Way of the Comet - Chapter One
There comes a time in everybody's life when the world as you know
it changes. This happened to me not so long ago. When my life
changed, it changed....with a vengeance.
You see, I am now the queen of Sardohnia, a land I had never
heard of in my life. Well, not until the year my brother Kyle
died.
It was early spring. I had turned 16 a few months before. My
father and I had just returned from my brother's funeral when I
decided to go to the pond in the back of our ranch. I, and my
horse Sunny, go there often. That day I had a strange feeling
that something was going to happen. What I didn't know.
When i finally got to the pond, the feeling was still with me,
but all I wanted to do was to sit under my favorite oak tree and
think. All I thought about was my brother and how we used to play
together by this pond. Every summer we would swim here and every
winter we'd ice skate across it when it would be thick enough.
Kyle and I used to fish from this spot. That's what we were doing
the day before he was ran down. The accident happened two weeks
before, but to father and me, it felt like an eternity. Without
my brother Kyle, I had thought, nothing would be the same around
here. I cannot begin to tell you just how true that was.
While I was thinking about all of this, someone came up behind me.
I was startled from my thoughts by the rustling movement behind
me. At first I thought it was Sunny or one of the other horsed
that my father owns coming for a drink of water. Whenever I would
be here by the pond, I would give them some sugar cubes. So I
started to get up and dig in my pockets for them when a voice, a
young woman's voice, behind me.
"Please. Don't turn around. I need to know your name,"
she said. Whoever she was, she had a soft sweet voice that didn't
evoke fear in me. Who was this person behind me. She wanted to
know my name, why, I wouldn't know. I was going to find out one
or another. I figured I would give her my nickname, Rana, instead
of my real name, Larana. Very few people call me by my real name.
"My name is Rana." I replied. That was all I told her.
"Rana. No, you are not the one I am looking for," she
said. Then continued, "Maybe you can help me find her before
I leave here. She lives somewhere around here I have been told.
Could you help me?"
"I might. Who is it you are seeking?"
"She is called Larana Auraner and her life is in great
danger."
Danger. That sent off alarms in my head. Why would my life be in
danger. I haven't done anything to anyone. At least not that I
know of. How did she know my real name?
"I might," I had said hesitantly, "Why? Is she in
danger?"
"Yes," she said. "Enemies of her family are out to
end her blood line."
We didn't have any enemies that I knew of except maybe a rival
breeder in the area. But why would they want to kill me or maybe
my family. I just had to find out more before I said anything to
her about finding who she was looking for.
I sat down with my back stil to her, I replied, "Why would
anyone want to kill this Larana person? She hasn't done anything
illegal has she?"
"No," she said, "it has nothing to do with this
worlds problems. She is to be Sardohnia's new queen and enemies
of the throne are going to kill her so that they can put someone
else in her place. They mean to take over and put rest of us in
chains or make us slaves. She should be old enough to assume the
throne about now. I hope." I wasn't sure but, to me, she
sounded almost anxious about finding me.
"What do you mean by 'this world's problems'?"
"I am from another place. Similar to this but none of those
tall dwellings that you have around here. Larana is the daughter
of our queen, her name was Larana too, who left my world many
years ago. The girl I am looking for is named after our lost
queen. That much we know. We lost track of her just after she
came here."
Strange, very strange.
"Well, I know for a fact that the person you are looking for
is somewhere near by, but how will you know when you have found
her?"
She became very quiet. I thought that she had left until she
spoke.
"The future queen and I share souls. I will know when I am
close to her, such as now, but I cannot tell exactly who she is
unless she gives herself away."
Sharing souls, how is this possible. It can't be possible I
thought to myself that cannot happen.
"I need to know where she is. She could be in trouble right
now. Point me in the right direction and I will leave you alone,"
she said rather impatiently.
There was a lot I wanted to know before I told her who I was, but
I didn't know if she was going to stay in the area or leave. Plus
I was getting very curious as to what this person looked like.
The shadows were behind me and the pond was only reflecting the
embankment below me. I just had to find out.
"O.K. To tell the truth, the girl you are looking for is me.
My name is Larana Auraner. Rana is my nickname. Now I've told you
my name now could you tell me who you are. All these things you've
been telling me such as sharing souls and my life being in danger,
and I being the descendant of a queen. My family has been in the
working class since the middle ages. There is no royal blood in
me what so ever." I was just too curious to sit there I had
to find out.
"Then you may turn around," she said quietly.
I was totally surprised at what I was going to see. I was fully
prepaired to see a young woman, but was shocked by the sight that
was before me. What I saw was a unicorn. She was not just a
unicorn, she had wings. She was as dark as night. Her horn was as
black as her body with what I thought was silver in one thin line
going from the base to the very tip. I was speechless.
"As you can see I am no ordinary creature," she said.
