Your lemons are good, but too short, and the fonts are a little small. And please put in more making love scenes. Thanks. - Daniel
Good fan fiction there Redmon. There really good. I like the trolley part in Resident Evil 2: Nemesis best because they don't know what's going on. It keeps you guessing. And the way Jill and Carlos was fighting just seems so natural. It's well written as far as being able to tell who's saying what and what's going on. It's really good. - Little Angel
So this why you needed that Silent Hill stuff? I think I'll put my SH story on hault now until after Silent Hill 3 and after yours is over. Great story though, I like where it's going. - Kenneth J Sullivan
Redmon is one of the best crossbreeding authors I have ever come across. His series are awsome, and his literature is really outstanding for an non-English speaking person. I wish I could write as good as him. - Hybrid Halogen
I read RE2 Nemesis. I love that fact that you take original characters and movie characters plus a few from the games,The character development is just so cool. How you develop 'em. I hope you write more about this. -Wesker001
Redmon is a very creative lemon writer with tons of ideas in his head and lots of ways to put it all out there. - Sonimon
I read your fanfics...some of them were really intended for a mature audience...best one i liked was the re2 nemesis story. i would really like it if you finished that one...really great story. the mature fan fics were interesting but the whole sexually thing seemed violently done...every try a more romantic approach...just a thought. - porunga007