To Hell And Back
An original screenplay by Lee A. Chrimes
First Draft 20/6/01
OPENING SEQUENCE
Black screen, credits on white.
MUSIC: "New Born" by Muse. Plays throughout titles, with title "To Hell And Back" fading up as heavy bass line kicks in. As drum beat starts:
CUT TO:
INT. OFFICE PARTY. NIGHT.
A busy office party in full swing. The setting is a large, well-furnished office, and the camera finds itself suddenly placed in the middle of a heaving mass of dancing bodies, some drinking, some smoking, some laughing, some kissing, but the noise of everyone talking is deafening. The camera pushes through all these people as though it were a fellow partygoer making his way somewhere. Then, a hand holding precariously onto two glasses of beer appears below the camera, held by whoever's eyes we are looking through. People make eye contact with the camera and greet it as it walks past. We approach a cluster of people sat down by a large set of windows in one slightly quieter corner of the office.
ANGLE ON:
CHRIS
Early twenties, dressed in a hybrid of neo-goth and skater rock clothes, looking nervous in this party situation full of trendy people. Average height and build, Chris has jet-black hair with a slight blue tint to it, and is carefully weaving through the crowds over to:
ANGLE ON:
RACHEL
Also early twenties, long, black hair, dressed more obviously goth than Chris. Chatting and laughing with other office girls, waiting for Chris to arrive with the drinks. LUCAS is also part of the group, fashionably dressed, slick hair, immaculately shaved - the consummate image of corporate-sponsored beauty. He is a little too close to Rachel for Chris's liking, and as he arrives he throws a protective arm around her - my property.
RACHEL
(taking her drink from Chris)
Thank you, my dear.
CHRIS
Not at all, mon cheri. Non
alcoholic for me, designated driver.
LUCAS
Rachel here was just telling us
all about your latest project,
Chris.
RACHEL
Yeah, you know, the idea you
had about that new style of
guitar.
Chris smiles amiably at the waiting crowd of faces, throwing as many looking daggers as he can at Lucas: this project was all his idea, and Lucas has a good background of stealing other people's ideas. He really didn't want him to find out about this. He takes a sip from his beer, puts in on a nearby table and continues.
CHRIS
(with many exaggerated hand gestures)
Well, we get new, young musicians
coming in here all the time, always
complaining about not being able
to get the sound they want while
they record their demos. Well, what
I thought was..
The camera pulls back from this group as Chris talks and sweeps through the crowd again to stop on two MEN stood in the corner. Dressed smartly, as though they were executives of this company. People move near them, dancing or getting drinks, but no-one seems to actually come too close to them, as though some kind of invisible shield is turning people away at the last moment. They are watching Lucas in action over by Chris.
FIRST MAN
How is he doing now?
SECOND MAN
The other one has come back.
He will have to wait a while
longer.
FIRST MAN
Is his plan still the same.
SECOND MAN
As before. By the morning,
we shall have her.
FIRST MAN
Good.
The camera leaves them both again, swings near Chris, who is doing an enthusiastic air guitar impression as he describes his idea. Lucas is staring at Rachel, who keeps meeting his gaze but looking away. She likes Lucas, but is going out with Chris. The camera comes to rest against a window looking out over the inner city lights.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. OFFICE PARTY. NIGHT - LATER
A slower song is playing. Several couples are leaning against each other for support in the dancing area, the sort of slumped drunken slow dance that always pops up if parties go on late enough. The two Men in the corner have not moved, and we follow their gaze back round to Chris. He is sat by himself, making a list in a little pocket notebook. Lucas walks over. Chris glances up but doesn't acknowledge him.
LUCAS
Mind if I sit?
CHRIS
Go ahead, I don't own the
chairs here.
LUCAS
(takes a seat and lounges back)
Pretty good night.
CHRIS
(guarded)
So far.
LUCAS
Where's the little lady?
CHRIS
She went to the ladies
room. I took that as a hint
not to follow.
LUCAS
That was a good idea you
had about those guitars,
you know.
CHRIS
Yes, I spent a long time
working on it.
LUCAS
Thing is, I wonder why you
seemed reluctant to tell us?
CHRIS
It's not ready yet. There's
still a lot of work to be done.
LUCAS
Sure it isn't anything to
do with your planned
exit from this company?
Chris's head snaps up. How does Lucas know about that?
CHRIS
What do you mean?
LUCAS
Well, you know how you get
to hear things all the time, and
a little bird told me that you
were thinking about taking your
new idea to one of our main
competitors for a bigger cut.
CHRIS
And what "little bird" might
that be, then?
LUCAS
Why don't you ask her?
He gets up and walks away, as Rachel wanders back over to where Chris is sitting. She is clearly a little worse for the wear drunkenness-wise, and flops down by Chris with a daft alcohol-fuelled smile on her face.
RACHEL
Hello, baby. Miss me?
She gives him a sloppy kiss on one cheek and giggles. Chris's face is like stone.
CHRIS
Did you tell the Human Lizard
over there about our plan?
RACHEL
What plan?
CHRIS
The plan where we take my
idea to UMV and make a
packet, after using this company's
money to develop it.
RACHEL
(looks a little sheepish)
Ah, that plan. Well, I may have
told him a little bit more than I
meant to..
CHRIS
(sternly)
We need to talk.
He gets up, grabbing Rachel's hand and lifting her up too. They walk out the main party through a pair of swinging doors, past Lucas stood by the two Men. He smiles and waves at Rachel, who waves back as Chris leads her out the door.
STAY on Lucas and the Men.
FIRST MAN
Progress.
LUCAS
Tonight.
SECOND MAN
Good. Then go.
Lucas walks out to observe Chris and Rachel from a distance. As he walks off, we can see that neither of the Men are making a reflection in the windows behind them, nor are they casting any shadows.
INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE PARTY. NIGHT
Chris is rowing with an increasingly exasperated Rachel.
CHRIS
I can't believe you told
anyone! Especially not him!
RACHEL
So I mentioned it to a few
people! Big whoop!
CHRIS
Lucas has the boss's ear on
most things these days. How
do you think it's going to sound
if he lets them know I was
planning to cut and run once
my design is finished!
RACHEL
I don't know! We were both
leaving anyway, right?
CHRIS
And now he knows the idea too!
What's to stop him taking
charge of the project and taking
all the credit?
RACHEL
Will you calm down! There
must be something we can do.
CHRIS
(runs a hand through his hair)
Yeah, take early retirement.
RACHEL
I mean seriously! Can we go
now and finish the work later?
CHRIS
No, the deal is I move when
all the project is finished.
RACHEL
Well, what about..
She pauses, trying to think through the haze of the night's partying. At that moment, Lucas, who has been keeping an eye on them both throughout this heated exchange, pops his head round the door and calls to Rachel.
LUCAS
I just spoke to the boss,
guys. He says he'd like to
see what you've been up to
in the morning, okay? Oh,
and he says to thank you
for letting him know all about
it, Rachel.
Lucas leaves. His work here is done. Chris turns slowly to look at Rachel - it looks like she set him up. She is still looking at where Lucas appeared from in confusion - telling who about what? She hasn't done anything, but Chris doesn't look ready to listen.
CHRIS
I see.
RACHEL
Now wait just a minute, you're
not going to believe him over me,
are you?
CHRIS
It all makes sense now.
RACHEL
Chris, would you listen to yourself?
CHRIS
I have to go. I'll see you
later.
Fuming but trying not to show it, Chris walks down the corridor towards the exit. As soon as the doors close after him, who should pop out again but Lucas, pulling on his coat. He sees Rachel, who is standing a before, looking pretty pissed off, and walks over to her. She sees him coming and throws a mean look at him.
RACHEL
You! What do you think you're
playing at, saying that it was
all thanks to me! You're the one
who blabbed about it!
LUCAS
(as innocent as a saint)
What do you mean? I didn't
say anything - it was Mary.
We were stood right by her too,
don't forget! She's the worst
brown-noser in this place.
Rachel suddenly looks a little less certain. Mary was standing by them, that much is true. Can Lucas be trusted?
RACHEL
Actually, yes, she was..
LUCAS
Where's Chris?
RACHEL
Oh, him. He stormed off
thinking it was my fault
he may get busted for it
all.
LUCAS
And is it?
RACHEL
Of course not! The plan
was for us to go together!
LUCAS
My lips are sealed.
Lucas mimes zipping his lips closed. Rachel manages a half-hearted smile - of course she can trust him!
RACHEL
Okay, okay.
LUCAS
Need a lift back?
RACHEL
Not to my place, though.
LUCAS
Why not?
RACHEL
I'd rather keep away from Chris
for a bit. Mind if I crash at yours
for a few hours?
LUCAS
Be my guest.
The two leave together.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris is driving along, with "Damaged" by Fear Factory blasting out of the stereo - typical male anger-diffusion therapy. He plays steering wheel bongos furiously to the beat. After a few moments, he hangs his head and pulls the car over to a stop. Thinks for a moment. He was too harsh on her. He checks over his shoulder, then U-turns the car to head back the other way towards the party, turning the stereo down.
EXT. CITY STREET. NIGHT.
Chris's car drives back down the street, and takes a turn to the left. An instant later, Lucas's car comes out of the next street down and turns onto the main road, driving past where Chris just turned and missing him by about a second.
INT. LUCAS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Ever the smoothie, Lucas has some late-night jazz playing - mellow Jools Holland-esque stuff. Rachel is looking out the window, not really focusing on anything. Lucas looks over to her, then back with a smile. Easy money.
LUCAS
Sure you don't want to head
for your place?
RACHEL
Chris would flip if he saw you
dropping me off.
LUCAS
Yeah, we don't exactly get on.
RACHEL
Why is that? You two seemed to
have a history going back way
before I knew either of you.
LUCAS
He blames me for his dad.
RACHEL
(alarmed)
What?
LUCAS
You know how Chris's dad died?
RACHEL
Car accident ten years back.
LUCAS
My dad was driving. He lost
control and went off the road,
and while my dad was okay,
Chris's died.
Rachel looks shocked. That's not the version of events she was told.
RACHEL
Is that all?
LUCAS
Well, there have been other
little disagreements between
us over the years, but that's
the main one.
RACHEL
I had no idea..
LUCAS
So it's back to mine, then?
RACHEL
For now. I'll wait till he
calms down and head back
later. I'm sorry if I'm putting
you out or anything..
LUCAS
Not at all.
They drive on. Lucas allows himself a tiny smile, which vanishes before Rachel can see it.
EXT. OUTSIDE OFFICE. NIGHT.
Chris has arrived back at the office. From the windows a few floors up, we can see the lights of the party, which is winding down. A few people are moving in and out of the building as he heads back inside.
INT. OFFICE STAIRCASE. NIGHT.
Chris jogs up the steps, greeting people as he passes them. He pauses to ask two girls:
CHRIS
'Scuse me, have either of
you two seen Rachel?
They shake their heads and carry on downstairs. Chris gets to the floor with the party.
INT. OFFICE PARTY. NIGHT.
Chris walks in through the swing doors. There are only about five people left. The place looks like a bomb site - empty cups and glasses, party streamers hanging everywhere, but no Rachel. Chris looks round some more as the two Men, sat quietly in one corner enjoying a cigar, notice his entrance and stand up sharply.
SECOND MAN
The other one is here.
FIRST MAN
This may help us.
Moving unnoticed through the room as before, they sidle up to Chris, and the First Man takes his car keys as the Second tips over a rubbish bin in front of Chris. Chris walks straight into it and trips over. As he hits the deck, the two Men disappear back out through the doors.
EXT. OUTSIDE OFFICE. NIGHT.
The two Men are seen by Chris's car, the hood up, fiddling around with the engine. After a few moments, they close the lid, leave the keys in the gutter next to the car and walk O.S.
INT. OFFICE PARTY. NIGHT.
Chris rouses one of the slumbering girls from the group Rachel was with earlier. She blinks a few times until she realises who it is.
SALLY
Oh, hello, Chris.
CHRIS
Sal, where did Rachel go?
I can't find her anywhere.
SALLY
She left..
CHRIS
Left? Who with?
SALLY
Oh, you know, old
what’s-his-face..
CHRIS
Who?
SALLY
Lucas, that's it. After you
left without her. He was
probably taking her back to
your place, you know. He's
actually a very nice guy..
Chris lets her go and she slumps back down mid-sentence. A steely look in his eyes, he races back to his car.
EXT. LUCAS'S HOUSE. NIGHT.
Establish.
CU - WINE GLASS BEING FILLED.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
Lucas is filling a glass for Rachel with red wine. The lights are turned down a little, and some kind of bland easy listening tune drifts around in the b.g. Lucas puts the wine down and sits on a plush leather sofa as Rachel, seated in one of the other chairs, absently sips her wine. Lucas's house displays all the typical trappings of success - wide screen TV, expensive stereo, a few drooping plants - affluent bachelor pad. Lucas is eyeing Rachel up - he knows what he wants. She just wants somewhere to chill out while Chris is still stomping around.
RACHEL
(looking round)
This is an awfully nice place
you have here, Lucas. I take
it you live alone, though.
LUCAS
What makes you say that?
RACHEL
No evidence of a woman's
touch here. We can spot
these things, you know.
She takes another gulp of wine. Lucas sips his, still keeping his eyes locked on her. He knows something she doesn't about the wine.
EXT. STREET OUTSIDE OFFICE. NIGHT.
Chris is rooting round in the gutter underneath his car, looking for his keys, getting increasingly covered with the flotsam and jetsam of a typical weekend night - fast food cartons, beer cans, cigarette ends. He stands at last, the keys triumphantly wrapped round his finger. He pulls away a chunk of someone's abandoned kebab meal from them and gets into the car. A few turns of the ignition bring only stuttering noises from the car, however, and with a quick bang of frustration on the steering wheel he gets out again, walks to the hood and lifts it up to see what is wrong.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
As before, except Lucas and Rachel now share the same sofa. Her body language makes her look a bit more relaxed in his company. All thoughts of meeting up with Chris seem to be far from her mind as she and Lucas laugh and joke a little more. The camera dollys slowly across this scene without stopping, into the blackness of the wall on the side of the room.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. STREET OUTSIDE OFFICE. NIGHT.
The blackness from before becomes the black hood of Chris's car as we pull back from it. Chris is walking round back into the car, now covered with grease and oil as well as all the filth from the gutter. He slams the door and tries the engine again, which this time fires up. A relieved Chris finally gets on his way.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
We dolly across the scene as before, except now the room is empty. The music still plays in the b.g. but the empty wine glasses are left on the coffee table in front of the sofa. As we finish our move across the scene, the music comes to a stop.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Rachel is sat on Lucas's bed, visibly more giggly. Lucas is standing over by the window, looking out into the night sky as if searching for something. A TV set is on but neither are watching it. The room is furnished in the same kind of style as downstairs - subtle black and gold colours, dripping with all the touches a good salary can afford. Another bottle of wine lies open next to the bed, and Rachel holds a glass as she talks.
RACHEL
No, I guess I never did
know that. How long have
you two been at each other's
throats?
LUCAS
Since we were children. He
always wanted what I had,
and vice versa.
RACHEL
Even today?
LUCAS
(turns to her with a smile)
Even today.
Rachel grins, her eyes a little glazed by now. She leans back on the bed a little as Lucas walks over. He's got her right where he wants and he knows it. She, on the other hand, is enjoying the attention and is also feeling a lot more attracted to Lucas than Chris right now - the little something he added to her wine is helping as well. Lucas stalks over to her and sits by her on the bed. Still giggling occasionally, her smile doesn't fade as Lucas leans in for a kiss..
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris is blasting along to Lucas's house, not in the best of moods and not overjoyed at the prospect of his childhood enemy spending time alone with his girl. "(sic)" by Slipknot is roaring out of the speakers. Chris is psyching himself up for a confrontation.
EXT. STREET. NIGHT.
Chris's car blazes down the street, filled on each side with hordes of night clubbers, trendy people and revellers.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Lucas is now lying on top of Rachel, though both are still fully clothed, as their kissing gets more intense. She doesn't appear to be resisting at all. We pull back from them and focus on the wine glass next to the bed.
CU - WINE GLASS
It is drained, but gathering in the bottom of the glass we can see a small mound of powder of some sort. Looks like Lucas has been slipping something into Rachel's drinks.
EXT. OUTSIDE LUCAS'S HOUSE. NIGHT.
Chris pulls up outside Lucas's. He glances at the outside of the house. Lights are on upstairs but not downstairs - not a good sign. Gritting his teeth, he gets out of his car and heads for the door.
ANOTHER ANGLE as Chris gets to the door and knocks loudly a few times. No answer. He tries the door - it is open. With a suspicious look on his face he gently pushes the door wide and takes a few looks around inside the hallway. No sign of anyone again. He cautiously steps inside.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Chris looks around for any signs of activity. He hasn't spoken yet, keen to keep the element of surprise. He hears a noise from upstairs and his head snaps up to look at the top floor.
ANOTHER ANGLE on the top of the long, winding staircase that leads upstairs. The noises are heard again - it sounds like..
CHRIS
Rachel?
He bounds over to the stairs and hops up them two at a time.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - TOP FLOOR. NIGHT.
Chris gets to the top floor. The noises are coming from one of the three rooms on this floor, where the door is ajar. Chris paces over to it, afraid of what he may see. He gets to the door and gently pushes it open a little.
CHRIS'S P.O.V - Lucas and Rachel are in bed. Having sex. Noisy, sweaty, gut-wrenching sex.
CU - CHRIS'S FACE.
The shock doesn't immediately register, but after a few moments the colour drains from his face. We can almost see the moment his heart bursts. His head drops, and he silently walks away from the door.
CHRIS' S P.O.V. - The door closes on our view of Lucas and Rachel making the beast with two backs.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Chris gets to the door and walks out without looking back, slamming it behind him.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Rachel stops what she is doing and looks around, having heard the door slam. Lucas notices and stops too.
LUCAS
What's wrong?
RACHEL
I thought I heard the door..
LUCAS
Let me go check..
With a little difficulty they extract themselves from each other. Lucas pulls on a silk dressing gown and passes another to Rachel. Lucas leaves the room. Rachel sits up in the bed for a moment, her head still reeling. She puts her hand to her forehead for a moment, then her head suddenly snaps up.
RACHEL
Chris!!
She leaps up too and follows Lucas out of the room.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris is sat behind the wheel of his car. He starts the engine and starts to cry for a second, swallowing the tears as he guns the engine and starts a three-point turn to manoeuvre off the drive.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - TOP FLOOR. NIGHT.
Lucas is looking out through one of the windows overlooking the drive, watching Chris get ready to drive away. Rachel joins him at the window. It only takes her a second to recognise Chris's car and realise that he has seen what has happened.
RACHEL
Chris!!
