Rayjay's Dream 2: Rayjay's Nightmare

The original Rayjay's Dream was good. It makes me wonder what went wrong with this one. It was originaly planed to have 3 parts and be the longest story I have ever written. Looking back at it now, I still don't think it would have became longer then Ocarina of Rayjay, which continues on today.

The so called 3 parts of the story was planned to be like this. The first part you would read would be called Rayjay's Dream 2: Good Version. Looking at this would probally make people think that there was a bad version before this, but that is not the case. The Good Version tells of Rayjay waking up one morning to see his enitre fruit supply has suddenly dissapeared. Wondering what happened, he (or should I say I) goes off to the police station to tell of the crime. The story would go on until the final chapter when Rayjay would be blasted into the sun (I'll explain it as you go on). After that, people would want to know what happens next. But now before...

The Evil Version of Rayjay's Dream. After the cliffhanger chapter in the Good Version, I would start off part 2 of the story with the Evil Version. The Good Version told of Rayjay finding out what happened to his fruit while the Evil Version tells the bad guys point of view. You get to see how they planned on taking all the fruit and what they did after and what they planned on doing with it. This would continue all the way up to the part where Rayjay is blasted into the sun. Then you would see what happens next in the...

Final Version. Part 3 of this would be called the Final Version. Then the story would conclude after a few more chapters. Rayjay would be blasted into the sun, but the evil people would have also shot the fruit into the sun before him. Then the story would make even less sence as the power of the sun and fruit would turn him into "Super Rayjay". A super form of Rayjay who is more annoying and fruity than ever. Well thats what would basically happen. To quote many others, "It sounded like a good idea at the time".

Order of Events

Here is a list of things I wrote down on how the story would continue for all 3 parts.

Cast of Characters

A weirder cast than the original? Maybe. Names of some characters were designed to be long and confusing like Officer Orado. Some other characters would have long and confusing names but spell funny messages as you read along. For example, take these 4 characters, Ted Heranger Iso Stronger, Steve Tory, Isaman Strangerdoo, and Larry Andermeed. Their abriviations for their names would be THIS, STORY, IS, and LAME. Reading along, you may notice that.

THIS: Hey, whats going on?

STORY: I know.

IS: What is it then?

LAME: He has no idea whats going on.

And you would catch that while reading. Not only does it look stupid having with names like that, it also looks stupid when they talk out of order. Now as for the regular cast of characters, read on...

The Good

Rayjay

The Bad

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