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Braving the Storm

By Chrissy M. Dennis

Status: Finished! Currently awaiting publication

The Characters

Tara Pickett

Tara Elizabeth Pickett is 14 years old and has brown hair and brown eyes. She's 5'3", small, average build. She's friendly and loves school, having an IQ of 163. She's very quiet and upset about the death of her biological parents, Ryan and Rebecca Pickett. But she lives with her foster mother Sarah, foster father Jeff and foster sister, Hannah, who is 7. She is currently enrolled at a private high school, learning at an 10th grade level.

Sarah Prudent (Tara's foster mom.)

Jeff Prudent (Tara's foster dad.)

Hannah Prudent (Tara's foster sister.)

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Madison Seely

Madison Emma Seely is 16 years old and has dirty blonde hair and gray eyes. She's 5'9", average build. She's assertive, friendly, but also easily freaked out. She is in the gifted program at her public high school learning at the 12th grade level, with an IQ of 177. She has a mother named Alissa and a 12-year-old brother named Grant. She has never met her father. Madison is terrified of needles.

Alissa Seely (Madison's mother.)

Grant Seely (Madison's brother.)

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Candice Driver

Candice Janine Driver is 15 years old and has brown hair and brown eyes. She is 5'6". She is a quiet girl and likes to have fun. She has an IQ of 158, but is tutored at home by a professional at the 11th grade level. Her mother, Celine passed away when Candice was 13 years old. Her father, Brett is raising Candice, along with her twin sisters, Ryley and Rorey, who are three years old. Candice is excellent at math.

Brett Driver (Candice's father.)

Ryley and Rorey Driver (Candice's twin sisters.)

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Melissa Sevella

Melissa Tanya Sevilla is 16 years old and has long brown hair and blue eyes. She is 5'9". She is quiet and calm, as well as a comforting friend. She goes to a private school, with an IQ of 175, learning at a 12th grade level. Her parents, Larry and Tanya Sevilla passed away when Melissa was 10 years old. She now lives with her foster mother, Julie and her foster sister, Tracy, who is 13 years old. Melissa has a lovely singing voice.

Julie Stratford (Melissa's foster mom.)

Tracy Stratford (Melissa's foster sister.)

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Natasha Frias

Natasha Lynn Frias is 14 years and has brown hair and brown eyes. She is 5'7". She's a happy teenager, and still has a fun time despite the fact that she's a genius, with an IQ of 156. She has a mother named Jessica and a father named Bob. She also has a 19-year-old sister named Leona. She is especially smart when it comes to computers. She goes to a private school learning at the 11th grade level.

Bob Frias (Natasha's father.)

Jessica Frias (Natasha's mother.)

Leona Frias (Natasha's sister.)

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Annie Nix

Annie Jane Nix is 15 years old and has brown eyes and brown, braided hair. She is 5'4". She is also friendly and very quiet. She has an IQ of 164 and attends a private high school in the 11th grade. She has a father named Aaron. A stepmother named Miranda. A big sister named Janet, who is 17 years old. And a little half-brother named Shawn, who is 8 years old. Aaron remarried 4 years after Annie's and Janet's mother left them when Annie was only two years old. Then Aaron and Miranda had Shawn. Annie is asthmatic as well.

Aaron Nix (Annie's father.)

Miranda Nix (Annie's stepmother.)

Janet Nix (Annie's sister.)

Shawn Nix (Annie's half brother.)

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Cindy Melvin

Cindy Grace Melvin is 15 years old and has brown eyes and dyed purple hair. She is 5'4". She is fun and a hyper girl. She goes to a public school, at the top of her twelfth grade class, taking extra gifted classes with an IQ of 155. Her mother, Ruth passed away when Cindy was 14 years old, and Cindy never met her father. She was adopted by Chris and Lydia Perfuiz and she has an adopted brother, Zack, who is a year old. Cindy rebels a lot, but is a fun kid who likes to have fun.

Chris Perfuiz (Cindy's adopted father.)

Lydia Perfuiz (Cindy's adopted mother.)

Zack Perfuiz (Cindy's adopted brother.)

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Jane Tam

Jane Felicia Tam is 16 years old and has blonde hair and blue eyes. She is 5'6". She has a great sense of humour and she loves school. She goes to a private school and is in the twelfth grade. She has an IQ of 171. She is an only child and has a father named John and a mother named Lisa. Jane is extremely clever with logic and science.

Lisa Tam (Jane's mother.)

John Tam (Jane's father.)

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The bad guys

Shelley Halvorson. (Head of laboratory.)

Amanda Anderton (Computer technologist/data.)

Jessica Pulver (Camera operator/guard.)

Rose Tindall (Tester/Experiementer.)

Claudia Hanlon (Tester/Experimenter.)

Stephanie Collazo (Nurse.)

Robert Shipp (Computer technologist.)

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Synopsis

An unknown mysterious man named "Panther" has hired all the best scientists, computer technologists and nurses to help him run a secret and illegal operation underground. "Panther" wants to breed 8 young girls into achieving an impossible IQ of 200 points by the time the girls reach the age of 20. So he locks up eight young, and scared teenagers and forces them to learn and enhance their IQ. Tara Pickett is the labs latest addition, and what she finds is 7 other girls who have adjusted to their new life in the lab, but Tara refuses. She wants to go home. She refuses to spend the rest of her life as a guinea pig. Will she escape? Will she be reunited with her family? Will she expose the truth? Read Trapped Minds to find out.

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Excerpt

Meanwhile, Rose was waiting by the van behind the school, ready to open the doors, and throw Tara in the back. She held the chloroform soaked cloth in her left hand. Once Claudia brought Tara out to the van, Rose knew that Tara would try to run. That’s why she stood where she was standing. It was easier to grab Tara from that angle and force her into a sleeping state with the chloroform.

She was watching carefully from the back of the school. They hid the van well, so that nobody would see anything. They had to be careful. One witness could blow the whole plan.

“I’m sure you’ll love the stuff we have for you, Tara.” Claudia was saying, as she and Tara were walking toward the van. Tara didn’t reply, she only smiled and followed Claudia, with no idea where she was going, or who she was with.

Soon, they were close to the van. Rose could see them coming, and so she got ready. She opened the back door and hid behind it, as Claudia brought Tara right up to the van. Tara wondered why they had stopped. She looked at the van, and then back at Claudia.

“I thought you said you had a car.” She said, starting to feel her heart race faster. She suddenly had a very bad feeling about all of this. Claudia only shrugged, as Rose emerged from behind the van door. Tara jumped.

“Who is that?” She asked anxiously, as she started to back up. Claudia and Rose came closer to Tara.

“Now, now. Don’t put up a fight, and we won’t hurt you. Just come quietly.” Rose said in a calm voice. Tara turned and started to run, but Rose grabbed her arm and spun her around into her grasp. Tara started to scream, but Rose covered her nose and mouth with the soaked cloth. Tara struggled, trying hard not to breath in the strong fumes, but Rose overpowered her.

“Tara Pickett. Do you have any idea just how smart you really are? You’ve been chosen especially because of that. You should be happy.” Rose said with a smile. Tara suddenly felt very drowsy, and she could feel herself falling out of consciousness. She tried to fight it, but she couldn’t. She fell victim to the chloroform within seconds, and she fell limp in Rose’s arms.

“Mission accomplished.” Claudia smiled. Rose nodded, and they gently placed Tara in the back of the van. They laid her down on the pile of blankets that covered the inside of the van. Claudia and Rose slammed the doors behind her and smiled at each other.

“The worst is over.” Rose said, and they both ran to the front of the van.

Trapped Minds will be completed in full by April 2006.

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