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My entire life I've been trying to find that special point where what you wrote turns into something magical that influence others, for good.

I admire Neruda, Shakespeare, Olga Nolla, De la Vega, Marqués, Allende, Montero, and Laura Esquivel. Those are great great writers. Hope to be like them someday. Meanwhile, I would like to share with you what I wrote and some of my personal favorites....

 

Many people do not like poetry. Others (like ME) think poetry is still the world's most powerful form of communication-whether it be a sixteenth-century Shakespearean sonnet or a modern age lyric by Stevie Wonder.

 

The poet uses language in a very different way from prose writers. To understand a poet's message, you need to be aware of the elements of poetry.

Character. Caracter in poetry refers to the speaker. If the poet uses I, you usually learn about the poet him- or herself. The poem can be very personal, as in "Finis". However, sometimes the I is a speaker very different from the poet.

 

Often the poet addresses an unidentified "you", as in "Where have you gone". This person is an absent character whom we know only through the speaker.

Imagery. Poets often use a language to appeal to any or all of your five senses. They use images to help you see, hear, smell, feel, or taste what they are writing about.

 

The author of "Greyday" uses images from the Cristian religion of "a crown of thorns"and "a shirt of hair"to help you feel the heaviness she is describing.

Theme. The idea or meaning of a poem is its theme. The poems "Reflections" and "I dream A world" both have themes about the world. In the first, the poet expresses the idea that there is only hate, not love, in the world. The author of the second poem might agree with that idea, but he also expresses hope that "love will bless the earth".

Tone. The poet conveys to you an attitude when writing. That attitude is called tone. Tone is a clue to meaning.

 

Maybe the tone is earnest yet light-hearted, as in "First Person Demonstrative" . The tone also can be sad as in "Finis".

You can determine a poem's tone by simply asking yourself, "how does this poem make me feel? " Do not be afraid to give more that one answer, for often tone creates many feelings.

Rhyme. Rhyme is repetition of the same sound. If it comes at the end of a line, it is called end rhyme. If it comes within a single line, it is called internal rhyme.

 

End rhyme is the more common type. The untitled black American folk poem uses it. Notice the rhyming of lizard and gizzard, and above and love.

Figures of Speech. When you see an expression that says one thing to eman something else, you are using figure of speech. Common figures of speech are metephor, simile, personification, and hyperbole.

 

The author of "Spring" talks about a "wishbone", yet she does not mean the she and her "second man" actually will find a wishbone and make wishes. "Wishbone" is a metaphor for the hopes that she and her partner will have.

The comparison of one thing to another through the use of like or as is a simile. In "I dream of A World" , for expample, joy is described as being like a pearl.

Another line in "I dream of a world" is an example of personification, or the giving of human qualities to nonhuman subjects. In this line the poets talks of a world "where wretchedness will hang its head." The poet has given a human quality to an abstract idea in order to express his idea more forcefully.

Another way to express ideas forcefully is to exagerate by using hyperbole. In "Fisrt Person Demonstrative" the poet says that she would rather "wrench off an arm than hug you". She uses hyperbole to exaggerate her feelings.

from: Focus on Poetry. Globe Literature,
Globe Literature book company, INC 1990

 

 

 

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Black American folk poem

Love is a funny thing,
Shaped like a lizard,
Run down your heart strings
And tickle your gizzard.
You can fall froma mountain,
You can fall from above,
But the great fall is
When you fall in love.

Chech it out:

Shakespeare's Sonett 18