HERE'S A POEM I WROTE IN MY ENGLISH CLASS-- BUT HERE IS MY FINEST PIECE OF ART....PLEASE COMMENT ME ON THE BOTTOM!! THANX G

TERROR RAVISHES THE PEOPLE OF A SMALL TOWN,
BUT YET A CERTAIN MYSTIQUE,
FORCES HARDSHIP TO BE ALL BUT COMPLETE.
SUFFERING HAS NOW SPREAD,
GIVING THE INDICATION THAT SADNESS HAS LED.
THESE PEOPLE ARE WEAK, NOT POWERFUL IN ANY WAY,
TO INDICATE NO AWAKENING UNTIL ONE DAY.
BUT YETTHERE'S STILL A SEEMING,
OF COURAGE AND HONOR TO BE GLEAMING.
BUT YET DYING SEEMS THE ONLY WAY,
TO ACTUALLY GAIN STRENGTH ANY DAY.
-DEREK