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From:

"Fareda Ahmadi" <jewel_107@hotmail.com>

To:

"Sadat, M.H." <hsadat@yahoo.com>

Subject:

Fwd: Re: Hekmat Sadat's Letter

Date:

Fri, 5 Mar 1999 15:33:17 -0800

 

 

>Date: Thu, 04 Feb 1999 18:39:05 -0600

>From: "David E. Sahar" <SaharMD@pol.net>

>Subject: Re: Hekmat Sadat's Letter

>To: st88269e@drexel.edu

>Cc: Abdullah <IRIHAT@aol.com>, jewel@drexel.edu,

> Farid Maiwandi <farid@designpro.com>,

> Belquis Ahmadi <acbaar@radio.psh.brain.net.pk>,

> Shafiq Ahmadi <shafiqahmadi@hotmail.com>, Wajma Ahmady

<wahmady@ucsd.edu>,

> "Dr. Homayoun Shah Aminyar" <homayoun@erols.com>,

> Ahmad Etemadi <ahest7+@pitt.edu>, Katrin Fakiri

<katrinfakiri@hotmail.com>,

> Ahmad Gholam <Ahmed.Gholam@teol.lu.se>, Shafiq Jamal

<jamals@ece.ucdavis.edu>,

> Jan Mohammad <janm@U.Arizona.EDU>, Ibrahim Nasseri <imkhan@usa.net>,

> Fariba Nawa <fnawa@hotmail.com>, Fariba Nawa

<fnawa@angnewspapers.com>,

> Wali Noori <WNoori01@sprintspectrum.com>,

> Hosai Omarkhil <hmomarkhil@ucdavis.edu>,

> Mahmoud Samizay <msamizay@osf1.gmu.edu>,

> Farahnaz Yaqubi <murwari@hotmail.com>,

> Omar Zakhilwal <hozakhil@ccs.carleton.ca>,

> Khalida mirzada <queenheart22@hotmail.com>,

> Aracozai <ARACOZAI@worldnet.att.net>

>Reply-to: SaharMD@pol.net

> 

>To the esteemed Editors of the Mosaic Magazine:

> 

>The issues brought up recently by Fareda jan and others are important

and require

>close attention.  The fact that we are debating and pondering upon

possible solutions

>in a meaningful manner is a great sign of an intelectual group, as

many

organizations

>as well as governments in Afghanistan has fallen victims to such

issues

and even

>collapsed due lack of communication and/or compromise.

> 

>Language, evolutionary speaking, was developed to efficiently relay

information from

>one to other to increase cooperation and thus survival of that group.

At the same

>time language holds a sentimental value to the members of the putative

group due to

>emotions it evokes.  In Afghanistan, unfortunately, it has been used

to

push forward

>personal agendas and thus disunity, which goes with out saying that

such

>circumstances is not fit for survival as a group. Though ideally I

would like to see

>all languages in Afghanistan to be published in the Afghan Mosaic

including Dari,

>Pashtu,  Turkic languages (primarily Uzbek and Turkmen), and 30 other

minor languages

>(primarily Balochi and Pashai), as one can readily see it is not

practical. By adding

>each additional language, we are adding an order of magnitude more

labor and time to

>publishing each issue.  One must remember from basic business classes

that there is

>an opportunity cost to every task we initiate. By alocating more time

to one task, we

>are taking away time from another.  I applaud Fareda jan for her

patience and a good

>job of striking a balance between English and the endogenous

languages.

> 

>Since the advantages of having a multilingual magazine have already

been stated, I

>will try to state some of the pros of having Mosaic in English only.

> 

>1. It would be significantly less laborious and time consuming-even if

we have the

>word processing software for other languages

>2. The quality of the magazine may improve since designing of

multilingual magazine

>require more creativity and custom designing, e.g. script, writing

left

to write vs.

>right to left, etc. The magazine will be more easily read if in one

language.

>3. By using one language we can all critique and evaluate articles,

should the need

>arise.  This will increase the productivity, consensus, pool of

editors

and

>confidence of ALL editors on the magazaine. It is difficult for some

editors to

>assess the political nature of an article if he/she is not fluent in

an

appreciable

>level with that language.  How could we ALL have evaluated Hekmat

jan's

article if it

>was in only one of the endogenous languages?

