I got back my poem today that I wrote about a friend's eyes some time ago. The notebook in which it was penned has long since disappeared, but I'd given her a copy before it went missing.
Here it is:
Optical Eclipse
Blue eyes with golden rays no hint of green,
Eyes fairer than any I've ever seen,
Two constructs in the shape of an ellipse,
Your eyes are quite like a solar eclipse.
Like a shining sun covered by the moon,
A great orb granting the blue sky a boon,
In this way your eyes are sattelites,
As dark and mysterious as the night's.
Two works of art that make me want to say:
"Amy, may I gaze at your eyes all day?"
A statement to which an odd look would bring,
Then I would say: "Sorry, I was just asking."
Please don't take this as more comforting lies,
I really do like the look of your eyes!
Posted by indie/ask
at 12:49 PM BST
Updated: Thursday, 23 June 2005 12:51 PM BST
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Updated: Thursday, 23 June 2005 12:51 PM BST
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