REVENGE
Chapter: 5
Title: Crown Arcade
JEALOUSY part 3
Chickygurl: I don't rally know if you read this or just dropped the review response in here anyway thanks.
Tif: did you make it to the 4 chapter or just let you go to the third, anyway I hoppe you enjoy the 4 and 5 chapter jejej and yes darien is goin to suffer, but Madison don't deserve to suffer she is just after a single guy he never tell her that he have a girlfriend you know, ja ne.
Lupita: jejejeje espero que muy pronto pueda actualizar, estoy traduciendo este fic pa ver si por fin me llega la inspiracion y puedo actualizarlo y ya que pueda y hasta entonces empezare de nuevo con la batalla.
Starangel07: jejeje is this soon enought for you I certanly hope so, ja.
Tkdl: I hope this chapter fullfill your wishes toward Darien jajajajajaja he is so going to suffer in this chapter JAJAJAJAJA --- lunatic laughter---- and this is going to be a Darien-Serena fic but even so, he is going to have to begg for her a little bit (jajajajaja as if he would have to beg big) before they are together (in a happy way) again. ENJOY. haaa and if you want to help you are more than welcome snif snif my english suck so if you want I can send the chapter to you and you could tell me the mishap they have. THANKS
Miss.lame: Hola hey viva México, paisana por que me escribes en ingles, vives en gringolandia o que pues, bueno no importa dejame te respondo dicen las gentes CUIDADO CON LO QUE DESEAS POR QUE SE PUEDE HACER REALIDAD y eso le paso a Darien queria que ella lo dejara de celar y cuando por fin lo hizo (segun el pues) entonces creyo que ya no lo queria y trato de darle casi (casi) inconcientemente celos, y oye si entiendes bien el espańol tengo este fic un poquito mas aventajado en espańol se llama venganza y lo puede ver en mi profile y tengo otro que tbm esta bueno (si no lo digo yo) bueno nos vemos.
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“jajajajajajajajajjajajaja” Serenas cherefull laugh atracted a lot of passers by , she was just out of the movies and walking besides Mark, in their way to the city carnival, they were hopping to relax there, to be ready to the text the next morning.
The sun was slowly hiding on the horizon, giving of warm redish-to-yellowshis rays, some men turned around to see the owner of the cherefull laughter, and some of them could not take off it, there bathed in the ocaso raysthey could distinguish a very beautifull silhouette, a girl silhouette, not not a girl a woman silhouette, with her rounded hips, her full breasts, and her kissable lips, and her inocent face with ligth make up.
One of them was walking on the edge of the sidewalk, and was staring blantantly, to have a better view of the woman who was revealed to him however hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy a tremendously hard post of concret (of the ones conducing electricity) was on his way. ---redish growing blow---- beautiful--------redish growing blow---- beautiful---redish growing blow---- beautiful---redish growing blow---- beautiful, the hard blow was growing now it had more than 3 inches, but who cares the guy face showed happiness and pain at intervals, well at least it was worth it, --- he tough in a resigned manner --- I saw a godess today ------- and just like that he walked away in an unstable way, since he haven't recovered his balance after the post crash, and everyone who saw him get away were laughing even this author.
And there leaning on the darkest corner of the street acros the movie theather exit was a figure bathed in shadows, it was patiently waiting, it had a big black coat on, and a white hat, if you saw it you could say that it was a dick tracy impersonator, its height told us of a man since no many women reach 1.86m. It had wide shoulders that support this theory (of it being a man) to any idle observer who take enougth care to notice him, if this same supposed observer existed, it could too have notice that even if the tall figure apper to be calm, it was absolutely nervous, its hands were under its poket pants in a fist, that itself denoting a great stress, and its eyes never leaving the exit door of the movie theather were totally in focus no wanting to losse the exit of someone.
Finally, after an eternety of waiting, the mistery man, (yes a HIM as we already had deduced the figure of being a male especimen) sprinted to action as the movie theather doors were opened and a crow of childrens, oldpeople, milded ages and young couples were walking out, and slowly very slowly taking care that nobody notice him (not even our idle observer---if existed--) our mistery man was following a young couple, she was a beautiful girl of long blond hair that shined under the generous amount of rays that the ocaso provide for her, her hair in an unusuall hairstyle that even in two ponytails with two balls on top rebels it self in lights curls that framed her face, this one with big blue ayes and up turned nose, her body, was covered in a ligth coat that couldn't hidde her exquesite figure.
“jajajajajajajaja”
Darien's hearth make a sudden stop, and his mind went blank, -----hummmmm--- he turned his head right and left and realized that he wasn't the only one enchanted with Serena's laught.
------arggg, Dam, don't all of you have anything to do, but to stare at her --- a guy crashing a electricity post for peeping tom put assesines feelings in his otherwise humanitarian medical persona ---- hump--- that and more he deserve for being a pepping tom.
