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Evaluation

Title:See Scott Run
Genre:Sci-Fi


When You edited, what were the biggest changes you made?
My biggest change was the end.

What do you like best about this piece?
I really like how Scott is running from the idea of being royalty. I personally have the goal of never being overly famouse. I think that's why John Hughes is my all time hero. But the idea of someone like prince william fasinated me. Leave it all behind. Could you. My favorite part is when he is still running from the security guard.

What do you like the least? What do you think could still be improved?
I don't like how it starts out. It seems to cliched to me. The hiding from the town as they look for him. I never addressed if they were a group trying to find him so he could rule, or a group hoping to kill him so they could take over the goverment.

What Literary techniques (specific to this genre) or poetic devices did you use in this piece>
I used the idea of fashion, which is big to sci-fi. I like how it sounds like it would be at most 20 years in the future. The vintage stuff really makes it for me. I also tried to use funky sentence structure to make the reader keep reading.

Overall, how would you rate this piece compared to the other stories or poems you have written?
It is my favorite one that I did. I really just like the character. He seems to have his own agenda and dosen't care about his duties to society. I really wish I could give up my duties to my society.