your reply. Very good, OK, sounds like were on the same page. It sounds like we just have to work out how Alex and Belinda meet, and then how the photgrapher fits in. i agree. i'm thinking that alex meets her at the club and see's her dancing all hot in some sexy outfit and then wolf.g says oh that's belinda. ;] then she comes over and they meet. make it simple that way. could add a lot of chemistry to the film. ok how do we tie in that wolf and alex meeet back up? does alex just somehow contact him? or does he just go to the club looking for his old friend from years ago? >We need names for the photo guy and the secratary and we are almost there for the charactors. just give me one night to dream about all the elite peoples names and i'll have it. >I think the Jewish bad guys that shows up at the club could be into smutting out white girls. That seems like what they are good at. They could be in a white sex slave ring, and when they realize that they are being watched, they go to the club to find out who is watching them. okay but instead of smutting out the girls and prostetuing them i think it's a good idea. i don't want to see any white chicks in this movie affected in any sexual way possible. see i don't want morons wathcing the film on the other side and thinking 'hee hee that jew guy killed that bitch' or whatever. see my point? maybe you think i'm insane but that's how i think it should be. now on the other hand, we could have it where one of the jew agents captures one of the white girls and trys to interogate her. now that would piss a lot of people off. but if the jews get any hardcore edge or revenge in the movie, i think it's a bad thing. perhaps not reality, but fuck the other side, this is our movie. >Wolfgang and the secratary is a good idea because he is smart and rich, and has his girl recording the conversations she has at work. He has like a big vault in the basement of the club filled with incriminating tapes of officials and jews. (just an idea) perfect! because this is the same jew that wants to shut down the club!!! ok I'VE GOT IT!!!!!! so this section of the story goes like this(remember it's a rough draft. ;] ) the elite people and elite infiltraitor guy(our guy) finds out that at his branch of the govt office(picture some cheesey cubicle office setting) he overhears some things or perhaps is cleaning and he finds these files that lead him to believe that jews in a top part of the govt. are trying to eliminate elite white women and men. so perhaps this is a list of people the govt is after? so when our eliete guy finds out this info he lets his elite friends know. and maybe perhaps one or two of them are on this list? don't have to be that way though. might be stupid actually. anyway we could create a secanrio that jews control the govt completely, which isn't too far off. then we could also create the scenario that our elite spy infiltraited into the job position to find out why these intelligent people were winding up missing. near the beggining the evil jew company could be this entity that our elite friends (AND SOCIETY!!) suspect is up to no good, so our elite friends hatch a plan to infiltrait this major yid organization/company. one guy goes to work for them, meanwhile he reports back to the club(their usual hangout) and to the our elite charactors, to discuss what he's found. keep in mind that our intelligent charactors don't have to be the one's that the govt wants to off but it could be the case that maybe at least one of them is on the list. of course, just for finding these secret files our inflitraiter guy is wanted and so will his friends be wanted. ok see the story coming together now?? remember the meeting of belinda and alex obviously would be better set if it was before our elite guy get's the job at the yid company. although another idea is that the elite guy could be alex? nah because alex may be better suited as this bad ass, a little rougher around the edges but also highly intellectual. i think the guy we were using as a photographer would be good in the role of finding out what this jew company is doing. wow this is really taking off now. another alternate scenario: when the elite govt. infiltraior guy gets news of this plot to wipe out intelligent white people(that the jews had secretly on file) it turns out that one of them happens to be his friend from the club! anyway this govt spy guy gets this picture or evidence of this jew plot to kill these elite white people(including his friends!) and our elite govt spy goes into hiding because those secret plot files are missing and the jews suspect OUR guy! so the jews immidiatly try to seek out our guy and they trail him to the club, but he ditches them and they can't find the club. although they eventually do find it. go inside looking for this guy and see him with his friends, the friends and our elite guy run out from the club but leave the files hidden in the club. meanwhile the club owner dosen't take any shit from anyone and the security begins to beat these govt officials up and they eventually leave.