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A Real Story
Posted by Me!
It was a freezingly cold day, Dave was driving home in his little car, tired and sleepy. As he was driving along the highway, going home to his wife, he saw an old lady standing on the side walk of the road, beside her car, hopelessly. Obviously, her car has broken down...
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Posted by Kayla and Jami
1. ...She called for help but no one came. When Dave saw her he pulled over. "What's the trouble ?" he asked. "I think it's a flat tire, or something." she
said. She was an old woman about in her 70's. Dave could tell she was freezing. He alowed her to sit in his warm heated car while he changed the tire. She
pointed to where the new one was. He popped the trunk and replaced the tire. "Oh, how can I ever repay you ?" she asked. She started digging along in her bag
for bills. The he replied...
Poste by Charity Sung
2. ...Dave pulled his car towards the sidewalk and rushed to the old lady. The lady seemed to be late for a very important family gathering. Dave was definately NOT good with engineering or anything of the sort so all he could do was ask the lady if he could drive her there. "Oh thank you! You're a nice young man!" the lady said with a sigh or relief. His wife would be waiting impatiently by now but he'd forgotten to bring his mobile phone and it would be easier to take the lady to her destination before she got any later. Her wife would have to wait. The old lady locked the door of her car and got into Dave's car."What about the car?" Dave asked "Oh, I'm sure it'll be OK until I get home. I'm lucky it's at the sidewalk. Actually, if you don't count the fact that the car broke down I guess I'm very lucky today." grinned the old lady. Dave smiled politely and turned on the engine. "What is your name young man?" asked the lady "Dave and may I ask yours?" "My name is Janice." replied the old lady.
After that the rest of the drive was spent in silence. Soon they got to the river."We'll have to cross that bridge, Dave" said Janice."OK." said Dave The journey was further than Dave had expected and he was getting worried about the time he had to get home. It was getting dark. They were two hours away from where they had last started and now in the opposite direction to where Dave's wife was waiting...at home. As they got near the bridge a police officer stopped them."I'm sorry. This bridge has been closed down for a week due to construction works."Dave looked at Janice and Janice closed her eyes in disbelief. "Great, what now!" thought Dave...
Poste by Kelly
...Janice had tears in her eyes. She was thinking about the reunion. She was the guest of honor. You see, Janice had cancer and was going to die soon. So her family decided to throw her a sortt of "Going away party". Janice did not want to miss it because this was the last time she would get to see her family. Janice could not take it any longer. She broke down and started crying. Then Dave had an idea, this was the plan:...
Posted by Alexa
...he had saw a detour a mile back, and he would turn around and go through the detour. He quickly turned around and raced toward the detour, when
they faced another problem...
Posted by Jess
...Janice was there, dying in his car! He tried to rush as fast as he could, her broken heart hurt worse then the pain of the cancer. She moaned and cried. Dave silently prayed for her. Hoping that he would make it, he sped into the detour. He rushed like lion chasing a zebra. He made it to the right road in 6 min. He carried Janice inside. A lot of worried people stared at him, with red eyes. He knew that they had been crying. Janice was more happy than in pain. She smiled at him. Her family stood around her, they all knew these were her last momments. She said she loved them all, and before she left our world, and drifted to another, she thanked Dave, sincerelly. She kissed his cheek and closed her eyes. A kind of peacefulness filled the room, and everyone knew that she has passed on. No one cried now. They all stared at Janice. Her lifeless body was smiling. Dave stayed over night and used their phone. Until he called his wife and found out that...
Posted by Cici Valdez
...She had been waiting for a while, and was getting impaitient. He promised to be there right away, when suddenly...
Posted by Ashley
...He heard a moan "Ohhhhh!" it was his wife, Marie. "Marie!! Marie!! What is happening hun?" asked Dave frantically. "Help Dave! call 911!!!" said Marie.
"Why what is happening??" Dave got scared. "I-" she paused. "I am in labor, darlin`" she moaned. "LABOR?? Already?! you were due in" he paused and began
counting. "Oh...right on time..." Dave was very excited and scared at the same time. Then he had a brainstorm... He began thinking of ideas... Then he got one he was sure Enstien would never of thought of he quickly...
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Posted by Rachael
...yelled Dave and hung up. "Bye..." said Marei after he hung up. "Where ya goin` Dave?" asked Janice's youngest daughter(23) Rachael. "I got to get home!" yelled Dave and dashed out the door. Dave jumped in the car and speeded faster than he did when Janice was with him. The speed limit was 56 and he was going 156! A police man, Officer O`Mally I believe, saw him going 100 over! "Well," said his partner, Officer Brownden, "Looks like this wise guy is goin` 100 over" Dave saw them following and said "Oh man! WHAT NOW???"...
Posted by Kelscat
..."Okay, first call 911 and say that you are in LOTS of pain." It was silent while the wife breathed. "Okay." They hung up really quick, and the man thought, "Wait, how am I going to see the baby?!" He apponligised to all the people and then he sped home to the hospital where the wife was going to give
birth. He was half way there when...