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Title:The Shaft
Genre:Suspense


When You edited, what were the biggest changes you made?
I just edited the Grammer mainly

What do you like best about this piece?
I love Jimmy Stewart. I just wanted to rip on some actor. I really don't know why.

What do you like the least? What do you think could still be improved?
I don't like how I had trouble writting for Kissenger.

What Literary techniques (specific to this genre) or poetic devices did you use in this piece>
I tried to paint the picture which was a big technique..

Overall, how would you rate this piece compared to the other stories or poems you have written?
This is one of my favorityes. Because it is the funniest. I love humor.

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