(although it dosen't have to happen like that) ok now insert where the jew govt guys sneak in and look for the files at the club, late at night. and i'm also thinking that between our elite guys losing the jews when they flee to the club and beteween the jews eventually finding the club, some other things should should be going on. what those things are, i don't know. probably won't need to be much. heck we've got most of the movie right here. NOW, the journal stuff and alex meeting balinda should happen before any of this other stuff happens though. more so at the beggining or quarter/mid part of the movie. see i want the club meetings, partying and socializing stuff to be going on before the really heavey shit starts to happen. >Secratary/ Mackenzie,Thora,Madeline, mackenzie is good but i'll get back to you. i don't like madeline because their was a crazy woman named madeline in "the fall of the house oof usher". and thora reminds me of thora birch. not that that's bad though. >Phot guy/Nick, Chris, Derek, William?? too bland, nick is good but it could be from the saint nick. i.e. jewdaido christian religion. i'll get back to you on the names. please please please, WRITE DOWN or copy and paste what we have so far. thanks! cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 358 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 09:19 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kay, I copied everything:) Hope you have some good names tomorrow. I think your ideas are pretty good, but a little bit confusing. I am sure we can sharpen everything up though;) I dont think we need to explain how Alex and Wolfgang meet. In fact, they could have been in the elite govnt. group until it was canned, and then Wolfgang bought the club, and maybe Alex is just the silent partner because he not a business man. Now when Belinda shows up at the club, she is just there to party, but Wolfgang and Alex are already being followed by the Jews( lets just say that the little Jew is into ripping people off at casinos or something, like money laundering?? and the big political Jew knows it, his uncle) so he shows up at the club with some back up to fuck them, Belinda and Alex have just met,but he sees the Jews and they relalize they arn't prepared for a fight so they all run out the back into the alley where Alex and Wolfgang kick a couple of the Jews asses, and then they escape? Kind of brings the girl into the danger and bonds her to Alex without all the lovey dovey:) Soon she realizes what happened(they can tell her in the car on the way to their pad) and Wolfgang gets on the phone and calls his girlfriend, and tells her to get the combination to the safe with all the governt. files and hide it immediatly and then meet them at the house. Once thye get their, Belinda meets the other girl, and Alex and Wolfgang get suited up with weapons and flashlights and the combination and head back to the club (it is about closing time, 2:00am?) Everyone is almost gone, and the bouncers are escorting the last customers out. Wolfgang signals one of the guys, and they lock the doors, turn off the lights and then wolf and Alex sneak down the stairs slowly where they can hear a faint rustling. They suddenly turn the flashlights on and scare the Jews(who are trying to find the files.) and then procede to kick some Jew butt. They take all the unconcious Jews wallets and then leave them in the alley. They grab the files out of the vault. When they get back to the house, The secratary is talking to Belinda about what they are doing, and Belinda says she wants to help. They go through the wallets, and then que some killer music as it show a montage of different activites. From spying out the Jews, to getting wire taps, and getting tons of dirt. Also making an airtight connection to the political Jews. (just ideas) Anyways, I am tired, night -Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 10, 2003 01:42 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hey, pretty tired. gonna hit the sack. girls: anna, michele, ashly, etc. i'll give more tommorow and reply to your post. . dead tired now. cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. _______________________________________________________________________________________ just wanted to add another possible direction. maybe the guy photographs her and she wants him to put her in his cool 'the latest thing' type mag? just an idea. not even sure if i like it. cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 09:48 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hehe, can we please not, I am starting to get really sick of the magazine thing;) -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 11:08 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- okay but i think the main girl charactor will need to be sexy and have some hot clothes on. are you ok with that? scratch the mag idea. for instance at the club this girl will be a good dancer. i have some vids i'll send you for that. old "lords of acid" music vids so you or whoever plays the girls part can see how they dance. -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 11:24 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hehe, Roman, I can dance very well. I took ballet for years, which makes me graceful when I get wild:) -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 11:37 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- excellent. this is going to be a mindfuck of a movie! ;] -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 12:02 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Have you heard this band called Evanescence? Wow, the chick singer is fantastic, its the only mainstream music I have lisitened to in years. Go out and buy the cd if you haven't:) Music is so important, and it is cool if you do it all yourself:) -------------------- ________________________________________________________________________________ iantha, how are ya? doing good i hope. haven't seen you around in awhile. hope everythings great! i'm a little pissed about chris letting that guy "mac" stay on the board. he constantly flames me when ever he can. lol but other than that everythings alright on my end. ;] talk later cheers! -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 03, 2003 12:54 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Roman, Glad to hear from you:) I have just been busy, I got a job and am going to college in the fall:) I am supposed to do the cover for Res. but I have been so busy, I havent even had time for that! Anywyas, good to hear your doing good:) -Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 03, 2003 01:05 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- that's great you're going to school, ;] be aware of the sneaky yids and minorties, a few wind up in colleges these days so be careful. make sure you