FILM SCRIPT 2#
(note: this is the one I am seriously
considering moreso than script 1... simply because I think this one
works better - let me know what you think)
FADE TO:
EXT: PARK - DAY
JOSHUA sits on a bench in a park dressed
in a suit. He looks emotionless. In his hand is a letter. He drops
the letter. Camera ZOOMS IN to his eye.
ZOOM OUT of eye. The park has changed
to a very surrealistic looking set. Three people stand, dressed in
black behind Joshua, their eyes are blindfolded. A fourth figure
appears collapses and disappears quickly, then returns and is standing
directly behind JOSHUA with a photo frame in her hand. The photo
is of PEOPLE SITTING IN A ROOM. ZOOM INTO PHOTO
INT: LIVING ROOM (The Photo)
A group of friends sit in the living
room. They all appear solemn and are dressed in Funeral attire. DAVID
and CRISTINA sit together, hand in hand, with CRISTINA holding a
photo. JOSHUA sits alone, head in his hands. JULIA comes up to JOSHUA
and places her hand on his shoulder. Other friends are dispersed
around the room. A veiled woman appears in front of where CRISTINA
and DAVID are sitting on the couch and sits on the table in front
of them... FOCUS ON: A tear drop falling from the woman's eye, it
crystalises. She touches the photo that CRISTINA is holding... ZOOM
INTO PHOTO
EXT: GRAVE - DUSK (The Photo)
JOSHUA kneels at a freshly made grave.
FOCUS ON his distraught face.
CUT TO: Hands digging at the dirt frantically.
CUT TO: A hand protruding from the ground.
CUT TO: Mid-Long Shot as three people stand behind JOSHUA, blind-folded
as JOSHUA kisses the hand. FOCUS ON: Middle figure who is holding
a picture frame which is a photo of KARA looking towards the camera
through a window.
EXT: OUTSIDE WINDOW - DUSK
Water reverses up the window as KARA
looks out - Her arms embracing herself. A shadowy figure appears
behind her.
CUT TO:
INT: BATHROOM
KARA struggling beneath the water interspersed
with surreal images of water reversal and time/motion effects.
CUT TO:
INT: TUNNEL
Quick cuts of a veiled woman coming
towards camera - revealing KARA's face at the end.
CUT TO:
INT: ROOM
KARA stands against a wall... a rope
hands from her neck. Her eyes are blind folded and she is bound at
the hands. A shadowy figure walks across the room.
CUT TO:
INT: DARK ROOM
KARA opens her eyes
CUT TO:
INT: ROOM
KARA's eyes begin to bleed beneath the
blind fold... only the blood is colored in this shot...everything
else is black and white. Vines begin to creep up behind her.
CUT TO:
INT: LIVING ROOM
All the people in the room are now blind-folded
except for JOSHUA ... He gazes upwards - CAMERA ZOOMS IN
CUT TO:
EXT: WINDOW
The shadowy figure behind KARA emerges
- revealing JOSHUA as he grabs KARA and pulls her into the darkness
behind him.
CUT TO:
INT: BATHROOM
Hands are now about KARA's throat -
CAMERA ZOOMS OUT to reveal JOSHUA's hands.
CUT TO:
Reversal of the GRAVE scenes.
CUT TO:
EXT: PARK
The thre figures behind JOSHUA quickly,
one after the other, perform the 'see no evil', 'hear no evil' ,
'speak no evil' poses. The veiled woman (KARA) pulls out a blindfold
and wraps it around JOSHUA's eyes.
CUT TO:
CAMERA ZOOMS out of JOSHUA's eye - the
figures are gone. CAMERA pans down to the letter...(still have to
work out whats on it)
FADE TO BLACK
THE END.