She bangs on the window in a futile attempt to get his attention as he drives away. Next to her, Lucas allows himself a small grin as he turns and heads back to the bedroom. Rachel is now crying too, her makeup starting to smear as she looks out the window after Chris.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Lucas sits back down on the bed, adjusting his hair in a mirror nearby. Rachel walks back in, visibly very upset. Lucas looks up at her as she comes in, waiting for her next move.
RACHEL
What have we done?
LUCAS
What you wanted to.
RACHEL
No! I was upset, I didn't -
LUCAS
Stop trying to fool yourself,
Rachel. You know what you
wanted from me.
RACHEL
What? To mess with my head
even more? Now I've got
twice as much to worry about!
LUCAS
I don't recall you telling me
to stop at any point. Quite
the opposite, in fact..
RACHEL
(with venom)
You bastard..
LUCAS
Why?
RACHEL
You took advantage of me.
LUCAS
I could say the same to you.
RACHEL
You used me to get at him.
LUCAS
You wanted to get even with
him too.
RACHEL
Fuck you.
LUCAS
Done that already.
Rachel stands, seething for a moment, then starts to gather up her clothes from their pile on the floor by the bed. Lucas just watches her with a grin. His work here is done.
LUCAS
So you're just going to go?
RACHEL
Looks that way.
LUCAS
Calm down, Rachel. You're
just getting too emotional -
RACHEL
(incensed)
Too emotional? I appear
to have tried to solve one
problem by making up
another one! This should
never have happened!
LUCAS
Will he see it that way?
Rachel stops and goes silent, her clothes gathered up in her arms. Lucas is still looking at her calmly. Rachel knows she's not entirely without blame for all this, but she didn't want to lose Chris over it. The tears start to come back, and her lips trembles as she heads out the door.
RACHEL
Goodbye, Lucas.
LUCAS
(fake sincerity)
Call me..
Rachel dares not speak as she hustles out. Lucas lounges back on his bed like the proverbial cat that got the cream, and lights up a big cigar from a box by the bed.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Pulling on her top to finish getting dressed, Rachel throws open the front door and walks out, leaving the dressing gown on the floor behind her.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - BEDROOM. NIGHT.
The phone rings. Lucas answers it.
LUCAS
Yes? It's me. Yes it's done.
(takes a drag from the cigar)
No, no chance. Just as we
discussed. She will be
yours soon.
He puts the phone down, picks up a remote control and turns the TV volume up.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Similarly loud, nasty music to before is playing as Chris tears down the motorway. There is a general absence of other traffic, although city lights can be seen in the distance behind him. A window is open. Tears are still streaking his face as he changes between sorrow, anger, rage and heartbreak as he drives. Suddenly, he grabs the tape from the radio and throws it out the window. The radio comes on with a blast of garbled mid-frequency radio chatter before he locates another tape and slams it home. "Filth Pig" by Ministry comes on. Chris continues to drive.
EXT. BUS STOP. NIGHT.
Rachel approaches a bus stop along Lucas's road as a late bus rolls up. She jogs for it and gets on board.
INT. BUS. NIGHT.
She slumps down in a seat, her head pressed against the window. Outside, it starts to rain. Other night people are on the bus with her. In front of Rachel, a black hooded top clothed young rocker is listening to his Walkman. The song is the same as the one playing in Chris's car, and in sync with the music we:
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
The rain is lashing down more heavily here, and despite the wipers being on full, Chris can't really see too much. Red tail lights from other cars flash past. Chris mutters a few curses to himself, until a large neon sign flashes past on the side of the road, reading: CAFE - HOT FOOD AND DRINKS DAY AND NIGHT. Chris looks ahead and sees the lights of the truck stop up ahead. He indicates and heads for it.
EXT. TRUCK STOP CAR PARK. NIGHT.
Aerial shot as Chris's car weaves between the parked trucks at the stop. The cafe itself is a single-storey building framed by large windows, offering a good view of the surrounding motorway and countryside. Chris parks up, leaps out of his car and races indoors.
INT. TRUCK STOP CAFE. NIGHT.
A departing trucker holds the door open for Chris as he races in, shaking off his coat from the rain. He looks around. The place is fairly quiet. Three or four lonely drivers sit around, drinking coffee and tucking into hot meals, and a couple sit in larger groups chatting away. Chris heads for the counter and attracts the waitresses attention. She is middle-aged but attractive in a rough diamond kind of way, giving the impression that she is a kind of angel for the wandering souls that end up in here. She smiles as Chris speaks.
CHRIS
Hey. One coffee. White.
Three sugars. Thanks.
WAITRESS
You look upset. Rough night?
CHRIS
Something like that.
WAITRESS
Tell you what. Have this and
tell me all about it later, okay?
A problem shared is a problem
halved, after all. Especially to
an anonymous waitress you'll
probably never see again.
Her philosophical statement catches Chris by surprise - not the kind of chatter he was expecting. She grins as she notices his reaction, getting his coffee ready at the same time.
WAITRESS
Yeah, I know. How did a girl
like me end up serving hot
drinks to truckers way out
here?
CHRIS
Actually, I was thinking that
you've just said the first thing
that's made any sense to me
all night.
WAITRESS
I'm Jean.
CHRIS
Chris.
WAITRESS
Good to meet you, Chris.
Here's that coffee.
Chris takes it and sits down at a table for four. The tables are divided by neck-high partitions into pseudo-booths. Chris slides into the far corner and runs a hand through his hair, trying to smooth out the brain underneath. His phone rings, and he lifts it to look at it.
CU - PHONE
Rachel is trying to call him. He turns it off.
INT. BUS. NIGHT.
Rachel takes the phone away from her ear, looks at the display then shoves it back in her bag, angry at Chris ignoring her. She needs to talk to him right now.
INT. TRUCK STOP CAFE. NIGHT.
Chris puts his phone away too, and is startled by a voice coming from a few chairs along.
VOICE
Want to be alone, huh?
Chris looks up to see the Stranger, who he swears wasn't there a second ago. Chris double takes to check, then goes back to his coffee. The Stranger is dressed in a long black duster coat, and a variety of fading and tattered clothes beneath it - an old rocker t-shirt, battered denims, lots of jangling silver things.
CHRIS
She wasn't high on my
list of favourite callers.
STRANGER
I'm sure she didn't mean it.
CHRIS
What?
STRANGER
Whatever she did to upset you.
The Stranger has an ever-present slight grin to his face. Chris stares at him for a long beat. Does this guy know what happened tonight? Chris opens his mouth to speak, but the stranger interrupts.
STRANGER
I knew a girl I loved once. The
prettiest girl at school, then
college, then the place where
we worked. Worshipped her.
Felt privileged to breathe the
same air as her. Sound familiar?
CHRIS
Like you're reading my script
for "This Is Your Life."
STRANGER
We got together, got engaged,
things were great. Then we
argued. Something stupid, I
don't really remember what about.
She tried to call me, I ignored her.
The next number in her phone
book was her ex boyfriend.
He came over to see her. They
talked. Got on really well.
The Stranger pauses. Chris takes a sip from his coffee, waiting for the guy to finish.
CHRIS
And then?
STRANGER
He fucked her.
CHRIS
Sounds familiar.
STRANGER
No, I mean he fucked her.
Took her money, beat her
up, she never spoke to me
again. Moved away.
CHRIS
So what are you saying?
STRANGER
(leans forward, suddenly very serious)
Don't push people away.
If something is worth
fighting about, then it's worth
fighting for. Keep that in mind.
It may save someone's life
one day.
Chris looks like he understands. He nods solemnly. The Stranger leans back in his chair. Chris looks down to take another sip of his coffee, but when he looks back the Stranger is gone. Chris, alarmed, looks round the cafe a few times to see where the Stranger went, but he is nowhere to be seen. More than a little confused, he drains the last of his coffee and heads out.
WAITRESS
Have a good night, Chris.
CHRIS
You too, Jean.
WAITRESS
(as Chris turns his back to her as he leaves)
Take the turn.
Chris stops again, looks back round. Jean is quietly washing up the coffee mugs, not looking at him. She glances up and sees him standing there, and smiles at him. Chris returns the smile, but accompanies it with a big frown as his fevered mind tries to work out what is going on. He turns and leaves.
EXT. TRUCK STOP CAR PARK. NIGHT.
Chris dashes back into his car through the rain and jumps in.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Inside, he picks up an A to Z and flicks through a few pages, before tossing the book onto the back seat and starting the car. He'll make his own route up. As the engine roars into life, "Ain't My Bitch" by Metallica starts on the radio. With a grin, Chris pulls out of the car park and back onto the motorway.
INT. TRUCK STOP CAFE. NIGHT.
Through the windows, Jean and the reappeared Stranger watch Chris head out.
STRANGER
Seems like a good one.
WAITRESS
Sin?
STRANGER
Wrath, a dose of envy,
probably a fair dash of
pride in there too.
WAITRESS
Let's hope he makes the
turn, then.
STRANGER
He will. I'll get ready to go
meet him there.
The Stranger looks out the windows as the camera pans to follow Jean as she places a clean coffee mug back under the counter. When she walks back to the same spot as before, the Stranger is gone. She doesn't react to his disappearance.
EXT. MOTORWAY. NIGHT.
Chris continues to speed along. It is still a pitch black night, still raining, and there are still very few cars around. The road ahead seems to stretch on to infinity, in that way that only motorways at night can do. Chris's car suddenly slams its brakes on and screeches to a halt, veering off sharply into the escape road and stopping. Chris leaps out of the car and stares, dumbstruck, at a sign ahead of him.
CU - SIGN.
A little further up the road is a traffic sign, in the same format as the others, reading: "THE TURN, 6m."
EXT. MOTORWAY. NIGHT.
Chris slowly gets back into his car.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris looks a little shaken. Something weird is definitely going on here. His hands massage the steering wheel as he tries to clear his head.
CHRIS
Okay, what the hell is going on.
My girlfriend is sleeping with my
worst enemy, I'm on a motorway
in the middle of the night with no
idea where I am, and now creepy
men in remote truck stops are
giving me directions to
personalised road signs.
Chris reaches for the radio and turns it on. We hear a few seconds of the Twilight Zone theme before he switches it off again. With a shake of his head, he starts the car and drives on.
EXT. MOTORWAY JUNCTION. NIGHT.
Chris drives along, but starts to slow again.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris looks out through the rain-splashed windscreen with wide eyes at the sign that flashes past:
CHRIS'S P.O.V. - SIGN
The sign reads, simply: THIS WAY CHRIS. Chris looks back over his shoulder, searching for the sign, but can't see it. Looking back ahead, the markers signalling an approaching junction appear by the roadside, and sure enough, a junction looms up ahead, marked by a sign: THE TURN. Chris indicates, but slows right down as he turns off.
EXT. THE TURN. NIGHT.
Chris drives along - the road he is on is pitch dark, unlit by any street lamps. The motorway becomes more distant as he travels, and the rain dies down as well. Soon, it is eerily silent, and the road starts to curve to the right, with what lies ahead hidden by hills running parallel to the road. Chris is driving pretty slowly, and comes to a stop when he sees the Tunnel.
EXT. THE TUNNEL - ENTRANCE. NIGHT.
A long, brightly lit access tunnel, the kind that main roads use to pass beneath each other in city centres, lies ahead. It stretches off for some way. A sign hangs over the entrance, framed by flaming firebrands, reading: THIS WAY. The sign creaks from side to side in a slight wind, the only noise around.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris looks down at his phone.
CU - PHONE.
No signal. The display is dead. No chance to call for help. Chris puts it back down, stares at the tunnel ahead of him for a long beat, then guns the engine into life, and with a screech of smoking tires races into the tunnel. He slams on the radio, "Little Horn" by Marilyn Manson plays, and it continues throughout the following scenes.
EXT. THE TUNNEL - ENTRANCE. NIGHT.
Chris's car screams down into the tunnel. The lights flash by overhead in a blur. He continues to drive along for a while, with the tunnel dipping, cresting and curving with no obvious end in sight.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Chris glances into his rear-view mirror, then double-takes into it. We see the mirror, with his widening eyes reflected in it, before we:
CUT TO:
EXT. THE TUNNEL. NIGHT.
And we can now see what Chris saw - a huge ball of fire is rolling down the tunnel after him. Filling the tunnel behind from road to ceiling, its surface is covered with waves of near-liquid flames, spitting and hissing as it moves. It also appears to be gaining on him. We see Chris speed up, but the ball of fire keeps gaining.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT
Chris keeps looking over his shoulder, getting more frantic.
CHRIS
Okay, okay, I am officially
scared now!
EXT. THE TUNNEL. NIGHT.
The ball of fire closes. Chunks of red hot flame from it are now splashing off the rear windscreen of Chris's car. We then intercut both scenes with increasingly rapid cuts back and forth.
INTERCUT:
CU - CHRIS.
As he looks out at the approaching fireball.
EXT. THE TUNNEL. NIGHT.
As the fireball closes.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
The ball of flame now fills the entire view out of the back windscreen. Gouts of flame from it are streaking past the car, and the roaring sound it is making begins to drown out the radio. Up ahead, Chris can see what looks like a solid black wall ahead - dead end. He puts his foot down and screams in defiance as the fire gets closer and closer..
EXT. HELL CITY - MAIN STREET.
Chris's car suddenly shoots out onto a road, the fireball gone from behind him but the rear of the car visibly scorched and blackened by it. He has appeared on a busy city street, surrounded by other cars on both sides, and framed by a packed network of towering buildings. As Chris's car splutters along, drawing slowly to a halt, we can look around a bit better. The streets are packed with people milling around, and others are hanging out of the windows and openings in the buildings higher up. Walkways, paths and balconies intercross the street on a variety of levels, making a veritable spaghetti junction of human traffic. Everything is bathed in a crimson glow. Rocky outcrops can be seen all around the city in the distance. Chris's car, now trailing smoke, pulls over at the roadside. People move out of its way. Chris climbs out and leans against it, trying to catch his breath. He looks up and around.
CHRIS'S P.O.V.
Chris's eyes dart around as he scans the scene around him, taking in the warped, unnatural building designs, the cacophony of noise made by the huge crowds of people milling around, and the faces of some of the citizens walking around and over him - some look normal, if a little rugged and mean, but then we start to pick out tall, horned people, people with fangs, obviously inhuman skin colourings and patterns, claws, wings, tails - in short, demons. Lots of them.
We cut back to Chris and pull back to reveal more of the outlook of the city as Chris, dazed and confused, looks all around him. We pull out past the buildings, as a few winged creatures fly past, out past a large, central tower rising up from what appears to be the centre of the city, until we hover above the mountain range that circles the entire, red city. Gouts of flame leap up from many different places, and the circular city sits on our screen for a second, before we:
CUT TO:
EXT. HELL CITY - MAIN STREET.
Chris is still looking around. He stops a MAN, looking rough, who is walking past.
CHRIS
Er, excuse me, er.. where
am I?
The man stares at him for a beat, then bursts into laughter and walks away shaking his head. Chris continues looking round until a gloved hand slaps down on his shoulder, and he spins round to face the owner of it. It is the Stranger, beaming down on Chris.
STRANGER
Welcome to Hell, Chris!
CU - CHRIS'S SHOCKED EXPRESSION.
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET OUTSIDE CHRIS & RACHEL'S PLACE. NIGHT
Rachel steps off the bus and walks along a street for a few moments, turning into the path leading up to a modest apartment block. She uses her key to open the front door and heads up the stairs.
STAY ON the outside of the apartments, pulling back as a car rolls up and stops on the far side of the street.
INT. LUCAS'S CAR - NIGHT.
Lucas watches Rachel head inside. Looking over his shoulder, we se the light in her apartment come on, and Rachel walk up to and close the curtains. Lucas lights another cigar and smiles to himself. All part of his plan.
INT. HELL CITY - FIRE & BRIMSTONE BAR.
Chris is sat, slumped and dejected, at a table in the crowded bar. The background atmosphere and noise is something like Hieronymous Bosch meets the Mos Eisley Cantina - demons, imps, goblins, zombies, monsters, humans, animals and ghosts milling around like it was any other rowdy, popular watering hole. From the bar, the Stranger pushes his way over to the table, before putting down a shot glass in front of both of them. A tiny wisp of flame dances around on top of the drink for a few seconds, then jumps up and onto the table, pauses for a moment then scampers away. The Stranger watches it go with disappointment, downing his own identical drink before his flame gets away.
STRANGER
Chris, stay with it! You let
the good bit get away!
CHRIS
(not listening to him)
So am I dead now?
STRANGER
(grimaces as the aftertaste to his drink hits him)
No, no, no, look, I
explained it all to you. This,
(gestures with a wave of his arm)
is Hell. Specifically, the best
damn bar in Hell. You are here
to see if you want to stay.
CHRIS
Stay?
STRANGER
I know a lot about you, Chris. The
depression, the insomnia, the cuts,
(motions to Chris's arms, he tries to cover them up)
or the ‘self harm’ if you want to use
that psychobabble crap term for it,
the feelings of worthlessness and
loneliness, and above all, the
nice healthy dollop of pure,
unadulterated hate you got from
seeing Rachel with another guy.
CHRIS
Sounds about right. I think I'm
learning not to ask too many
questions around here.
STRANGER
Fast learner, good. Now, what I
do is offer people the choice.
Spend a few days with us, at
the end of it all you get to sign
a few documents, and then when
you, shall we say, depart this
mortal coil, you come back here.
CHRIS
And in non lawyer-speak?
STRANGER
Well...
(thinks for a second)
If you want to stay here, you
promise us your soul when you
die.
CHRIS
My soul?
STRANGER
That's right.
CHRIS
What for? I was kind of
hoping to keep a hold of it..
STRANGER
Big myth. All started by them
(points upward)
up there. You see, whether
we get it or they do, at the end
of the day, or at least the end
of your days, you die and you go
to us or them. Very simple.
CHRIS
What if I don't want to come here?
STRANGER
Entirely up to you. Thing is, they
don't have advance previews, so
you're taking more of a risk. With us,
what you see is what you get.
Chris looks around at the bar - the characters filling it, the minor bar brawls kicking off, the drinks of pure fire, the TV showing wrestlers hacking each other with sharp weapons, and the tiny winged imps taking drinks to people's tables, and turns back to the Stranger with a raised eyebrow.
STRANGER
Maybe this isn't the best place
to start...
He stands, followed by Chris, and the two walk out, seconds before a large demon is hurled into their table, breaking it in half. As the two leave, a Wild West style bar brawl breaks out behind them.
INT. CHRIS & RACHEL'S - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
Showing all the classic signs of a girl in a bad mood, Rachel is wearing a baggy red and black striped jumper, curled up on the big squashy sofa, watching TV and eating from a big tub of ice cream with a large spoon. She keeps trying to call Chris but gets no response. Her makeup has been cleaned up but not off entirely. Their apartment is filled with piles of stuff in fairly well-organised stacks - his videos, books and computer games, her magazines, clothes and bags, both co-existing nicely. Doors leading off to a small kitchen unit and a bedroom are visible behind Rachel. There is a knock at the door. She gets up to answer it.