>4. Let us not forget that language is a volatile subject among many

Afghans. Despite

>our hard work, there may be some who will find an imbalance between

Pashtu and Dari

>and may start activity against our magazine.  Though it is illogical,

and sad, that

>these Afghans would object to an endogenous language but not English,

nonetheless

>that appears to be the case.

>5. English renders itself easy to manipulation by most if not all of

the editors, as

>most of us are familiar with English word processors. The transfer of

articles via

>email is relatively easier in English, as most internet softwares are

designed in

>English. Scanned files are send as attachments which take more time

and

space and

>difficult if not impossible to edit by the recipient.

>6. Most of our young who were raised and educated in America, don't

get

the same

>pleasure as we do when they read Deri or Pashtu poetry.  They may be

more versed in

>written Arabic(due to attendance to Mosques) than local Afghan

literatures.  As a

>matter of fact, many of them may think it is "boring".  Writing in

English may be

>more effective in educating our young of our history and culture and

stirring their

>interest in Afghan affairs.

> 

>As I mensioned earlier, I would like to see Pashto and Deri articles

and I enjoy

>reading articles written in these endogenous languages of Afghanistan. 

Furthermore,

>I appreciate the importance of preservation of our languages which

constitute part of

>our culture and would eventually like see endogenous languages printed

in Mosaic.

>However, for practical purposes and given our current circumstances, I

must admit

>that I am on the same line of thought as Fareda jan after evaluating

this

>issue(please see above). However, if we are ready for the challenge,

have the energy

>(as it appears to be) and if the majority is in favor(specially Fareda

jan since she

>is doing bulk of the work), as borther Jan Mohammad stated, I will

just

have to live

>with it:)

> 

>As far as the political articles are concerned, it is hard to

distinguish settle

>differences.  What source is credible?  What exactly constitute a

propaganda and

>where is the fine line?  At times some truth can be withheld and

others

exposed,

>leading to a biased publication.  In other words, one does not

necessarily need to

>lie to misinform the public. Perhaps we need to institute a voting

system where the

>majority will dictate an articles destiny and a tie vote will be

dictaded by Fareda

>jan. Again, this would be more feasible if all articles were in

English. Those with

>experience in Journalism/Mass Communications and Law please comment.

> 

>Finally, I look forward to reading articles on Afghan languages by Jan

Mohammad,

>Afghan Society and the Cold War era by Wali jan, Mohammood Tarzi by

Farid jan,

>Afghan youth interviews by Katrin jan and future contributions by

Hosai

jan.

> 

> 

 

 

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Forwarded Message

From:

"Fareda Ahmadi" <jewel_107@hotmail.com>

To:

"Sadat, M.H." <hsadat@yahoo.com>

Subject:

Fwd: Re: Dari/Pashto articles

Date:

Fri, 5 Mar 1999 15:32:15 -0800

 

Hekmat jan salam,

 

Sorry, I didn't get a chance to edit the irrelevant

contents out of these e-mails. I hope you don't mind

fighting your way through to finding the relevant

material.

 

Fareda

--------------------

 

