Tips for Revising and Editing
Read your paper more than once so you can hear the sound of your paper for yourself.
Read it to more than one person.
Record your self so you can here for your self to see how your paper sound.
Use their suggestions for helping the flow of your paper sound better
Incorporate their suggestions in your writing.
Move things around in your paper so that your ideas are organized when you read your paper
Add or cut information so that your paper will sound better and not sound that your paper has unnecessary information in it.
Improve your paragraphs.
Check your content and structure.
Check the style and tone.