INT. CHRIS & RACHEL'S - FRONT DOOR. NIGHT.
Rachel opens the door. Lucas is standing there, smoking a cigar like he was the ruler of the world. Rachel goes cold when she sees him. She doesn't want him around to remind her of things right now.
RACHEL
What are you doing here?
LUCAS
Coming to see you.
RACHEL
And what makes you think I
want you here?
LUCAS
Animal magnetism.
RACHEL
("yeah, right!")
Magnetism?
LUCAS
Look, we both know what it
is you want. Let me in.
RACHEL
Get lost, Lucas. I don't need
people like you.
LUCAS
Oh, I think you do.
Rachel tries to close the door but Lucas jams his foot in the frame. Rachel opens the door again, visibly much angrier.
RACHEL
Am I speaking Egyptian?
Are the words leaving my
mouth not registering with
you at all? Piss off!
LUCAS
(steps inside)
Make me.
RACHEL
Well, I know these nice
people at the police station
down the road, and they say
if I'm ever in trouble..
LUCAS
You're not in any trouble.
At least, not yet.
RACHEL
(scared but trying not to show it)
Are you on drugs?
LUCAS
I don't need drugs to have
fun. All I need is a pretty
girl and some time.
RACHEL
Okay, you are now starting to
freak me out. Get out. Now.
LUCAS
(starting to move a bit unnaturally)
You see, the thing you have to
remember about girls is that
they all want one thing.
RACHEL
(guarded)
What's that?
LUCAS
Me.
He reaches out and grabs her hair, quick as a flash. Rachel screams and leaps back, pulling out a clump of hair from her head. Lucas stops to look at it for a moment as Rachel scrambles for the door. Lucas moves towards her, seeming to float above the ground, the sofa and dining table being pushed out of his way as he gets to them. Rachel tears out the door and heads for the stairs, gasping in panicked breaths.
INT. APARTMENT BLOCK - TOP FLOOR LANDING. NIGHT.
She turns to see Lucas slowly walking out of her apartment towards her, a murderous look in his eyes. Time to go.
RACHEL
I don't know what you're on,
but stay the hell away from me!
LUCAS
Hell?
(tuts, shakes his head)
You have no idea.
She starts to run down the stairs, but Lucas races forward, jumps over the handrail and lands perfectly in front of her. Rachel screams and runs back up the stairs, but Lucas is too quick for her, and grabs her again as she puts one foot on the top floor.
LUCAS
Maybe you'd like an idea!
With one movement he spins her round and throws her down the stairs.
INT. APARTMENT - STAIRS. NIGHT.
Rachel bounces down the steps, hitting each one heavily. After a few moments of falling, she stops making any noises. She impacts at the bottom of one flight with enough momentum to send her all the way down the next set, to land in a heap at the bottom, facing the main doors. A woman on the ground floor opens her door to see what is going on, and is met by Rachel coming to a stop off the stairs. The woman screams. Looking at Rachel, we can see she is hurt badly. Her eyes are open but glazed, and she is cut and bleeding in several places. She doesn't seem to be breathing. We hear the woman downstairs calling an ambulance.
WOMAN (O.S.)
Please, ambulance, and
quickly! Someone's fallen
down several flights of stairs,
she looks badly hurt!
We close on Rachel as the woman's voice fades out.
CUT TO:
INT. APARTMENT - TOP OF STAIRS. NIGHT.
Lucas is looking down on the battered body of Rachel. He is still grinning. We are looking straight down from a little way above his head.
LUCAS
Ah, well, win some, lose
some I guess..
He steps back out of frame, but we start to dolly down slowly, spiralling as we close right up to Rachel's eyes, moving until the blackness of her pupil fills the screen.
MATCH DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. THE PIT.
The Pit. Blackness all around. We pull back and see Rachel, lying in the same position as she was at the bottom of the stairs. She lies still but appears to be falling, as some locks of her hair and parts of her clothes are fluttering as though she was drifting slowly downwards. Nothing but blackness all around her.
INT. AMBULANCE. NIGHT.
Rachel is in cardiac arrest. She is lying on a stretcher in the back of a speeding ambulance, attended to by two frantically working paramedics. They talk quickly, and the camera sweeps from side to side to keep up with their movements. The noise of the siren and the ambulance's engine is drowned out by the flat tone of Rachel's flatlining heart monitor. The paramedics are attempting a heart massage and pumping air, but nothing seems to be working. With their frantic efforts still going on, we zoom right up to Rachel's eyes as before, and into her pupils to:
EXT. THE PIT.
Rachel stirs a little, trying to respond to the paramedic's efforts to resuscitate her. Suddenly, everything around her is lit by a brilliant white flash, and Rachel convulses to one side. Another flash follows, and she writhes again, but still does not recover.
INT. AMBULANCE. NIGHT.
The paramedics are trying to shock Rachel's heart back into action, but it doesn't seem to be working. A round of heart massage follows, but while one paramedic administers the oxygen, the other shakes his head and seems to admit defeat. They look at her for a moment, then one reaches out to switch off the heart monitor.
PARAMEDIC
Time of death, 1:26 a.m.
EXT. THE PIT.
Finally, Rachel stirs as if coming round. She sits up, having no visible means of support, seeming to float in midair. She still seems to be drifting downwards slowly, and as we watch her sit up, many tiny pinpricks of white light start to punch through the blackness around her. She looks around, not knowing what is going on. The points of light are multiplying rapidly, and a larger, more prominent white light begins to shine down on her from above. She looks up, awe and wonder in her eyes. Little balls of white light, almost like snow, begin to drift down towards her. She smiles, and tries to reach out to touch one. As she does so, things take a turn for the worse. The light around her suddenly fades away again, and the points of white light start to become a deep blood red colour. Rachel looks around her, not knowing what is going on, until suddenly she falls. As though whatever invisible platform was beneath her was suddenly taken away, Rachel begins to plummet downwards at a terrific speed, the light around her becoming more exclusively red as she falls. She begins to scream, and we watch as she falls towards what appears to be the bottom of the Pit, a large, gaping hole surrounded by fire. The other side to it cannot be seen through the flames, but she is powerless to stop herself falling straight through it. The flames part for a second to allow her through before closing up after her, like she is being swallowed.
EXT. HELL CITY - DEAD ZONE.
We see what looks like a pig farm, minus the pigs, in what is now recognisably a part of Hell - the red sky, mountains in the background, architecture and people. Here, filling the crudely-made pig pens are hordes of people of all shapes, colours and sizes, shuffling around and waiting for whatever fate is in store for them. Rachel's scream can be heard before she plummets down onto the top of a large slide, designed to break her fall, and she comes to a stop at its base nearly a hundred feet after she joined it. Gulping in deep breaths of air, she is manhandled to her feet by two burly men. She looks up.
RACHEL'S P.O.V. - THE TWO MEN
Classic horned demons. One wears a tattered nametag that says: "Hi! I'm Rathamos." Rachel screams.
RATHAMOS
Oh, don't scream, please!
Anything but another screamer..
DEMON GUARD #2
Come on, let's put her with the
others.
They drag the still screaming Rachel over to one of the pens, pull open the gate and shove her inside. The guards then close the gate and walk back over to wait by the slide once more. A short, fat demon with a muddy clipboard stalks over to Rachel's holding pen, takes a pen that appears to have been carved from bone, and licks it once before speaking.
SHORT DEMON
Good evening. In case none
of you have been able to work
it out yet, you're all dead. And
specifically, you are in Hell.
Now, I hear all sorts of reasons
as to why so and so shouldn't be
here, or why this person thought
they led a life without sin - save it.
My job is to register you all, and
your job is to shut up and not
make this any more difficult.
Standing immediately around Rachel are: a businessman with a knife wound over his heart, a fat man with obviously fatal high blood pressure, a thin student with the sunken eyes of a drug abuser, and a traffic warden with a prominent gunshot wound to his head. The businessman speaks up first.
BUSINESSMAN
Look, I'm sure there's been some
sort of mistake..
SHORT DEMON
Yes, I hear that one a lot too.
BUSINESSMAN
Why have I been sent to Hell? I
was killed by my wife!
SHORT DEMON
Let's see...
(consults his clipboard)
Tates, William B. You were in the
middle of having an affair when
your wife killed you. She's
pencilled in for later this month.
BUSINESSMAN
Well, at least that's something..
FAT MAN
Why me then?
SHORT DEMON
Gluttony is still a sin in my
book, I'm afraid.
STUDENT
(tetchily)
So are drugs illegal down
here as well then?
SHORT DEMON
No, but dying from them and
expecting to go to Heaven is.
TRAFFIC WARDEN
Alright then, what about me?
SHORT DEMON
What about you?
TRAFFIC WARDEN
I was killed in the line of
duty!
SHORT DEMON
People like you have sent more
souls on their way to end up
here than anyone else! We held
a committee meeting and decided
you'd be happier here, given the
chance.
TRAFFIC WARDEN
I wasn't given a chance!
SHORT DEMON
Well no, when I say "given
the chance," that means if
we decided to give it to you.
Which we don't.
Rachel stands silently, trying to let all of this sink in. The Short Demon stands in front of her and finds the relevant page on his clipboard.
SHORT DEMON
Aah, Rachel. You're a special
case. You'll be told more later.
RACHEL
I'll be... what?
SHORT DEMON
(claps his hands)
Right! Let's get moving then!
We've got plenty more people
like you coming our way today!
More demon guards appear and herd Rachel and the others out of the pens like they were animals. Which, to these demons, they are. Rachel is looking around desperately, trying to find a way out. No luck. Their section of Hell is barricaded by solid walls and barriers of fire, and patrolled by demon guards with large, nasty looking dog-like animals. The new arrivals are led into a large building, and once inside the doors are pulled shut behind them.
EXT. HELL CITY - ANOTHER STREET.
Chris is walking along with the Stranger. He sees various sights of Hell as he passes along a row of shops, hotels, bars and entertainment centres - imps running round people's feet, banks of TV screens in shop windows displaying scenes of fire and damnation, demons of all shapes and sizes wandering around. A fly buzzes round his head, and Chris swats at it to make it go. They pass a man dressed in typical angel garb - white cape and sandals, but his wings are frayed and tattered. A hand-written cardboard sign next to him reads "Fallen Angel - Please Give Generously." Chris tosses some change out of his pocket at the angel as the Stranger walks on.
STRANGER
Keep up, Chris, we've got
a whole underworld to see
here.
CHRIS
So far, I must say, I'm
not too impressed.
STRANGER
They never are at first. Give
it a day and then we'll see.
Now, I want you to come in
here.
The Stranger has paused outside what looks like another cheap bar - large, grotty neon sign out front, rowdiness coming from within, and a constant stream of human and demon customers walking in and out. Chris looks up to the outer face of the building, where he can read the neon sign: THE KING'S INN.
CHRIS
"The King's Inn"? Not
exactly the sort of name
I'd expect a bar in Hell
to have.
STRANGER
Trust me, you're gonna
love it in here.
The Stranger heads inside, Chris follows. What they do not notice are the two Men from the office party, Lucas's accomplices, standing on the other side of the road, watching them intently.
FIRST MAN
He is here. And the one
they call the Stranger is
with him.
SECOND MAN
We must stop him.
The two Men cross the street and enter the bar.
INT. RACHEL'S PARENT'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. DAY.
Rachel's parents are fairly well-to-do people, and have a nicely furnished house. They are both seated and watching the TV when the phone rings. Rachel's mother goes to answer it.
RACHEL'S MOTHER
Hello? Yes, this is she.
What? She's... oh...
A shocked hand covers her mouth as Rachel's mother reacts to being told her daughter is dead. Her father looks over from the sofa to see what is wrong, heading over and taking the phone away from Rachel's mother as it drops from her unresponsive fingers.
RACHEL'S FATHER
Who is this? Officer who?
I see... Oh, my god... Yes,
yes, we'll come right away.
He hangs the phone up. Rachel's mother, growing gradually more emotional, leans against the wall and slides down into a squatting position on the floor. Her father, tears in her eyes, kneels next to her and throws his arms around her. Rachel's mother buries her head in his arms and sobs uncontrollably. The camera pans across from the, into the blackness of the wall, where we:
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - BATHROOM. DAY
Lucas is relaxing in a bath filled to the brim with luxurious bubbles. His bathroom is a lavish as the rest of his house. A television set faces the bath, and Lucas has the remote for that in one hand and the phone in the other.
LUCAS
No, of course I didn't mean
to. I hadn't had all my fun
with her.
(listens to an angry response)
Tough shit. I think it's time I
disappeared for a while
again, don't you? The girl and
her man were the only
people who knew she was here
with me. And I don't think we
need to worry about her for a
while. I'll sort the boy out next.
(another response - takes Lucas by surprise)
Sorry? He's where?
INT. HELL CITY - KING'S INN.
Chris is in another bar, but this time looks a lot happier. Loud, Sixties rock and roll music blares out from the sound system, and the walls are plastered with Rock Cafe style memorabilia, all noticeably from dead musicians, notably those with more hell-raising lifestyles. As Chris and the Stranger takes their seats at the bar, Chris sees why this place is called the "King's Inn" - the staff are all Elvis impersonators. Fat ones, tall ones, skinny ones, Chinese ones, black ones - all dressed to resemble Elvis at various stages in his career. None of them look like him in any other respect than the clothes. A fat Elvis, barman's towel over one shoulder, stands before them to take their drinks. He talks with a bad take on Elvis's trademark Deep South drawl.
BARMAN ELVIS
May I take your order, sir?
STRANGER
Two Amazing Graces.
BARMAN ELVIS
Thank you very much.
He heads off to get the drinks. Chris takes a sweeping look around - taking in the Elvis bar staff, rock and roll decorations and human/demon clientele. He turns back to the bar, shaking his head in disbelief but grinning widely. He looks over to the Stranger, who is grinning back.
STRANGER
See? What did I tell you!
Things aren't so bad down
here. No-one cares what you
did up there. They only care
that you're down here and you
want to be here.
CHRIS
What about all the really bad
people? Somehow, I think I've
got more chance of bumping
into Jeffrey Dahmer in here
than upstairs walking round
Tesco's.
STRANGER
Each to his own. You can't
be killed round here, and
even though you can get into
fights, no-one stays hurt.
CHRIS
And no-one gets sick, and
no-one ever dies... you're
making this sound like "Cocoon"
meets a Black Sabbath tour.
STRANGER
Closer to the truth than you'd
think.
Barman Elvis brings back their drinks. They are two small shot glasses, filled with a swirling red liquid, each topped with a small, wispy ghost that begins to sing "Amazing Grace," harmonising with one another. Chris looks from his drink to the Stranger in disbelief.
STRANGER
Drink it before he gets to
the chorus. Trust me.
The Stranger downs his drink and gulps appreciatively. Chris cautiously lifts his glass to his lips, then closes his eyes and knocks it back, bracing himself for some kind of hellish aftertaste. After a long beat, he opens one eye, then the other, checks he's still in one piece. Then he slams the glass back down onto the counter.
CHRIS
That was, without a doubt,
the finest fucking drink I
have ever tasted...
STRANGER
Told you. Fancy a round
of pool?
CHRIS
(face lights up - he loves pool)
Lead on.
The Stranger walks over to one of a row of three pool tables in one corner. The cues on offer range from jet black, spiked, blood red or otherwise Hellish down to standard, real world cues. Chris takes one of these, and the Stranger takes one of the jet black ones.
CHRIS
Where's the chalk?
STRANGER
Right there on the edge.
Chris looks down, and sees a small, cube shaped imp, coloured blue, with large domed divots in all his sides. The Stranger holds the tip of his cue down next to the chalk imp, who hops onto the end of it, rubs himself round in a circle a few times, then hops off. The Stranger blows the excess dust away and starts to arrange the balls. Chris, a little uncertain, does the same, fascinated as the chalk imp rubs himself on the end of his cue.
STRANGER
(off Chris's amazement)
Yeah, we do things a
little differently down here.
But some things are still
the same.
He lines up and takes his shot, blasting the cue ball into the assembled balls with such force that one shatters and two fly off the table.
STRANGER
Well, maybe pool games
don't last as long.
Chris grins again and lines up a shot. A fly buzzes past him. As he hits the cue ball, we go to a:
C U - CUE BALL - REVERSE ANGLE
Rolling back with the cue ball, looking straight at it as it heads for the other balls, we see it hit another ball. We then follow that new ball down into the blackness of the pocket.
CUT TO:
INT. MORTUARY - INSIDE DRAWER. DAY.
The darkness is broken as a door opens in the middle of our view - we are looking out from inside one of the trays that hold the bodies. A mortuary attendant outside the tray pulls us out into the open.
INT. MORTUARY. DAY.
We see the attendant pull the tray all the way out. Rachel's parents are here, accompanied by two police officers and another detective. The parents cling to one another as the attendant prepares to pull back the sheet covering the body.
ATTENDANT
Take a deep breath. This is
never easy.
RACHEL'S FATHER
Yes. Thank you.
ATTENDANT
(pulls the sheet back a foot)
Is this your daughter?
It is Rachel. She is a little bruised, but otherwise just looks at peace - her skin is deathly pale, her eyes closed. Rachel's mother convulses and sobs into her husband's arms again; Rachel's father tries to remain strong, and just nods a few times before averting his eyes too. The attendant gently and respectfully pulls the sheet back over Rachel's body and then slides the drawer back into its place.
DETECTIVE
We understand how difficult
all this must be for you. Believe
me, we see this every day. But
we do need as much help as you
can give us to help find who
did this to your daughter.
RACHEL'S FATHER
What do you already know?
W.P.C
(flips open her notebook)
On the night of her death, Rachel
was last seen leaving an office
party in the city centre with a
man, who we believe to be her
boyfriend, Christopher.
RACHEL'S FATHER
Yes, they went there together.
They were both leaving the
company soon.
W.P.C
(continues reading)
Eyewitness reports from other
people at the party have told
us that the two had an argument
shortly before they left, though
what about we don't know.
DETECTIVE
At the moment, we need to find
Christopher and see what he's up
to. His whereabouts are currently
unknown, so we need any help
you can give us to help us track
him down.
RACHEL'S MOTHER
(emotional - through tears)
Do you think... do you think
Chris did this?
DETECTIVE
We just need to talk to him.
The police officers and detective retire to a far corner of the room, leaving Rachel's father to comfort his wife. They talk quietly so as not to be overheard.
P.C.
What do you reckon, guv?
DETECTIVE
Sounds like classic lover's tiff
material to me. They fight, he
gets angry, she takes a lesson
in being a stuntwoman.
