Criticisms

Fresh and funny and all around delightful- The most awesome Creative Writing teacher ever

She read my mind!- Alex

Creative Genius at its best!- Skippy

A little too childish for someone her age- Court Charm

Why I don't read fiction anymore- Skip

A true rant and rave of realistic fiction. In fact, she makes it so realistic that this fantasy world exists that you want to puke all over her novel, which could only make it better, seeing that it could not, under any circumstances, get any worse.- Dream Boy Bryan

"That story was fucked up. It had no moral, no plot, no real characterization and no feeling. What was I thinking?"- Cathy Walter

What a wonderful story. I loved it. What a wonderful sentimental that wrote it- Funny and clever, Wonderful! The whole picture is wonderful. I laughed out loud many times! I loved this story in all its twists and turns, but especially and particularly its downright sweet optimism overload by a spunky wit! Excellent job!! -The Most Wonderful Creative Writing Teacher in the World

Wow. I'm going to read this a few more times before I give it back...you have great language here- also great dialogue between characters- I like the surrealistic quality- very quirky. Great sarcasm- great voice- I think you really capture the essence of this type of story- The Great Charles

I am very confused. I know this is a farce, but it seems to fall into the same category as "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy." I have issues with the absurdist category- Anne.

It was an interesting story. Very intriguing. I felt a little lost in the story, I could tell she was creating everything, but it wasn't explaine, and why was she able to create and not every mortal? Micheal with the awesome blue eyes

I really enjoyed the story thinking it was based on a slightly distorted reality, but then when you brought in her dream friends I was kinda dissappointed- Holly

Interesting story- this had some comic moments in it. I liked the concept of the story- overall an entertaining read and you are really good at oneliners! Good luck in the future- Nicole

It was confusing, but I like it. Slow it down- Someone in my class.

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