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29 a) When parentheses are inside a sentence, end with a period. 

 

This sentence has parentheses in it, so it will end with a period (or other end-punctuation). 

29 b) When sentences are inside parentheses, end with parenthesis. 

 

(However, there can be one or more whole sentences inside parentheses.  In these cases, they end with a parenthesis.)

 

30 When describing a wish or an imaginary situation, use “were” instead of  “was”. 

(This is called the subjunctive mood of a verb.)

If I was there, I would hide. 

I wish I was as tall as he is. 

If I were there, I would hide. 

I wish I were as tall as he is. 

 

31 A pronoun before an ING verb should be possessive. 

(The ING verb is called a gerund.)

She dislikes me driving. 

She dislikes my driving. 

 

32 When a verb comes after the word “to”, avoid placing words between them. 

(This is called a split Infinitive.)

He tried to especially impress new girls. 

He especially tried to impress new girls. 

 

33 If a sentence introduces a list, use a colon. 

The artist will need the following items, a pen, an inkwell, and paper.

The artist will need the following items: a pen, an inkwell, and paper. 

 

34 Use semicolons when a list contains lists.

 

For breakfast, he could choose ham, toast, and eggs; or French toast, syrup, and fruit; or pancakes, syrup, and bacon. 

35 Leave out the conjunction when linking a compound sentence with semicolon.

He loved the little dog; and she loathed the wretched thing. 

He loved the little dog; she loathed the wretched thing. 

 

36 A writer may need to use a long dash to join a long appositive to the end of a sentence. 

She had had a narrow escape, an experience she would never forget. 

He stepped back and observed the result, a thing of beauty. 

She had had a narrow escape – an experience she would never forget. 

He stepped back and observed the result – a thing of beauty.