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Writing Across The Curriculum


Importance of the Essay
It is not fiction...

The five paragraph essay allows the writer a writing style that WILL be used throughout one's life. Highschool, college and the profesional world all require individuals who can write logically and on topic to state an idea and defend that idea with facts and opinions. A successful 5 paragraph essay creates a vivid image so that the reader knows exactly what the writer intended to convey in his or her writing.

There are things that one needs to know that contribute to excellence in writing. They are not hard to learn. Once you know them, they do take practice to gain proficiency. That practice makes all the difference in the world.

Think of the five paragraph essay as having five separate parts. Learn to master each of the parts one at a time. As you become proficient with one part, work on proficiency in the next. Writing the introduction and the conclusion are strongly linked. Working on them in sequence will make the job easier. Then tackle the body paragraphs, one at a time. With the inclusion of transitions, you will get the feel and flow of the essay. Put them all together, and you will have the first draft of your essay.

On this page you will find a useful rubric that goes beyond the bask FCAT rubric. At the bottom of this page is my review of Power Writing.

Mr. Gronich's Essay Rubric

Mr.Gronich's Essay Rubric

Essay Rubric

A. Command of Topic

5 Essay addresses the assignment, demonstrating both familiarity with pertinent critical issues and independent thought.

4 Essay addresses the assignment, both topic and strategies.

3 Subject is clear—although essay misses some element of assigned topic and/or strategies.

2 Subject is generally clear but not in keeping with assigned topic and/or strategies.

1 Essay is not in keeping with assigned topic and/or strategies.


B. Argumentative Development

5 Essay shows especially careful development of related ideas in coherent, sequential paragraphs.

4 Essay shows careful development of related ideas in coherent, sequential paragraphs.

3 Sequence of ideas is traceable—although paragraphing and structure are faulty.

2 Essay relies on unrelated generalizations, vague argument, uncertain information.

1 Essay is not coherent, showing little development of or relationship among ideas.

C. Organization

5 Student has edited the essay, ensuring that sentences are forceful and clear and logical.

4 While the student has edited the essay, some tangential ideas, unassimilated quotations, needless summary, and organizational flaws remain.

3 Incomplete editing is evident in excess (summary, unassimilated ideas and accessory information) and absence (support, transitions, flow).

2 Faulty editing shows in flawed sequence of ideas.

1 Student has neglected to edit the paper for content or paragraph construction.

D. Syntactic Variety and Language

5 Student has edited the essay, ensuring that sentences are forceful and clear and logical.

4 While the student has edited the language of the essay, moderate stylistic and formal flaws and inappropriate usages remain.

3 Incomplete editing is evident in moderate stylistic weaknesses.

2 Faulty editing shows in serious stylistic weaknesses.

1 The essay is stylistically inappropriate.

E. Control of Mechanics

5 Essay is generally free from errors in word choice and mechanics.

4 Essay may have a few errors in word choice and mechanics.

3 Essay has an accumulation of errors in word choice and mechanics.

2 Essay is marred by numerous errors in word choice and mechanics.

1 Essay has serious and persistent errors in word choice and mechanics.




Stay On Topic Elaberate On Details Use Expressive Language Mr. G's PowerWriting Parts:1's 2's 3's

A 1 is your topic. A 1 includes 2's but not 3's!
2's are your details. Your 2's include your 3's which are your supporting details.
Your 3's support your 2's but never included with your 1's.
Your final 1 retates your first one and contains your 2's!!!!!


« z » Remember to stay on topic and to use expressive langauge. Make your essay come alive by developing your 3's supporting details.... give examples, refect on experience, use analogies.
Have Fun!!!



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