>Date: Thu, 04 Feb 1999 01:34:43 -0800

>From: ARACOZAI <ARACOZAI@worldnet.att.net>

>Subject: Re: Dari/Pashto articles

>To: janm@U.Arizona.EDU, Fareda Ahmadi <st88269e@drexel.edu>

>Cc: Abdullah <IRIHAT@aol.com>, jewel@drexel.edu,

> Farid Maiwandi <farid@designpro.com>,

> Belquis Ahmadi <acbaar@radio.psh.brain.net.pk>,

> Shafiq Ahmadi <shafiqahmadi@hotmail.com>, Wajma Ahmady

<wahmady@ucsd.edu>,

> "Dr. Homayoun Shah Aminyar" <homayoun@erols.com>,

> Ahmad Etemadi <ahest7+@pitt.edu>, Katrin Fakiri

<katrinfakiri@hotmail.com>,

> Ahmad Gholam <Ahmed.Gholam@teol.lu.se>, Shafiq Jamal

<jamals@ece.ucdavis.edu>,

> Ibrahim Nasseri <imkhan@usa.net>, Fariba Nawa <fnawa@hotmail.com>,

> Fariba Nawa <fnawa@angnewspapers.com>,

> Wali Noori <WNoori01@sprintspectrum.com>,

> Hosai Omarkhil <hmomarkhil@ucdavis.edu>, Edris Sahar

<saharmd@pol.net>,

> Mahmoud Samizay <msamizay@osf1.gmu.edu>,

> Farahnaz Yaqubi <murwari@hotmail.com>,

> Omar Zakhilwal <hozakhil@ccs.carleton.ca>,

> Khalida mirzada <queenheart22@hotmail.com>

>Reply-to: ARACOZAI@worldnet.att.net

> 

>Salam EVERYBODY,

>I am probably a "Johnny come late" to the discussion about Hekmatullah

>Jan's "Nest of Terrorism".

>Good job Hekmatullah Jan! Very informative.

> 

>To my personal dismay and with great reluctance, I can only recommend

that

>given the charged political atmosphere, which our communities are

currently

>experiencing, it will be best for the survival of Mosaic to remain

void

of

>political articles. Inclusion of any article which paints any of the

>warring sides (good or bad), implicitly or explicitly, should be

excluded

>from Mosaic.

> 

>My personal experience within the Afghan community has taught me that

>people will view Mosaic with suspicion once they read a POLITICAL

article

>of ANY type.

>I can understand the frustration of anybody who would like Mosaic to

>contain such articles. 

>Believe me, when the time is right for such articles, I will be the

first

>to push for it. Those who know me, from my infrequent writings, will

tell

>you that most of my writings ARE political.

>But, like I said, if we want Mosaic to survive and be successful, then

let

>us just keep it informative in every other way, save being labeled

>political.

> 

> 

>I would also like to support Hosai Jan's suggestion for having profile

of

>prominent Afghans.

>In fact,

>Fareda Jan,

>I can start writing one on Mohammood Tarzi for the next issue. (by the

way

>I would still like to know the deadline for submitting our next

articles)

>I have Mr. Habibi's "Junbish-i Mashrutiat", in which he dedicates a

whole

>chapter to Mahmood Tarzi. I can either translate it to English, or I

can

>re-type it in Dari.

> 

>Speaking of Dari/Pashto, ALL THOSE INTERESTED:

>please send your addresses so I can send you the Pashto/Dari software.

>[NOTE: ALL REQUESTS SHOULD BE ACCOMPANIED BY $500.00 CASH]

>(just kidding!)

>So far I have Omar Jan, Abdullah Jan, and ?

>The software I have, is called, GammaUniverse. (one word)

> 

> 

>Jan Mohamood Jan,

>I like your idea of soliciting Dari/Pashto articles from other

Afghans.

>In addition, we can always find material that we can bring directly

from

>books and publish it in Mosaic, albeit, with the credit going to the

>original writer.

>(by the way, did I read Omar Jan calling you "gray bearded uncle"?!

>I can understand his good manners when he calls you "uncle" BUT what

is

>this "gray bearded" business all about? My suspicions about your age

are

>becoming a reality!!)

> 

> 

>Katrin Jan,

>I can help you with getting info on Rahman Baba. Just let me know,

whether

>you want it in Pashto, Dari, or English.

>I have his complete Deewan and a very brief info about himself

contained in

>"Pata Khazana" or "The Hidden Treasure"

>As you know, very little is known about Rahman Baba's personal life,

very

>unlike Khushal Khan Khattak.

>Please contact me, we will discuss it.

>(by the way, I was at the bookstore today, I am still looking for your

two

>books.)

> 

> 

>Fareda Jan,

>I took Mashal to dinner tonight and discussed the upcoming interview.

>I am not sure,  how you plan to conduct the interview. But if you want

to

>forward your questions to me, I will have him answer. Or are you going

to

>call him?

>Please advise on the logistics.

> 

>Wali Jan,

>You worte: "I feel very happy and honored to be working with a brand

new

>intelligent,

>energetic, and caring generation of  Afghan intellectuals."

>Your compliments are appreciated. Although, we might be

>"energetic..caring..intelligent.. and all that" BUT we are not "brand

new".