------And anyway why are they looking at her like that, yes yes she is cute / hey I love her deeply / but she is just a child / jajajaja really, is she really a child -- his mind taunted him ---/ of course he anwsered at the same time that he was looking at her --- look at her beautiful eyes, her angelic face, her tender body / jajajjajaja tender body Darien my friend when was the last time that you looked at her and I mean really really looked at her / heeeee Darien looked at Serena's body his mind relling, there bathed in the ocaso warm was her, the ocaso rays showing a splendid figure, and then and there he realized, what were the other men seeing at, they were seeing a woman of divine body.
And for the first time he knew that his girlfriend wasn't a kid anymore, he continued looking and his mind was captured by her silhouette making he feel things that he never felt before, feelings that he never associated with Serena, and his body was responding to the image too, and then his body and his mind started working together, and then in his mind he was touching her and his hand were all over her body.
He shaked his head shoked --- what was I thinking she is just a child / and you are and idiot / what / she is eighteen years old girl and women grow faster than men, she is not a child anymore / yeah but ... but I never could dare to... to... ----- images of Serena in his bed were imprited in his head ---- and his face showed a very curiuos tone of red / hey you hentai, stay out of the gutter nobody say anything about a bed you hentai boy, JA first you said that she is a child and now this...PERVERT --- his mind yelled at him ---- I just want you to know that is time for a change to left behind the chaste little kisses that you give her ----
"thats right" said Darien in a loud voice, scaring a lot of people who just in case crossed the estreet.
"Mark --- she said in happy voice --- lets go to the future jajajajajajajajaja --- very cute maniatic laughter---- come on lets go to the fortuneteller hee? it should be fun-----she said and in front of a very doubtful Mark her eyes went wet and her lips in a pout.
He just signed and to the fortuneteller they went.
A very short woman was in the midle of the park she was dressed in the most extravagant fabrics, from roug to silk like veils, she was sitting in the center of a dark tent you coul only see a cristal ball floting in the air as if suspended by magic. (ja as if)
Darien was crawling beteewen the bushes, wanting to come near them, when a nauseating smell hit him taking him by sorprise, turning to his left he saw a trash can, just in the best spot too see them, ---hum --- there is no other better place --- settling that down he went to evaesdrop everything that the furtuneteller have to say.
A young couple came near her and at the same moment a shadow behind the bushes told the furtuneteller that somebody was following them and that person was trying to remain anonimus, she was a little curious so concentrating she focussed her gaze in the figure, and then her heart sttoped, there just a few meters away was the most handsome man that she never meet in her life.
----- haaa I want to know what is Darien doing right now jijijiijij where is he, I hoppe she could tell me --- thought a very giddy serena
But her chances of knowing her boyfriend whereabouts were cut short, because in the exact moment that they were reaching the tent, the fotuneteller sprinted forward unfolding her veils in her rush showing a decrepit old woman (think of Shampoo grandma), she have like a hundreds and hundreds of years, she runned pass them yelleing "my love darling don't go away" extending her arms forward as if trying to hug something.
------Darien's horror face was on the surface for the first time in a very long long amount of years --- and trying to avoid the little old woman he made a dive to the left.
ho ho
puuuuuuffff, tuuuummmmbbb, splaaaaaaaassssshhhhhhh,
The tall shape of Darien Chiba was welcomed with things without of shape, sticky things and litters and litters of stinking watter
He get up immediately shaking his coat, trying to get the stinking stuffs out of him, but hoooo fate and destiny were against him, the old lady was on attak once again.
Curoisity got the best of Serena and she dragged Mark to the place where the old lady was going, they were slowly coming closer and closer...
Darien was saved this time for his always welcomed Tuxedo Mask reflexes, and the little old lady once again failled her unfamous kiss attak, but didn't failled in leaving traill of nauseous smell ---arghhh even the trash smell better---- Now he was in his knees trying with little succes to not vomit, but his trying has to sotp because the little old lady was on attack position again, smilling at him showing her putrid teeths.
Darien want and could avoid her, he was now ready for the attack, his plan was to dive right (we all know what is in the left right) and rund away for all he was worth, he looked asesing his scape route and then...
PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM
His heart drumed hard against his chest, he had forgot about her in front of his impeding doom in the lips of the little old lady, but there she was Serena, he frozed.
The old lady smilled, her posibilitys were incresing each passing minute it was obvious that the handosome man didn't want the young couple to see him, and that worked in her advantage, she liked her wrinkled lips ---- and went for her third and hoppefull her last attack.
PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM
What to do, he can not turn or Serena was going to see him, and she was going to know that he had followed her ---- what is she going to think / she is going to think that you are an inmature prat / arghhh this is so messed up I could have expected this from her but never from me, and however she never did it, and look at me here I'm spying on her arggggg----- (jajajajajajajaja poor ignorant guy)
PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM PUM
What to do Serena and Mark were looking at them, a little to closet for his taste.
PUM PUM
Serena's face showing curiosity
PUM PUM
Serena was slowly getting closer
PUM PUM
The little old lady was in beeline towards him
PUM PUM
Her wrinkled lips make contac with his.
ˇwhat!
His worl colapsed, he was white, his hearth stoped for good.
