"Mercy Mercy Me"
by

Alana Nicole
            
                 
   alananm@hotmail.com

Comments

Thank you for taking the time to read my screenplay.  Your comments on what you read will help me to improve it. Please be honest, anything that sticks out to you, point it out. If you don't like it, someone else might not. {This is my first form, I'm not sure how well it will work, if there is a problem, let me now.
 

Name: 

Sex: Male Female

Section being reviewed: 

Overall Opinion: Please Choose ONE

How could you possibly think someone would buy this?

All right, but nothing to write home about

I'd watch it if it were on CBS at two o'clock in the morning and I was too drunk to change the channel

I'd watch it if somebody paid me.

I'd watch it if I were bored and there was nothing else on.

I would turn it on if I read about it in TV Guide first.

I would preset my VCR and TIVO four days in advance and kill anyone who tried to interrupt me.

Specific Notes

Please be as descriptive as possible.
 

1. What do you think is missing?

2. What questions are you left with?

3. What didn't you like?

4. What did you like?

5. What could be done better?

6. What doesn't seem to fit?

7. Where did you loose interest?

8. Was the plot clear? Anything you didn't understand?

9. Did you like Marvin? Tammi? Anna? Jan?

10. Where you ahead of the story? When?

11. Was there anything I repeated too much or was too heavy-handed about?

12. Did you laugh? Where?

13. Where you moved? By What?

14. Did you guess the ending (of act section if not finished with play)

15. Was it a page turner or did you find yourself putting it down a lot?

16. Was it believable? What didn't you believe?

 

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Thank you Very MUCH for completing my survey and reading the script. This means a lot to me. Your comments could make the difference between a lifetime on a slush pile and an oscar.

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