>Some of us are "gray bearded"

> 

>Finally, just to "beat on the dead horse" of Dari/Pashto, may I make a

>suggestion.

>Why not dedicate one page of the magazine to the Afghan folklore,

>exemplified in traditional Dari Char-bayti and the Pastho Landai.

>In other words, have the Char-bayti and the Landai share one page of

the

>magazine, in every issue.

> 

>Have a great Day Everybody!

> 

> 

>Pa Deera Dranawi

>Farid Maiwandi

> 

> 

> 

 

 

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From:

"Fareda Ahmadi" <jewel_107@hotmail.com>

To:

"Sadat, M.H." <hsadat@yahoo.com>

Subject:

Fwd: Re: Politics or No Politics

Date:

Fri, 5 Mar 1999 15:28:30 -0800

 

>Date: Tue, 02 Feb 1999 23:20:45 -0500 (EST)

>From: IRIHAT@aol.com

>Subject: Re: Politics or No Politics

>To: st88269e@drexel.edu, Farid Maiwandi <arid@designpro.com>,

> Belquis Ahmadi <acbaar@radio.psh.brain.net.pk>,

> Shafiq Ahmadi <shafiqahmadi@hotmail.com>, Wajma Ahmady

<wahmady@ucsd.edu>,

> "Dr. Homayoun Shah Aminyar" <homayoun@erols.com>,

> Ahmad Etemadi <ahest7+@pitt.edu>, Ahmad Gholam

<Ahmed.Gholam@teol.lu.se>,

> Shafiq Jamal <jamals@ece.ucdavis.edu>, Jan Mohammad

<janm@U.Arizona.EDU>,

> Ibrahim Nasseri <imkhan@usa.net>, Fariba Nawa <fnawa@hotmail.com>,

> Fariba Nawa <fnawa@angnewspapers.com>,

> Wali Noori <WNoori01@sprintspectrum.com>,

> Hosai Omarkhil <hmomarkhil@ucdavis.edu>, Edris Sahar

<saharmd@pol.net>,

> Mahmoud Samizay <msamizay@osf1.gmu.edu>,

> Farahnaz Yaqubi <murwari@hotmail.com>,

> Omar Zakhilwal <hozakhil@ccs.carleton.ca>,

> Khalida mirzada <queenheart22@hotmail.com>,

> Aracozai <ARACOZAI@worldnet.att.net>

> 

>Salaam everyone,

>Recently, we have had some interesting and productive E-Dialogues

regarding

>issues of publishing Dari and Pashto articles, brainstorming about

providing

>an entertainment section in the Mosaic, and not to forget, the

inclusion of

>articles with sound political agendas.......

>Here is my two cents regarding publishing articles with political

>overtones.......Publishing these articles is like opening Pandora's

Box.  I am

>looking forward to it with excitement and a certain degree of

reservation.

>There will be unforeseen problems.  No matter how hard we try, we are

bound to

>step on someone's sacred cow, sort of speak.  With that in mind, we

should

>still definitley give it a shot.  It is worth a try.  Wali jaan has

made some

>good suggestions and has come up with some very good guidelines.    We

can

>also, as Hekmat jaan suggested, attach a disclaimer to each article

written by

>contributors to let our readers know that the opinions expressed in

these

>articles are solely that of the author....I think I have said more

than

my

>share of the two cents....so I am going to leave you now with a very

profound

>question....Why did the chicken cross the road?  Just kidding

everyone!:))

>Have a great day and Khuda Hafiz.

>Abdullah Tahiri

 

 

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From:

"Fareda Ahmadi" <jewel_107@hotmail.com>

To:

hsadat@yahoo.com

Subject:

Fwd: Re: Dari/Pashto articles

Date:

Fri, 5 Mar 1999 15:24:20 -0800

 

 

>Date: Tue, 02 Feb 1999 15:29:54 -0700 (MST)