W.P.C.
Neighbours at the crime scene
say they heard shouting coming
from her apartment.
DETECTIVE
Anyone else seen with her?
P.C.
No-one specific. Bear in mind
we're not 100% sure she didn't
leave with anyone else...
DETECTIVE
At the moment, we need to find
the boyfriend. He's our main
suspect.
(looks over his shoulder to the parents)
See what they can tell us.
The police officers leave as the detective watches the grieving parents a while longer.
DETECTIVE
I wonder what our man Chris is
up to right now...
CUT TO:
INT. HELL CITY - KING'S INN - POOL AREA.
As before, except Chris and the Stranger's pool game has attracted a large crowd of cheering revellers. The humans are cheering for Chris, while the demons egg on the Stranger. Each player has one ball left before the black - the table is littered with the fragments of shattered balls. Chris is smoking a cigarette to aid his concentration as he lines up for another shot. Money is slapped back and forth between hands as furious betting on the winner takes place. "Long Tall Sally" starts over the jukebox to appreciative off camera roars. Chris lines up his shot...
C U - CUE BALL
Looking at it from along Chris's cue, we see the tip of the cue pull forward and back twice as Chris lines the shot up. Then - whack! He hits it. we travel with the ball as it streaks towards the one spot ball left for Chris, hitting it and sending it slamming into the far pocket. The cue ball rolls back but leaves the Stranger a tough shot.
BACK ON SCENE
The crowd claps its appreciation. Chris stands back and folds his arms, looking confident.
CHRIS
(motions to the Stranger)
Take your shot. Go ahead.
I want to make this a good
finale for our viewers here.
The Stranger crouches low next to the table, his eyes scanning for the right angle. He finds it. Standing, aiming and shooting in one fluid motion, his stripe ball hits the corner pocket and disintegrates before the crowd have chance to even react. A cheer goes round the group. Chris throws his head back and laughs, clearly having a great time. The Stranger chalks up his cue, watching Chris carefully with a glint in his eye. He knows he's winning the young man over. We then sweep over his shoulder, past the pool tables and over to a table against one wall. The two Men are there.
FIRST MAN
He is enjoying himself.
SECOND MAN
This may not be so hard.
FIRST MAN
If he stays, we are safe.
SECOND MAN
We must make sure he wants
to stay, then.
We pull back over to the pool table. Chris is lining up his shot on the black 8-ball. Before he can shoot, a large, hairy, clawed hand slams down onto the edge of the table. The crowd falls silent. Chris, still crouched in the shooting position, follows the arm back up to its owner.
CHRIS'S P.O.V. - ARM
We follow the arm, similarly hairy, up to the body and head of its owner, a tall, muscular, furry demon, his mouth a classic fang-filled devil's face. He glares at Chris.
FURRY DEMON
I've got fifty quid riding
on you making this shot,
human! Don't screw up!
The demon picks his hand up. Deadpan, Chris looks across to the Stranger.
CHRIS
Competitive lot, aren't they?
STRANGER
Don't miss, then!
Chris returns to his aim. The crowd falls silent, as does the music and the background bar noise. Chris's face is a mask of concentration. He readies the shot, then takes it.
C U - CUE BALL
Now looking a little worse for the wear after the battering it has taken this match. It's a slow shot, and with agonisingly low speed we follow from a little above and behind the ball as it gently connects with the black, which we then follow as it rolls steadily towards the pocket. It hovers on the edge for a beat... the crowd audibly holds it breath... then it plops out of sight.
ON SCENE
A cheer goes up. Sounds of money being ripped up. The furry demon chuckles to
himself as he collects notes off other watchers. The Stranger shakes Chris's
hand.
STRANGER
Nice game, Chris.
CHRIS
Thanks. You too.
STRANGER
Come on, the night is young.
We've got lots more to see
yet.
They both leave. The two Men swivel their heads to watch them leave, then silently get up and follow.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - SHRINE. NIGHT.
Lucas kneels before an ornately carved and heavily decorated shrine. The statue before him is of an obviously hellish god - many arms, monstrous face, huge wings, etc. Around it are the traces of previous offerings, blood stains and incense sticks. Lucas hastily prepares the shrine and then murmurs a few prayers as he leans back and closes his eyes.
LUCAS
I request an audience. An
audience with my master.
The room shakes a little around him, and while Lucas and the shrine stay as they were, the walls and room around him dissolve, melting away to reveal a fiery pit all around him. Lucas keeps his eyes closed throughout. The incense sticks burn more fiercely, almost like flares, and a guttural, booming voice comes in.
VOICE
What do you ask of me,
my servant?
LUCAS
I need to be moved again.
I have done all I can do
here. There will be police
looking for me soon.
VOICE
Why did you kill the girl?
Now I will not know of her.
LUCAS
There will be other girls. If
you grant my request.
VOICE
Very well. You will be
contacted and instructed as
is our custom. Go now.
LUCAS
Thank you, my lord.
C U - LUCAS'S FACE
His eyes flick open.
ON SCENE
As before. The fiery pit is gone, the room is normal. Lucas quickly blows out the incense, gets up and hurries upstairs. There is work to be done.
INT. HELL CITY - DEAD ZONE - WAITING ROOM.
Rachel sits on a long bench, flanked either side by other dead people waiting their turn to enter the system. She appears to be sat in an ordinary office, although one where the decorator was listening to a few too many Cannibal Corpse albums - the furniture is tattered and falling apart, the pictures on the wall show the aftermath of earthquakes, plane crashes and landslides, and the magazines have titles like: HELL TODAY, DEATH, SINNERS WEEKLY and THE FOUR HORSEMEN - FACT AND FICTION. Rachel, still confused as ever, looks up and down the row. She is in a long waiting room, and the bench to her right side stretches off round a corner, out of her sight. It is full. To her left, she is about five places from the front. At the head of the room is a desk, behind which sits the SECRETARY, a bored looking woman dressed in severe Fifties-style office garb. The desktop is covered with files, folders, photos and other paperwork, which is added to and removed by small, flying imps bringing new files in and taking old files away. A depressed looking MAN sits before the desk, his eyes at the floor as the Secretary reads from his file. A window behind her, through covered by a blind, shows glimpses of the Hell City landscape outside. A row of doors, marked 1-10, line up opposite the bench.
SECRETARY
So then, Mr. Green, as you
can see, not everyone was
so appreciative of your changes
to the company network.
MAN
I didn't know the stocks would
fall! I didn't know the M.D. would
commit suicide!
SECRETARY
Maybe, but the bomb he used
has left me a long backlog of
cases to get through. Most of
them are a little way on down
the line.
The Man puts his head back in his hands. The Secretary writes a few notes on his file, then passes it back to him.
SECRETARY
Door number seven.
(points)
Have a nice afterlife.
Next!!
The Man sniffs dejectedly, gets up and walks to the door. It opens as he approaches, but as he goes to step through he finds there is nothing on the other side. He plummets off screen with a quick yelp, before the door slams shut behind him. All we got a glimpse of outside the door was a room full of fire. The bench shuffles along a little. Rachel is looking around now, getting more frantic as she gets closer to the head of the queue. As the next in line, a richly dressed woman holding onto the blackened skeleton of a small dog steps up, a shadow falls over Rachel. She looks up, as do those around her.
RACHEL'S P.O.V. - DEMON
It is another demon guard, this one with a badge saying "I'm Jazagel. Feel Free To Ask." He looks at Rachel, then at his clipboard, then up at her again as though confirming something.
JAZAGEL
Rachel Weiland?
RACHEL
Er, yes?
JAZAGEL
Whew! Good job I caught up
with you before you got
stuck in the system here. It
could have been millennia
before we found you again!
RACHEL
(confused again)
Why? What's going on?
JAZAGEL
You're not for this lot. Come
with me.
She stands and follows him as he walks out, past the bench, and up to an unmarked part of the wall. He opens a secret panel, exposing a small numeric pad with runes instead of numbers, and then types in a code. As a hidden door beeps, hisses and slides open, revealing a tunnel on the other side, Jazagel turns back to Rachel with a wry grin.
JAZAGEL
Mother's birthday. Only code
I could ever remember!
He heads into the corridor. She hops in, turning to watch the door close after her. It seals with another hiss.
INT. HELL CITY - STRIP & SIN.
Chris and the Stranger are sat inside a packed strip club. We are looking across the far edge of the stage at them, and the legs of the dancing act can be seen parading back and forth in front of them from time to time. Chris wears a shocked expression on his face throughout this scene. Robert Palmer's "Addicted To Love" blasts out during the scene. The Stranger, like all the other cheering patrons in the club, is knocking back a beer labelled "Bloodweiser" and whooping every time the stripper walks up and down. He leans over and shouts into Chris's ear, neither of them taking their eyes off the stage.
STRANGER
So what do you think?
CHRIS
(gulp)
STRANGER
She's pretty hot, huh?
CHRIS
(mouth hanging open)
Mm...
STRANGER
Hey... "hot" in Hell! I made
a funny!
From off screen, a white feather boa suddenly lands on Chris's shoulder. He stares dumbfounded at it, follows it back up to its owner, and smiles as the boa is slowly dragged back away from him.
CHRIS
I think I need a cold shower...
STRANGER
How cold?
CHRIS
Liquid oxygen should do
the trick!
A bra with three cups flies off the stage and lands on Chris's head. The crowd roars its approval as Chris bursts out with laughter again. The Stranger shakes his head and chuckles, taking another swig of his beer. He likes the guy, thinks he'll be a good addition to the numbers. The stripper leaves the stage as the crowd gives her a standing ovation. The Stranger taps Chris on the arm and motions for the two of them to leave. They get up and walk out. Chris wolf whistles over his shoulder as they walk out, and notices a fly on his shoulder which he brushes away.
EXT. HELL CITY - RED LIGHT DISTRICT.
The two stagger out onto the main street. the busy red light district is filled with the usual mixed residence of Hell City, plus prostitutes of all descriptions enticing customers into their bars, strip clubs and brothels. Chris and the Stranger seem to be a little worse for the wear now, but the Stranger has one last surprise in store. He motions for Chris to follow him down a little side street off the noisy main road.
EXT. HELL CITY - OUTSIDE BAR CHORD.
They walk down the alley for a few moments before emerging into a small square. Facing them is a small building with one door, simply named "The Bar Chord." Soft music is emanating from within.
CHRIS
I tell you, the puns aren't
getting any better in here...
STRANGER
Stop complaining and listen.
(throws a brotherly arm round Chris)
This is the greatest karaoke
club in the universe. I know
about your dreams of making
it as a rock star. Here you can
make them come true.
CHRIS
(a cynical look at the Stranger)
Do you work here or
something?
STRANGER
I wish I did. Come on in.
He walks inside, pushing the front door open. We get a blast of music as the door opens and closes. Chris stands for a moment, shakes his head to clear it, then takes a deep breath and follows the Stranger in.
STAY ON the square as the two Men appear at the far end of the alley and watch Chris go in. They exchange a glance.
FIRST MAN
He should cause no more
trouble tonight.
SECOND MAN
The other one will keep
him busy until the morning.
FIRST MAN
Let us tell the master.
They leave. The camera sweeps back over to the door and flies at it, pushing it open and taking us inside.
INT. HELL CITY - BAR CHORD.
Chris walks down a rickety set of steps into a low ceilinged, Cavern Club style establishment. Stonework for the walls, old fashioned wooden tables and chairs, low lighting, a neon-lit bar in one wall, and at the far end of the club, a stage with a cheesy glittery curtain at its rear. A single microphone is on stage, illuminated by a spotlight mounted in the ceiling. A video screen is mounted up in one corner, ready to show the audience the words so they can join in. The place is pretty full, but a lot quieter than everywhere else. A soft haze of smoke from both cigarettes and smouldering demons fills the air. Chris joins the Stranger at the bar.
STRANGER
Two Porphyrians, please.
The bartender, an octopus-like demon, nods and uses four of his arms at once to mix the drink in seconds. He places the two glasses down. Chris peers at his - it looks suspiciously like a shot glass full of blood.
CHRIS
I don't think I want to
know what this is, do I?
STRANGER
Nope.
In unison, they tap their glasses on the bar and knock them back. Chris looks surprised at the taste.
CHRIS
Sweet. Like honey.
STRANGER
Now I know what Vlad was
always carping on about!
CHRIS
Looks like the show is
starting.
The house lights dim and there is a ripple of applause from the crowd. Chris and the Stranger prop themselves against the bar to get a better look. From behind the curtain steps a beautiful WOMAN, slim and slinky, with long raven black hair down past her waist and elaborate Egyptian-princess style makeup. She is wearing a black dress that glitters with sequins as she shuffles up to the mic.
CHRIS
I didn't know Morticia
Addams had a sister...
STRANGER
That's Booth. Best singer
in this world or the other.
CHRIS
Is she a demon too?
STRANGER
Someone who sold her soul
instead. She was dying of
throat cancer. I offered her the
choice of singing with us. She
accepted my offer.
CHRIS
Ssh! She's starting...
The soft backing of "Ordinary World" by Duran Duran fades up to the crowd's applause. She starts to sashay from side to side in time with the music, her eyes looking down as she gets into the rhythm. Chris is captivated. Booth begins to sing, a slightly husky but wonderfully soulful rendition of the song. In true cheesy karaoke style, the words roll by on the screen behind her. As she continues, the Stranger whispers into Chris's ear.
STRANGER
I got to make a quick
phone call. Stay here, okay?
CHRIS
I wasn't planning on moving
while she's there!
The Stranger slips away. We STAY ON him as he walks round one side of the bar, going to a payphone just behind a wall. The stage can be seen, out of focus, over his shoulder. He dials a number without paying, but it connects anyway.
INTERCUT:
INT. PHONE.
Close up shot of the end of a phone receiver, and the lips of another demon speaking.
DEMON ON PHONE
Yes? Progress?
STRANGER
He likes it so far. I'm
gonna tuck him in for the
night soon.
DEMON ON PHONE
Will he sign?
STRANGER
Fifty - fifty at the moment,
but a good chance when the
three days are up.
DEMON ON PHONE
And what do you think?
STRANGER
I like him. He's a decent
enough kid. He just needs
the right motivation. He
wouldn't be happy up there.
DEMON ON PHONE
We have news for you. It
concerns him and his lover.
STRANGER
Go ahead.
(we STAY ON the Stranger and don't hear the other side of the call)
What? She is? Where?
Should I tell him? Agreed.
The Stranger hangs up and walks back round to Chris, who is cheering and clapping wildly as Booth takes a bow, having finished her song. She speaks into the mike.
BOOTH
It's open mic for you out
there next, so see Eddie if
you want to show off too.
Booth slinks off the stage Morticia Addams style. Chris wanders over to the other side of the stage where EDDIE, the karaoke demon sits. Eddie is a cat-like demon with an eyepatch and numerous scars and scratches. He is counting out a wad of money as Chris approaches.
CHRIS
I'd like to sing.
EDDIE
They all do, mate! Name your
tune. We can do anything you
like down here. Hip hop, rock,
modern jazz, industrial goth music,
you name it.
CHRIS
Depeche Mode. "Enjoy The
Silence."
EDDIE
Got it. You're on in..
(checks his watch)
twenty minutes. That okay?
CHRIS
Perfect.
EDDIE
I'll call you up. What's
the name?
CHRIS
(thinks)
The Mighty Wah.
EDDIE
(grins)
Your obscure 80s pop
references are not lost
down here. my friend.
Chris grins back and walks back over to the bar.
STRANGER
Well?
CHRIS
I'm on in twenty minutes.
STRANGER
Want to call it a night
after that?
CHRIS
Yeah.
Chris turns to look back over to the bar as Booth wanders up and calls the bartender over.
BOOTH
Jesus Lizard on the rocks,
Diamonique.
The bartender starts preparing her drink. Booth looks over and sees Chris and the Stranger smiling at her. She grins back and holds out her hand. Her speaking voice is as husky and alluring as her singing.
BOOTH
Hello there. You must be
that Wah guy up next.
CHRIS
Er, yeah. My real name's
Chris.
STRANGER
My friend here likes to show
off his encyclopaedic
knowledge of music. No
matter how geeky he looks.
BOOTH
Well, you've got a good
crowd in here tonight.
CHRIS
Yeah, it seems a lot more
disciplined than the other
places we've been.
BOOTH
You should see the place when
Eddie does his take on "Welcome
To The Jungle." It ain't no
paradise city down here then.
Booth takes a sip from her drink, a yellow-green cocktail, modestly garnished.
BOOTH
New in town?
CHRIS
Yep. How did you know?
BOOTH
You were with him.
(motions to the Stranger)
He always brings his new
applicants in here to close
the night.
STRANGER
Everyone should hear you
sing at least once, Bouffster.
BOOTH
(smiles)
Thanks. I gotta go change.
See you both around.
Taking her drink, she shuffles away. Chris lets out the deep breath he's been holding as the Stranger pats him on the back.
STRANGER
See that? She likes you.
CHRIS
Not many women do. Trust
me to find a nice girl
in Hell!
STRANGER
About time you found a
nice girl.
CHRIS
Maybe...
He stares down at the bar. Thinking about Rachel brings back painful memories - he doesn't know that she's dead but he's still got that last image of her with Lucas rattling round . The Stranger nudges Chris in the arm in a comradely way.
STRANGER
You don't have time to
get down about it. You
can start again down here.
CHRIS
We'll see.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
There is a continuous and loud knocking at Lucas's front door. He walks across the hall to answer it.
LUCAS
What? What?
He opens the door. The two Men are there. They exchange a look before speaking.
FIRST MAN
You are discovered.
LUCAS
What do you mean?
SECOND MAN
The one he is with knows.
LUCAS
Knows what, exactly?
SECOND MAN
About you, and about the
death of the girl.
LUCAS
And?
FIRST MAN
The one called Chris may
do something about it.
SECOND MAN
Revenge.
FIRST MAN
A vendetta.
SECOND MAN
Payback.
LUCAS
(holds up a hand to silence them)
I get the idea. What is he
planning to do?
FIRST MAN
We do not yet know.
SECOND MAN
We will find out.
FIRST MAN
Be ready.
LUCAS
Just tell me when.
The two Men wander off. Lucas shuts the door and rubs his face with his hands.
LUCAS
So come back and take
another shot, Chris. Won't
change the fact that you'll lose.
Lucas walks back into the living room.
INT. HELL CITY - BAR CHORD.
Chris takes the mic to a round of applause.
CHRIS
Thanks. I'm going to do a
song by a great British band
for you all.
VOICE FROM THE CROWD
Ace of Spades!
Laughter. Chris smiles too.
CHRIS
Not quite.
The opening melody of "Enjoy The Silence" plays. Several crowd members cheer as they recognise it. Chris sings the first few lines. As he continues, we pull back from the stage and over to the bar, where the Stranger stands next to Booth, now dressed in more casual clothes.
