Hi Heather!

Well I've just read your new story Hush and I thought it was great...brilliant in fact. I wish I could write the way you do! :) Great story, keep writing!

CJ

Heather,

I loved your story Hush. I think that you should write a sequel.

Jennifer

Dear Heather,

Just mailing to say how much I have enjoyed reading your stories; I have read five of them so far. I think my favourite so far is Hush, although I did very much enjoy reading Gallery of Souls, I am just about to read Holding the Line Against the Night, (yes please write a sequel to this). I like the way in Hush that with the alternative Janeway that Chakotay is the stronger character of the pair but it has a happy ending for Both Janeways's (hopefully). Please keep writing as your stories are so good. YOU should be writing for Paramount.

With Best Wishes,

Bridget Lofts,Cambridge,United Kingdom

My opinions are probably not that great (tried writing fanfic... not to pretty) but here is my $1.25 anyways. I would like to see Captain Hunter in a romantic relationship, she is obviously a lot like janeway (strong, independent but cares about her crew) so would want to see her end up with someone who is equal (like chak is with kj) alien or crewman.. since we dont know the crew that well yet.. really cant give an opinion on who.. ... I like janeway with chakotay... but sometimes people write him to be a whiny, moody pushover.. i do not like those stories because this is supposed to be a guy that killed so many people for his cause and was a great threat to the cardassians/federation, then you read these stories and he sounds like he is about to commit suicide if janeway doesnt give him the time of day. I liked the a/u Chakotay in "Hush"... he was tough yet still able to help janeway come out of her shell. I also enjoyed the a/u Naomi.. nice to see the other side.. what a brat! loved "Hush" ...its been awhile since I read "Gallery of Souls" checked it out the other night.. still my favorite.. liked the j/p in that.. i like friendship stories with janeway and crew..paris, torres, tuvok etc.. seven years and still not social with crew.. dont think so.. I am going to try and re-read "Long night of KJ" havent read it in awhile...depressing but realistic..going to try tonight.. also .. going to try to re-read the one where they erase her memory.. cant remember the name.. liked that one..almost became my fav.. but Gallery is still the best.

karen

Hi Heather -

I just finished your story and I've found it a great improvement since the last one you posted on the J/C site. The alternate reality idea was good, but I think you needed to elaborate more the alternate J/C thing when her baby was born, that sort of stuff. And I was kinda confused with the end? Where does J/C fit into this? I haven't read the sequal yet, perhaps the answer's in there. But all in all, aside from a couple of typos it was good.

Judy

Long, but good! Very good!

mjforest

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