Adora Bell - yeah... i might have the biggest thing for caeson of all my characters. i think it's "girl who loves badass" part of me. and matt's your favorite? yeah, he's the popular reviewer choice. and i'm glad the pranks aren't lame or anything. much love to you for reviewing-peace out.
Alexi - hmm, matt, huh? i agree with you though, he's definitely more sincere, and tristan is rather conscious of his looks. and your wish is granted, cinna and river are tentatively returned to peace. much love to you for reviewing!
Artic Husky - yeah, potty humor and sexual innuendos are great, but i try to lightly sprinkle them into the story. having a story overflowing with them usually gets old, unless they're super clever (which i am not). but yeah, i love the peta thing. i am so jealous of river. i've always wanted to do that. the bat? not so jealous. i hate bats. and it is very good to hear that you are undecided between the two leading men. i have a couple of reviewers that are very opinionated on that matter, and it is comforting to know that some people don't loathe one of the two.
cherrydrop105 - awesome, i'm so glad that you like it, and you are super amazing for coming back the next day to review...because i would probably be too lazy to do that for someone else. anyway, i share the inability to talk to guys thing. most people say i'm pretty clever, but around guys i'm either the babbling idiot or completely silent (which makes them think i'm prideful and bratty). and you join the faithful matt followers. and that scene when she blabs about the kissing thing was soo hard for me to write, partially because i wanted it to be serious but slightly funny, but mostly because i'm retarded and get way too involved with my characters and didn't want to do that to matt. and i hope you agree that river definitely stepped up the game with her last prank. much, much, much love to you for reviewing!
dn dn - hey, i'm so glad you like it! thanks so much for reviewing, and i hope the update was soon enough for you!
elisefey - first of all, you are super awesome for reviewing, and you are my latest review diva. and it's very comforting that river's tangents are funny, because that tends to be a character quirk that either works well or just really really sucks. and yeah...not *those* roman candles, though that would be a pretty sweet date. and -personal opinion here- i think almost all girls are at least partial to drummers. i mean, hey! they're drummers! oh, and by the way, your editing seriously helped me. i reread my chapters several times before posting and i almost always miss the mistakes that make me sound the stupidest. very quickly after receiving your reviews i backtracked through my work again and corrected my errors. you are definitely my hero. and secretly, i agree with you on the jude thing. i know that the votes tallied to mean that jude was least developed, but he was already fully developed from my point of view. he's very laidback and takes things in stride, and is never truly angry (not yet, at least). if you notice, i didn't really develop him more as the story went on, i just had him appear more often. hmm..okay..i continue on...oh yes, very good that bailey and nate are outrageous but not over the top. that was one part i was particularly worried about. and you so predicted the jude and cinna thing, so you get the reviewer award. and now you're caught up. as far as matt and tristan, naturally i can't give away anything, but your impressions are pretty accurate. it's still sort of the battle between the loyal kind-of loser and the really hott but conscious of being really hott guy.
Liz - and you are fucking awesome for reviewing, and i know that i love you. much love to you.
MANDY! - ew, ew, and EW! i don't like bats at all, and though a dead one is better than a live one, bats are just freaking and i would definitely be scarred too. and i'm glad you like tristan! personally...i think he's pretty hott. muchas gracias mi amor!
natalie - okay, you lost me on the pms thing, but i'm glad you like it! thanks for reviewing!
pixxidust - i'm glad you like it! thanks for reviewing!
right or ryn - yeah, i know. maybe i got a tad bit carried away on the cheese wiz thing, but it's totally my worst nightmare ever. and i used to threaten to do it to my little sister. maybe i was feeling slightly malicious by doing it to noah, but hey. oh well. and you're so right about guys doing those stupid things to impress each other. what really entertains me is when they think they're impressing girls with their dumbass stunts. and as for snoop doggy dogg...seriously, it might really be a ringtone. i'm like 90% sure it is one. and you're right, jude's been kicking river's ass in the prank department, but i hope you agree that in the latest chapter, river really stepped it up a notch. haha, you're so right about the "nice balls" thing. as i was writing it, i sat there thinking "so predictable...yet i don't care!" and i so hate bats. i considered the crazy vampire tangent, but considering she was half asleep and scared out of her mind, she wasn't doing much thinking at all. she just kind of repeats over and over again "bat! bat! bat!" and i get to laugh at you even more over the matt thompson thing. i mean, talk about coincidence. well, i did pick what sounded like an ordinary name, but i definitely didn't guess that someone would actually know a matt thompson. and i saw the south park over thanksgiving. i agree, it wasn't the best, and there was no kyle or cartman, but it was great to make fun of those cliche sport movies. and i agree with the reviewer response thing. i mean, you guys put out the effort to review my work, so i'll put out equal effort to review your review, sort of. anyway, i think it's polite and i like talking to you guys, because normally a lot of the reviews crack me up anyway!
sally can wait - say what? censorship in the media is frickin hilarious!!! anyway, you're right about the review thing. i checked and there aren't any chapters available for you to review. but hey, you can just add your comments on the next one if you don't hate me for being so retarded and screwing up the chapters so bad. well, i might let you fictionally have noah. i'll let loose a not-so-big secret, river doesn't end up with him, and unless something changes soon, i don't think he ends up with anyone. maybe i'll indirectly mention a sally. a sally that shakes the earth with her overwhelming obesity.
smudged lines - yes, finally. drama time. oh the fun of building the drama and mucho tension. and it makes me laugh reading your review, because at first it's "yay tristan!" and then it's "*sigh* matt!" so i'm glad there are some reviewers torn between the two. much love to you for reviewing!