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
A terrified yell fougth its way trough his troat but he in a supreme efort could supresed it, he couldn't give Serena clues about his identity.
Nauseas made its way in his body, but he couldn't turn around and take the risk of her seeing him, so he hold it, he made it with all the maleness that being Tuxedo mask demanded of him, he stayed put in his place aparently in shock.
Aparently Serena's curiosity in the show vanished so she and Mark left.
"Lets go Mark, we have nothing to do o see here, is just the little old lady boyfriend, look at them --- she waved a hand pointing at them ---- look at how they are making out, they surely love each other very much" she said the last part in a sad tone that wasn't loose to Mark adn Darien.
But if Darien and Mark notice it, the little old laddy was oblivius to it, as she was more than happy kissing the most hansome man that she had ever laid her eyes on
An hour has gone Serena and Mark were finishing their tour for the city carnaval, it was time to go home and rest for the test, a tall figure left the restrooms just a little behind them and follow them, a few meters behind, he was taking a big risk being this close to them, but hey what were the odds of them looking back.
A big smerald coat was on his shoulders, it was ugly and cheap, a big clown hat in his head.
He expended just two seconds to rip himself off of the old little lady (immediately after he found out that Serena was gone) but he had to expend an others 40 minuts to get ride of the smell in his body, and then he had to buy new cloths because his former cloths just wasn't cooperating with him mainteining the little old lady and the trash can oddor.
And he was once again after them, on their rout to the exit, he walked in a parsimonian way quitely.
"mister"
"hey mister" said a little cute boy, tugging at his coat, Darien ignores him and continued walking
The chiquitin pouted
“mister” the little felow wasn't giving up, and tugged again at his coat, an anoyed Darien glared down at the boy, and then ignored him and looked at Serena and Mark he couldn't loose them.
A tugg at his coat again.
“leave me alone I'm pretty busy rigth now" he said to the little cute boy in an unpolite way ja more than unpolite he said it in a rash pretty rash way, it was so rash that the little felow eyes started to get wet, and he started to wail for the world to heard.
“muaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww”
“muaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww”
“muuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww”
Serena stoped.
ja if she turned back
Darien quickly saw the risk in the attention that the little felow was atracting so he bend down, and took the boy in his arms turning away giving his back to the couple ahead of him
“jajaja how cute” Said Serena walking toward the exit thinking of the cute escene that the father and the whim little boy were doing.
Darien signed realived, but that sigh wasn't completly out of his lips when a matrona who posibily weight twice his weight, was attaking him with her broom
"let go of my chil you child molester" She yelled at her lung capacity, getting the attention of all that were left in the carnaval (futunately for him Serena was now out of it) and never stopped her attak with the broom Darien was getting dumber avery minute no letting go of the child and ruunig with he in his arms and the matron in his heels.
Unfortunately for him the matron was pretty fast, and the broom conected with his head more than once, finally she could aset a really good blow at him, rendering him inmovilus for a short time but enought for her to retrive his child, and she left him but not before calling the carnival guards and the other people on him, telling them how he had traid to kiddnap his little and cute child.
Ho ho, this wasn't looking good for him, the guards were quickly aproching and the other people were cutting him off the runaway routs ---- hummmmm...
Oooopppssss
Gratefull for the second time in his life (the first one was with the old little lady) for his Tuxedo Mask habilitys he runned to a death end alleway and just jumped to the rooftop and jumping rooftop to rooftop he get away from there and made his way towards Serena's house.
He made it there just before Serena and Mark were there, so waited for them in the shadow, and then still in the shadows he saw the goobye.
“goodbye Mark -- she waved her hand in a goodbye motion--- see you tomorrow at ten don't be late”
“as if, your are the one more likely to arrive late --- Mark face was begging --- so please don't be late tomorrow”
“jajaja as if, I wouldn't be late for tomorrow” she said in an inocent voice
“jajajaja jajaja I know you you little slepping head, you could said anything but but even so sleep untill noon" Mark was getting away happy
"see you"
"see you"
Darien's fist were getting tighter in the shadows.
In his bed, Darien was thinking about the day events, and he realized what a total mooron he had been trough the day, he looked at the moon but the moon didn't give nothing to him no comfort not a thing, he fall sleep slowly thinking of Serena, this had been an astonishing long day
Serena signed the bright moon and stars providing her warm and love as they alway do, giving her the encouragemente she need to go trougt the next day, her plan was apparentely working and she was exahusted, she had been studieng (as Amy sugested), she had been taking cooking leesons from Rita and had been hanging around friends more than she ever remenber doing, and even so Darien was allways in her mind and was allway the las thing she tought before falling sleep and tonight wasn't an exeption.
----I love you---- Two people said at the same time and they were fast slepp.
Jejejejej this one was so fun to writte in spanish the first time and so difficult to translate because involve a lot of wriiting style that I have to sacrifice in order to translate and I don't even know if this is going to make any sense any way read and review or your are never going to see the end of this
JAJAJAJAJJA JUST KIDDING
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