Evaluation
Title:Toilet Paper
Genre:Poem
When You edited, what were the biggest changes you made?
I added a line to create personification. It helped actually meet the criteria for the assignment.
What do you like best about this piece?
The thing that I like best about this one would be that it's about an everyday object. I mean I've never seen a poem on toilet paper so it seemed to me someone give it a little credit.
What do you like the least? What do you think could still be improved?
I don't like that the poem dosen't have a ton of flow to it, but it's just a different style. It could have a rhyme scheme added or have anything to improve the flow of the piece.
What Literary techniques (specific to this genre) or poetic devices did you use in this piece>
I definatly used the personification with the toilet paper having a name. Also I had some choppy verse structure that made it pop a little with odd ends in it.
Overall, how would you rate this piece compared to the other stories or poems you have written?