This is the story that everbody wrote ^^ It used to be on my add a part section, I started this story before Halloween and I was expecting it to turn out to be a scary story (that's why I named it What's out there?, but people has made it into a love story ^^ Hope you'll enjoy reading it!
Posted by me!
Emelie was so happy about the house they had found, it was quiet, n it's surrounded by nature. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting, she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be, until...
Posted by Juicy
...she met Echo, the boy next door. It was still summer and school wouldn't start for at least two weeks, so Emelie was bored. She met Echo oneday,
when she was sitting outside her new house. "hello," he said. Emelie smiled, he was jusst too gorgous! Echo then smiled back and took out a can of paint, he poured the whole thing on her, Emelie shrieked. She wanted to strangle him because...
Posted by Shannon
....he just said oops! Did I do that? Emelie screamed at him, "Why did you do that? HUH? Why?" He just stood there looking like nothing had happened.
"So what is your problem you walk over here flashing your gorgeous smile at me, you don't me and I don't know you! Whats your name anyways?" Emelie shouted.
"Well, come down! My name is Darien. But my friends call me Echo. You really think I have a gorgeous smile?" Echo said. Emelie still drenched it paint said, "So why did you do that anyways?" My dad said that when he first saw my mom he pour a can of paint over her head so she would always remember him." "Oh,
really?" Emelie said blushing. Just then a car came by w/ a whole bunch of kids in it and yelled.....
Posted by Emily
"Whoah! Echo, who's the babe?" He gave them a dirty look. Emelie blushed. After the car passed, Echo said "I'm sorry for my friends, they are crazy, they are just jelous that they can't pick up the babes like I can! Oh, and by the way, you're face is a very beautiful shade of red." "Uh, thanks, I had better go and change my clothes. 10:00, same place, tonight." Emelie replied. Echo smiled and went back into his house. She and Echo met up again as promised that night. Echo came and sat down beside Emelie on the steps of her house. They talked for about an hour . They paused for a minute. Echo smiled at her. She was lucky he couldn't see her blush in the dark. Echo moved closer to her. He leaned over and...
Posted by Jaquie
Sorta bit-kissed her ear and just joking with her said "I love you". She said "well, so do I. I'd like to get to know you better." He said,"Sure. I'll see you at school and we can, um, "study" together sometime if you want." "Sure. How 'bout tomorrow?" She said. "Why not. Don't we ahve a big test coming up?" She didn't even listen to what he said right then, she just kissed him and he quickly got red. "Just as long as you never pour paint on me again I'll be your girlfriend." "I'm sorry about that, I really didn't mean to be rude." After that they both went home. She went home only to find that her parents had...
Posted by Tina
...been watching her through their window. She was furious. "What do you think you're doing?!" she cried. "I'm new here, and I just met the guy of my dreams, and you suddenly just decide to take a peek at me?!" She ran up to her room and slammed the door. Her parents, however, were just glancing out the window and happened to see them together. Emelie didn't know that though. She was still mad at them for invading her privacy. But just then...
Posted by Kelsey
...She heard beautiful music outside. She was afraid to look out. She was afraid it was Echo, and her parents would be looking again. She looked around,
and saw no parents, looked out, and saw Echo playing his flute. He was really good at it. He was wearing a very nice outfit, and just kept playing his beautiful song. He looked up at her with his beautiful smile, and said, "Come on down from there, and we could just sneak away, you know? I could just bring you down, we could go to my house and dance a while, and maybe some more." She was just about to say yes when...
Poste by Jennifer
...She heard he father call"What's that noise up there? I'm coming in!" Emelie fluffed up her bed so it look like she was sleeping. She then jumped out the window, grabbed the dreamguy by the sleeve and yelled "RUN!!!!!!" and then...
Sorry, because I couldn't get into angelfire and update the page, two people wrote to me at the same time ^^ choose the story that you like and help me to finish it! ^^
Posted by Leena
1. ...together they rushed around to the back of Echo's house and ducked out of sight behind some bushes. There, they tried to calm their beating hearts,
but it was impossible. Emelie's father was ranting and raving. They could hear him clearly through Emelie's open bedroom window. "We should make a run for it
to the park" whispered Echo anxiously. Emelie just smiled and leaned forward for a kiss that meant yes, a ray of light fell upon the couple and then...
Posted by Krista
2. ...they jumped in some bushes so if her father happened to look out the window, he wouldn't see them. Emelie's father looked at Emelie's fluffed up bed and
thought she was sleeping. Emelie was glad her kitten, Tinker, was on her bed sleeping. Tinker always slept beside her head. Emelie's dad left, turning out
the light as he closed the door. Emelie felt like smacking herself. How could she have been so stupid to forget to turn out the light? Emelie turned her
attention back to Echo, but...
Posted by Ice Blue Princess
...Echo jumped on Emelie just to hide her, although she took it seriously & wierd. Anyways, of course it made a little bit of noise, so her father peked out the window. He screamed a little scream that made you think that he had been stabbed or something else you get in nightmares. Emelie pushed Echo off her back and yelled at him "I HATE YOU! You were nicerwhen you weren't so mushy and discusting! I mean, a KISS, that isn't bad!!! But...
Posted by Lilli
...Emelie stomped off towards her house, and slammed the front door shut, as Echo stood standing speechless by the bushes. The next morning was the first day of school, and when Emelie saw Echo leaving his house she just turned her head away. "Emelie, I didn't mean..." Emelie never let him finish, "What is
wrong with you why can't you leave me alone?!" She turned around and waited for her bus inside. All day long, Echo tried to talk to Emelie, but she always
turned the other way and avoided him, until...
two people posted this at the same time! ^^ please add an ending to this story follow one of these ^^ thank you!
Posted by anonymous^^
1. ...Echo couldn't take it anymore. He barged into the lunchline to get to Emelie and yelled, "Emelie LISTEN TO ME!" Everyone stared at him but he didn't care.
He just went on. "I don't know what your problem is. I've been trying to be nice to you for the longest time and you just treat me like dirt. If you weren't so pushy you would let my explain to you! I told you that I thought the whole paint thing was my way of telling you how much I liked you. When I jumped on you, it was to protect you from your dad seeing you that night. You really think that I am so immature that I would actually act that way? I try to
be a gentlemen to you. But what do you do? Nothing in return. I don't know about you, but I'm..." Emily interrupted him. She said...
Posted by Jami
...Echo grabbed her in the halls and told her that he just did it to hide her. Emilie started to apologize like crazy when there English teacher, Mr.
Myers tapped Echo on the shoulder and reminded him of the detension sentence he had for chewing gum during English. Echo kissed Emilie goodbye and left to go to
detension. At detension Emilie sneaked in when the setension monotor, MRs. Berry was sleeping. "C'mon Echo! Let's bail!" she whispered. Echo just smiled his
gorgous smile and.....
Posted by Kelsey
...They hopped out of the room, luckily didn't get caught. They ran out the front door, and then jumped in Echos car, and rode off. They had a great night. Went to the movies, had dinner, all that kind of stuff, even watched the sun set. When they were about to go back in the car, Echo looked at Emilie. "I love you more than anything in the world." "I love you too." They kissed a long kiss. No one saw, just the sun glaring its last rays of the day.