STRANGER
Well?
BOOTH
Not bad. He's picked a
good song to do. The crowd
always likes slow numbers
at this time of night.
STRANGER
We're heading off after this.
What are you up to in the
morning?
BOOTH
Work.
STRANGER
The clothes shop still?
BOOTH
Pays the bills. Drop by at
some point.
STRANGER
(grins)
Both of us or just him?
BOOTH
(grins back)
You always could read me
like an open book.
STRANGER
Yeah, with big letters.
Booth turns back to watch Chris. The camera moves closer to her, pulling right forward into the blackness of her hair.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. HELL CITY - LOST SOULS ADMIN BUREAU.
Pull back from the blackness, which is revealed to be a pot of ink on a desk. Pull back further to see the whole scene. Rachel is sat in front of the desk, which is manned by Jazagel from before. All around them stretch similar desks attending to people. Imps fly back and forth overhead carrying messages around. Windows mounted in the high walls filter in red light into the room. The high ceiling cannot be seen, but imps keep flying downwards from it as though there is an exit hole up there. Rachel watches Jazagel as he leafs through her file, and takes out a small pair of pince-nez. She tries to look away as he unsuccessfully tries to balance them on the end of his snout a few times.
JAZAGEL
Now then, Miss Weiland. You
are a special case.
RACHEL
(snaps)
So I keep getting told!
JAZAGEL
There really is no need to get
tetchy, you know.
RACHEL
Yeah, well, maybe I'm not
adjusting too well to the whole
being dead thing. And in Hell!
JAZAGEL
(calmly; sees this every day)
It's no different for anyone else
down here, Rachel. I just need
to explain a few things to you.
RACHEL
Hurry it up. I'm sure there's a
pit of boiling acid with my name
on it somewhere down here.
JAZAGEL
The punishment is always equal
to the crime, Miss Weiland. You
won't see Hitler walking round
like a free man in this city.
RACHEL
Just get to the point.
JAZAGEL
People who die in normal
circumstances, be they natural
causes, accidents or murders,
end up here. Their sins are
recorded and an appropriate
punishment is given out.
RACHEL
So what about me?
JAZAGEL
You're different.
RACHEL
Different how? I was thrown
down two flights of stairs. I
think that qualifies as "murder."
JAZAGEL
Not exactly.
RACHEL
Why?
JAZAGEL
You were killed by a demon.
RACHEL
I was... eh?
JAZAGEL
(peers through his glasses at her file)
At 12:54 a.m. on the morning of
June 30th, 2001, you were killed
by a demon, name currently not
known.
RACHEL
But... his name is... it was Lucas!
JAZAGEL
That's only his human name, and
not the only one he's used. We
have to know his proper name.
RACHEL
If his name isn't known, how can
you be sure he was a demon?
JAZAGEL
We can tell that without
knowing his name. Plus, you
had recently had sexual relations
with him...
RACHEL
(hands over her mouth)
Oh God...
JAZAGEL
And that's always a good pointer.
RACHEL
So what does this mean?
JAZAGEL
Well, contrary to popular belief,
there aren't actually a huge
amount of demons running loose
up there. Could do something
nasty, you know.
RACHEL
(sarcastic)
Nasty, like what? Kill me?
JAZAGEL
Ragnarok. Apocalypse. End of Days.
Armageddon.
RACHEL
Yeah, I saw all those films.
JAZAGEL
Too many demonic or heavenly
entities out of place upsets the
natural balance of things, you see.
RACHEL
So why does me dying at the
hands of a demon make me so
different?
JAZAGEL
It's not classed as a natural
death. Murder ordinarily, yes.
But demons aren't supposed
to be running riot up there. So
I'm afraid you're part of a small
group of victims whose deaths
can't be easily classified.
RACHEL
So what, I'm stuck in a fucking
legal loophole? In Hell? That's
crazy?
JAZAGEL
Those are the rules.
Rachel, her mouth hanging open, tries to think of what to say. She can't. She slumps back in her chair, defeated by a system she never thought she'd encounter.
RACHEL
So what happens now?
JAZAGEL
(consults the file again)
Well, until the demon in
question is returned to us,
I'm afraid you have to stay
with us. There's nothing we
can do.
RACHEL
I suppose asking to see the
manager is a bit too much...
JAZAGEL
He is pretty busy. Look, stay
calm, I'll see what I can sort out.
He whistles. A small imp, out of breath, lands on the table. Jazagel scribbles out a note.
JAZAGEL
(to imp)
Take this to the Appeals
office. Right away.
Jazagel finishes the note and rolls it up. It's bigger than the imp itself. The imp looks at the letter, then throws a pleading look at Jazagel, before taking off with a resigned sigh and picking the letter up with its claws. Rachel watches the imp struggle to gain altitude as it heads for the ceiling.
RACHEL
What now?
JAZAGEL
Athmos here will show you
to the right section.
A tall demon stands by Rachel. She looks up at him, then throws her hands into the air in resignation. She gets up and is led away by Athmos. Jazagel calls over to the next applicant.
JAZAGEL
Next!
A stocky man in a military uniform sits down.
JAZAGEL
Aah, Mr. Milosevic. We meet
at last...
EXT. HELL CITY - HOTEL DISTRICT.
Chris, the Stranger and Booth are walking along. The streets are quieter now, and they are walking into what looks like a residential district, with lots of tall hotel buildings with signs reading: ROOMS, COFFINS, PITS TO RENT. The Stranger motions to one, and they all head inside.
INT. HELL CITY - LAVAFRONT HOTEL.
The hotel is furnished inside like a quaint English seaside Bed & Breakfast. A kindly looking old woman is behind the reception desk. The three approach her.
STRANGER
Room for one, name of Chris
Clark.
OLD WOMAN
Ahh, yes, room 257.
Passes Chris a key. He takes it, checks the number, and turns to Booth and the Stranger.
CHRIS
So I'll see you in the morning then?
STRANGER
Bright and early.
CHRIS
How does time work down
here?
STRANGER
What do you mean?
CHRIS
How much time is passing
back home?
STRANGER
As much as you want to.
Goodnight.
BOOTH
(leans forward for a hug but whispers into his ear)
Don't ask about breakfast.
Chris watches her go, confused. He turns back to the Old Woman.
CHRIS
I take it everything is ready?
OLD WOMAN
Oh, yes, the bed's lovely and
soft. I never get any complaints.
Chris turns to leave.
OLD WOMAN
Will you be wanting breakfast?
CHRIS
(stops dead)
Er, actually, no.
OLD WOMAN
Alright then.
She goes back to her work. Chris throws her a look as he heads up the stairs.
INT. HELL CITY - LAVAFRONT HOTEL - ROOM 257.
Chris enters the room. It is as quaint and nice as the reception area. Something about this doesn't seem right - why is it so nice in the middle of Hell? He shrugs, takes off his coat and sits down on the bed. Feeling his wallet in his pocket, he takes it out. He opens it up and his picture of him and Rachel together falls out.
C U - PHOTO
The two are crammed into a photo booth somewhere. Happier days. Chris holds the photo and smiles. We sweep over his shoulder and look out the window, where we look out over the "seafront" - waves of lava lap gently against a rocky shore of red-hot rocks just like a normal seaside. Even with the same gentle swirling noise.
MATCH CUT TO:
INT. HELL CITY - ADMIN - WAITING ROOM.
The same view, but as we pull back, we enter a different room, and over the shoulder of Rachel, who is stood looking out of the window. She is in a clean, sanitised waiting room, decorated in an attempt to make it more homely. A few other people are in there with her. She twirls a Styrofoam cup listlessly in one hand. A voice from behind her makes her turn.
VOICE
So what happened to you?
RACHEL
Hmm??
She turns to see a nervous looking man, with large bags under his eyes and a thick film of sweat covering his face. He smiles bravely at her.
NERVOUS MAN
They only send the special cases
in here, I was told. What was up
with you?
RACHEL
Killed by a demon.
A well-built black man, trying vainly to read an issue of "HELL TODAY" in one corner, sucks his breath in to show sympathy.
NERVOUS MAN
Ah, that's always a tough one.
RACHEL
And you?
NERVOUS MAN
Sacrificed.
RACHEL
(a little surprised)
Sacrificed?
NERVOUS MAN
I used to lead a cult. Just a
quiet one, weekends and bank
holidays. We mainly used it to
play cards and watch old videos
of "Charlie's Angels," but this
guy joined us, and, well, he was
a lot more serious about things.
RACHEL
In what way?
NERVOUS MAN
He took our occasional devil
worship and made it more, well,
official. Robes. Chanting. Incense.
The full monty.
RACHEL
So what happened?
NERVOUS MAN
In order to "transpire" to the
"next level," my soul was given
up to the gods.
RACHEL
Doesn't look like you had much
say in all that.
NERVOUS MAN
My own fault, I guess. I'm
something of a pacifist. So
anyway, I was drugged and
sacrificed, then I'm told it was
an actual demon who killed me.
Which is why I'm here.
BLACK MAN
I was mugged by one.
RACHEL
Where?
BLACK MAN
On my way back home one
night. Dragged into an alley
and savagely mutilated. Not
pleasant.
RACHEL
Yikes...
BLACK MAN
I think my wording was a
little stronger.
The three are startled as Jazagel bursts into the room, trying to hold on to three files at once and looking pretty flustered. He sits down and closes the door to the room.
JAZAGEL
Now - well, er - yes, ah - I,
well, that is, er -
NERVOUS MAN
What is it, Mr. Jazagel?
JAZAGEL
(looks for the right phrase, fails)
It was the same one.
RACHEL
The same one what?
JAZAGEL
You were all killed by the same
demon. Our investigations have
shown us that one demon is
responsible for all your deaths.
BLACK MAN
So what does that mean?
JAZAGEL
Well, ah, the standard procedure
is to send someone back up top
to find him and kill him.
RACHEL
Well what are you waiting for?
JAZAGEL
We need a volunteer.
BLACK MAN
I'll do it! I'll rip that scrawny
little bastard's head clean off...
JAZAGEL
Other than yourselves, because I'm
afraid you're all still dead.
We're
doing all we can.
Jazagel picks up his files and blusters out of the room again. Rachel returns to her window.
RACHEL
So much for that idea.
VOICE
Hey!
Rachel looks around. The Nervous Man and the Black Man are sat quietly. She turns back to the window.
VOICE
Down here!
Rachel looks down. There is a small, jet black bug standing on the windowsill. It appears to be looking back up at her. Rachel cautiously leans towards it.
RACHEL
Er, hello?
BUG
Hey there. My name's Wilton.
RACHEL
Er, hello, Wilton..
WILTON
Don't worry. I know how this
must seem. I am actually a
talking bug. You're not
hallucinating.
RACHEL
(unsure)
Okay...
WILTON
A little life story - back up
top, I was a private eye. I
made the mistake of sleeping
with a client. Whose husband
shot me. End of story. Or so I
thought. Next thing I know, I'm
down here, going through the
"accelerated karma" scheme, in
the form you see here. Kind of
appropriate considering my old
career!
RACHEL
So...
WILTON
I see your predicament. All of
you guys. Here's the plan. I
now someone who could help.
You especially.
RACHEL
Me? Why?
WILTON
Just leave it to me. A fly on the
wall sees and hears a lot of things,
especially down here. I've been
keeping an eye on developments.
They'll leave you here for a while,
but if not, I'll catch you again
later.
Wilton takes off and buzzes out through a small crack in the window. Rachel shakes her head in disbelief.
RACHEL
Now I'm dead and crazy..
INT. HELL CITY - LAVAFRONT HOTEL - ROOM 257.
Chris is asleep. We pull up to the window.
C U - WINDOW.
Wilton, now recognisable as the fly that was following Chris earlier, scrambles into the room through a small chip in the window. He takes residence on the window sill and clears his throat.
WILTON
(surprisingly loud)
HEY!!!
Chris jolts awake. He sits up in the bed with a shout. Rubbing his eyes, he looks around for the source of the call. He sees Wilton pacing up and down on the windowsill, groans, and makes to swat him.
WILTON
I wouldn't do that if I
were you...
Chris jumps back in shock.
CHRIS
What the...
WILTON
Listen up, loverboy, we don't
have much time. I'll make this
quick. Rachel is dead. The one
you called Lucas killed her. She's
in Hell. Specifically, a cosy waiting
room over in the Admin building.
She needs you to go back up top,
find Lucas and get him back down
here so she can go free.
CHRIS
(lost for words)
Rachel... is dead?
WILTON
Don't make me repeat myself.
I'll be back in a few hours. You
need to go see the Boss and
make your request. I'll try to
take you to her before then. Get
some rest - you'll need it.
Wilton buzzes up and out of the room. Chris watches him go, dumbfounded.
CHRIS
This better not have been a dream...
INT. PARTY. NIGHT.
Lucas, dressed in swish clothes, is entertaining a small crowd, mainly women, at what looks like an upper class dinner party. They are all stood in a large, rich ballroom, surrounded by other guests. The background hum of conversation is complimented by the live loungecore piano, bass and saxophone band playing.
LUCAS
So then I said, no, you've got
to pull the left one!
This is the punchline. The guests roar with laughter.
WOMAN
You are so funny, Richard!
MAN
Do tell another.
LUCAS
Well, I wouldn't like to bore
you...
MAN
Not at all!
Lucas takes a gulp of his wine glass and starts again. We see that a young, pretty woman is making eyes at him. Lucas keeps effortlessly catching her gaze. Another hunt is on the cards. We pull back to see none other than the two Men in one corner, making themselves not noticed as before.
FIRST MAN
He works quickly.
SECOND MAN
That is why our master
favours him so.
FIRST MAN
There is trouble below.
SECOND MAN
Shall we tell him?
FIRST MAN
Perhaps not. Maybe then our
master will favour us instead.
SECOND MAN
You tire of him also?
FIRST MAN
Very much so.
Their plot forming, they look back over to Lucas.
INT. LAVAFRONT HOTEL - RECEPTION.
The next morning. The Stranger and Booth, dressed in beach shirts and shorts and carrying towels and beach gear, walk through the main doors as Chris, pulling on his jacket, races downstairs, with Wilton buzzing in the air in front of him.
STRANGER
Morning, partner. What's...
CHRIS
She's here!
STRANGER
Who?
CHRIS
Rachel! Rachel is dead! I mean,
she's dead, but she's here!
STRANGER
Yeah, I... know.
CHRIS
You knew?
STRANGER
I was going to tell you today!
Honestly. I just wanted us to
have a little more fun before you
turned all D'artagnian on me.
BOOTH
Knew about what? Who's Rachel?
CHRIS
Follow the fly.
STRANGER
Follow the what?
Booth, understanding the serious look in Chris's eyes, follows him without question. The Stranger stays in the reception, waving his arms at the two of them as they race out.
STRANGER
What fly??
EXT. HELL CITY - EDGE OF DEAD ZONE.
Rachel is pacing back and forth by the large barbed wire barriers, in an area similar to where she landed in Hell yesterday. Wilton has told her to be here. Patrolling demon guards don't really give her a second look. There are a few other stragglers wandering around. Rachel looks up and sees Chris, Booth and the Stranger running towards her down a street that leads up to the edge of the Dead Zone enclosure. Her face lifts and she runs to the edge of the barriers.
RACHEL
Chris!! I'm here!
As Chris gets closer, he sees that she is okay. Booth and the Stranger suddenly skid to a halt a few feet away from the fence. With a look to each other, the Stranger braces himself as though about o catch something heavy. Chris runs right up to the fence that Rachel is pressed as close to as she can. As he gets to within an inch of it, it suddenly erupts into flames, and an unseen force catapults Chris backwards. The waiting Stranger braces his fall and catches him.
CHRIS
What the fuck was that?
BOOTH
Firewall...
CHRIS
What?
STRANGER
You're not dead.
CHRIS
I know! So what?
BOOTH
It means you can't go where
the dead go. And you're not
an official part of Hell either.
Chris walks more slowly up to the barriers. Rachel, stretching her hands out to him, watches as he steps up to within a few inches, then stops. Chris takes half a step forward and the flames start to build up outside the fence again. Realising this is as far as he can go, he stops to talk to Rachel.
CHRIS
Hi, honey...
RACHEL
Chris! Oh, god, am I glad to
see you!
CHRIS
So what happened?
RACHEL
It was Lucas.
CHRIS
Lucas?
RACHEL
Apparently he's a demon. An
escaped one -
CHRIS
- whose name is unknown. Yeah,
I know. Wilton told me.
RACHEL
What are you doing here?
CHRIS
Long story. So was he good?
RACHEL
What? Who?
CHRIS
You know.
RACHEL
(realising Chris is talking about Lucas)
He drugged me, you idiot!
CHRIS
He did?
RACHEL
Yes! I think the fact that he
threw me down the stairs kind
of proves that he didn't like me
all that much. He was getting at
you through me.
CHRIS
Consider me got.
WILTON
(landing on Chris's shoulder)
Enough already! You two can
bicker later. We have work to
do.
CHRIS
Rachel, Wilton here says that I
can go see the man in charge
and arrange to go get Lucas. If
I bring him back, you get out of
jail free.
RACHEL
I know. Do it.
CHRIS
You only had to ask.
Chris tries to reach out to touch her, but the firewall flares up again to stop him. Sadly, they both retract their hands. Rachel is crying.
CHRIS
See you soon, Rachel.
RACHEL
Don't be gone long.
Chris steps back to Booth and the Stranger, not wanting to take his eyes off Rachel.
STRANGER
Let's go see the Man. It's a day
earlier than I planned, but what
the heck, right?
CHRIS
Whatever it takes.
BOOTH
Let's go.
WILTON
I'll go ahead and tell them
we're coming.
Wilton buzzes away. STAY ON Wilton as we watch him fly up into the air, dodging passing demons and imps, until the huge central tower looms up in front of us. He heads for it.
CHRIS
(looking up at the Tower)
Is that where we're headed?
STRANGER
That's where the Boss lives.
CHRIS
Best go then.
Chris turns back to look at Rachel, but she is being herded back inside by one of the guards. Steeling himself, Chris sets out.
EXT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER.
The Tower stretches up out of view as we look up it. There are several smaller towers and steeples peeling off from the main structure, and the flying traffic of Hell City seems to circulate from here too. It is guarded at the bottom by two huge, mean looking demons, but they nod and step aside as the Stranger approaches.
STRANGER
I have special privileges here.
CHRIS
(off the Stranger's
tacky Hawaiian shirt)
When are you going to take that
horrible shirt off?
STRANGER
Hey, I thought we were going
to the beach!
One of the demons holds open the main double door. The group walks in. STAY ON the outside as the door is closed behind them.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - GROUND FLOOR.