>From: janm@U.Arizona.EDU

>Subject: Re: Dari/Pashto articles

>To: Fareda Ahmadi <st88269e@drexel.edu>

>Cc: Abdullah <IRIHAT@aol.com>, jewel@mail.ocs.drexel.edu,

> Farid Maiwandi <farid@designpro.com>,

> Belquis Ahmadi <acbaar@radio.psh.brain.net.pk>,

> Shafiq Ahmadi <shafiqahmadi@hotmail.com>, Wajma Ahmady

<wahmady@ucsd.edu>,

> "Dr. Homayoun Shah Aminyar" <homayoun@erols.com>,

> Ahmad Etemadi <ahest7+@pitt.edu>, Katrin Fakiri

<katrinfakiri@hotmail.com>,

> Ahmad Gholam <Ahmed.Gholam@teol.lu.se>, Shafiq Jamal

<jamals@ece.ucdavis.edu>,

> Ibrahim Nasseri <imkhan@usa.net>, Fariba Nawa <fnawa@hotmail.com>,

> Fariba Nawa <fnawa@angnewspapers.com>,

> Wali Noori <WNoori01@sprintspectrum.com>,

> Hosai Omarkhil <hmomarkhil@ucdavis.edu>, Edris Sahar

<saharmd@pol.net>,

> Mahmoud Samizay <msamizay@osf1.gmu.edu>,

> Farahnaz Yaqubi <murwari@hotmail.com>,

> Omar Zakhilwal <hozakhil@ccs.carleton.ca>,

> Khalida mirzada <queenheart22@hotmail.com>,

> Aracozai <ARACOZAI@worldnet.att.net>

> 

> 

>Salaam ba hama,

> 

[cut]

> 

>2) About inclusion of materials of political nature in our magazine, I

>agree with brother Wali's comments. Every Afghan's life is affected by

>politics in one way or another. To exclude such articles from our

magazine

>would mean ignoring one of the most importatn aspect of our daily

lives.

>However, we need to have specific and unambiguous criteria as to what

gets

>published and what does not. I agree with most of the criteria

suggested

>by brother Wali. Perhaps, we can add to that list as we go on.  Based

on

>the guidelines suggested by brother Wali, it is my understanding that

>there will be no room for political propaganda, commentaries or

articles

>which explicitly or implicitly are at odds with our country's and

people's

>interests in general and our magazine's objectives in particular.

> 

>But, let me bring up another isssue here. In the past we had had

>editorials which dealt with politics published in the magazines. I

think

>such editorial should be excluded from meeting the criteria which

apply

to

>other articles. (Do I make sense?)

> 

>3) The article about terrorism is interesting. Based on my initial

>reading, I think the author doesn't completely achieve his objectives

>outlined in the intro of his article. I can be more specific if you

all

>think the subject matter of the article is both approperiate and

>interesting to be published in our magazine.

> 

>4) I agree with Hosai jan's suggestion regarding publishing a profile

of

>an important Afghan (from the past or present) or an outstanding

student.

>If not in every isssue, we should at least have one in every other

issue.

> 

>5) And finally, I didn't see any suggestions about including or

improving

>the section dealing with 'fun'. I would like to see us publish

original

>Afghan jokes, puzzles, and proverbs. And what about a cross-word

puzzle?

>Believe it or not I have been working for a long time to prepare one.

I

>have half of it down so far. It is aimed at challenging the young

>generation's knowledge of Afghan history, geography and, of course,

>vocabulary inventory. If you all agree to see it in the next issue,

>then, I will ship it to Fareda jan ASAP:)

> 

>De Khudai paamaan,

>Jan Mohammad

> 

 

 

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From:

"Fareda Ahmadi" <jewel_107@hotmail.com>

To:

hsadat@yahoo.com

Subject:

Fwd: Mosaic

Date:

Fri, 5 Mar 1999 15:16:43 -0800

 

 

Hekmat jan salam!

 

Unfortunatly, I was not able to find the entire discussion

held between our editorial board back in January, in regards

to your Nest of Terrisom. But I have sent you a few and still

may have some more e-mails. Ahmad jan, below, obviously misun

derstood your name and is reffering to you as "Hekmat", I am

sorry about that.