carry some pepper spray too in case anyone tries to get obnoxious. ;0 what are you going to study? lemme know when you have time. glad to hear about your job also. good stuff. everythings fine out here. nice weather n such. take care! see ya r.c. -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 03, 2003 05:26 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Going to school for dental hygiene. The only jobs I've had for the last 3 years have been in the dental field(surgical and assisting)and I want to get paid the big bucks:) THe weather here sucks, but it did get pretty stormy and windy and definately dark and cold the other day, that was pretty cool. Talk to you later;) -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 04, 2003 03:44 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hey! that's great you're at heigensit school! good for you. hope everything works out. i like dark wheather too. we're finnaly getting some as of a few hours ago so i'm pretty happy about that. ;] cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 04, 2003 10:40 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey ROman, how can you check and see who has voted for you? I am kind of curious to see:) Anyways, Whoop the it is. lol -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 04, 2003 01:46 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- >Hey ROman, how can you check and see who has voted for you? I am kind of curious to see:) fuck i have no idea actually. don't think you can unless you're a mod. i gave you a 5 and so did my girlfriend though. =) >Anyways, Whoop the it is. lol argh.. ebonics. ;-/ no espeaka de negro ebonics. hahaha cya ;] -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 04, 2003 02:12 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah, I even misspelled the ebonics. Go figure, I think all the rap stars already made that popular years ago;) I just wrote this long response to she wolf(she thought I did not understand her typical post) But then I thought it would go over too many peoples heads, and then what is the point, right? So I never posted it:( I have been thinking about it alot though. Let me talk off your computer, and then you tell me if you get it. Everyone seems to think that Jews are on top right now. But not me. They put out bad movies, pay for loyalty with stolen money and teach their kids to lie. That is not how I want my race to act, and think it confuses our own issues when people use the Jew as examples of a worthy opponant we should study. It is easy to see what the Jew is doing. Why waste anymore time worring about them? So they have some money? White america has plenty of money. White people are successful. It is the Racialist America that is not doing its job. We need to step up and recruit rich dumb people. We need to look competant and talk nice and be proffessional(no college degree needed) and just be White. She wolf said we should unite more like the Jews do. The Jews have been persecuted for thousands of years. They are like a group of survivors who will not trust anyone but themselves. We can't even concieve of that feeling, and it is a feeling for losers, so who cares? We are good at being honest and successful and dangerously violent to anyone who tries to stop us from doing the right thing. So what do we do? We think we are going to win by lying and being sneaky and trying to cheat our way into millions of dollars to buy back into a corrupt and decaying government. Haha. Ok, do you see why no one would get what I am saying. But it makes perfect sense to me. Stop thinking about the Jew and look into your own racial soul, the answers are all there, and no Jew can ever come close to our reality. OK, gotta go, hope you dont think I've lost it;) -IR -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 04, 2003 06:51 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i saw that post and was going to say something but i figured she was just saving face against your argument. i wouldn't worry about it and i know you're not. this is the way i look at it. we need to promote as much as possible and get the truth out to the people who are willing to look for it. that is something that needs to continue always. meanwhile we need to be political and active in our local area. if we are to be successful. tv or satalite is the next step. we MUST get some type of news station or major network out there where people can see it. an all news internet site would be excellent but i don't know if this is being planned or not. a movie premiere/entertainment site would be nice as well. where we premiere our movies/music/interviews/etc. via the internet. underground movies are huge and can bring a great cult following. imagine one that is actually made by us. it could be huge, in an underground sense. this is an area that is not being taped! it needs to, because if we could pull off a controversial pro white clockwork orange style film where yids and negroids are portayed in a realistic light then there could be even greater exposure. a story needs to be written and white actors(people who can handle it) need to be sought out. you'd be great in it. it needs to be pushed around a music vibe as well. a soundtrack if you will. i feel this needs to be electronic music with a little guitar band aspect on the side. promotion is a must. i went completely off subject but that's what i think needs to be done in the short/long term. sorry i'm very tired. gotta crash. things that are not being done, should be. -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 04, 2003 10:38 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah, I think a movie would be good exposure. An underground movie made with some good direction and style (and music, it always makes a movie)would be great!!! I have always wanted to do that. What do you say RC, are you up to making something. Erich Gliebe is my best friend, I can talk him into anything. You seem