The group walks in. Wilton buzzes over. The ground floor is a long passageway, longer than the external dimensions of the Tower suggested - this place obviously has a TARDIS-like mentality when it comes to interior space. The walls are decorated with large, imposing portraits which glare down on the group. Flaming torches line the corridor. An ageing BUTLER, dressed in black and white suit, ambles towards them.
BUTLER
Christopher Clark?
CHRIS
Yes.
BUTLER
I have been informed as to
the purpose of your visit. The
master will see you now.
The Butler turns and walks down the corridor. Chris follows, with Booth and the Stranger behind.
BOOTH
Curiouser and curiouser...
STRANGER
Never been in here before?
BOOTH
Always wanted to. Never needed
to before.
STRANGER
It's a pretty cool place. I like
it here.
CHRIS
What can I expect?
STRANGER
Depends what kind of mood
he's in.
BUTLER
If you could wait here...
The Butler shuffles away and soon disappears into the darkness around the passageway. The group appears to be waiting at a dead end. They look around for a second, until a loud swoosh noise, followed by a heavy thud, makes them all jump. Then, a metal door appears before them, which slides open to reveal the inside of a lift. The BELLBOY, a small demon squeezed into an ill-fitting red bellboy's outfit, has one hand over the lever to send the lift up and down.
BELLBOY DEMON
This way, please.
The group step warily into the plain, metal lift.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - LIFT.
The doors quickly snap shut, and wrenching the level to the right, the bellboy sends the lift hurtling upwards. The group visibly strain against the G-forces.
STRANGER
At least it's quick, right?
WILTON
My endoskeleton is crumbling!
As suddenly as it started, the lift lurches to a gut-wrenching stop. The group is thrown to the floor. Calmly, the bellboy turns to them.
BELLBOY DEMON
Everyone but the human out at
this floor, please.
The doors slide open onto what looks like a smoky nightclub bar. All sorts of humans and demons mill around. Booth and the Stranger look at each other.
BOOTH
Waiting room?
BELLBOY DEMON
Yes, miss. Drinks are free.
STRANGER
What are we waiting for??
He leaps out. Booth sighs and steps out, turning to Chris as she leaves.
BOOTH
Be careful. Don't sign anything.
CHRIS
Trust me.
They exchange smiles as the lift doors close. The lift travels up for a few more seconds.
WILTON
Hope he doesn't mind me
tagging along.
CHRIS
I'll say you're my attorney.
WILTON
I hate lawyers...
The lift stops and the doors open.
BELLBOY DEMON
This is your floor, sir.
Chris gingerly steps out. The Bellboy shuts the doors and slams the lift down to the bottom. Chris listens to it go.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - TOP FLOOR.
Looking around, we can see we are in a private audience chamber, which has the appearance of a study in a very rich house. A desk and large leather chair, its back to us, is at the far end of the long room, which Chris walks towards. Framed pictures on the wall show various scenes of death and destruction. Mounted animal heads, both from this world and our own, also line the walls, along with a wicked array of weapons from guns to swords. A plume of cigar smoke is rising from the other side of the chair. A roaring fire is behind it, and above the fireplace stands a huge portrait. The man in the chair speaks.
VOICE
I don't care what you think!
It's mine, and I want it back!
Chris pulls up to a stop, wondering what to say.
VOICE
Not tomorrow, now! Do
you hear me? Cleaned
inside and out!
Chris now looks very confused. To answer his question, the man in the chair spins round, revealing that he is on the phone.
MAN IN CHAIR
Thank you, and goodbye!
(slams the phone down)
Bloody car garages...
The Man in the chair notices Chris at last, who doesn't know what to make of it all. The Man is tall, thin and stately featured, in his fifties with slicked back greying hair, still a generous head of it too. He is dressed in a tightly cut black pinstripe suit, with red stripes and lining all over. A crimson shirt and a black tie top off the outfit. He is the Devil. He speaks.
DEVIL
Sorry about that, Christopher.
Now then, we have some
business, I believe.
CHRIS
Er, yes, yes we do.
DEVIL
About the girl, let's see..
(flips through a folder on his desk)
Rachel Weiland?
CHRIS
Yes. My Rachel.
DEVIL
(smiles)
Of course. Now, as you know
she met her fate at the hands of
a rogue demon, which places her
in an uncomfortable situation with
our administration department.
CHRIS
Administration?
DEVIL
How many souls do you think
we have to deal with in here
every day, Chris? We have to
work out some kind of system
or the place would fill up too
quickly. It's just a shame the
system is so damn complicated.
CHRIS
Never mind. What do I have
to do to get her out?
DEVIL
Well, in a nutshell, get my
demon back. That way I can
spend a few pleasant evenings
reminding him and whoever he
was working for exactly who is
in charge down here.
CHRIS
I thought he'd have been
working for you.
DEVIL
No, no, no, my dear boy. You
see, I'm quite happy with the
way things are. I talk to God
all the time, we actually get on
quite well. Of course, I was angry
at first, you know, following the
whole casting out of paradise
shebang, but soon I realised I
still have a purpose down here. Not
everyone is fit to go to Heaven. An
awful lot of people deserve to go
somewhere else. When I saw that my
job was to provide a home for the
souls that aren't cherub material, I
backed off on the whole war against
God thing. Now the only wars we have
are in our weekly chess matches.
CHRIS
So if he wasn't working for you,
then who does Lucas serve?
DEVIL
Lucas? Oh, you mean Grazazel.
CHRIS
You know his real name?
DEVIL
(holds up a notepad with lots of crossed off names)
Process of elimination, Chris. Worked
it out a few minutes ago, in fact.
CHRIS
Anyway, who does he work for?
Himself?
DEVIL
One of my opponents.
CHRIS
I didn't think the Devil would
have opponents.
DEVIL
Neither did I. It's a long story,
I'm afraid. If you'll come with me
for a quick tour, I'll explain it
all to you.
The Devil stands and motions for Chris to follow him. The Devil walks over to a large and ornate door to the left of his desk, and fiddles in his pocket for a key. Opening the door, he walks through. Chris follows, but whispers to Wilton before he enters.
CHRIS
You heard him. Go and tell
Rachel that the demon's real
name is Grazazel. That should
help get her out.
WILTON
Leave it to me.
Wilton buzzes away. Chris walks through the door.
EXT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - BALCONY.
Chris joins the Devil looking out over Hell City. They are at the top of the Tower, and have an excellent panoramic view of most of the city. Chris looks down.
CHRIS'S P.O.V
Straight down. A very, very, very, very, very long way. Vertigo-esque dizzying camerawork.
ON SCENE
Chris snaps his head back as though he's just been slapped. The Devil, still smoking a fat cigar, looks over and smirks.
DEVIL
Despite knowing how far up we
are, you'd be surprised how many
people still do that.
CHRIS
Ouch...
DEVIL
I just wanted to give you a
better perspective on what
I do here.
The Devil looks proudly out over his city, and waves an arm to cover all we can see.
DEVIL
I built this. All this, from the
fire, brimstone and sulphur when
we arrived to the bustling,
action-packed metropolis you see
before you.
CHRIS
By "we" I take it you mean the
other fallen angels.
DEVIL
Yes, those that I still talk to.
CHRIS
What's past the
mountains?
DEVIL
All the really bad people.
CHRIS
What do you mean?
DEVIL
Do you really think I'd want
people like Hitler, Stalin, John
Wayne Gacy and the like sharing
the same streets as all my regular
sinners? Chaos. Not the good
kind, either. Not the kind of
operation I'm running. No, we
keep all the nutters like them out
there, safe from my people.
CHRIS
I see. So what about the
other fallen angels?
DEVIL
We had a bit of a row a few
millennia ago. They all disagreed
with my new direction for this
place. Can't say I blame them.
CHRIS
You mean when you tried to
organise it better?
DEVIL
Exactly. They were still the old
hellfire, sodomy and the lash
types who were much happier
actively going to Earth to
harvest souls for us down here.
Still fixated with the idea of
declaring war on Heaven again
and having another big scrap.
When I told them to give that idea
up, on the grounds that we simply
didn't need to do it, they left.
CHRIS
Where did they go?
DEVIL
(waves his arm over the mountains)
Out there somewhere. Set up
their own Hells. Split into
factions and now bicker with
each other, still sending men up
top to influence souls down here.
I've managed to catch almost all
of their agents over the years,
but Grazazel is one who's eluded
me for some time.
(turns to Chris)
Come on, I want to show you
the Private Hell chamber.
CHRIS
Sounds cosy..
INT. HELL CITY - ADMIN - WAITING ROOM
Wilton buzzes in. The Nervous Man is alone.
WILTON
Oh no, where is she?
NERVOUS MAN
They moved her and the other
man to their own rooms. I'm
next.
WILTON
Any idea where?
NERVOUS MAN
Down the hall somewhere.
WILTON
Thanks.
Wilton buzzes past and out of the room. STAY ON Nervous Man as he kicks his heels, waiting to be seen.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - PRIVATE HELL CHAMBER.
An arm around him, the Devil leads Chris into the Private Hell room. At first, all Chris can see as they walk in to the rocky cavern is a walkway stretching off in front of him, and a dim red light from below. Chris looks around.
CHRIS
I don't see anything...
DEVIL
Walk forward a little. This
time you can look down.
The Devil holds back, waiting to see Chris's reaction. Chris walks forward until he is on the walkway, then looks down. We pull back quickly with a rush of air as we look out over the whole chamber. Below us are countless thousands of small rooms, with a network of criss-crossed walkways over the top of them. Demon guards patrol them, checking down on the inhabitants of the chambers below.
CUT TO:
INT. HELL CITY - PRIVATE HELL CHAMBERS.
We pan across several of these small rooms, passing through the walls each time to see the next. In the first, a man is surrounded by wasp's nests, and he is surrounded by an angry swarm which won't leave him, no matter how much he swats at them. Next along, a man faces a group of hippies, clothed in tie-dye and all, singing some sort of happy folk song at him. The man is on the ground, his arms round his head, screaming for them to stop. In the next room, a chubby, well-dressed woman is trying to reach up to grab at plates of food above her, but a group of imps are flying above her, jerking the plates up out of her reach every time. Finally, a heavily tattooed man is surrounded by small children, all with bloodstained clothes and holding tiny knives, who are stabbing him with the knives a little at a time. The man cannot fight them off.
ON CHRIS
As the sensation of height and overwhelming imagery makes him drop to his
knees to steady himself. The Devil walks over and helps him up.
DEVIL
This place I'm especially fond
of. It took me a while to get
the dimensions right, but here it
is in all its glory.
CHRIS
Who ends up here?
DEVIL
People I don't like. Obviously
there's a lot of nasty people
walking around in my city, but
one thing I hate is stupid sinners.
Mass murderers really piss me
off, just like sadistic traffic
wardens and lawyers. Each
unlucky soul has to endure a
set time in a personally-tailored
private hell until their bad karma is
low enough to send them back into
the city. This place also serves as
a good place to punish people who
make trouble out there too.
CHRIS
Wow...
DEVIL
Pretty impressive, isn't it?
CHRIS
I just hope I don't end up
in here.
DEVIL
Don't make me angry and you
won't.
Chris looks at the Devil. He is pleasant, admittedly, but there is a power and authority behind his words that makes it clear he is not someone to mess with. Chris nods solemnly and follows as the Devil leads them both out.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - LIBRARY.
Next, the two enter a library, with high shelves filled with a multitude of books running on for miles on both sides. Large, rolling ladders staffed by official-looking demons roll back and forth on these, taking books out and replacing them with others. Chris's sense of awe keeps him looking round while the Devil walks on. Chris notices he is being left behind and jogs to catch up.
DEVIL
I love books. Almost as much
as I love music. They are the
purest expressions of human
emotion, in my opinion. I often
send agents to Earth to bring me
books. All sorts. Romance, action,
crime, horror, comedy, fantasy,
anything.
CHRIS
I could spend a long time
in here...
DEVIL
There are also the grimoires,
the rulebooks of Heaven and
Hell, if you will.
The Devil pulls a thick, dusty volume from one shelf and carries it under his arm as the two walk on.
DEVIL
We'll need this one. Take
a seat.
CHRIS
Where?
The Devil points to a door marked "READING ROOM." He follows the Devil in.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - READING ROOM.
A small, comfy room, with a bar staffed by a waiter demon, and a few small tables, chairs and book rests. The Devil sits down at one and motions for Chris to take the other. They sit. The Devil puts on a pair of reading glasses and leafs through to a section where he stops.
DEVIL
Now then, young Christopher,
you're not the first person to
need to rescue someone from
Hell. This means there is a ritual
of sorts to follow.
CHRIS
I'll do anything.
DEVIL
(smiles)
I admire your determination.
Now then.
(reads from the book)
"He who would bring a soul
back from Hell, must pass three
tests or be damned as well."
CHRIS
Rhyming couplets?
DEVIL
It's an old book.
(continues reading)
"The first, will be a test of his
heart. The second, a test of his
head. The third, a test of his
body. If he succeeds, the soul
will be freed. If he fails, forever
shall his soul wail."
CHRIS
Wail?
DEVIL
I think the people who wrote
these for me got a bit stuck for
ideas at times.
(puts the book down)
Basically, Chris, you need to
pass three little challenges to
prove you're up to going and
fighting Grazazel for me. They
shouldn't pose too much of a
problem.
CHRIS
Let's start as soon as possible.
DEVIL
Good man. Follow me.
The Devil gets up, Chris follows.
INT. PARTY - UPSTAIRS ROOM. NIGHT.
Back with Lucas at the party. We are looking into an empty room for a few seconds, before the door opens and Lucas, followed by the girl who was looking at him earlier, sneak in. They close the door quietly behind each other and sneak over to the window. The room appears to be some kind of study, with expensive desks, tables and seats, one of which the girl throws Lucas down into. She starts to unzip her dress as Lucas takes off his suit jacket and starts unbuttoning his shirt. Looks like he's found a replacement for Rachel already.
INT. PARTY - OUTSIDE UPSTAIRS ROOM. NIGHT.
The two Men walk up to the door and listen in. Sounds of the chair moving around and occasional gasps as Lucas and the girl get acquainted come from within. The two Men lean away from the door.
FIRST MAN
Another one already!
SECOND MAN
The master will be pleased.
FIRST MAN
(off door; i.e. Lucas)
Shall we tell him the news
from below?
SECOND MAN
The one who will come to
challenge him?
They both turn back to the door. The girl's cries get more intense.
FIRST MAN
This time, let us see how well
he fares without us watching
him.
SECOND MAN
Agreed.
STAY ON the door and the noises beyond as the two Men drift away again.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - CHALLENGE ROOM.
The Devil leads Chris into a large stone-walled room, with a portcullis at one end. Booth and the Stranger, who are waiting here, stand up and head for Chris as he comes in.
STRANGER
Glad you could make it.
BOOTH
They sent for us a while
ago.
STRANGER
What's the plan?
DEVIL
The three challenges.
Booth and the Stranger react at the sound and then sight of the Devil - they almost bow respectfully.
STRANGER
Good to see you again, sir.
DEVIL
And you.
BOOTH
Which challenge is first?
DEVIL
The heart.
STRANGER
No problem. Chris here's got
the heart of an ox, haven't you!
The Stranger pats Chris's arm to try and encourage him. Chris does not look overjoyed at the prospect of the test.
STRANGER
(off Chris's downcast face)
Aah, you'll be fine. Stop
worrying.
Everyone except Chris retires to the side of the chamber.
DEVIL
Let the first test begin.
The portcullis rises slowly, its tortured screeching noise echoing around the chamber. The Stranger winces at the noise. They all watch to see what will appear through the portcullis. Nothing for along beat, then the thud of heavy footsteps. Chris turns to look at the Devil.
CHRIS
I forgot to ask - what's the
chance of me actually dying at
some point in these tests?
DEVIL
Surprisingly high, I'm afraid.
CHRIS
And what happens if I die?
DEVIL
I'm afraid both you and Rachel
stay here.
STRANGER
Hey, that's not so bad!
DEVIL
But you will never see her
again.
STRANGER
That's bad...
CHRIS
Let's just get on with it.
ON GATE
A huge, green, spiky WAR DEMON is pacing through the gate towards Chris. Its long tail swishes from side to side, tipped by a wicked-looking barb, and it holds in its hands a large double-headed axe. Chris looks shocked and more than a little afraid.
DEVIL
This is a special kind of demon.
There is only one way to beat
it. Use your heart.
Chris throws a questioning look at the Devil, but has no time to move before the War Demon charges at him, knocking him over. Chris rolls to the side to avoid its axe, which slams into the ground where Chris's head was. Scrambling to his feet, Chris looks from side to side to find something to use, but the Demon slams into him again, knocking him into a roll. Chris gets back up. The Demon is on him, and the two start trading punches. The Demon blocks all of Chris's blows, hitting him a few times for good measure. Chris is now very scared. He backs away from the monster, which continues to advance, snarling and spitting. Chris tries to think.
CHRIS
Use your heart... use your
heart... use your..
The Demon hits him again, knocking the wind out of him. Chris roars as he sinks to his knees, but notices the Demon hesitate for a second as he shouts. An idea hits him. He rolls to avoid the Demon's next blow, then stands up straight. Looking the Demon right in the eye, he stares at it, unblinking, and waits for the Demon to make its move. Seeing this new found determination, the Demon suddenly looks less secure in its position, and circles Chris cautiously, waving the axe but not trying to hit him. Chris, his eyes still locked with the Demon, takes a step forward and shouts, a sort of war cry. The Demon backs away, suddenly looking as scared as Chris was a few moments ago.
ON DEVIL
He nods to himself and grins - Chris has the answer.
ON CHRIS
Now he senses he knows what to do.
CHRIS
You know one thing I really
hate?
The Demon, drooling in its highly strung state, garbles something unintelligible at him.
CHRIS
Bullies. People who fight the
weak and try to pass themselves
off as the strong. Now I feel
like one of the strong. Hah!
He charges the Demon, which, faced with a threat to its key weapon, namely fear, turns tail and runs back out of the room. Chris laughs and sinks to the floor, exhausted. The Stranger and Booth run over to congratulate him. The Devil, clapping, steps over.
DEVIL
And what comes from the
heart?
CHRIS
Courage.
DEVIL
Nice work my boy. You may
have a chance here after all.
Next up, the head. Follow me.
The Devil gets up and leaves the room through the open portcullis. Chris is helped up by Booth and the Stranger before he follows too.
INT. PARTY - OUTSIDE UPSTAIRS BEDROOM. NIGHT.
We see the door open and Lucas slip out, adjusting his crooked bowtie before walking away. As the door slowly swings closed, we can see the girl he was with earlier slumped dead in the chair, an ugly slash mark across her neck and blood covering the front of her dress. The door swings closed and blocks her from our view.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - CHALLENGE ROOM #2.
