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The Unforgiven

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Original thing being MiST'd

TITLE: The Unforgiven

AUTHOR: Robin Elizabeth

RATING: PG for some language

DISTRIBUTION: none without prior consent (aka, gotta ask me first)

NOTES: non beta'd. I mean no offense to the writer of this story(TimberWolf), but it was just an obvious choice.

DISCLAIMER: The musi belong to themselves and/or WWFE. I belong to myself. The story belongs to TimberWolf and the song "The Unforgiven" if by Metallica, written (most likely) by James Hetfield and Lars Ulrich. I only own the CD...

SUMMARY: The "un"usual suspects ("me", Shane, Sean, Chuck, and Test)MiST a story about Kane. We also prove how little we know about the Undertaker/Kane's past.

The unusual suspects are crowded around the computer, anxiously awaiting Robin to load the story she found for them.

Sean: So, where did you find this anyway?

Robin: Rogue Tiger's board. There's more stuff on there too.

Chuck: Let's just see how this goes first, huh?

The Unforgiven

Robin: Please tell me it's not Metallica. Please tell me it's not Metallica.

Sean: I take it you're a Metallica fan?

Robin: If I weren't, why would I be freakin' like this? This can only be worse than "The Forsaken" when that guy killed 'Enter Sandman'.

(Please deregard the spelling :))

Shane: This is going to be hell on earth. Whenever there's a warning like that, I'm afraid. How many times do we need to repeat the phrase 'Spell check'?

As Kand walked to his locker room after his last betrall he thought to himself.Then he remember all the pain and tourter that his father put him throuh.

Test: First off, who the hell is Kand?

Shane: I think the writer meant Kane.

Sean: What the hell is a 'betrall'?

Robin: Betrayal?

Chuck: It would make sense if the sentence was completed. What did Kane think to himself?

Shane: As opposed to thinking to...say...the Undertaker?

Chuck: Only if 'Taker's suddenly psychic.

Sean: I'll give him psychotic.

Shane: With a pair of sentences like that, I already want to bail.

Robin: You guys wanted stories instead of spam, remember?

Shane, Chuck and Sean: Yeah...

He enterd his locker room and fliped on the raido.The soft sownd of a geitar filled the air.It was the begining of "The Unforgiven" by Metallica.

Robin: No! Please no! This chick can't be ruining one of the greatest songs ever!

Sean: Anyway we could put you out of your misery?

Robin: Shut it O'Haire. I'm just glad she spelled Metallica right.

::Sean puts Metallica's Black Album on the computer CD player::

Test: Kiss ass.

AS the words begane he thought about the mening of the song...and then about how well it fit into his life.

Test: How the song fit into his life?

Sean: Isn't that was music is supposed to do? Speak to your life?

Chuck: Nice try, Sean.

"New blood joins this earth and quickly his subdued through constant pained disgrace the young boy learns their rules with time this child draws in this wipping boy done wrong deprived of all his thoughts the young man struggles on and on he's known a vow unto his own that never from this day his will they'll take away CORSE:What I'v felt what I'v known will never shined through in what I'v shown never be never see won't see what might have been what I'v felt what I'v known never shined through in what I'v shown never free never me...so I dub thee Unforgiven"

Robin: The least she could do was just copy/paste the lyrics so they're spelt right.

Shane: I think that may have been more than she could handle.

as the corus plays through he thinks back to his childhood(if you could call it a childhood) back to the fire,back to the hospitl and the many surgeres,the painfull recovery,and the finding of his father.

Chuck: What else would you call a childhood? May not have been happy, but still...can't call it adulthood.

The man that said he loved him but showd it by locking him in a basement with the rats.The man that was the caus of his pain,the man that in fact set the fire that killed his mother.A singel tear falls as the song plays on

Robin: And the story continues on... damn it.

"Theydedicat ther lives to running all of his he tries to please them all this bitter man he is throughout his live the same his battled constantly this fight he cannot win a tired man they see no longer cares the old man then prepares to die regretfuly that old man here is me Corus: what I'v felt what I'v know never shined through in what I'v shown never be never see won't see what might have been what I'v felt what I'v known will never shined through in what I'v shown never free never me...so I dub thee Unforgiven"

Robin: At least she's gotten all the lyrics right...although they're horribly misspelled.

His thoughts then tern to his brother..Oh how he both loved and hatted his brother.

Test: So that's where the Undertaker gets all his hats from.

REST:::snickers::

The man that he was told that set the fire.All the battles they had fought.How he locked him in that casket.How hi inturn set him on fire once more in the Inferno mattch.

Test: And like Kane's being locked in a casket was anything special. How many casket matches has the Undertaker had?

Robin: ::shrugs:: I don't remember. A lot. How many Inferno matches have the Undertaker and Kane had?

Sean: I only remember one. Why?

Robin: Well, it says 'set him on fire once more'. That indicates that either Kane's done it before outside of the WWF or there was another Inferno match.

Shane: Don't get too logical here. It'll only give you a headache.

Sean: Been there, doing that, not enjoying it.

Robin: Me too.

Chuck: Me three.

Then he thought of something he never did before.He thought bach to ther frist match.As ge gassed into his brothers deep green eyes he saw a mix a emotion he never knew he had.pain,regret,and the most surprising undieing love.

Test: Gassed? What the hell did she mean there? I don't think it's what first came to mind, either.

Shane: Gazed, I think.

Sean: But they're brothers! There's not supposed to gaze into each other's eyes!

Chuck: Calm down Sean. I think she was just trying to use non-generic words.

Robin: She forgot to warn us about the horrible punctuation too.

Kane's eyes went wide .His brother steped out of the shadows from wich he'd been hiding."No brother not impassible.Your my brother the only one I have how can I not love you?" he asked in a quiet voice.

Test: Kane's eyes went wide before the Undertaker stepped out?

Robin: There's some psychic stuff going on here. Between that and the fact that the Taker replied to Kane's thoughts.

Shane: Why could I never see that statement ever being said?

Chuck: I can't either. Of course, they've also beaten the hell out of me.

Sean: Same here.

Kane looked at him with mixed emotions."Because I'm a monster and a freak" He replied in a rough tone."Thats your father talking not you.I don't see a monster.I see a lost soul surching despretly to find a friend.I'll leave you to your thought but your surch is over brother.I'll alwas be here if you need me" with that the Undertaker reternd to the shadows and was gone.

Chuck: Your father? If they're brothers, shouldn't it be OUR father?

Sean: Continuity and logic don't apply, I guess.

Shane: Where the hell are they anyway?

Robin: Kane's locker room. See first sentence.

Shane: Then how is this 'shadows' crap possible?

Chuck: Forget it Shane. Now you're the one looking for logic.

"You labled me I labled you so I dub thee Unforgiven" Kane thought and with that he falowed his brother vowing alwas to be by his side.

Robin: Why the hell was that line put in there? It makes no sense!

Sean: You were expecting anything else?

Robin: You got a point.

Sean: Anyway, between the gazing thing and the last line, I'm thinking there's more to that relationship in her mind than I want to know about.

Robin: Amen to that.

THE END

ALL: ::loud cheering::

Sean: Robin, please tell me that's the worst of what you found.

Robin: As far as spelling and grammar go, it is. Other than that, I don't know.

Chuck: For the first time, I'd rather have her writing a story about me than searching for more stories for us to read.

Sean: I agree.

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