technical enough, do you know how to make a story board? Do you know how to write a script? Well I am a great writer, but I am kinda looking for someone else with some big ideas to help me figure out what to do. Anyways, sounds a little crazy, but I like how enthusiastic you sound and am willing to try somethin new before I die of old age. (I will be 22 in June;) W/B if this sounds like something you would want to try. IR -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 05, 2003 05:30 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- let's try to do it. it may have to be risque though. i don't mean nudity but EDGY and a little sexy, stylish, elite, etc. what i picture is sort of snobby, elite and intelligent girls with their boyfriends meeting for secret underground events. sort of like early secret raves but much more intense than that. don't let the raves thing fool you though. this could be a club or warehouse, in an elite setting. etc. wouldn't be like fight club where they protray the guys as wackos. nothing like that. i sort of think of "blade" at the beggining warehouse scene, but of course without the muds, vampires, etc. very intense but with a deep storyline. i won't be able to write all of it but i'd like to try. then i picture situations where these girls and guys go throughout the movie confronting authority figures that are ramming their views down everyone's throats but in each situation WE WIN. i.e. a nig confronts a girl down the alley and the girl kicks his ass or the guys show up to beat him down. ;] think clockwork orange here but in a more positive light, where WE ARE the good guys throughout and where we fight the evil jewish powers that be and we win. sounds like a dream, dosen't it? imagine what an influence this would be on underground movie fans! american history x(which was a shitty inacurate movie imo) brought a lot of people, but think of what a movie where in we dominate would be like. a more realistic movie i might add. for the story i'm also thiking computer hackers and people who can f with the system here. of course i don't want it to be some cheesey hackers movie. just as a side thing to f the sytem a bit. let me work on it. i think "rude" edits film so maybe someone can ask him. i'll ask him as well. cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 06, 2003 05:33 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am a really good writer Roman, can I help you? I can send you a smaple of my writing if you want, I am pretty damn creative. I agree with your ideas too, I think we should adopt a very moderdern type story, but with the age old rules of being the most dominant species:) Write back soon! And I also know somw people that do indie films. They are hobbyists in my eyes, but they have lots of money and connections, non jew:) Talk to you soon -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 06, 2003 01:29 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- the important thing isn't whether i do the film or not etc. what's important is that my idea or your idea gets out there. i'd love to work with you. ;] send me some ideas on names for the charactors and what they would being doing in their daily lives. i'm thinking that their jobs could be like infiltaiting type jobs. i.e. one charactor works at the post office. one is a physicist. one a ups guy(or mail deliverer0 one works in retail. etc etc. but we have to tie a modern, cool, non cheesey, advanced storyline to it. i don't want it to be a really boring storyline so it may be tough for ME to do it. i have the ideas but not the storyline. throw some ideas at me, i am more than willing to hear them but of course i may not like them all but lets work at this. worst case scenario, we can make it into a book and then let someone else actually make it. i know some indy fims guys that go to canne but i don't know if i could spring this type of thing on them. might hurt my situation right now. get back to me. cya -------------------- Rome Wasn't Built in a Day. New Electronic cd coming soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 355 | Registered: Apr 2003 IanthaRose Member Member # 2239 posted May 07, 2003 10:08 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Roman, after reading catalysts post, I think we can really do this!!!! My husband knows everything about digital, illsustrator and workshop and all that he has, he even has a digital capable of movies, but I would want to buy one that is more like an actual camcorder, and that will cost a couple thous, but I can get it:) Anyways, can you handle all this, I am really serious about making a movie, and once I get started on something I get very involved. I also think your killer soundtrack idea is perfect. Good music makes the movie. I would really love to include some extraordinary classical. I listened to Claire de lune last night, and it would be perfect for a scene where we are preparing to do something really crazy! Ok,w/b:) Iantha -------------------- Take care Jon F. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Posts: 179 | Registered: Sep 2002 RomanCenturion Moderator Member # 4072 posted May 07, 2003 11:14 AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- as long as you can put up with me i think it's a great idea. all i ask for is the soundtrack and writing credit. we probably won't be able to use any known music as we could get sued by the company. you have to have clearance from the artist or lable to do that. that's why i wana do the music. no lawsuit then. i don't even need to be there to do this really. i can do this all online and send the music files. etc. we will need an occasional music scene with an artist or dj though if at all possible. every emphasis of the movie is advancement. if possible. for instance the artists in the music scene will be detailed as well as the dj. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
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