The group enters. The room is similar to the previous one, except there is a door at the far end instead of the portcullis. The Devil stands by the door, then turns to face the room. Chris and the others wait expectantly.
DEVIL
Now, the test of the head.
He waves his hands, and a pentagram materialises in the centre of the room, on the floor. Its edges glow in sync with the Devil's arm movements, and as he focuses an altar rises up with two books on it. Both are open. Two imps float down, and hold a pot which they position over the books. We cannot see what is inside, but the steam rising off it suggests it is hot and very nasty. A tiny droplet of red liquid spills from its edge, hits the floor and melts straight through it in seconds. Chris and the Stranger exchange looks and gulp loudly.
CHRIS
Alright, what do I have to do?
DEVIL
Read from the books.
CHRIS
Read? Is that it?
DEVIL
You must read both books
at once, and speak the
incantations on the pages. If
you succeed, the pot will not
fall on you. Simple.
CHRIS
(waiting for the catch)
Simple, right.
Chris walks up to the altar and looks at the books. One is in English. The other is in some kind of arcane script, which Chris cannot decipher. He squints at it for a few seconds, then shakes his head and looks up to the Devil.
CHRIS
I can't read the second
one.
DEVIL
This is a test of the head,
Chris. Use yours. Oh, and
you have thirty seconds to
read both passages.
CHRIS
From when?
DEVIL
(looks at his watch)
From... now.
Chris, panicked, looks back down at the books. He makes a few attempts to read the arcane book, but cannot. Then, he looks up. We can almost see the lightbulb flick on over his head. He turns to the Stranger and Booth.
CHRIS
Help me read the other one.
You two live here, it must be
a language you know.
STRANGER
Now wait a second, what if..
BOOTH
Alright.
She drags the Stranger over to the altar. Chris counts down from three, then they begin reading - Chris reads the English book, Booth and the Stranger read from the arcane one. Booth seems to know it a little better than the Stranger. The imps hovering overhead look down, wicked looks on their faces as they prepare to drop the contents of the pot onto the trio, but at the last moment, they suddenly look at one another, and pop out of sight along with the pot in a little puff of yellow smoke. Chris sighs with relief and slams his book closed.
CHRIS
Looks like two heads really
are better than one.
DEVIL
Well done again. I thought that
one up, you know - even the 'two
heads better than one' element.
STRANGER
I think I'm starting to see the
logic at work here.
DEVIL
Ready for the last test?
CHRIS
Absolutely.
DEVIL
Then follow me.
He opens the door and motions for Chris to go through. Booth and the Stranger make to follow, when the Devil stops them both.
DEVIL
I'm afraid he must face this one
alone.
STRANGER
(as the door closes)
Good luck, Chris!
BOOTH
Will he be okay?
STRANGER
I'd love to say yes, but I'm
afraid I have absolutely no
idea.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - CHALLENGE ROOM #3.
The room is completely dark. Chris walks in, and then the Devil closes the door behind him. Chris looks round, but he is alone. A spotlight comes on in the centre of the room, and Chris walks into it, shielding his eyes as he looks upwards. A voice from above talks to him.
VOICE
Christopher. This is the test of
the body. It will not be easy.
Are you ready?
CHRIS
I'm ready.
VOICE
Then let it begin.
The light gets brighter, then flares up. Chris suddenly jerks in pain, as though he has just been punched. Another flash of the light, and he jerks again. A multitude of whispering voices suddenly start up.
WHISPERING VOICES
You'll never make it... give
up now... you can't beat us...
you can't save her... she only
wants him now...
The voices talk continuously. Chris covers his ears as they get louder. As he looks round, the walls of the room suddenly come to life, all displaying large moving images of Lucas and Rachel in bed together. The images run in a loop, and the sounds of the two of them together join in with the voices.
WHISPERING VOICES
Look at her... she wants him...
she wants him and not you...
Chris puts his hand before his nose as though an evil smell is wafting into the room.
WHISPERING VOICES
Can you smell them? Can you
smell what their union was like?
Can you smell them?
CHRIS
Yes, yes I can! Yes I fucking
can smell them together!
WHISPERING VOICES
What does it taste like? The
taste of their union? Her sweat,
his sweat, all of it?
Chris begins to spit as though something nasty is in his mouth.
CHRIS
It tastes like shit! I can
taste it, alright? I can taste
it!
Everything stops and goes quiet. The light fades, the voices stop, and the smells, tastes and noises stop as well. Chris removes his hands from his head and looks around. Slowly, a few feet before him, a bed fades into view. Rachel and Lucas are naked on top of it, still having sex. The noise they make is the only sound in the room until the voices start up again.
WHISPERING VOICES
How does it feel?
CHRIS
What? You know how it
feels?
WHISPERING VOICES
How does it feel?
CHRIS
I don't understand...
WHISPERING VOICES
How does it feel?
Chris hangs his head while the vision of Lucas and Rachel goes on before him. He is in tears now, overwhelmed by what he has just had to experience. Then, he understands what he must do.
CHRIS
I've seen them, heard them,
tasted them and smelt them.
One thing left.
Unsteady, he walks right up to the vision. The two on the bed do not see him - they are too busy with each other. Chris reaches a hand out towards Rachel very slowly, the tears still streaming down his face. At last, he touches her. At once, the vision fades away. The spotlight reappears. Chris walks underneath it and looks upwards as before.
VOICE
Congratulations. You have
proved yourself.
CHRIS
Because I went through it
again?
VOICE
Your body is strong enough
for whatever the demon can
use against you.
CHRIS
What can I expect?
VOICE
We cannot say for sure.
But by overcoming your
emotions when faced with
what you feared the most, you
are as prepared as you can be.
CHRIS
Looks like I should thank
you.
VOICE
Here.
Something floats down from the light. Chris reaches up to it and grabs it - it is a handkerchief.
VOICE
Do not let your friends see
your pain. Save your pain and
use it against the demon.
Chris laughs and dries his eyes.
CHRIS
You know, for a disembodied
voice that administers severe
hallucinatory torture, you're
all heart in the end.
VOICE
(beat)
Now go.
The door swings open and the light fades. Chris walks out the door.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - CHALLENGE ROOM #2.
The others wait as Chris walks out. The Stranger looks relieved when he sees Chris is okay. Booth slinks up to him and hugs him.
CHRIS
I -
BOOTH
(places a finger to his lips to shush him)
Ssh. We don't need to
know. All that matters is
you're ready to go fight.
STRANGER
(to Devil)
So what happens now?
DEVIL
As per the arrangement, Chris
is sent back to Earth. He has
one day to find Grazazel, defeat
him and bring him home.
CHRIS
Wait a minute - one day??
Is that all I get? He could be
anywhere!
DEVIL
Yes, that can be a problem.
I suggest you start -
VOICES (O.S.)
We can help you find him.
The group turn in unison and look off screen.
ANGLE ON the two Men. They are stood at the entrance to the Challenge Room, smiling at Chris.
DEVIL
Oh, you two. And just how
did you manage to get in
here, exactly?
FIRST MAN
We know many ways.
SECOND MAN
Secret ways.
FIRST MAN
Very secret ways.
DEVIL
(knowing they could go on for a while)
Yes, yes, never mind. How
can you help? I seem to
remember you very publicly
going over to another side
a while back.
FIRST MAN
The one you call Lucas
displeases us.
CHRIS
Why?
SECOND MAN
He is in favour with our
master, while we are not.
STRANGER
You're jealous? What does he
do, steal all your women?
The two Men exchange a look. Their smiles fade for a moment before they turn back to the group.
FIRST MAN
Yes.
STRANGER
Fair enough...
SECOND MAN
We know where he is. We
are his aides.
CHRIS
Take me to him.
FIRST MAN
We cannot do that.
SECOND MAN
We would be discovered.
CHRIS
What then?
FIRST MAN
Meet us on the surface.
SECOND MAN
We will lead you to him.
CHRIS
What do you get out of this?
FIRST MAN
We will be favoured again.
SECOND MAN
No longer someone's aide.
CHRIS
I'm in. Where do we meet?
FIRST MAN
Just go to the surface. We
will find you.
The two Men turn and walk out. They are gone for a beat when Wilton buzzes back in and lands on Chris's outstretched hand.
CHRIS
What's the news?
WILTON
Progress, progress! The suits
back at the admin block say if
you bring Grazazel back, you can
leave and take Rachel with you.
CHRIS
Won't there be the slight issue
of her still being dead?
WILTON
Oh, there are plenty of ways
round that, trust me.
CHRIS
(pauses for a moment)
Well, good..
WILTON
Thing is...
STRANGER
Why do I not like the sound
of that?
WILTON
You will need to sign before
you're allowed to go.
CHRIS
Sign what?
DEVIL
Your soul, remember?
CHRIS
Ah...
STRANGER
Hey, don't sound so upset!
Things aren't so bad down
here, are they?
CHRIS
I think I like my life to be
more of a surprise.
DEVIL
We'll deal with this later.
Come with me, all of you.
The Devil strides out of the room, followed by the others.
INT. HELL CITY - THE TOWER - DEVIL'S STUDY.
Seated in plush leather chairs in the study as before, the Devil is sat behind his desk scribbling on a roll of parchment. Chris sits in front of the desk, while Booth and the Stranger sit on a sofa in the b.g. looking around at the pictures on the wall. The Devil fills out a form and holds it out for Chris to read. He looks it over, then leans back heavily in his chair. This is a big decision.
DEVIL
Problem?
CHRIS
I can't help feeling like
Faust at the moment.
DEVIL
Trust me, you're nothing
like he was. I've never heard
one man complain so much!
Being torn asunder by the boys
sent to fetch him was the only
thing to shut him up for a bit!
CHRIS
I mean, the signing...
DEVIL
Oh, yes, right. Sorry. Sore
nerve with that one.
CHRIS
And if I do sign this, Rachel
and I can go free?
DEVIL
Absolutely. When you eventually
die, which I have no plans on
making happen any sooner
than it should, you'll return to
us down here. Rachel is free to
do what she wants. What we do
about the fact that she died,
well, leave that with me.
CHRIS
You mean, after all this, when
we die I could still never see
her again?
DEVIL
We are all masters of our
own fates, Mr. Clark. What
Rachel does is up to her.
Chris looks thoughtfully at the contract for a few moments, then takes a deep breath and signs it. The Devil smiles, nods and takes it back, rolling it up and putting it in a chute by his desk, where it whooshes out of sight.
DEVIL
That will stay in the records
department. Saves you having
to go through the admin
process later on.
CHRIS
I need a drink.
STRANGER
Excellent idea! They do a
Cannibal Holocaust here
that is to die for...
CHRIS
Let's get your demon
back.
The Devil nods solemnly.
DEVIL
Thank you. I admire your
conviction in all this.
CHRIS
Someone once said to me,
if something's worth fighting
about, it's worth fighting for.
(looks over to Stranger)
Now I know what he meant.
The Stranger swells with pride at this compliment. Booth grins.
BOOTH
We get to come along
too.
STRANGER
Yeah. You may need our
help.
CHRIS
Glad of it. Wilton?
Wilton buzzes over and lands on the Devil's desk.
WILTON
Yup.
CHRIS
Keep an eye on Rachel
for me. Tell her not to
worry.
WILTON
On my way.
He buzzes away. Chris stands, turns to Booth and the Stranger, who also stand.
CHRIS
Let's catch us a demon.
EXT. HELL CITY - TUNNEL ENTRANCE.
We look at the tunnel entrance to Hell City. Chris's car is sat facing it. The atmosphere invokes memories of the closing scenes of Back To The Future. Chris gets into his car, which is still charred from his encounter with the fireball on the way in. The Stranger rides shotgun, with Booth in the back. The Devil leans in the driver's window to talk to Chris. A small crowd of humans and demons has gathered to watch.
DEVIL
Straight up and out. The
fireball system is off.
CHRIS
Good. I don't need a suntan.
DEVIL
That's just to stop too many
people coming in or getting
out. You'll sail straight out
this time.
CHRIS
(starts the engine)
One last thing.
DEVIL
Yes?
CHRIS
How do I beat a demon?
DEVIL
Knock him out any way
you can. In his physical body
he's vulnerable. I'll send some
people up to do the rest once
you floor him.
CHRIS
Got it. Back in a flash.
The car rolls forward. The Devil stands and lights another cigar as he watches them go. Chris revs the engine as he gets to the tunnel entrance. Then, in a flash of showmanship, he smokes the rear tires before blasting up the tunnel and out of view, to appreciative cheers from the crowd.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR.
Chris turns to the Stranger.
CHRIS
Music?
STRANGER
Loud. Fast. Heavy.
CHRIS
Check.
He slams in a tape and cranks the volume up. "Jesus Built My Hot Rod" by Ministry kicks in.
EXT. THE TUNNEL - NIGHT.
To the music, we see Chris's car speed up the tunnel.
EXT. THE TUNNEL - ENTRANCE. NIGHT.
Chris's car roars out the entrance, taking off slightly due to the ramp at the entrance and the speed he hits it at. The underbelly of the car sparks as it hits the road again. The two Men are waiting a little way away, so Chris slows up and cruises over to them.
EXT. OUTSIDE CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Still wearing the same Death's Head grins, the two Men shuffle over. Chris winds the window down and stops the tape.
CHRIS
Where to?
FIRST MAN
He is back where you knew
him to live.
SECOND MAN
But he will move soon.
FIRST MAN
Our master wants him away to
another city before he is
discovered.
SECOND MAN
There is not much time.
CHRIS
No problem.
(turns to Booth and the Stranger)
Hang on.
Chris switches the tape back on and screeches away towards Lucas's house. The two Men watch him go.
FIRST MAN
What if he fails?
SECOND MAN
He is strong. He will not fail.
FIRST MAN
Let us hope so.
SECOND MAN
Perhaps we can make sure.
They slink off camera.
CUT TO:
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - SHRINE. NIGHT.
As before. Lucas has the shrine and incense set up. As he kneels and closes his eyes, the walls dissolve as before and he is back in the pit. The voice speaks to him.
VOICE
What do you ask of me,
my servant?
LUCAS
How was the soul I gave you,
my lord?
VOICE
(as a young girl's screaming is heard O.S.)
Good. She was young... so
innocent and tender. She will
feed me well.
LUCAS
I feel I have done all I
can here.
VOICE
Events are in place. You will
be moving on in the
morning.
LUCAS
What of the man who is
trying to stop me?
VOICE
The one called Chris will
not be a problem if you
simply fight him. I do not
want any complications.
LUCAS
Understood, my lord.
VOICE
Go now, prepare to move
on to a new place to serve
me anew.
The walls dissolve back into the shrine. Lucas opens his eyes and gets up. There is a knock at his door.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Lucas goes to the door and opens it. It is the two Men.
LUCAS
Oh, it's you two. What is it?
It's late.
FIRST MAN
We merely come to help
you arrange your move.
SECOND MAN
Much to do, little time.
LUCAS
Alright, come in.
The Men exchange a look and step inside.
EXT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
The car races along a deserted road. It shoots past a lay-by where a police car is hidden.
INT. POLICE CAR. NIGHT.
The lone officer inside has his speed trap camera set-up pointing out the windscreen. It registers Chris's car as it flies past at 78 m.p.h. The officer starts his engine up and pulls out, switching on his siren.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT
Chris looks in his mirror and sees the police car on his tail.
CHRIS
Oh, shit. That's all we need.
BOOTH
(looks out the window, then thinks for a beat)
Pull over.
CHRIS
What?
BOOTH
Pull over. I can get us out of
this. Trust me.
CHRIS
I hope so.
EXT. ROAD WITH CARS. NIGHT.
Chris's car indicates and starts to pull over. The police car does the same.
INT. POLICE CAR. NIGHT.
The officer calls headquarters on his radio.
OFFICER
This is P.C. Dunn, calling in
a speeding vehicle.
RADIO
Roger, Officer Dunn. Slow
night, Ed?
OFFICER
You'd better believe it. I'm
going to get a strange sense
of satisfaction out of this!
RADIO
Licence?
OFFICER
Er... Tango 306, Peter
Charlie Bravo.
RADIO
T306, PCB, confirmed.
INT. POLICE HEADQUARTERS. NIGHT.
We see the female radio operator before her computer console. It is late in the typically-furnished office, and there are only two other operators with her. She types the registration into her console.
C U - COMPUTER SCREEN
The warrant for Chris's arrest suddenly flashes up, and a reference to his suspicion of murder.
ON SCENE
The operator suddenly looks worried. She calls back into her radio.
RADIO OPERATOR
Officer Dunn, please respond.
INT. POLICE CAR. NIGHT.
The two cars are just coming to a stop.
OFFICER
Copy that, over.
RADIO
There is a warrant out for
the arrest of the owner of
this car, suspect believed
to be involved with a recent
murder. Proceed with caution.
OFFICER
(draws and loads his gun)
Understood.
He gets out.
INT. CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
Through the rear window, we can see the officer coming over.
CHRIS
Okay, Booth, what's the plan?
BOOTH
Just trust me. I used this
trick a few times, here and
down there.
The officer stops a few feet away,. his gun ready.
OFFICER (O.S.)
Step out of the car, please
everyone!
Chris rolls his eyes and steps out.
EXT. OUTSIDE CHRIS'S CAR. NIGHT.
The trio step out. The officer has his gun trained on them, so they reflexively raise their hands.
CHRIS
I take it there's some kind
of problem, officer...
OFFICER
Turn to face the vehicle,
all of you. Hands at your
backs, legs apart.
They turn and do as he asks. The officer moves across to handcuff Chris, but as he approaches, Booth begins humming a lullaby melody under her breath. The officer starts to move more slowly, as though the humming is affecting him. Chris and the Stranger exchange puzzled looks. Booth turns slowly to face the officer, still humming under her breath. The officer seems entranced by Booth's voice as she moves closer. Singing softly under her breath, she stares deep into his eyes and slowly moves her hands up to hold either side of his face. Still singing and staring, she holds the officer as his eyes flutter closed and he drops gently to the floor. Chris and the Stranger watch in amazement as Booth lays the officer down and stops singing.
STRANGER
Please, please, do that to
me later.
BOOTH
Let's sort this out first.
STRANGER
Right, yes, yes, okay.
CHRIS
Let's go.
(to Booth)
Thanks. I owe you one.
BOOTH
Come back and sing one day,
alright?
CHRIS
Deal.
They jump back into the car and race off. STAY ON the sleeping officer as his radio crackles, trying to get through to him.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
Lucas is knocking the furniture over, smashing picture frames, breaking plant pots and the like. The two Men are doing similarly destructive things in the background.
LUCAS
Make it look like there
was a big struggle. That
should help throw the police
off until I can get away.
FIRST MAN
(pushes a grandfather clock over)
Depend on us.
SECOND MAN
(smashes the TV)
Breaking things is what we
do well.
EXT. OUTSIDE LUCAS'S HOUSE. NIGHT.
