Author’s Note: This story will follow the plot
of the books very closely. If you do not wish to have some idea of how
things will happen, do not continue! I will be adding an original character
(I have heard that she is not a Mary-Sue!) and will be exploring how her
presence effects the way things happen in the story. This will be a romance.
Many scenes that you are familiar with will be in here, but seen from the
perspective of different characters. I hope that you will find it an interesting
read. I certainly have enjoyed writing it, and have found that I actually
have a better appreciation for the original, since I have had to analyze
it so closely. All reviews are welcomed and encouraged. Thanks for taking
the time to read my work!
"Elfsong"
by Lynliss
Chapter One: The Shadow Rises
Moonlight
bathed the glade where stood the Mirror of Galadriel. The clear splash
of water on stone and the soft whisper of the breeze wafted up from below,
reaching the ears of Nimoë, who stood nigh unto an ancient oak, guarding
the path to the glade. The Lady Galadriel had summoned her from her sleep
to accompany her to the mirror, and she obeyed without question. Yet, as
always, Nimoë was to remain alone, awaiting her return, while the
queen consulted the Mirror.
Lady
Galadriel’s sonorous voice began to intone words of wisdom, from deep in
the Elven lore, so old that Nimoë could not follow what was spoken.
A chill began to form in the air, slowly and with a feeling of menace.
Nimoë wrapped her arms around herself, shivering in the unnaturally
frigid air. Her breath came in foggy puffs. A great dread came upon her
heart and she retreated without volition, stopping only when her back came
against the oak tree, which stood sentinel above the glade.
Dark
shadows separated themselves from the gentle, natural shade of the moon-bathed
trees, and they advanced upon the Elf maiden, daring her to release her
grip upon her soul. Feeling as if the chillness would steal her being away
if she released her grasp, Nimoë fought the urge to flee. Her mistress
and queen was below, and she could not leave her to face the terror alone.
Finally,
when Nimoë felt she could bear the cold and fear no longer, and the
unnatural shadows had come within a handsbreadth of her body, the voice
of Galadriel spoke one final word. This word was known to Nimoë, for
it was the word used to command an ending.
Although
the word had been pronounced boldly, there was a hesitation before the
wind swirled away, bearing the unnatural cold with it. The shadows were
ripped away, although tendrils reached back as if to grasp the Elf maid.
An inhuman cry of thwarted rage rang through the glade with their passing.
Peace
once again held sway in the woods of Lothlorien, and Nimoë stood away
from the oak, her heart racing, and turned with trepidation to watch the
Lady of the Wood mount the stone steps from the glade. It was with heavy
tread, so rarely seen among elves, that Galadriel finally appeared. Her
shoulders drooped and her eyes were filled with unshed tears. Without speaking,
she motioned Nimoë to follow her, and was mutely obeyed.
When
the two Elven women had walked some distance from the glade of the Mirror,
Galadriel turned to face her pupil. “Nimoë, long years have you spent
here with me. I have given you training beyond that of ordinary elves.
Yet still there is much for you to learn. Since you were sent to me from
Mirkwood, I have fed the spark that I see burning within you. Your powers
are great, but I fear that you have not the training to accomplish what
must be done.”
Nimoë
gazed upon the radiant queen in wonder, not comprehending what Galadriel
spoke of, and still shaken by the strange evil which had so recently come
upon them. “Of what speakst thou, my queen? All that you have taught me
I have striven to accomplish. The forest speaks to me. The stars show me
things that are not seen by others. And still I am but a novice, a learner
at your feet. You stand so far above me that I feel as if I am reaching
for a star, even to be in your presence. I do not understand what must
be done. Indeed, I do not understand what menaces us. I felt a great evil
upon us at the Mirror, but surely I am not the one to face it. My queen,
it must be you who can defend us against this evil.”
With
deep pain etched across her perfect features, Galadriel turned away. “Alas,
my time has passed. I will soon pass into the West, and leave this world.
The elves are fading, Nimoë. You know this. Yet there is something
within you, something that clings to this land like a deep- rooted vine.
Your time has not yet come. And so it must be you.” She turned again to
lock her ice blue gaze with Nimoë’s clear grey. “I must tell you of
things, of a time long past, which rises again in this present. Sauron
is rising in Mordor. The one ring is moving. It will come to us, and we
must give all aid to those who guard it. Only when the ring of power is
destroyed will Middle Earth be free from the clutches of the Dark Lord.”
“The
Dark Lord rises?” Nimoë’s voice trembled as she spoke. “My queen,
how can we stand against his power? When last he came into this world,
the elves were at their strongest, and even with their vast army, and that
of the kingdoms of men, scarce were they able to defeat him. How now, when
we are truly fading, can we hope to bring him low?”
Galadriel’s
smile was slight, almost cynical. “Sauron understands many things: power,
greed, hunger, death. These things he can control. What he does not understand
is love. Through the power of love, it may be possible that the weak will
be strong enough to stand against him, for love is the mortar of all beings
of pure heart. Nine will set forth from Rivendell. The bonds of their fellowship
may be forged strong enough to accomplish their task. Or they may break
when pressure is applied to the weak points. Nimoë, when they pass
through Lorien, you will accompany them. I have taught you many things.
One thing I have not yet taught you is a means of strengthening the ties
of love and friendship, which will grow of their own accord. I will teach
you this craft, so that you may help to keep the company true. Only if
they remain pure of purpose will the fellowship succeed.”
Nimoë
bowed her head in acknowledgement, the motion sending her fair hair falling
around her, glowing in the moonlight like a nimbus of sparkling fireflies.
“So be it with me as you have decreed, my queen.”
Then,
in silence, the two elves walked back towards their home among the trees.
Both tall and radiant, they were a wonder to behold. The one both beautiful
and terrible in her power, the other fair, with the innocence of youth
still upon her. Both were caught up in their memories of the dread presence
at the Mirror. Both looked towards the future, and how they might play
a part. And both were afraid.