 

But I have forwarded your revised article to everyone and

told them you would be joining our discussion group temporarily

next week. So get yourself prepared to attack or be attacked :)

 

Till next time

Fareda

 

-----------------------------------------------

 

>Date: Tue, 02 Feb 1999 22:02:52 +0100

>From: Ahmed.Gholam@teol.lu.se

>Subject: Mosaic

>To: st88269e@drexel.edu

>Cc: janm@U.Arizona.EDU, hozakhil@ccs.carleton.ca, farid@designpro.com,

> IRIHAT@aol.com, katrinfakiri@hotmail.com, jewel@mail.ocs.drexel.edu,

> acbaar@radio.psh.brain.net.pk, shafiqahmadi@hotmail.com,

wahmady@ucsd.edu,

> homayoun@erols.com, ahest7+@pitt.edu, jamals@ece.ucdavis.edu,

imkhan@usa.net,

> fnawa@hotmail.com, fnawa@angnewspapers.com,

WNoori01@sprintspectrum.com,

> hmomarkhil@ucdavis.edu, saharmd@pol.net, msamizay@osf1.gmu.edu,

> murwari@hotmail.com, queenheart22@hotmail.com,

ARACOZAI@worldnet.att.net

> 

>Salam everyone,

> 

>Very important issues, regarding the magazine, have been discussed

and

>I have been following it with great interest.

> 

>A) I agree with Fareda jan regarding the article about Osama.

> 

>Hekmat jan: I have been reading your article. It is good and

logical,

>but the case of our man is a very complicated one.

>As far as I know, it is a little early to blame Osama for all the

>misery and shortcomings back home. When it comes to Osama we are

>dealing with top-level politics, specially that of US towards

>Afghanistan and the entire region (Middle East), which is not

covered

>by media or internet me or you.

>Osama interests me as well and I think I have collected everything

on

>the net about him. But when I read the material, it can't give me

>satisfactory answers about him.

>US is hiding its Afghan policy behind the name of Osama. The

tragedy

>of our nation is reduced to one man's existence in our country, all

US

>relations depend on the future of Osama. What is this and who

belive

>this?

> 

>It would take alot of time to discuss Osama. With all due respect

to

>you Hekmat jan, the above is my personal opinion about the issue.

But

>it is your article and you know best what to do with it. My opinion

>dosen't mean that I like the man, but just to forward my thoughts

>about him. I hope you don't take it personaly.

> 

>B) My second agreement goes to those who defended the rights of

Pashto

>and Dari in the Mosaic. THERE SHOULDN'T BE ANY DOUBTS ABOUT THIS

ISSUE

>AND IT SHOULD BE CLEAR AND OBVIOUS FOR ALL OF US!!!

>I CAN NOT understand this %-talks. Pashto and Dari are our tow

>national and official languages, keeping alive alive is our

national

>deuty!  

>Hosai jan's remark made me very sad, that she is not able to read

and

>write her national languages. I assume that there are alot of

people

>in your situation. It is a very seriouse shortage of Afghan

community

>in the US, which haven't solved this problem of learning their kids

>their national languages. Fortunately here in Sweden the Afghan

>children, like the children of other nationalities, have the right

to

>recieve education in their national languages. There are Afghan

>teachers who teach them in holly Qoran, pashto and dari. Even adolt

>illiterate Afghans are learning Pashto and Dari.

> 

>Hosai jan made me think of caligraphy and "minatory" in pashto and

>dari. I know a young and very promising Afghan, who is both Khatat

and

>Naqash in Minatory. I think he would be very interested to contribute.

>A nice pice of poetry in pashto or dari, in minatury, would be very

>suitable and appropriate in the Mosaic. Suggestions are welcomed.

> 

>C) I don't think it is necessary to cut (cencure) articles. It is

>always the author who is responsible for the contents of his

article,

>not the magazine (Mosaic). But it is the responsibilty of the

editores

>to judje the quality of an article. Their judjment should be based

on

>impartiality and democracy. For example if there is an article

which

>is against islam or anyother religion, the national interests and

>unity of Afghanistan, it should NEVER EVER be published. But if the

>editors find it difficult to judje the quality, then it must be

>discussed collectively among the staff.

> 

>My opinion is that we let, as much as possible, the original

articles

>be published. Beside that Mosaic should give Afghan academic

material

>have the periority, since it is a student magazine, as far I

>understand.

> 

>Moreover, we must respect and encourage the spirit and traditions

of

>democracy (freedom of speach and thoughts) within the Mosaic. That

is

>in accordance to our religion and laws.

> 

>Thank you for taking your time.

> 

>Ahmad    

 

 

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