"I am what you call in your language a unicorn. I will
answer your questions as best as I can."
"What is your name?"
"In my language, my name is too hard for you to say but it
means Shadow with wings in yours. So you may call me Shadow Wing.
Only you and whoever you choose can see me, to everyone else I am
invisible nor will they be able to hear me."
"You can really do that?" I was amazed that anyone
could do something like that.
She looked at me with some amusement, then answered, "Yes,
all of us, unicorns, can do that. It is one of the very first
things we learn after being weaned."
"Wow, that is neat."
"I guess it would be, to someone not raised around us."
"What did you mean that you and I share souls? That isn't
possible here. As far as I know it isn't possible."
"This means that you have the soul of a unicorn, my sould,
while I have the soul of a human, which is yours. Our lives are
linked together for life. If you die then so do I."
"Then that would answer the question about you needing to
protect me. Now, since I am to become queen of your world, when
should we leave?"
"Well, before I can take you to my world, to become queen, I
must first teach you the ways and the language of my land. While
you must teach my about this place. You see, you must stay here
until I can sneak you away. It is my duty to protect you while I
do this. No harm is to come to you. I know you do not trust me.
To prove what I say is true, you need to but lay your hand on my
horn. I will not hurt you in any way."
I did as she said. When I came in contact with it. Images came
into my mind. Images of my birth and her's and how our lives have
paralleled each others. With these images came the feeling of
kindness and understanding and the urgency of her errand that she
had to complete. There was also fear and horror, which she
quickly hid. This wasn't enough for me, but I was to learn
everything she knew when the time came.
The contact with her horn answered many questions, but the one
question that burned in my mind was 'what was my connection in
all this'? Then she suddenly broke the contact, which sent me
reeling. I was just a little bit confused for a moment or two.
"That was too strange. I saw things that I have never seen
before. What did you do?" I asked her recovering from the
sudden break in contact.
"I showed you how my and your life have been alike. What you
saw were the similarities we've had. The rest were what was going
on there right before I left to find you."
"How long ago was that?" I wanted to know just how long
it took her to find me. Just curious, I guess.
"I have been searching for over one year. This world is
bigger than it looks."
"Why did it take so long? You said that you and I share
souls which should have helped out alot. Shouldn't it."
"It doesn't work quite like that. You see, I have to be
close in order to feel you. As to why I took so long in finding
you is that I was searching for you mother first. I didn't know
that she had died some time ago. Plus there were other girls
around the world that were very close to yours. So there was a
little confusion there for a little while."
"Oh. I see."
"Is there anything else you would like to know, about me or
where I come from. Anything you wish to know."
I thought for a moment, then checked my watch and then finally,
"Well there are legends here about unicorns here that go
back for centuries. Of all the mythical creatures there are,
unicorns are my favorite. Could you tell me if these legends are
true. If they aren't I'll understand, but I would really like to
know."
"Hmmm. I'm not sure if they are all true. I can tell you
that several unicorns and other creatures from my world have
vanished over the years. There are even stories about humans that
have suddenly appeared that no one has been able to explain.
"I do know that my own great, great-grand mother has been
here before. She used to tell me stories of the young girls she
would visit. She even told me of all the men who would try to
hunt her down for her horn and she told me of those who didn't
excape the arrows of those men. The brutality of it all apalled
her, so she and those that survived returned home to my world,
but this all happened long before I was born."
"So some of them are true and the rest people made up. Even
the ones about other creatures. I wonder, why are you black
instead of white, like those in our legends?"
"Well, we come in all colors and combinations of colors,
much like you humans do. There are few true white unicorns like
my great great grandmother, and there are very few black unicorns
like me. Probably those people saw a white unicorn with very
light colored manes."
"Are there others just as dark as you?"
"In my herd, no, I'm the only one. There is a herd of only
very dark colored or black unicorns like me. My coloring isn't
looked on in good favor. We tend to be outcasts. I would be an
outcast if my parents weren't the leaders of my herd."
"What do your parents look like?"
"My mother is pink with yellow and a golden horn, her name
translates to Bright Star. My father, Dendrobian, has all colors
on him. He kind of shimmers. He has a blue horm on him. I don't
think you want me to tell you what my brothers and sisters look
like. I have several, most of them older than but a few that are
younger."
I looked down at my watch once more, then I exclaimed, "Oh
no, it's getting late I've got to get back to the house and
change my clothes. Dad is going to need my to help him with the
horses tonight. We'll have to talk tomorrow after I get my chores
done."
"I'll be here waiting for you. Don't worry about me. There
is plenty for me to graze on around here. Tomorrow, you and I can
start teaching each other about our worlds."
"All right then I'll see later."
"Good night, Larana."
"'Night."
I started walking back home and I wondered still how I could be
concerned in all of this. That I would learn later. Right now,
there were chores that had to be done.