Chris's car pulls up slowly. The music and headlights are off. Looking over to the house, we can just make out Lucas and the two Men trashing the living room.
CHRIS
I think I see his plan on
how to disappear.
STRANGER
Police find the mess and a
body, assume its his and
write it off as bungled
burglary.
BOOTH
Is this a set-up?
CHRIS
I'm starting to think so. Let's
use the element of surprise
instead.
They get out of the car.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
As before, with Lucas and the two Men smashing the place up. The doorbell rings. They all stop dead. Lucas turns to the Men.
LUCAS
Expecting anyone?
FIRST MAN
Not us.
SECOND MAN
We expect no-one.
LUCAS
Wait here.
He goes out. As he leaves, the two Men exchange glances and draw long, curved knives. The knives start to hiss and steam in the open air.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Lucas carefully opens the door. Booth is stood there, shivering, looking like she's been in a car accident.
BOOTH
Hello, I'm... I'm sorry to
bother you so late...
LUCAS
Not at all. What's wrong?
BOOTH
I was mugged...yours was the
only house with lights on...
LUCAS
It's okay. You'll be safe here.
Lucas escorts her in and pushes the front door closed. Before she can see, he nudges the door to the living room closed. They walk into the kitchen.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - KITCHEN. NIGHT.
Booth sits on a chair next to the central work surface in the kitchen, which is lined on all sides by large cupboards. A perfect, executive efficient kitchen. Lucas brings her a cup of coffee and wraps a blanket round her shoulders. She takes both, shivering for added effect. Lucas eyes up his next victim greedily as he makes himself a drink.
BOOTH
They just jumped me round the
corner, took my wallet, car keys,
everything. I ran away. Yours
was the only house with lights,
so I headed for it.
LUCAS
I'll call the police in a moment.
Is the coffee alright?
BOOTH
(sips)
Fine.
As Lucas talks, we can see over his shoulder out into the garden. Booth keeps glancing up to look out there.
LUCAS
So what is a nice young
girl like you doing getting
mugged round here? This
used to be a nice, safe place
to live.
BOOTH
Beats me. Maybe they liked
my coat or something.
BOOTH'S P.O.V.
Chris and the Stranger dart past outside the window. Booth sees but tries not to register it, going back to her coffee.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.
The Stranger jimmies the window open, and he slides it up carefully so that the two can get in. As Chris climbs through, it starts to slip, and will surely fall with a crash until:
C U - HAND
As a hand shoots out to catch the window. Following the arm to its owner, we
see that the Second Man has caught it. He smiles.
CHRIS
Thanks.
STRANGER
What's going on?
FIRST MAN
We are covering our tracks,
as you would say.
SECOND MAN
Helping him in his plans.
CHRIS
(off their knives)
Hope those aren't meant for
anything else, boys.
FIRST MAN
We have no quarrel with
you.
SECOND MAN
We want what is ours, you
want what is yours. That is
all.
CHRIS
Good. The plan is...
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - KITCHEN. NIGHT
Lucas watches Booth sip her coffee, eyeing her up and down. He moves to get a little closer, when the two Men burst in.
FIRST MAN
Intruders!
SECOND MAN
Attackers!
FIRST MAN
We are discovered!
LUCAS
Calm down, calm down! What
is the matter?
FIRST MAN
Men are here.
SECOND MAN
Enemy men.
LUCAS
Where?
FIRST MAN
We heard them enter upstairs.
LUCAS
(to Second Man)
Watch the girl.
(to First Man)
Come with me.
Lucas and the First Man leave. The Second Man smiles at Booth, who grins back.
BOOTH
Everything okay?
SECOND MAN
There are no problems.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - STAIRS. NIGHT.
Lucas, fetching a sword from its hanging on the wall, creeps up the staircase, followed by the First Man.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - FIRST FLOOR LANDING. NIGHT.
They get to the top floor. Lucas creeps towards the bedroom. The First Man raises his dagger to stab him in the back, but in a blur Lucas spins and runs the Man through with his sword.
LUCAS
Maybe it's because I've been
around longer than you, or
because you're not as smart as
me, but I can still smell a trap
like that a mile away.
The First Man wears a shocked expression as he crumples to the floor. Lucas looks around, ready for the next attack, as the Stranger bursts out of a doorway next to him, grappling Lucas to the ground. They fight. Booth and the Second Man come running up the stairs. Chris walks over as the Stranger holds Lucas to the floor. Chris squats down close to Lucas's head as he struggles.
CHRIS
Hello again, Lucas.
LUCAS
Same to you.
CHRIS
We have a lot to talk
about.
LUCAS
Do we?
CHRIS
Of course we do! The small
matter of you killing my
girlfriend and sending her
to Hell, while you carry on
your little demon-worshipping
killing spree in my town.
LUCAS
Not just this town.
STRANGER
Oh, we know all about
you, Lucas. Or should I
say, Grazazel.
Lucas looks troubled. He knows they're onto him now, especially if they know his true name. But he has a few tricks left.
LUCAS
You ever seen a demon,
Chris?
CHRIS
I've spent the past two days
in Hell, shithead, what do
you think?
LUCAS
No, I mean, a real demon.
He starts to shudder and convulse. Booth backs away, throwing a warning glance to Chris, who starts to back away too. The Stranger tries vainly to keep Lucas pinned down, but there is a loud crash and he is thrown off, into Chris. The two of them fall. The whole landing starts to shake, and we can see black storm clouds gathering at high speed through the windows. The glass in the windows starts to crack, and the lights all over the house start to pop and shower hot glass everywhere. Lucas, stands, still convulsing, as crackles of energy start to lance out from him, burning holes in the walls and doors. Chris and the others scramble for cover.
CHRIS
(shouting over the noise)
Now what??
STRANGER
Looks like he's going to
show us what he really
looks like!
CHRIS
That does not sound
good!
A howling wind kicks up, knocking everyone off their feet. As they watch, Lucas skin starts to boil and bubble, before peeling away in chunks to reveal black, spiky demon skin underneath. His head is the last to go, distorting and tearing as a head like a dragon's forces its way out. A huge pair of black wings unfold from Grazazel's back, and he raises his head to the sky with an unearthly howl.
CHRIS
Oh, shit!
Revealed, Grazazel stands before them. The wind and rumbling still goes on all around. Grazazel stands at nine feet tall, with black armoured skin, long claws on his hands and a dragon-like head full of dripping, razor-sharp teeth. His wings flap a few times as he looks down on Chris and the Stranger. He stamps his foot once on the floor. The landing begins to buckle. Chris and the Stranger look at each other before the floor gives way and they are all dumped into the hallway.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Chris, the Stranger, Booth and the Second Man fall, along with a big chunk of the landing floor above, heavily into the centre of the hallway. Grazazel flaps his wings as he lowers himself slowly into the middle of the room. Chris and the others scramble to their feet, diving for cover as Grazazel breathes fire at the group, blasting the surviving furniture to pieces and tearing ragged scorch marks along the walls. Chris and the Stranger hide behind the staircase as Grazazel stomps around.
CHRIS
Now what! He said to just
knock it out - how do we
do that??
STRANGER
Lacking a bazooka, I have
no idea.
CHRIS
(seeing something O.S.)
Oh no... Booth!
They look over the corner of the staircase into the centre of the room. Booth is stood to one side of Grazazel, singing softly and swaying from side to side. She is trying to entrance Grazazel, and it seems to be working. The wind is sending Booth's hair flowing out all around her, adding to the hypnotic effect as she sways. Grazazel goes quiet as he watches her, his ragged breathing slowing down as his head starts to move in time with her movements. They see the Second Man creeping up in the blind spot of Grazazel, readying his dagger. He lunges and stabs the demon in the leg. Grazazel howls in pain and lashes out, striking Booth and slamming her heavily into the far wall. The Stranger leaps after her.
STRANGER
Booth!
Grazazel turns back to the Second Man, who is trying to pull his dagger from the demon's leg. Grazazel roars at the Man before grabbing his head in one hand, and his body in the other, and with a sickening crunch pulling the two apart. The diversion over, he spins to face Chris. Grazazel's face twists into what is almost a smile as he roars and charges at Chris. Chris dives out of the way, and runs as blasts of fire track him around the room. The Stranger drags the unconscious Booth out of the way, looking round for a diversion. He grabs a nearby chunk of the landing floor and hurls it at Grazazel, catching the demon on the side of his head. Grazazel roars and turns to face the Stranger. Chris races up the staircase, an idea forming.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - FIRST FLOOR LANDING. NIGHT.
Through the hole below, we can see Grazazel stalking over to the Stranger. Looking around, Chris sees the body of the First Man is still up here, the curved knife in his hand. Chris grabs it, but it is so cold he cries in pain and drops it.
STRANGER (O.S. BELOW)
Chris! Any help would be a
good thing!
Grazazel roars again, as Chris tears off a few strips of the First Man's clothes to wrap round his hand. He takes the knife and looks down the hole.
CHRIS'S P.O.V.
We can see Grazazel has his back to us, approaching the Stranger who is trying to fend off the demon by lobbing chunks of masonry at him.
ON SCENE
Chris looks back up. What can he do? Thinking fast, he lowers himself through the gaping hole in the floor. Grazazel is beneath him.
INT. LUCAS'S HOUSE - HALLWAY. NIGHT.
Chris swings as best he can and launches himself at Grazazel's back, landing squarely between the wings and throwing an arm round the demon's neck for support. Grazazel screams and thrashes from side to side, flapping his wings to try and lose Chris. Hanging on for dear life, Chris pulls himself up until he can see over the demon's shoulder. The Stranger is still throwing rocks, but one of Grazazel's claws still lashes the side of Chris's face.
CHRIS
This is for Rachel!
With one last effort, he raises the dagger and plunges it into Grazazel's chest, right up to the hilt. The demon howls and spins round, throwing Chris off and into the wall.
C U - KNIFE IN CHEST
The knife starts to glow and smoke heavily as it fulfils its purpose.
ON GRAZAZEL
Thrashing more violently, his skin starts to bulge as though he is exploding from within. Smoke bellows out of the demon's mouth, and he begins to cough great mouthfuls of black bile as the knife takes effect. With one final scream, he collapses to the floor and lies still, the smoking slowly dying down.
C U - GRAZAZEL'S EYES
The light behind the demon's eyes dies out. He is dead.
ON SCENE
Booth, the Stranger and the badly hurt Chris pick themselves up and stagger over to the demon. Booth is winded but otherwise okay. Chris limps painfully over.
CHRIS
Did we get it?
STRANGER
That is one dead demon.
Good work.
Chris turns to smile, but they all leap back with a start as the demon's arm flops down onto the floor. A convulsive movement, nothing more.
BOOTH
Bastard.
(spits at the body)
STRANGER
Language, darling!
CHRIS
What happens now?
STRANGER
Well, you pass out from
blood loss unless we get you
some help, I get us all a beer
and we wait for the bosses
men to get here and clean up.
CHRIS
(sinks to the floor)
Good plan.
STRANGER
(joins him)
As always.
They watch the body for a beat, before a low humming noise is heard. A black shadow starts to form on one wall, and from it step the Devil and four other demons. The demons start to gather up Grazazel, while the Devil walks over to the trio on the floor.
DEVIL
Thank you. Every bit helps.
CHRIS
No problem.
DEVIL
Are any of you hurt badly?
CHRIS
Depends. Is this what they
mean by sympathy from the
devil?
BOOTH
It's sympathy for the devil.
DEVIL
I think Chris was right this
time. Come on.
He helps them up. They follow the Devil and his demons through the shadow on the wall, which closes behind them.
EXT. LUCAS'S HOUSE. NIGHT.
With an anguished groan, the house gives up and collapses in on itself into a pile of rubble.
EXT. HELL CITY - MAIN SQUARE.
A crowd of heckling demons and humans have gathered to watch the show - Grazazel, dead on Earth but alive again in Hell, is shackled and standing on top of a wooden platform in the centre of the square, surrounded by heavily armed demons. The Devil, holding a roll of parchment, walks up onto the stage, followed by Chris, Rachel and the others, bandaged to show their injuries. He raises his hands for silence. Grazazel glares at them all.
DEVIL
Good evening. It's been quite
a night, but as you can see, I
am at last pleased to announce
the recapture of the rogue
demon Grazazel!
The crowd cheers. Grazazel flinches as things are thrown at him.
DEVIL
And, like his other fellow
traitors to this city and its
future, he will be tortured
the old-fashioned way, at
my personal expense, for a
very long time!
More cheers. Rachel whispers to Chris.
ANGLE ON RACHEL AND CHRIS
They talk as the Devil continues his speech.
RACHEL
I'm glad this is over.
CHRIS
This is like the series of
Dallas after Bobby Ewing
was shot.
RACHEL
Amen to that.
STRANGER
Glad to be going home?
For a while, anyway.
CHRIS
Hey, I've got some years left
in me yet!
STRANGER
That's what they all say.
(grins)
DEVIL
(to them)
And we have the bravery of
this man, Chris Clark, to thank
for bringing Grazazel home to
face the music.
The Devil brings Chris to the front of the stage. He waves; more cheers. The Devil signals for Grazazel to be led away, and he is booed and pelted by stones as he is led off. The Devil turns to Chris, holding up the roll of parchment.
DEVIL
Recognise this?
CHRIS
Yep, that's my contract
with you.
DEVIL
Well, I don't normally do
this, but in light of what you
did for me..
(he rips it up)
... I leave the choice of your
future up to you. Now don't
go telling everyone I did that,
else I'll get a reputation as a
soft touch! Then we'll have all
sorts down here...
RACHEL
What about me? I mean, I'm
suffering from a slight case
of death at the moment, what
happens when we get back up there?
DEVIL
Don't worry, I'm getting to that..
They laugh. The Devil chomps down on a big cigar and leads the group away. We sweep over to Grazazel, who looks over to see Chris. He snarls with barely contained rage. He's planning something.
EXT. HELL CITY - ENTRANCE TO THE TUNNEL.
The Devil walks Chris and Rachel over to the tunnel entrance. A gleaming, Harley-Davidson from Hell bike is waiting there. Chris looks from it to the Devil and back again.
CHRIS
What's this?
DEVIL
A parting gift. Not meant to
influence your future decision
in any way, of course...
The Stranger coughs behind him. Chris turns to see the Stranger whistling innocently, Booth in his arms. Booth grins and shakes her head, points up to the Stranger. Chris smiles and nods his understanding. He walks over to the bike, turns it on and revs it a few times.
CHRIS
I could have some serious
Easy Rider moments with this
thing...
RACHEL
Let's go.
CHRIS
What day will it be when
we get back?
DEVIL
I've arranged things with him
upstairs. It'll be the evening of
the party. You two haven't shown
up yet. And no-one knows where
Lucas went, nor do they care.
CHRIS
Thanks.
DEVIL
All part of the business.
CHRIS
(as he and Rachel climb onto the bike)
I trust we have no fireballs
to deal with?
DEVIL
Of course not. See you soon,
I hope!
CHRIS
(shakes the Devil's hand)
We'll see.
STRANGER
Bye!
Chris and Rachel wave to them as Chris rides the bike up and into the Tunnel. STAY ON the Stranger as Wilton buzzes in and lands.
WILTON
I got off my date early.
What did I miss?
STRANGER
He got the girl, killed
the baddies...
WILTON
... and saved the entire planet.
I get the idea. Think he'll
be back?
STRANGER
One way or another. I
can always go pay him
another visit, right?
Chris rides out of view.
EXT. HELL CITY - DETENTION CENTRE.
Four demon guards are trying to force Grazazel into the main door of the detention centre, when with a roar he spins round, surprising them and knocking them to the ground. A blast of fire breath all around gets them out of the way, before he swoops off to fly after Chris.
EXT. HELL CITY - MAIN SQUARE.
The crowd register their shock as Grazazel flies overhead.
EXT. HELL CITY - ENTRANCE TO THE TUNNEL.
The Devil looks up in concern as Grazazel swoops down.
DEVIL
(to a demon next to him)
Close the tunnel.
The demon runs over to the control booth next to the tunnel entrance, and starts a set of firewall barriers lowering over the entrance. The Devil watches as Grazazel swoops down onto the booth, tears the screaming demon out and tries to raise the barriers. He stops. He looks down slowly to see a silver sword blade protruding from his chest. He stares stupidly at the wound and slides forward, off the blade. We pull back to see the Devil, calmly holding a cigar in one had, his sword in the other.
DEVIL
Not in my town.
CLOSE ON GRAZAZEL
As he slides forward, smearing black blood over the booth controls. Just before he slides to the floor, he manages to hit a button marked: "Fire Control." Then he hits the deck.
INT. THE TUNNEL.
Chris and Rachel speed along on the motorbike. Chris looks very happy to be on his way back out at last. "Driver Down" by Nine Inch Nails plays. Rachel hears something behind them. She turns.
RACHEL'S P.O.V.
The fireball, in all its terrifying, screaming glory, tears round the corner of the Tunnel after them! The song reaches the first crashing guitar riff.
ON CHRIS AND RACHEL
She screams and turns his head round to see it approaching.
RACHEL
What the fuck is that?
CHRIS
That shouldn't be there!
Someone must have set it
off... Lucas!
RACHEL
Never mind who, just get
away from it!
CHRIS
Hang on!
They race up the tunnel. The fireball gets closer and closer - they have a head start, but is it enough? The fireball keeps gaining despite the engine of the bike howling as it is pushed to its limits. Rachel presses herself close to Chris as the heat from it starts to effect them both. Little wisps of flame start to spit out past the bike, some catching on Rachel and Chris's clothes. She frantically swats them out.
RACHEL
Hurry!!
The fireball is right on them now, but ahead we can see the exit. It's going to be close. Chris leans right down and tries to squeeze some extra power out of the bike as the thundering noise of the fireball drowns out the bike's engine. Rachel starts to scream as she is nearly singed by it, when:
EXT. OUTSIDE THE TUNNEL. NIGHT.
The bike screams out onto the late night motorway like a bat out of Hell, smoke pouring from its overworked engine. Chris brakes, skidding the bike to a halt. The music, by now in the piano only outro, fades out. They both gasp for breath, covered in sweat, as they look back over their shoulder.
THEIR P.O.V. - THE TUNNEL ENTRANCE
The entrance fades out before their very eyes, as if it was never there.
ON RACHEL AND CHRIS
RACHEL
(sarcastic)
Nice place, really!
CHRIS
Oh, it's not so bad once
you get to know it.
RACHEL
Whatever happens, promise
me we won't end up there
for a while, okay?
CHRIS
(grins)
Whatever you say.
Chris revs up the bike and drives away from us towards the city lights in the distance. "Bat Out Of Hell" by Meatloaf plays over the end credits, which roll up as Chris and Rachel disappear into the distance.
FADE TO BLACK