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Evaluation

Title:The Girl Off The Plane
Genre:Descriptive Story


When You edited, what were the biggest changes you made?
The biggest changes made in this piece would be that I added and reworded some of the awkward sentence structure. I also think that the song adds alot to the piece.

What do you like best about this piece?
Deffinatly how it rants at times. When it talks about old houses I get a laugh.

What do you like the least? What do you think could still be improved?
I don't like how incomplete it sounds. I wish that readers got a better understanding of the relationship between the two.

What Literary techniques (specific to this genre) or poetic devices did you use in this piece>
I think that there is a deffinet voice to the piece. That voice is passive and a technique that is hard to use. It was for me at least.

Overall, how would you rate this piece compared to the other stories or poems you have written?
I would rate it as one of my favorites throughout the year. It was alot of fun to write and it made me reflect on a very important person