Brothers
I personally didn't care for this story. Especially around chapter 6 and 7, things get pretty choppy. Reading over it, I think that I tried too much on some parts, and not enough on others. I like the idea, and the basic storyline, but am actually dissapointed with how I wrote it out. Oh, well. Read it for yourself.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Epligue